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[[ShowerOfAngst Uh, uh, uh]]...\\
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How you guys doin', you havin' fun? Oh, I'm havin' a great time too. Just been swingin' around, savin' lives; doin' what I do... Ladies and gentlemen, [[SecretRelationship a dear friend of mine is here]]! She's not gonna sing, [[RedundantRomanceAttempt and she doesn't know I'm about to do this]] - but Mary Jane Parker, everybody! Round of applause!\\
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How you guys doin', you havin' fun? Oh, I'm havin' a great time too. Just been swingin' around, savin' lives; doin' what I do... Ladies and gentlemen, [[SecretRelationship a dear friend of mine is here]]! She's not gonna sing, [[RedundantRomanceAttempt and she doesn't know I'm about to do this]] this - but Mary Jane Parker, everybody! Round of applause!\\
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... [[TheMasochismTango Really not happy about that, okay. Promised I wouldn't do it]]... Got caught up in the moment! Caught up in the spotlight. Let's get back into the song...\\
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... [[TheMasochismTango Really not happy about that, okay. Promised I wouldn't do it]]...it... Got caught up in the moment! Caught up in the spotlight. Let's get back into the song...\\
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-> '''Miles''': Look, if I don’t turn off the collider after you leave, ''everyone in this city'', my parents, my uncle, and ''millions of others'' will die, and you’re just gonna go home and leave me here to figure this out for myself? [[ArmorPiercingQuestion You good with that, Spider-Man]]?\\
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'''Gwen:''' Miles... Miles! [[SequelHook You got a minute?]]
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'''Gwen:''' Miles... Miles! [[SequelHook [[WesternAnimation/SpiderManAcrossTheSpiderVerse You got a minute?]]
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''...and a so-so popsicle. ''({{beat}})'' I mean, I've looked '''worse'''.\\
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''...and [[TheCharacterIceCreamBar a so-so popsicle.popsicle]]. ''({{beat}})'' I mean, I've looked '''worse'''.\\
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'''Miles''': With [[ComesGreatResponsibility great power comes]] great...\\
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'''Miles''': With [[ComesGreatResponsibility [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility great power comes]] great...\\
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'''Ben Parker:''' With great power, [[ComesGreatResponsibility comes great responsibility]].\\
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'''Ben Parker:''' [[WithGreatPowerComesGreatResponsibility With great power, [[ComesGreatResponsibility comes great responsibility]].\\
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All of those links were meta-comments on the Raimi films; if one goes, they all go.
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Then like 15 years passed, blah, blah, blah, super boring. I broke my back, a drone flew into my face, I buried Aunt May, [[WhatCouldHaveBeen my wife and I... split up]].\\
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Then like 15 years passed, blah, blah, blah, super boring. I broke my back, a drone flew into my face, I buried Aunt May, [[WhatCouldHaveBeen my wife and I... split up]].up.\\
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'''Creator/StanLee:''' [[SuperHeroOrigin It always fits]]... eventually.[[note]](Camera pans over to a "No Refunds" sign as his eyes twinkle mischievously)[[/note]]
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'''Creator/StanLee:''' [[SuperHeroOrigin It always fits]]... eventually.[[LegacyCharacter eventually]].[[note]](Camera pans over to a "No Refunds" sign as his eyes twinkle mischievously)[[/note]]
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'''Noir''': In my universe, it's 1933, and I'm a private eye. I like to drink egg cream, and I like to fight Nazis. A lot.\\
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'''Noir''': In my universe, it's 1933, and I'm a private eye. I like to drink egg cream, creams, and I like to fight Nazis. A lot.\\
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->'''''Noir''': ''My name is Peter Parker.\\
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'''Noir''': Maybe not that long.''
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'''Noir''': Maybe not that long.''
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'''Spider-Ham''': Pig.\\
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->'''Scorpion''': ''¿El puerco?'' ''(laughs, in English)'' What are ya? Some kind of cartoon?\\
'''Spider-Ham''': You got a problem with cartoons?
'''Spider-Ham''': You got a problem with cartoons?
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->'''''Noir''': My name is Peter Parker.\\
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->'''''Noir''': My ''My name is Peter Parker.\\
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->'''''Noir''': My name is Peter Parker.\\
'''Peni''': My name is Peni Parker.\\
'''Spider-Ham''': My name is Peter Porker.\\
'''Noir, Peni, and Spider-Ham''': I was bitten by a radioactive...\\
'''Noir and Peni''': ...spider.\\
'''Spider-Ham''': Pig.\\
'''Noir''': In my universe, it's 1933, and I'm a private eye. I like to drink egg cream, and I like to fight Nazis. A lot.\\
'''Peni''': I'm from New York in the year 3145. I have a psychic link with a spider who lives inside my father's robot. And we're best friends! Forever!\\
'''Noir''': Sometimes I let matches burn down to my fingertips just to feel something, anything.\\
'''Spider-Ham''': I'm a photographer for ''The Daily Beagle.'' When I'm not pooching around, I'm working like a dog, trying to sniff out the latest story. I frolic and I dance and I do this with my pants and—\\
'''Peter B.''': Okay! Enough! So how did you get here?\\
'''Noir''': Well, it's kind of a long story.\\
(Cut to a short bit of Peni, Noir, and Spider-Ham arriving in New York.)\\
'''Noir''': Maybe not that long.''
-->--'''Spider-Man Noir''', '''Peni Parker''' and '''Spider-Ham'''[='=]s introduction
'''Peni''': My name is Peni Parker.\\
'''Spider-Ham''': My name is Peter Porker.\\
'''Noir, Peni, and Spider-Ham''': I was bitten by a radioactive...\\
'''Noir and Peni''': ...spider.\\
'''Spider-Ham''': Pig.\\
'''Noir''': In my universe, it's 1933, and I'm a private eye. I like to drink egg cream, and I like to fight Nazis. A lot.\\
'''Peni''': I'm from New York in the year 3145. I have a psychic link with a spider who lives inside my father's robot. And we're best friends! Forever!\\
'''Noir''': Sometimes I let matches burn down to my fingertips just to feel something, anything.\\
'''Spider-Ham''': I'm a photographer for ''The Daily Beagle.'' When I'm not pooching around, I'm working like a dog, trying to sniff out the latest story. I frolic and I dance and I do this with my pants and—\\
'''Peter B.''': Okay! Enough! So how did you get here?\\
'''Noir''': Well, it's kind of a long story.\\
(Cut to a short bit of Peni, Noir, and Spider-Ham arriving in New York.)\\
'''Noir''': Maybe not that long.''
-->--'''Spider-Man Noir''', '''Peni Parker''' and '''Spider-Ham'''[='=]s introduction
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Don't pothole in quotes.
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Then like 15 years passed, blah, blah, blah, super boring. [[DevelopmentGag I broke my back]], [[TechnologyMarchesOn a drone flew into my face]], [[MoodWhiplash I buried Aunt May]], [[WhatCouldHaveBeen my wife and I... split up]].\\
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Then like 15 years passed, blah, blah, blah, super boring. [[DevelopmentGag I broke my back]], [[TechnologyMarchesOn back, a drone flew into my face]], [[MoodWhiplash face, I buried Aunt May]], May, [[WhatCouldHaveBeen my wife and I... split up]].\\
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[[WhereAreTheyNow And when I feel alone, like no one understands what I'm going through, I remember my friends who get it]].\\
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I never thought I'd be able to do '''any''' of this stuff, but... I can. '''Anyone''' can wear the mask. '''You''' could wear the mask. If you didn't do that before, I hope you do now. 'Cause I'm Spider-Man. And I'm not the only one. Not by a long shot.''\\
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I never thought I'd be able to do '''any''' of this stuff, but... I can. '''Anyone''' can wear the mask. '''You''' could wear the mask. If you didn't do know that before, I hope you do now. 'Cause I'm Spider-Man. And I'm not the only one. Not by a long shot.''\\
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->''My husband, Peter Parker, was an ordinary person. He always said that it could be anyone behind the mask. He was just a kid who happened to get bit. He didn't ask for his powers. But he chose to be Spider-Man... My favorite thing about Peter is that he made us each feel powerful. We all have powers of one kind or the other, and in our own way we are all Spider-Man. And we are all counting on you.''
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->''My husband, Peter Parker, was an ordinary person. He always said that it could be anyone behind the mask. He was just a the kid who happened to get bit. He didn't ask for his powers. But he chose to be Spider-Man... My favorite thing about Peter is that he made us each feel powerful. We all have powers of one kind or the other, and in our own way we are all Spider-Man. And we are all counting on you.''
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I was blown into last week. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]].'' I landed in New York, but not my New York.\\
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I was blown into last week. ''[[LiteralMetaphor '''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]].'' ''' I landed in New York, but not my New York.\\
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'''Spider-Gwen''': --when you think you’ve given your all--\\
'''Spider-Ham''': --when you think you can’t keep going--\\
'''Spider-Ham''': --when you think you can’t keep going--\\
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'''Spider-Gwen''': --when you think you’ve you've given your all--\\
'''Spider-Ham''': --when you think youcan’t can't keep going--\\
'''Spider-Ham''': --when you think you
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[[folder:Spider-People Introductions]]
->''Alright, let's do this one last time.\\
My name is Peter Parker. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for 10 years, I've been the one and only Spider-Man.\\
[[PopCulturalOsmosis I'm pretty sure you know the rest]].''\\
'''Ben Parker:''' With great power, [[ComesGreatResponsibility comes great responsibility]].\\
''I saved a bunch of people, fell in love, saved the city. And then I saved the city again. And again and again and again.\\
And I did, uh... I did [[Film/SpiderMan3 this]].''\\
♬ Get on up... ♬\\
''[[OldShame We don't really talk about this]].\\
Look, I'm a comic book, I'm a cereal, did a Christmas album. I have an excellent theme song...''\\
♬ [[EarWorm Spider-Man, Spider-Man]] ♬\\
''...and a so-so popsicle. ''({{beat}})'' I mean, I've looked '''worse'''.\\
But after '''everything''', [[GoodFeelsGood I still love being Spider-Man]]. I mean, who wouldn't? So no matter how many hits I take, [[{{Determinator}} I always find a way to come back]]. Because the only thing standing between [[UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity this city]] and oblivion is me. [[DramaticIrony There's only one Spider-Man]]... and you're looking at him.''
-->--'''R.I.Peter Parker'''[='=]s introduction
->''Alright, let's do this one last time.\\
My name is [[Film/SpiderManTrilogy Peter B. Parker]]. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for the last 22 years, I thought I was the one and only Spider-Man.''\\
What a day...\\
''[[LampshadeHanging I'm pretty sure you know the rest]]. You see, I saved the city, fell in love, I got married, saved the city some more, maybe too much. My marriage got testy, made some dicey money-choices - don't invest in a Spider-themed restaurant.\\
Then like 15 years passed, blah, blah, blah, super boring. [[DevelopmentGag I broke my back]], [[TechnologyMarchesOn a drone flew into my face]], [[MoodWhiplash I buried Aunt May]], [[WhatCouldHaveBeen my wife and I... split up]].\\
But I handled it like a '''champion'''.''\\
[[ShowerOfAngst Uh, uh, uh]]...\\
''[='=]Cause you know what, no matter how many times I get hit, I '''always''' get back up. And I got a lot of time to reflect and work on myself. Did you know that seahorses, that they mate for life? Can you imagine? A seahorse, seeing another seahorse, and then making it work?\\
[[ComicBook/MaryJaneWatson She]] wanted kids, and... and it scared me. I'm pretty sure I broke her heart.\\
Flash-forward: I'm in my apartment, [[BlatantLies doing push-ups, doing ab-crunches, getting strong]], when this weird thing happened. And I gotta say, [[SeenItAll weird things happen to me a lot]]... but [[SubvertedTrope this was real weird]].\\
You see, I was in New York, but things were different. Also, I was '''[[OurHeroIsDead dead]]'''. And '''[[AdaptationDyeJob blonde]]'''. I was kind of... '''[[TheParagon perfect]]'''. It was like looking in a mirror.\\
I have a feeling that the thing that brought me here was the thing that got him killed.\\
You wanna know what happened next?''\\
'''Peter B.:''' Hey, kid-''([[ShockAndAwe zapped]])'' Agh!\\
''Me, too.''\\
'''Miles:''' Who ''are'' you?
-->--'''Peter B. Parker'''[='=]s introduction
->''Alright, people, let's start at the beginning one last time.\\
My name is [[ComicBook/SpiderGwen Gwen Stacy]]. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for the last two years, I've been the one and only Spider-Woman.\\
[[SarcasmMode You guys know the rest]]. I joined a band, saved my dad. I... '''couldn't''' [[ILetGwenStacyDie save my best friend]], Peter Parker. So, now I save everyone else. [[TheAloner And I don't do friends anymore]]... just to avoid any distractions. And one day this weird thing happened. And I mean, like, '''really''' weird.\\
I was blown into last week. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]].'' I landed in New York, but not my New York.\\
My SpiderSense told me to head to Visions Academy. Wasn't sure why, until I met... you.''\\
'''Miles:''' I like your haircut?\\
'''Gwen:''' ''You'' don't get to like my haircut.
-->--'''Gwen Stacy'''[='=]s introduction
->''Okay, let's do this one last time, yeah? [[BookEnds For real this time. This is it.]]\\
My name is ComicBook/MilesMorales. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for the last, like, two days, I've been the one and only Spider-Man.\\
[[HowWeGotHere I think you know the rest]]. I finished my essay, saved a bunch of people, [[BrickJoke got hit by a drone]]. I did [[ShrineToTheFallen this]] with my dad. Met my roommate, finally.\\
([[UnsoundEffect Best buds!]])\\
Slapped a sticker where my dad's '''never''' gonna find it.\\
[[WhereAreTheyNow And when I feel alone, like no one understands what I'm going through, I remember my friends who get it]].\\
I never thought I'd be able to do '''any''' of this stuff, but... I can. '''Anyone''' can wear the mask. '''You''' could wear the mask. If you didn't do that before, I hope you do now. 'Cause I'm Spider-Man. And I'm not the only one. Not by a long shot.''\\
♬ Needless to say, I keep her in check ♬\\
♬ She was all bad-bad, nevertheless ♬\\
♬ Callin' it quits, yeah, baby, I'm a wreck ♬\\
'''Gwen:''' Miles... Miles! [[SequelHook You got a minute?]]
-->--'''Miles Morales'''[='=]s closing lines
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->''Alright, let's do this one last time.\\
My name is Peter Parker. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for 10 years, I've been the one and only Spider-Man.\\
[[PopCulturalOsmosis I'm pretty sure you know the rest]].''\\
'''Ben Parker:''' With great power, [[ComesGreatResponsibility comes great responsibility]].\\
''I saved a bunch of people, fell in love, saved the city. And then I saved the city again. And again and again and again.\\
And I did, uh... I did [[Film/SpiderMan3 this]].''\\
♬ Get on up... ♬\\
''[[OldShame We don't really talk about this]].\\
Look, I'm a comic book, I'm a cereal, did a Christmas album. I have an excellent theme song...''\\
♬ [[EarWorm Spider-Man, Spider-Man]] ♬\\
''...and a so-so popsicle. ''({{beat}})'' I mean, I've looked '''worse'''.\\
But after '''everything''', [[GoodFeelsGood I still love being Spider-Man]]. I mean, who wouldn't? So no matter how many hits I take, [[{{Determinator}} I always find a way to come back]]. Because the only thing standing between [[UsefulNotes/NewYorkCity this city]] and oblivion is me. [[DramaticIrony There's only one Spider-Man]]... and you're looking at him.''
-->--'''R.I.Peter Parker'''[='=]s introduction
->''Alright, let's do this one last time.\\
My name is [[Film/SpiderManTrilogy Peter B. Parker]]. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for the last 22 years, I thought I was the one and only Spider-Man.''\\
What a day...\\
''[[LampshadeHanging I'm pretty sure you know the rest]]. You see, I saved the city, fell in love, I got married, saved the city some more, maybe too much. My marriage got testy, made some dicey money-choices - don't invest in a Spider-themed restaurant.\\
Then like 15 years passed, blah, blah, blah, super boring. [[DevelopmentGag I broke my back]], [[TechnologyMarchesOn a drone flew into my face]], [[MoodWhiplash I buried Aunt May]], [[WhatCouldHaveBeen my wife and I... split up]].\\
But I handled it like a '''champion'''.''\\
[[ShowerOfAngst Uh, uh, uh]]...\\
''[='=]Cause you know what, no matter how many times I get hit, I '''always''' get back up. And I got a lot of time to reflect and work on myself. Did you know that seahorses, that they mate for life? Can you imagine? A seahorse, seeing another seahorse, and then making it work?\\
[[ComicBook/MaryJaneWatson She]] wanted kids, and... and it scared me. I'm pretty sure I broke her heart.\\
Flash-forward: I'm in my apartment, [[BlatantLies doing push-ups, doing ab-crunches, getting strong]], when this weird thing happened. And I gotta say, [[SeenItAll weird things happen to me a lot]]... but [[SubvertedTrope this was real weird]].\\
You see, I was in New York, but things were different. Also, I was '''[[OurHeroIsDead dead]]'''. And '''[[AdaptationDyeJob blonde]]'''. I was kind of... '''[[TheParagon perfect]]'''. It was like looking in a mirror.\\
I have a feeling that the thing that brought me here was the thing that got him killed.\\
You wanna know what happened next?''\\
'''Peter B.:''' Hey, kid-''([[ShockAndAwe zapped]])'' Agh!\\
''Me, too.''\\
'''Miles:''' Who ''are'' you?
-->--'''Peter B. Parker'''[='=]s introduction
->''Alright, people, let's start at the beginning one last time.\\
My name is [[ComicBook/SpiderGwen Gwen Stacy]]. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for the last two years, I've been the one and only Spider-Woman.\\
[[SarcasmMode You guys know the rest]]. I joined a band, saved my dad. I... '''couldn't''' [[ILetGwenStacyDie save my best friend]], Peter Parker. So, now I save everyone else. [[TheAloner And I don't do friends anymore]]... just to avoid any distractions. And one day this weird thing happened. And I mean, like, '''really''' weird.\\
I was blown into last week. ''[[LiteralMetaphor Literally]].'' I landed in New York, but not my New York.\\
My SpiderSense told me to head to Visions Academy. Wasn't sure why, until I met... you.''\\
'''Miles:''' I like your haircut?\\
'''Gwen:''' ''You'' don't get to like my haircut.
-->--'''Gwen Stacy'''[='=]s introduction
->''Okay, let's do this one last time, yeah? [[BookEnds For real this time. This is it.]]\\
My name is ComicBook/MilesMorales. I was bitten by a radioactive spider, and for the last, like, two days, I've been the one and only Spider-Man.\\
[[HowWeGotHere I think you know the rest]]. I finished my essay, saved a bunch of people, [[BrickJoke got hit by a drone]]. I did [[ShrineToTheFallen this]] with my dad. Met my roommate, finally.\\
([[UnsoundEffect Best buds!]])\\
Slapped a sticker where my dad's '''never''' gonna find it.\\
[[WhereAreTheyNow And when I feel alone, like no one understands what I'm going through, I remember my friends who get it]].\\
I never thought I'd be able to do '''any''' of this stuff, but... I can. '''Anyone''' can wear the mask. '''You''' could wear the mask. If you didn't do that before, I hope you do now. 'Cause I'm Spider-Man. And I'm not the only one. Not by a long shot.''\\
♬ Needless to say, I keep her in check ♬\\
♬ She was all bad-bad, nevertheless ♬\\
♬ Callin' it quits, yeah, baby, I'm a wreck ♬\\
'''Gwen:''' Miles... Miles! [[SequelHook You got a minute?]]
-->--'''Miles Morales'''[='=]s closing lines
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'''[[DeadpanSnarker Aunt May]]''': [[OneOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Can you help your aunt create an online dating profile so she can get out of the dang house once in a while]]?\\while?\\
