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-->'''Shuck''': Let's review, shall we? I was taught by Death, the greatest chess player in [[UndergroundCity the Underbirth.]] You, on the other hand, were taught by a man who, [[SophisticatedAsHell as you so eloquently put it, "shit himself".]]
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-->'''Shuck''': Let's review, shall we? I was taught by Death, the greatest chess player in [[UndergroundCity the Underbirth.]] Underbirth. You, on the other hand, were taught by a man who, [[SophisticatedAsHell as you so eloquently put it, "shit himself".]]
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-->'''Sullivan:''' What a fuckin' useless bunch of cunts we are.
-->-''Sullivan [[DysfunctionJunction summing up the cast]]''
-->-''Sullivan [[DysfunctionJunction summing up the cast]]''
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-->'''Sullivan:''' What a fuckin' useless bunch of cunts we are.
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-->'''Lucy:''': Kivouackians don't perish with time. [[TimeAbyss Billions of years we've been about]], and life's not worth much once all the rest is gone. You get tired of the wind and the birds, the sound of laughter and the smell of pine. Life is like a piece of paper, and the writing is our lives. When you only have ninety years, the ink turns to gold, so valuable are the words, the days you live, because soon, the story will end. But what if you have a neverending page, a bottomless inkwell? The more you write, the less it all means. That's our curse! We live so long that it's not even life anymore. We're not living forever. We're dying forever.
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-->'''Lucy:''': Kivouackians don't perish with time. [[TimeAbyss Billions of years we've been about]], about, and life's not worth much once all the rest is gone. You get tired of the wind and the birds, the sound of laughter and the smell of pine. Life is like a piece of paper, and the writing is our lives. When you only have ninety years, the ink turns to gold, so valuable are the words, the days you live, because soon, the story will end. But what if you have a neverending page, a bottomless inkwell? The more you write, the less it all means. That's our curse! We live so long that it's not even life anymore. We're not living forever. We're dying forever.
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-->'''Sullivan''': I never pegged you for, for an ''artist'', Shuck. I must say I'm...''confused''.
-->'''Shuck''': When your life predates the existence of the fuckin' universe, you tend to pick up a few things.
-->-''Sullivan reacts to Shuck's [[HiddenDepths art skills]]''
-->'''Shuck''': When your life predates the existence of the fuckin' universe, you tend to pick up a few things.
-->-''Sullivan reacts to Shuck's [[HiddenDepths art skills]]''
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-->-''Lucy [[HiddenDepths reflects on]] [[WhoWantsToLiveForever Kivouackian lifespans]]
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-->'''Lucy:''': Kivouackians don't perish with time. [[TimeAbyss Billions of years we've been about]], and life's not worth much once all the rest is gone. You get tired of the wind and the birds, the sound of laughter and the smell of pine. Life is like a piece of paper, and the writing is our lives. When you only have ninety years, the ink turns to gold, so valuable are the words, the days you live, because soon, the story will end. But what if you have a neverending page, a bottomless inkwell? The more you write, the less it all means. That's our curse! We live so long that it's not even life anymore. We're not living forever. We're dying forever.
-->-''Lucy [[HiddenDepths reflects on]] [[WhoWantsToLiveForever Kivouackian lifespans]]
-->-''Lucy [[HiddenDepths reflects on]] [[WhoWantsToLiveForever Kivouackian lifespans]]
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-->'''Sullivan:'''What a useless bunch of cunts we are.
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-->-''Sullivan [[DysfunctionJunction summing up the cast]]''
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-->-''Yeshua's introduction.''
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-->-''Lucy and Sullivan [[BreakingTheFourthWall break the fourth wall.]]''
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-->-''Lucy and Sullivan [[BreakingTheFourthWall break the fourth wall.]]'']]''
-->'''Yeshua''': Fear not, for I am with you. Be not dismayed for I am your god. I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous hand, or, or some shit.
-->-''Yeshua's introduction.''
-->'''Yeshua''': Fear not, for I am with you. Be not dismayed for I am your god. I will strengthen you, I will help you, I will uphold you with my righteous hand, or, or some shit.
-->-''Yeshua's introduction.''
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-->'''Shuck''': Let's review, shall we? I was taught by Death, the greatest chess player in the underworld. You, on the other hand, were taught by a man who, [[SophisticatedAsHell as you so eloquently put it, "shit himself".]]
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-->'''Shuck''': Let's review, shall we? I was taught by Death, the greatest chess player in [[UndergroundCity the underworld. Underbirth.]] You, on the other hand, were taught by a man who, [[SophisticatedAsHell as you so eloquently put it, "shit himself".]]
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-->'''Shuck''': [[PuncutatedForEmphasis Two. Move. Check. Mate.]]
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-->'''Shuck''': [[PuncutatedForEmphasis [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Two. Move. Check. Mate.]]
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-->'''Shuck''': Checkmate.
-->'''Sullivan''': What?
-->'''Shuck''': [[PuncutatedForEmphasis Two. Move. Check. Mate.]]
-->'''Sullivan''': (Realizes he's already lost) [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck!]] How?
-->'''Shuck''': Let's review, shall we? I was taught by Death, the greatest chess player in the underworld. You, on the other hand, were taught by a man who, [[SophisticatedAsHell as you so eloquently put it, "shit himself".]]
->-''Shuck and Sullivan playing a game of chess.''
-->'''Sullivan''': And while we're on the subject of...of ''you'', can you stop coughing up your teeth everywhere? Ok? Because you've gone and fucked up Henry The Hoover. He's knackered. We're on James The Hoover and I don't even know who the fuck that is, but it's disturbing.
->-''Sullivan pointing out one of the ''many'' issues with Lucy Lacemaker.''
-->'''Lucy''': Who is he talking to?
-->'''Sullivan''': Who the fuck are you talking to?
-->'''Lucy''': I don't know! That's a good fucking point!
->-''Lucy and Sullivan [[BreakingTheFourthWall break the fourth wall.]]''
-->'''Sullivan''': What?
-->'''Shuck''': [[PuncutatedForEmphasis Two. Move. Check. Mate.]]
-->'''Sullivan''': (Realizes he's already lost) [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck!]] How?
-->'''Shuck''': Let's review, shall we? I was taught by Death, the greatest chess player in the underworld. You, on the other hand, were taught by a man who, [[SophisticatedAsHell as you so eloquently put it, "shit himself".]]
->-''Shuck and Sullivan playing a game of chess.''
-->'''Sullivan''': And while we're on the subject of...of ''you'', can you stop coughing up your teeth everywhere? Ok? Because you've gone and fucked up Henry The Hoover. He's knackered. We're on James The Hoover and I don't even know who the fuck that is, but it's disturbing.
->-''Sullivan pointing out one of the ''many'' issues with Lucy Lacemaker.''
-->'''Lucy''': Who is he talking to?
-->'''Sullivan''': Who the fuck are you talking to?
-->'''Lucy''': I don't know! That's a good fucking point!
->-''Lucy and Sullivan [[BreakingTheFourthWall break the fourth wall.]]''
