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She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], that was practically a given).
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She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], height, that was practically a given).
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-->-- ''Fanfic/TwoIdiots''
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-->-- ''Fanfic/TwoIdiots''''Fanfic/TwoIdiots''
->'''Wizard:''' I picked up this midget. He's very well dressed, Italian suit, good-looking, had a beautiful, tall blonde.\\
'''Charlie T:''' A lady midget?\\
'''Wizard:''' No, the guy was a midget. The blonde was a lady.
-->--''Film/TaxiDriver''
->'''Wizard:''' I picked up this midget. He's very well dressed, Italian suit, good-looking, had a beautiful, tall blonde.\\
'''Charlie T:''' A lady midget?\\
'''Wizard:''' No, the guy was a midget. The blonde was a lady.
-->--''Film/TaxiDriver''
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->''"Hey."''
->''Keith looked up and saw the girl looking at him.''
->''She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], that was practically a given).''
->''Keith looked up and saw the girl looking at him.''
->''She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], that was practically a given).''
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->''Keith
Keith looked up and saw the girl looking at him.
->''She
She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], that was practically a given).
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->''"Hey."''
->''Keith looked up and saw the girl looking at him.''
->''She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], that was practically a given).''
-->-- ''Fanfic/TwoIdiots''
->''Keith looked up and saw the girl looking at him.''
->''She wore blue jeans and what looked like a really cozy black jacket. Her headphones were askew, with one of the buds resting on her cheek. Even sitting down, Keith knew that she was taller than him (though given [[TeensAreShort his height]], that was practically a given).''
-->-- ''Fanfic/TwoIdiots''
