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->"Show yourselves, corrupted children! I'm the voice of forgiveness that'll eliminate your calamitous forms. "
->". . ."
->"Prepare yourselves to suffer my judgement."
-->-- '''The Batter'''
->". . ."
->"Prepare yourselves to suffer my judgement."
-->-- '''The Batter'''
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-->-- [[spoiler:Scene from The Room, which is linked (somehow) to the Add-Ons.]]
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->[[spoiler:Hello, mama.]]
->[[spoiler:Papa left. I don't like him anyways.]]
->[[spoiler:I hope you'll be back soon.]]
->[[spoiler:I made three friends today.]]
->[[spoiler:The tall mister told me that he'd take me on a pedalo ride, and that we'd all work together to build the world.]]
->[[spoiler:The little bird told me that he'd show me the sky and the clouds, and that I wouldn't have to be scared ever again.]]
->[[spoiler:The big mister told me he'd bake me cakes.]]
->[[spoiler:Today was a good day.]]
->[[spoiler...]]
->[[spoiler:Please come back soon.]]
-->-- [[spoiler:Scene from The Room, which is linked (somehow) to the Add-Ons.]]
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-->"I'm the ruler of Zone 1. It ain't nothing without me!"\\
-- '''Dedan'''
-->"I am not a god... I cannot be perfect... Yes, I have sinned, I admit it. But my responsibilities are far beyond those of a mere mortal."\\
-- '''Japhet'''
-->"We are a little like gods, drawing the infinite power of the sun to sculpt our worlds into the nothingness. Ahaha, I love that metaphor. Yes, like gods..."\\
-- '''Enoch'''
--> "Yaaahahaha!!! In the shadow of death valley, you shall fear the apostle of darkness!"\\
-- '''Enoch'''
-->[[spoiler:Look... he has your eyes...]]\\
[[spoiler:They are filled with fear.]]\\
-- [[spoiler: '''The Queen''' and '''The Batter''' respectively]]
-->[[spoiler:"Escaping from]]
-->[[spoiler:your purpose]]
-->[[spoiler:is]]
-->[[spoiler:impossible."]]\\
-- '''The Batter, [[spoiler: the official ending]]'''
-->[[spoiler:"Hence nothing remains]]
-->[[spoiler:except]]
-->[[spoiler:for our]]
-->[[spoiler:regrets."]]\\
-- '''The Judge, [[spoiler: the special ending]]'''
-->("As the first of four elements...it's an important element.")
-->..."Because without smoke, people would have nothing to breathe."
-->..."Because without metal, people would have nothing to walk on. They would sink and drown."
-->..."Because without plastic, the world would have no boundaries. People would walk and walk without ever stopping.
-->..."Because without meat, people would have nothing to eat. They would die of starvation, one after another."
-->[[spoiler:"It's a secret element...the fifth element...the most important element...Because without sugar, people could no longer bear reality, and they would go mad."]]
-- '''Dedan'''
-->"I am not a god... I cannot be perfect... Yes, I have sinned, I admit it. But my responsibilities are far beyond those of a mere mortal."\\
-- '''Japhet'''
-->"We are a little like gods, drawing the infinite power of the sun to sculpt our worlds into the nothingness. Ahaha, I love that metaphor. Yes, like gods..."\\
-- '''Enoch'''
--> "Yaaahahaha!!! In the shadow of death valley, you shall fear the apostle of darkness!"\\
-- '''Enoch'''
-->[[spoiler:Look... he has your eyes...]]\\
[[spoiler:They are filled with fear.]]\\
-- [[spoiler: '''The Queen''' and '''The Batter''' respectively]]
-->[[spoiler:"Escaping from]]
-->[[spoiler:your purpose]]
-->[[spoiler:is]]
-->[[spoiler:impossible."]]\\
-- '''The Batter, [[spoiler: the official ending]]'''
-->[[spoiler:"Hence nothing remains]]
-->[[spoiler:except]]
-->[[spoiler:for our]]
-->[[spoiler:regrets."]]\\
-- '''The Judge, [[spoiler: the special ending]]'''
-->("As the first of four elements...it's an important element.")
-->..."Because without smoke, people would have nothing to breathe."
-->..."Because without metal, people would have nothing to walk on. They would sink and drown."
-->..."Because without plastic, the world would have no boundaries. People would walk and walk without ever stopping.
-->..."Because without meat, people would have nothing to eat. They would die of starvation, one after another."
-->[[spoiler:"It's a secret element...the fifth element...the most important element...Because without sugar, people could no longer bear reality, and they would go mad."]]
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-->-- '''Enoch'''
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-->[[spoiler:your purpose]]
-->[[spoiler:is]]
-->[[spoiler:impossible."]]\\
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[[spoiler:your purpose]]\\
[[spoiler:is]]\\
[[spoiler:impossible."]]
-->-- '''The Batter, [[spoiler: the official ending]]'''
-->[[spoiler:except]]
-->[[spoiler:for our]]
-->[[spoiler:regrets."]]\\
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[[spoiler:except]]\\
[[spoiler:for our]]\\
[[spoiler:regrets."]]
-->-- '''The Judge, [[spoiler: the special ending]]'''
-->...
..."Because without smoke, people would have nothing to breathe.
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..."Because without metal, people would have nothing to walk on. They would sink and drown.
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..."Because without plastic, the world would have no boundaries. People would walk and walk without ever
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..."Because without meat, people would have nothing to eat. They would die of starvation, one after another.
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-->[[spoiler:"I’m… scared of the dark…"]]\\
[[spoiler:"From now on, there will be no more darkness."]]\\
-- [[spoiler: '''Hugo''' and '''The Batter''' respectively]]
-->Bis Vincit, Qui Se Vincit In Victoria [[labelnote:translation]]Literally: "Wins Twice, Who Himself Defeats In Victory". Grammatically correct: "He Who In Victory Defeats Himself, Is Twice Victorious".[[/labelnote]]
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[[spoiler:"From now on, there will be no more darkness.
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-->''"From now on, there will be no more darkness."''
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-->''"From now on, there will be no more darkness."''
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-->[[spoiler:"I’m… scared of the dark…"]]\\
[[spoiler:"From now on, there will be no more darkness."]]\\
-- [[spoiler: '''Hugo''' and '''The Batter''' respectively]]
[[spoiler:"From now on, there will be no more darkness."]]\\
-- [[spoiler: '''Hugo''' and '''The Batter''' respectively]]
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--> "Yaaahahaha!!! In the shadow of death valley, you shall fear the apostle of darkness!"
-- '''Enoch'''
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-->[[spoiler:They are filled wth fear.]]\\
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-->[[spoiler:"Queen of the flies, it's time to join your disciples. It all went wrong. Time to forget about it and dream sweet dreams."]]\\
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-->''"I’m… scared of the dark…"''
-- '''Hugo'''
-->''"From now on, there will be no more darkness."''
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-->''"From now on, there will be no more darkness."''
-- '''The Batter'''
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-->Bis Vincit, Qui Se Vincit In Victoria [[labelnote:translation]]Literally: "Wins Twice, Who Himself Defeats In Victory". Grammatically correct: "He Who In Victory Defeats Himself, Is Twice Victorious".[[/labelnote]]
-->--'''Zacharie'''
-->Bis Vincit, Qui Se Vincit In Victoria [[labelnote:translation]]Literally: "Wins Twice, Who Himself Defeats In Victory". Grammatically correct: "He Who In Victory Defeats Himself, Is Twice Victorious".[[/labelnote]]
-->--'''Zacharie'''
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-->--'''The Elsens''' throughout different zones, giving exposition on the elements.
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-->[[spoiler:"Queen of the flies, it's time to join your disciples. It all went wrong. Time to forget about it and dream sweet dreams."]]\\
-- '''The Batter'''
-->[[spoiler:"Queen of the flies, it's time to join your disciples. It all went wrong. Time to forget about it and dream sweet dreams."]]\\
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-- '''The Judge, [[spoiler: the special ending]]'''ending]]'''
-->("As the first of four elements...it's an important element.")
-->..."Because without smoke, people would have nothing to breathe."
-->..."Because without metal, people would have nothing to walk on. They would sink and drown."
-->..."Because without plastic, the world would have no boundaries. People would walk and walk without ever stopping.
-->..."Because without meat, people would have nothing to eat. They would die of starvation, one after another."
-->[[spoiler:"It's a secret element...the fifth element...the most important element...Because without sugar, people could no longer bear reality, and they would go mad."]]
-->--'''The Elsens''' throughout different zones, giving exposition on the elements.
-->("As the first of four elements...it's an important element.")
-->..."Because without smoke, people would have nothing to breathe."
-->..."Because without metal, people would have nothing to walk on. They would sink and drown."
-->..."Because without plastic, the world would have no boundaries. People would walk and walk without ever stopping.
-->..."Because without meat, people would have nothing to eat. They would die of starvation, one after another."
-->[[spoiler:"It's a secret element...the fifth element...the most important element...Because without sugar, people could no longer bear reality, and they would go mad."]]
-->--'''The Elsens''' throughout different zones, giving exposition on the elements.
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--> [[spoiler:your purpose]]
--> [[spoiler:is]]
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--> [[spoiler:impossible.]]
-->[[spoiler:impossible."]]\\
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--> [[spoiler:regrets.]]
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-- '''Dedan'''
-->"I am not a god... I cannot be perfect... Yes, Isin, have sinned, I admit it. But my responsibilities are far beyond those of a mere mortal."\\
-- '''Dedan'''
-->"I am not a god... I cannot be perfect... Yes, I
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the official ending]]'''
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'''The opening'''
-->"I am not a god... I cannot be perfect... Yes, I sin, I admit it. But my responsibilities are far beyond those of a mere mortal."\\
-- '''Japhet'''
-->"We are a little like gods, drawing the infinite power of the sun to sculpt our worlds into the nothingness. Ahaha, I love that metaphor. Yes, like gods..."\\
-- '''Enoch'''
-->"I am not a god... I cannot be perfect... Yes, I sin, I admit it. But my responsibilities are far beyond those of a mere mortal."\\
-- '''Japhet'''
-->"We are a little like gods, drawing the infinite power of the sun to sculpt our worlds into the nothingness. Ahaha, I love that metaphor. Yes, like gods..."\\
-- '''Enoch'''
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--> [[spoiler:your purpose]]
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--> [[spoiler:impossible.]]
-->-- The Batter, [[spoiler: The Batter Official Ending]]
--> [[spoiler:your purpose]]
--> [[spoiler:is]]
--> [[spoiler:impossible.]]
-->-- The Batter, [[spoiler: The Batter Official Ending]]
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--> [[spoiler: Hence nothing remains]]
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--> [[spoiler:for our]]
--> [[spoiler:regrets.]]
-->-- The Judge, [[spoiler: The Judge Special Ending]]
--> [[spoiler: Hence nothing remains]]
--> [[spoiler:except]]
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--> [[spoiler:regrets.]]
-->-- The Judge, [[spoiler: The Judge Special Ending]]
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--> Caution - Certain scenes in this game could be immensely shocking to an unwarned public. Or not...
-->-- The opening
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