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->'''Sasasha''': Well, I'm not sure on everything that happened, but you fell unconscious sometime last night. You should have seen the way that boy was holding you last night; just like me and my husband on our wedding day. ''"Kanin blushes"''. Why are you so red, Kanin? Don't tell me that was your first affectionate contact with a boy. [[OverprotectiveDad Ensei and his over-protective ways]].
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->'''Sasasha''': Well, I'm not sure on everything that happened, but you fell unconscious sometime last night. You should have seen the way that boy was holding you last night; just like me and my husband on our wedding day. ''"Kanin blushes"''. Why are you so red, Kanin? Don't tell me that was your first affectionate contact with a boy. [[OverprotectiveDad [[BoyfriendBlockingDad Ensei and his over-protective ways]].
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-->--Minor case of RealityEnsues
SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome
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How To Write An Example - Don't Write Reviews
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->'''Luso''': Hmm...Well...she's kind of shy, and somewhat of a klutz sometimes...[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming But…she's got heart, and she genuinely cares for her clan mates; I respect that most of all about her. I guess you could say that she's someone I personally admire]].
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->'''Luso''': Hmm...Well...she's kind of shy, and somewhat of a klutz sometimes...[[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming But…she's got heart, and she genuinely cares for her clan mates; I respect that most of all about her. I guess you could say that she's someone I personally admire]].admire.
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->'''Ensei''': Allow me to clarify the rumor you heard...The number of mages I defeated was not twenty...[[BadAss But one hundred and twenty]]
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->'''Ensei''': Allow me to clarify the rumor you heard...The number of mages I defeated was not twenty...[[BadAss But one hundred and twenty]]twenty
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-->--The proper introduction of Judgemaster Cid, [[BadAss the strongest man in Jylland]]
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-->--The proper introduction of Judgemaster Cid, [[BadAss the strongest man in Jylland]]
Jylland
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->'''Kanin''': I have no idea what you're talking about. I haven't stolen anything...for six days straight...a new personal best if I do say so myself.
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->'''Chney''': You have no idea what you've just gotten your clan into...
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->''That which cannot comprehend''
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->''That which we cannot comprehend''
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!!Ch67
->''The past cannot so easily be erased''
-->--'''Kanin'''
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It (hopefully) goes without saying that memorable quotes from FanFic/TheTaintedGrimoire go here.
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It (hopefully) goes without saying that memorable quotes from FanFic/TheTaintedGrimoire go here.
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->'''Baron Beltorey''': Yes. That's really them. I don't believe it either.
->'''Ensei''': ''By that I assume Cid knows. I was hoping he wouldn't find out.''
->'''Cid''': Ensei, what is the meaning of this! Camoa Cup!
->'''Ensei''': ''Yeah, I know, right? Who would have thought we could get first place.''
->'''Ensei''': ''By that I assume Cid knows. I was hoping he wouldn't find out.''
->'''Cid''': Ensei, what is the meaning of this! Camoa Cup!
->'''Ensei''': ''Yeah, I know, right? Who would have thought we could get first place.''
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->'''Luso''': Anyway, if you're done shopping I'll take the money back now. Adelle...what happened to all the gil.
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->'''Luso''': Anyway, if you're done shopping I'll take the money back now. now.
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->'''Luso''': Adelle...what happened to all the gil.
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->'''Luso''': Adelle...what happened to all the gil.
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->'''Baron Beltorey'': We'll...just pick this up later, Ensei. Now isn't the right time to—
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->'''Baron Beltorey'': Beltorey''': We'll...just pick this up later, Ensei. Now isn't the right time to—
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-->--Ensei was fooling around while his clan was doing work
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-->--Ensei was fooling around while his clan was doing workwork
!!Ch65
->''Your reach doesn't end at the tips of your fingers''
-->--'''Ensei'''
->'''Baron Beltorey''': Yes. That's really them. I don't believe it either.
->'''Ensei''': ''By that I assume Cid knows. I was hoping he wouldn't find out.''
->'''Cid''': Ensei, what is the meaning of this! Camoa Cup!
->'''Ensei''': ''Yeah, I know, right? Who would have thought we could get first place.''
->'''Cid''': That's not what I meant! You...I thought you promised to keep them safe. What is this, Ensei?
->'''Ensei''': ''We're going to save St. Galleria. Those were Luso's words. And soon they were Cheney's, and Kanin's, and Hurdy's, and Adelle's, and Vili's, and Crow's. I don't have the right to stop them. I don't want to. If you had seen the Camoa Cup, Cid. They're not just talk. It won't be easy, but we can do it. We will do it.''
->'''Baron Beltorey'': We'll...just pick this up later, Ensei. Now isn't the right time to—
->'''Cid''': No, it's alright. Nothing will change their minds anyway. I approve. Go. Go and turn that Palace Tourney inside out. Fly so high that nobody can touch us, and I can finally live at ease.
-->--Cid learns and talks with Ensei about Clan Gully taking part in the Camoa Cup over Whisperweed.
!!Ch65
->''Your reach doesn't end at the tips of your fingers''
-->--'''Ensei'''
->'''Baron Beltorey''': Yes. That's really them. I don't believe it either.
->'''Ensei''': ''By that I assume Cid knows. I was hoping he wouldn't find out.''
->'''Cid''': Ensei, what is the meaning of this! Camoa Cup!
->'''Ensei''': ''Yeah, I know, right? Who would have thought we could get first place.''
->'''Cid''': That's not what I meant! You...I thought you promised to keep them safe. What is this, Ensei?
->'''Ensei''': ''We're going to save St. Galleria. Those were Luso's words. And soon they were Cheney's, and Kanin's, and Hurdy's, and Adelle's, and Vili's, and Crow's. I don't have the right to stop them. I don't want to. If you had seen the Camoa Cup, Cid. They're not just talk. It won't be easy, but we can do it. We will do it.''
->'''Baron Beltorey'': We'll...just pick this up later, Ensei. Now isn't the right time to—
->'''Cid''': No, it's alright. Nothing will change their minds anyway. I approve. Go. Go and turn that Palace Tourney inside out. Fly so high that nobody can touch us, and I can finally live at ease.
-->--Cid learns and talks with Ensei about Clan Gully taking part in the Camoa Cup over Whisperweed.
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-->--A native of Camoa encourages Luso and Cheney after a confrontation with Acidwire
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-->--A native of Camoa encourages Luso and Cheney after a confrontation with Acidwire
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->''Raveging like beasts, searing flesh''
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->'''Baron Beltorey''': Oh? The man sent them a wry smile. The famed Sky Pirates attending my ball? I must be sure to hide all my valuables then. ''"The two males each gave a laugh, but even Luso noted how subtly serious he was being"'' . Very well, then. The details are all written. I look forward to seeing all of you.
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->'''Baron Beltorey''': Oh? The ''"The man sent them a wry smile. smile."'' The famed Sky Pirates attending my ball? I must be sure to hide all my valuables then. ''"The two males each gave a laugh, but even Luso noted how subtly serious he was being"'' . Very well, then. The details are all written. I look forward to seeing all of you.
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->'''Judgemaster Cid''': I am more focused on what Khamja had planned to use it for. That is where Clan Gully comes in. What I am about to tell you is to remain confidential. I want you to find out more information on this stone for me. Use whatever methods you deem necessary...
->'''Narration''': Ensei's grin stretched from ear to ear.
->'''Judgemaster Cid''': Outside of outright violation of the law, of course.
->'''Narration''': Ensei's grin stretched from ear to ear.
->'''Judgemaster Cid''': Outside of outright violation of the law, of course.
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->'''Judgemaster Cid''': I am more focused on what Khamja had planned to use it for. That is where Clan Gully comes in. What I am about to tell you is to remain confidential. I want you to find out more information on this stone for me. Use whatever methods you deem necessary...
->'''Narration''': Ensei'snecessary... ''"Ensei's grin stretched from ear to ear.
->'''Judgemaster Cid''':ear."'' Outside of outright violation of the law, of course.
->'''Narration''': Ensei's
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->'''Cheney''': I don't think it's getting that chilly out here." Cheney joked lightly.
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->'''Cheney''': I don't think it's getting that chilly out here." Cheney joked lightly.
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->'''Kanin''': Clans in general can do nearly anything, but specifically, there are many different types of clans. There are hunting clans who specialize in monster hunting and taking down marks; escorting clans who transport items and cargo or escort people and VIPs; and soldier clans that fight for a client. There are also clans who do menial chores and even bard clans who perform for people.
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->'''Kanin''': Clans in general can do nearly anything, but specifically, there are many different types of clans. There are hunting clans who specialize in monster hunting and taking down marks; escorting clans who transport items and cargo or escort people and VIPs; [=VIPs=]; and soldier clans that fight for a client. There are also clans who do menial chores and even bard clans who perform for people.
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->'''Gofannon''': Good to see you, Sasasha. Sorry for having you bring her up here. Hopefully she wasn't too much to handle.
->'''Sasasha''': None at all, Gofannon. Certainly more mannered and composed than you've ever been.
->'''Gofannon''': Charming as ever, I see.
-->--Anna and Sasasha meet up with Anna's dad again
->'''Ensei''': Oh. Hey guys. "Ensei gets doused in water". Now was that really necessary?
->'''Most of Clan Gully as of the relevant moment''': Where have you been!
->'''Ensei''': Oh you know. Just enjoying the land festival. Here you go, Kanin. I figured you'd like this.
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->'''Cheney''': Wait….so you're…you're telling me that the entire time we've been fighting for our lives in that arena…you've been parading around in this fair?
->'''Ensei''': Actually….yeah that sounds about right.
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->'''Cheney''': I have no words for this.
-->--Ensei was fooling around while his clan was doing work
