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'''Chapter 10'''
''Ilk tries to help fight the Mendigo, but is held back by Red''.
----> '''Red:''' Ilk, where do you think you're going?!
----> '''Ilk:''' We have to help Zim!
----> '''Red:''' Zim is gone, Ilk! And frankly, I'm glad he is!
----> '''Lena:''' ''gasps'' How can you say that?! He might have been a walking disaster, but he still was a living Irken!
----> '''Red:''' ''groans'' Okay, okay, I'll make a holiday in his honor. Happy?
''Red winces in pain at the new wound in his waist.''
----> '''Blue:''' By the ancestors! Irken, are you okay?!
----> '''Red:''' Idiot, aren't you seeing me?!
----> '''Captain:''' What happened?
----> '''Red:''' ''murmurs annoyed'' Another one...
''Lena trying to tend to Red's injury''.
----> '''Lena:''' Red, listen, we're going to try something... unusual with your injuries. Is that okay?
----> '''Red:''' ''murmurs deliriously''.
----> '''Captain:''' Doc, I don't think he's in the mental faculties for that.
''Ilk tries to help fight the Mendigo, but is held back by Red''.
----> '''Red:''' Ilk, where do you think you're going?!
----> '''Ilk:''' We have to help Zim!
----> '''Red:''' Zim is gone, Ilk! And frankly, I'm glad he is!
----> '''Lena:''' ''gasps'' How can you say that?! He might have been a walking disaster, but he still was a living Irken!
----> '''Red:''' ''groans'' Okay, okay, I'll make a holiday in his honor. Happy?
''Red winces in pain at the new wound in his waist.''
----> '''Blue:''' By the ancestors! Irken, are you okay?!
----> '''Red:''' Idiot, aren't you seeing me?!
----> '''Captain:''' What happened?
----> '''Red:''' ''murmurs annoyed'' Another one...
''Lena trying to tend to Red's injury''.
----> '''Lena:''' Red, listen, we're going to try something... unusual with your injuries. Is that okay?
----> '''Red:''' ''murmurs deliriously''.
----> '''Captain:''' Doc, I don't think he's in the mental faculties for that.
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'''Chapter 6'''
''Red notices everyone is watching Dumbo''.
----> '''Skoodge:''' (''crying'') POOR DUMBO!
----> '''Red:''' Who on Irk is Dumbo?! (''takes a peek at the movie'') What's the big deal?
----> '''Tenn:''' His mom got locked just for defending him! (''wipes her eyes'')
----> '''Larb:''' Damn you, humans!
----> '''Purple:''' We should put THEM in cages to see if they like it.
----> ''Everyone agrees with him''.
----> '''Red:''' Sweet Irk, ''we'' do ''that'' to inferior species on an almost daily basis, so what's the big deal with one earth-beast being locked up in a cage because of her kid?
''Red's lullaby to Ilk''.
''Smeetie mine don't you cry
Smeetie mine dry your eyes
Rest your head close to my squeedly-spooch
Never to part, smeetie of mine…
Little one, when you play,
Pay no heed what they say
Let your eyes sparkle and shine
Never a tear, smeetie of mine
From your antennae down to your toes,
You're not much, Irk knows
But you're so precious to me
Sweet as can be, smeetie of mine…
'''Chapter 7'''
----> '''Ilk:''' Why are you so thin if you're always eating donuts, uncle Pur?
----> '''Purple:''' It's a secret.
''Bob's bill''.
----> '''Purple:''' Even better, all the snacks are for free!
----> '''Ilk:''' Really?
----> '''Purple:''' For me and your daddy, they are. But just to be sure, you can tell them to add them to Bob's bill.
----> '''Ilk:''' But doesn't he earn only two monies every two years?
----> '''Purple:''' That's what he gets for being so short.
''Purple jumps into the water to 'save' Ilk''.
----> '''Purple:''' OUT OF MY WAY! DON'T WORRY, ILK! UNCLE PURPLE IS COMING TO THE RESCUE!
----> '''Navigator #1:''' What is Tallest Purple doing?
----> '''Navigator #2:''' He probably lost one of his doughnuts. Check mate. You owe me ten monies.
''Red notices everyone is watching Dumbo''.
----> '''Skoodge:''' (''crying'') POOR DUMBO!
----> '''Red:''' Who on Irk is Dumbo?! (''takes a peek at the movie'') What's the big deal?
----> '''Tenn:''' His mom got locked just for defending him! (''wipes her eyes'')
----> '''Larb:''' Damn you, humans!
----> '''Purple:''' We should put THEM in cages to see if they like it.
----> ''Everyone agrees with him''.
----> '''Red:''' Sweet Irk, ''we'' do ''that'' to inferior species on an almost daily basis, so what's the big deal with one earth-beast being locked up in a cage because of her kid?
''Red's lullaby to Ilk''.
''Smeetie mine don't you cry
Smeetie mine dry your eyes
Rest your head close to my squeedly-spooch
Never to part, smeetie of mine…
Little one, when you play,
Pay no heed what they say
Let your eyes sparkle and shine
Never a tear, smeetie of mine
From your antennae down to your toes,
You're not much, Irk knows
But you're so precious to me
Sweet as can be, smeetie of mine…
'''Chapter 7'''
----> '''Ilk:''' Why are you so thin if you're always eating donuts, uncle Pur?
----> '''Purple:''' It's a secret.
''Bob's bill''.
----> '''Purple:''' Even better, all the snacks are for free!
----> '''Ilk:''' Really?
----> '''Purple:''' For me and your daddy, they are. But just to be sure, you can tell them to add them to Bob's bill.
----> '''Ilk:''' But doesn't he earn only two monies every two years?
----> '''Purple:''' That's what he gets for being so short.
''Purple jumps into the water to 'save' Ilk''.
----> '''Purple:''' OUT OF MY WAY! DON'T WORRY, ILK! UNCLE PURPLE IS COMING TO THE RESCUE!
----> '''Navigator #1:''' What is Tallest Purple doing?
----> '''Navigator #2:''' He probably lost one of his doughnuts. Check mate. You owe me ten monies.
''Bob is ordered to deal with a space roach''.
''A random table drone is eaten by a tiger sent by Zim''.
----> '''Red:''' Who did he eat?
----> '''Random Irken:''' A service drone, my Tallest!
----> '''Red:''' Someone send his widow a donut!
''After Finny dies''.
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''Zim takes Ilk to school in a baby carrier''.
----> '''Ilk:''' Huh, Zim?
----> '''Zim:''' What is it you need, Ilk-smeet? Do you require another diaper change or is your tummy aching?
----> '''Ilk:''' It's not that…
----> '''Zim:''' Never fear, once we get home I will be completely available for you!
----> '''Ilk:''' Riight… And why did you bring me along?
----> '''Zim:''' What a better way to learn how to become an Invader than watching the almighty Zim in action!
----> '''Ilk:''' I sort of understand that, but I mean why am I in a smeet carrier?
----> '''Zim:''' It's for your own protection, Ilk-smeet!
''Dib asks Ilk who she is''.
----> '''Zim:''' You'll never know, Dib-stink! You shall never find the identity of Ilk-smeet, the almighty daughter of my Almighty Tallest Red!
----> '''Ilk:''' ''facepalms''.
----> '''Dib:''' You just told me.
----> '''Zim:''' LIES!
''Ilk takes a call from the Massive after learning her father has started a witch hunt throughout the universe looking for her''.
----> '''Red:''' ZIM, I SWEAR, IF SOMETHING HAPPENED TO ILK-! ''notices it's Ilk on the other side'' ILK! AREYOUOKAY?! IVEBEENWORRIEDSICK! ITHOUGHTTHOSEDAMNREBELSHADCAPTUREDYOU! HOWONIRKDIDYOUENDUPONEARTH?! AREYOUHURT?! DIDZIMHURTYOU?!
----> '''Purple:''' Red, calm down, she can't understand anything like that! Besides, you're spitting over the donuts!
''Zim takes Ilk to school in a baby carrier''.
----> '''Ilk:''' Huh, Zim?
----> '''Zim:''' What is it you need, Ilk-smeet? Do you require another diaper change or is your tummy aching?
----> '''Ilk:''' It's not that…
----> '''Zim:''' Never fear, once we get home I will be completely available for you!
----> '''Ilk:''' Riight… And why did you bring me along?
----> '''Zim:''' What a better way to learn how to become an Invader than watching the almighty Zim in action!
----> '''Ilk:''' I sort of understand that, but I mean why am I in a smeet carrier?
----> '''Zim:''' It's for your own protection, Ilk-smeet!
''Dib asks Ilk who she is''.
----> '''Zim:''' You'll never know, Dib-stink! You shall never find the identity of Ilk-smeet, the almighty daughter of my Almighty Tallest Red!
----> '''Ilk:''' ''facepalms''.
----> '''Dib:''' You just told me.
----> '''Zim:''' LIES!
''Ilk takes a call from the Massive after learning her father has started a witch hunt throughout the universe looking for her''.
----> '''Red:''' ZIM, I SWEAR, IF SOMETHING HAPPENED TO ILK-! ''notices it's Ilk on the other side'' ILK! AREYOUOKAY?! IVEBEENWORRIEDSICK! ITHOUGHTTHOSEDAMNREBELSHADCAPTUREDYOU! HOWONIRKDIDYOUENDUPONEARTH?! AREYOUHURT?! DIDZIMHURTYOU?!
----> '''Purple:''' Red, calm down, she can't understand anything like that! Besides, you're spitting over the donuts!
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----> '''Red:''' SOMEBODY CUT IF OTT!
----> '''Comms Officer:''' T-THERE SEEMS TO BE A PROBLEM WITH THAT, MY TALLEST!
----> '''Red:''' WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'A PROBLEM'?!
----> '''Comms Officer:''' THE BUTTON ISN'T WORKING!
----> '''Zim:''' GET OUT OF MY HOUSE, DIB-WORM!
----> '''Dib:''' WHAT?!
----> '''Purple:''' ''presses button to end the call, but it doesn't work'' WHAT IN IRK IS WRONG WITH THIS BUTTON?!
----> '''Red:''' WHERE'S THE REMOTE?! WHOEVER CAN FIND IT BEFORE ILK WAKES UP WILL GET A FREE DONUT!
----> '''Purple:''' WHAT?!
----> '''Zim:''' ''finally notices the call'' M-My Tallest!
----> '''Red:''' ABOUT TIME! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
----> '''Zim:''' N-nothing to worry about, My Tallest! Everything's under control! ''throws hatchet away''
----> '''Dib:''' NOO! My hair!
----> '''Purple:''' ''keeps pressing button to no avail'' ARGH, STUPID BUTTON!
----> '''Red:''' ZIM, END THE TRANSMISSION NOW!
----> '''Zim:''' WHAT?! WOULD YOU MIND SPEAKING A LITTLE LOUDER, MY TALLEST?!
----> '''Red:''' END THE TRANSMISSION!
----> '''Zim:''' MEND MY ADMISSION?!
----> '''Dib:'''YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS, ZIM! ''tackles Zim''.
----> '''Red:''' EVERYBODY QUIET!
----> '''Red:''' SOMEBODY CUT IF OTT!
----> '''Comms Officer:''' T-THERE SEEMS TO BE A PROBLEM WITH THAT, MY TALLEST!
----> '''Red:''' WHAT DO YOU MEAN 'A PROBLEM'?!
----> '''Comms Officer:''' THE BUTTON ISN'T WORKING!
----> '''Zim:''' GET OUT OF MY HOUSE, DIB-WORM!
----> '''Dib:''' WHAT?!
----> '''Purple:''' ''presses button to end the call, but it doesn't work'' WHAT IN IRK IS WRONG WITH THIS BUTTON?!
----> '''Red:''' WHERE'S THE REMOTE?! WHOEVER CAN FIND IT BEFORE ILK WAKES UP WILL GET A FREE DONUT!
----> '''Purple:''' WHAT?!
----> '''Zim:''' ''finally notices the call'' M-My Tallest!
----> '''Red:''' ABOUT TIME! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
----> '''Zim:''' N-nothing to worry about, My Tallest! Everything's under control! ''throws hatchet away''
----> '''Dib:''' NOO! My hair!
----> '''Purple:''' ''keeps pressing button to no avail'' ARGH, STUPID BUTTON!
----> '''Red:''' ZIM, END THE TRANSMISSION NOW!
----> '''Zim:''' WHAT?! WOULD YOU MIND SPEAKING A LITTLE LOUDER, MY TALLEST?!
----> '''Red:''' END THE TRANSMISSION!
----> '''Zim:''' MEND MY ADMISSION?!
----> '''Dib:'''YOU WILL PAY FOR THIS, ZIM! ''tackles Zim''.
----> '''Red:''' EVERYBODY QUIET!
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The Tallest as they watch Zim bring eaten by a T-Rex during a transmission.
----> '''Red:''' Should we end it?
----> '''Purple:''' Just a bit longer, maybe he'll get eaten. Somebody record this! We might win an Irktube playbutton with this one!
Ilk's first word
----> '''Ilk:''' Ziiimmm! (''the Tallest stop laughing and look down at her in shock. Ilk points at the screen and claps her hands.'')) Ziiiimmm!
'''Chapter 5'''
----> '''Purple:''' EW! Why couldn't the Sobrekt live in a beach?!
----> '''Red:''' Lower your voice! If the Sobrekt find us sneaking around here without having asked for their permission, it will be our necks! Literally!
Quick callback to the previous Invader sent to Sobr.
----> '''Sobrekt #3:''' That's exactly what the last one said. That's what the record says, right?
----> '''Sobrekt #2:''' (''checks on a datapad'') Yeah, here it is. I'm not looking for trouble, I was just here on a… tourist visit. Really, that was so unoriginal it gave his intentions away.
The Tallest as they watch Zim bring eaten by a T-Rex during a transmission.
----> '''Red:''' Should we end it?
----> '''Purple:''' Just a bit longer, maybe he'll get eaten. Somebody record this! We might win an Irktube playbutton with this one!
Ilk's first word
----> '''Ilk:''' Ziiimmm! (''the Tallest stop laughing and look down at her in shock. Ilk points at the screen and claps her hands.'')) Ziiiimmm!
'''Chapter 5'''
----> '''Purple:''' EW! Why couldn't the Sobrekt live in a beach?!
----> '''Red:''' Lower your voice! If the Sobrekt find us sneaking around here without having asked for their permission, it will be our necks! Literally!
Quick callback to the previous Invader sent to Sobr.
----> '''Sobrekt #3:''' That's exactly what the last one said. That's what the record says, right?
----> '''Sobrekt #2:''' (''checks on a datapad'') Yeah, here it is. I'm not looking for trouble, I was just here on a… tourist visit. Really, that was so unoriginal it gave his intentions away.
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----> '''Bob:''' Hey, Larb, who's flying the ship?
----> '''Larb:''' Duh! I am! ''realizes he's left the pilot seat and the ship is shutting down''
----> '''Purple:''' Skoodge, send the emergency beacon now!
----> '''Skoodge:''' Y-Yes, My Tallest!
----> '''Purple:''' The rest of you buckle up and save as many snacks as you can! Not in that order, the other way around!
----> ''Purple screams as he clings to as many doughnut bags as possible.''
----> ''Tenn and Stink scream as the former forgets completely about pushing the latter off her lap.''
----> ''Bob and Skoodge scream as they embrace each other.''
----> ''Red and Larb scream as they try to steer the ship.''
----> '''Larb:''' OH, NO! WE'RE GOING TO CRASH AGAINST THE MOUNTAIN!
----> '''Bob:''' Actually, it looks more like a bunch of birds!
----> '''Larb:''' OH, NO! WE'RE GOING TO CRASH ON THE FOREST!
'''Chapter 6'''
----> '''Larb:''' Duh! I am! ''realizes he's left the pilot seat and the ship is shutting down''
----> '''Purple:''' Skoodge, send the emergency beacon now!
----> '''Skoodge:''' Y-Yes, My Tallest!
----> '''Purple:''' The rest of you buckle up and save as many snacks as you can! Not in that order, the other way around!
----> ''Purple screams as he clings to as many doughnut bags as possible.''
----> ''Tenn and Stink scream as the former forgets completely about pushing the latter off her lap.''
----> ''Bob and Skoodge scream as they embrace each other.''
----> ''Red and Larb scream as they try to steer the ship.''
----> '''Larb:''' OH, NO! WE'RE GOING TO CRASH AGAINST THE MOUNTAIN!
----> '''Bob:''' Actually, it looks more like a bunch of birds!
----> '''Larb:''' OH, NO! WE'RE GOING TO CRASH ON THE FOREST!
'''Chapter 6'''
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Masouri crying over the ''Ibris's'' state and Echo calling him out on it.
----> '''Masouri:''' Oh, my beauty…! My beautiful ship!
----> '''Echo:''' Knock it off, Masouri, it's just a ship.
----> '''Masouri:''' Just a ship? How can you even say that?! I've had this ship since I enrolled at the Pilot Academy!
----> '''Echo:''' Big deal, you can get another one.
----> '''Masouri:''' Say that again, I dare you!
The Irkens' ship shutting down and everyone's reactions.
Masouri crying over the ''Ibris's'' state and Echo calling him out on it.
----> '''Masouri:''' Oh, my beauty…! My beautiful ship!
----> '''Echo:''' Knock it off, Masouri, it's just a ship.
----> '''Masouri:''' Just a ship? How can you even say that?! I've had this ship since I enrolled at the Pilot Academy!
----> '''Echo:''' Big deal, you can get another one.
----> '''Masouri:''' Say that again, I dare you!
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The Ibris shutting down and everyone asking Masouri, much to his irritation.
----> '''Foxtrot:''' Masouri, what's happening?!
----> '''Masouri:''' I don't know, everything just shut down! Oh, shit...!
----> '''Captain:'''Masouri, what's going on?!
----> '''Masouri:''' I ''don't'' know! Everything's shut down and we're being attracted by the gravitational field of ''that'' planet!
----> '''Captain:''' Well, do something to fix it!
----> '''Masouri:''' The problem is we don't have anything to fix it with, Captain! Whatever shut us down also affected the energy systems!
----> '''Foxtrot:''' ''And'' the computer!
----> '''Echo:''' In other words, we're going to have a very rough landing!
----> '''Blue:''' Masouri-!
----> '''Masouri:''' I swear, if I hear 'what's going on' one more time I'll throw myself out of the airlock!
----> '''Foxtrot:''' Masouri, what's happening?!
----> '''Masouri:''' I don't know, everything just shut down! Oh, shit...!
----> '''Captain:'''Masouri, what's going on?!
----> '''Masouri:''' I ''don't'' know! Everything's shut down and we're being attracted by the gravitational field of ''that'' planet!
----> '''Captain:''' Well, do something to fix it!
----> '''Masouri:''' The problem is we don't have anything to fix it with, Captain! Whatever shut us down also affected the energy systems!
----> '''Foxtrot:''' ''And'' the computer!
----> '''Echo:''' In other words, we're going to have a very rough landing!
----> '''Blue:''' Masouri-!
----> '''Masouri:''' I swear, if I hear 'what's going on' one more time I'll throw myself out of the airlock!
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----> '''Purple:''' You put a ''tracker'' on Ilk? That's a bit exxagerate, don't you think?
----> '''Red:''' I did it because I love her! And as you can see, thanks to this we'll know where the Sobrekt are taking her as soon as their ship leaves hyper-space!
----> '''Purple:''' But really? A ''tracker''?
----> '''Purple:''' You put a ''tracker'' on Ilk? That's a bit exxagerate, don't you think?
----> '''Red:''' I did it because I love her! And as you can see, thanks to this we'll know where the Sobrekt are taking her as soon as their ship leaves hyper-space!
----> '''Purple:''' But really? A ''tracker''?
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----> '''Red:''' What's your name, captain?
----> '''Captain:''' Captain.
----> '''Red:''' I asked for your name, not your rank. The latter is pretty obvious.
----> '''Captain:''' I just told you.
----> '''Purple:''' You told us your rank, he asked for your name.
----> '''Captain:''' It's Captain!
----> '''Purple:''' Again, we want your name, not your rank!
----> '''Captain:''' Captain ''is'' my ''name'', my ''name'' is ''Captain''. Did it get through your empty heads now or should I explain it in terms you can understand?
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----> '''Red:''' What's your name, captain?
----> '''Captain:''' Captain.
----> '''Red:''' I asked for your name, not your rank. The latter is pretty obvious.
----> '''Captain:''' I just told you.
----> '''Purple:''' You told us your rank, he asked for your name.
----> '''Captain:''' It's Captain!
----> '''Purple:''' Again, we want your name, not your rank!
----> '''Captain:''' Captain ''is'' my ''name'', my ''name'' is ''Captain''. Did it get through your empty heads now or should I explain it in terms you can understand?
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After Red catches Purple and some other people eavesdropping on him and Ilk.
----> '''Purple:''' Hey, Red! So, how did it go?
----> '''Red:''' Didn't you hear through the door?
After Red catches Purple and some other people eavesdropping on him and Ilk.
----> '''Purple:''' Hey, Red! So, how did it go?
----> '''Red:''' Didn't you hear through the door?
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----> '''Red:''' Bravo. Now you've really done it, Pur. You killed Finny.
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----> '''Red:''' You know, you should write a book: a hundred ways to kill your niece's fish.
----> '''Red:''' Bravo. Now you've really done it, Pur. You killed Finny.
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----> '''Red:''' You know, you should write a book: a hundred ways to kill your niece's fish.
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----> '''Bob:''' Couldn't we just leave it there, My Tallest?
----> '''Purple:''' And let it reproduce? Do you know how long it takes for them to make babies?! Besides, it'll go after my doughnuts!
----> '''Bob:''' Then wouldn't it be easier to squash it?
----> '''Purple:''' Oh, right, and spread all of its insides on top of the snacks? Why don't you poison my drink now what we're on it? Just get it over with!
----> '''Bob:''' Couldn't we just leave it there, My Tallest?
----> '''Purple:''' And let it reproduce? Do you know how long it takes for them to make babies?! Besides, it'll go after my doughnuts!
----> '''Bob:''' Then wouldn't it be easier to squash it?
----> '''Purple:''' Oh, right, and spread all of its insides on top of the snacks? Why don't you poison my drink now what we're on it? Just get it over with!
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----> '''Purple:''' NOT THIS AGAIN!
----> '''Purple:''' NOT THIS AGAIN!
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----> '''Purple:''' I'm feeling something humid...
----> '''Red:''' Don't tell me that when we're so close!
----> '''Purple:''' Not that type of humidity, I think I fell on top of your drink!
----> '''Purple:''' I'm feeling something humid...
----> '''Red:''' Don't tell me that when we're so close!
----> '''Purple:''' Not that type of humidity, I think I fell on top of your drink!
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----> '''Skoodge:''' Have you never smelt a smeet's pop?! It's nauseating stench will create a trauma we will never overcome in our worst nightmares!"
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[[folder: The Smeet]]
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[[folder: Lost]]
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[[folder: Indokani]]
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[[folder: Pre-Parental Panic]]
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