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->At one time, most of my friends could hear the bell. But as years passed, it fell silent for all of them. Even Sarah found, one Christmas, that she could no longer hear its sweet sound. Though I have grown old...the bell still rings for me. As it does for all who truly believe.
-->--Closing Narration
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->''[Hero Boy shakes his head no]''
->'''Train Hobo:''' Interesting...
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->'''Train Hobo:''' By the way, do you believe in ghosts?
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->''[Hero Boy shakes his head no]''
->'''Train Hobo:''' Interesting...
-->--Closing Narration
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->One thing about trains; it doesn't matter where you're going. What matters is deciding ''to get on.''
-->--The Conductor
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->On Christmas Eve, many years ago... [[BaitAndSwitch I shit]] [[ToiletHumor my bed.]] I did not rustle the sheets. I did not [[{{Spoonerism}} sheestle the ruts.]] I was afraid I'd never hear. I breathed slowly. [[RepeatCut I breathed]] silently. [[ToiletHumor I shit my bed.]] I was listening... [[RepeatCut listening]] for the ringing bells... of [[VideoGame/{{Undertale}} Sans.]] ''(cue [[Memes/{{Undertale}} first four notes of Megalovania on a glockenspiel]])''
-->--"[[https://youtu.be/tqg_dbtdWoY Train]]" by [=Numberer1=]
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->On Christmas Eve, many years ago, I lay quietly in my bed. I did not rustle the sheets. I breathed slowly and silently. I was listening for a sound I was afraid I’d never hear: the ringing bells of Santa’s sleigh.
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->On Christmas Eve, many years ago, I lay quietly in my bed. I did not rustle the sheets. I breathed slowly and silently. I was listening for a sound I was afraid I’d I'd never hear: the ringing bells of Santa’s sleigh.
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->At one time, most of my friends could hear the bell. But as years passed, it fell silent for all of them. Even Sarah found, one Christmas, that she could no longer hear it's sweet sound. Though I have grown old...the bell still rings for me. As it does for all who truly believe.
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->At one time, most of my friends could hear the bell. But as years passed, it fell silent for all of them. Even Sarah found, one Christmas, that she could no longer hear it's its sweet sound. Though I have grown old...the bell still rings for me. As it does for all who truly believe.
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->'''Hero Boy:''' No...
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->On Christmas Eve, many years ago, I lay quietly in my bed. I did not rustle the sheets. I breathed slowly and silently. I was listening for a sound I was afraid I’d never hear: the ringing bells of Santa’s sleigh.
-->--Opening Narration
->At one time, most of my friends could hear the bell. But as years passed, it fell silent for all of them. Even Sarah found, one Christmas, that she could no longer hear it's sweet sound. Though I have grown old...the bell still rings for me. As it does for all who truly believe.
-->--Closing Narration
-->--Opening Narration
->At one time, most of my friends could hear the bell. But as years passed, it fell silent for all of them. Even Sarah found, one Christmas, that she could no longer hear it's sweet sound. Though I have grown old...the bell still rings for me. As it does for all who truly believe.
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->'''Train Hobo:''' By the way, do you believe in ghosts?
->'''Hero Boy:''' No...
->'''Train Hobo:''' Interesting...
->'''Train Hobo:''' By the way, do you believe in ghosts?
->'''Hero Boy:''' No...
->'''Train Hobo:''' Interesting...
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->If it's penguins you expect to view, you surely haven't guessed, they all live down at the other end.
-->--The Conductor, performing "The Polar Express"
->'''Hero Boy''': I believe.
->'''Santa''': What was that you said?
->'''Hero Boy''': I believe... I believe this is yours.
-->--The Hero Boy finally hears the sound of the bell, then gives it to Santa.
->This bell is a wonderful symbol of the spirit of Christmas, as am I. Just remember, the true spirit of Christmas lies in your heart.
-->--Santa
->Seeing is believing, but sometimes the most real things in the world are the things we can't see.
-->--The Conductor
-->--The Conductor, performing "The Polar Express"
->'''Hero Boy''': I believe.
->'''Santa''': What was that you said?
->'''Hero Boy''': I believe... I believe this is yours.
-->--The Hero Boy finally hears the sound of the bell, then gives it to Santa.
->This bell is a wonderful symbol of the spirit of Christmas, as am I. Just remember, the true spirit of Christmas lies in your heart.
-->--Santa
->Seeing is believing, but sometimes the most real things in the world are the things we can't see.
-->--The Conductor
