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Fixed up the punctuation
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-> “Nothing built can last forever.”
to:
-> “Nothing built can last forever.forever, and every legend no matter how great fades with time.”
Changed line(s) 4 (click to see context) from:
->Would you rather fight a hundred chicken-sizes zombies, or ten zombie-sized chickens?
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-> “Well, Ghasts are officially crossed off my to-see list. Done with the Ghasts, never need to see them... [[OhCrap oh crap]].
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-> “Well, Ghasts are officially crossed off my to-see list. Done with the Ghasts, never need to see them... [[OhCrap oh crap]].”
Changed line(s) 25 (click to see context) from:
-> “A bow? In a cannon fight? Axel, there are all sorts of cliched lines about this!
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-> “A bow? In a cannon fight? Axel, there are all sorts of cliched lines about this!this!”
Changed line(s) 28 (click to see context) from:
-> “Yeah, good point. Let’s just sit here and sing songs instead. First song is called “How We Gave Up At The Finish Line... Because of Lukas”.
to:
-> “Yeah, good point. Let’s just sit here and sing songs instead. First song is called “How ‘How We Gave Up At The Finish Line... Because of Lukas”.Lukas’.”
Changed line(s) 61 (click to see context) from:
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I- More than anyone else, you've been there. And I- I don't want to leave if it means... you're my best friend Jesse.”
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-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I- More than anyone else, you've been there. And I- I don't want to leave if it means... you're my best friend friend, Jesse.”
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- “Yeah, good point. Let’s just sit here and sing songs instead. First song is called “How We Gave Up At The Finish Line... Because of Lukas”.
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Added some more quotes, will add more soon
Changed line(s) 4,10 (click to see context) from:
-> “I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.”
-->-- Jesse
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you."
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Jesse
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you."
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
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-->-- Jesse
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you."
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
Changed line(s) 13,25 (click to see context) from:
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.”
-->-- Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!"
-->-- Ivor
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> “Yeah, but being out there, adventuring... that’s good too.”
-->-- Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!"
-->-- Ivor
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> “Yeah, but being out there, adventuring... that’s good too.”
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-> “You “Don’t you know? You dive into the water, you don’t land on top of it! Pull yourself together, and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.follow me.”
-->--Lukas
Petra
->"Long live my lava house! Long live lava!"
“Hey, if at first you don’t succeed, then... uh... succeed later than originally planned.”
-->--Ivor
Petra
->“There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you“I don't know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> “Yeah,when; I don't know how; but being out there, adventuring... that’s good too.someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.”
-->--
->
-->--
->
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you
-->-- Harper
-> “Yeah,
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you."
-->-- Gabriel
-> “Well, Ghasts are officially crossed off my to-see list. Done with the Ghasts, never need to see them... [[OhCrap oh crap]].
-->-- Jesse
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Olivia
-> “A bow? In a cannon fight? Axel, there are all sorts of cliched lines about this!
-->-- Jesse
- “Yeah, good point. Let’s just sit here and sing songs instead. First song is called “How We Gave Up At The Finish Line... Because of Lukas”.
-->-- Jesse
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.”
-->-- Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!"
-->-- Ivor
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> “Yeah, but being out there, adventuring... that’s good too.”
-->-- Jesse
-> “Thank you, Jesse. I solemnly promise to uphold the duties of Clockmaster and to only use my powers for good.”
-->-- Radar
-->-- Gabriel
-> “Well, Ghasts are officially crossed off my to-see list. Done with the Ghasts, never need to see them... [[OhCrap oh crap]].
-->-- Jesse
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Olivia
-> “A bow? In a cannon fight? Axel, there are all sorts of cliched lines about this!
-->-- Jesse
- “Yeah, good point. Let’s just sit here and sing songs instead. First song is called “How We Gave Up At The Finish Line... Because of Lukas”.
-->-- Jesse
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.”
-->-- Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!"
-->-- Ivor
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> “Yeah, but being out there, adventuring... that’s good too.”
-->-- Jesse
-> “Thank you, Jesse. I solemnly promise to uphold the duties of Clockmaster and to only use my powers for good.”
-->-- Radar
-> “No freaking way, Warden. Go eat a slimeball.”
-->-- Jesse
-> “I’m going to get my own mushrooms. Make my own stew! Disregard my bedtime! Break whatever rules I feel like! Within reason!
-->-- Radar
-->-- Jesse
-> “I’m going to get my own mushrooms. Make my own stew! Disregard my bedtime! Break whatever rules I feel like! Within reason!
-->-- Radar
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-->-- Petra
to:
-->-- PetraPetra
-> “Here, I found this, and... there are good things left, if you look for them.”
-->-- Jesse
-> “I wasn’t complaining. I was... stating a fact in a frustrated tone.
-->-- Petra
-> “You can still fix things, Romeo. No matter what you’ve done, you’re still a person. Like everyone else. You can be redeemed.
-->-- Jesse
-> “Here, I found this, and... there are good things left, if you look for them.”
-->-- Jesse
-> “I wasn’t complaining. I was... stating a fact in a frustrated tone.
-->-- Petra
-> “You can still fix things, Romeo. No matter what you’ve done, you’re still a person. Like everyone else. You can be redeemed.
-->-- Jesse
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-> “Yeah, but being out there, adventuring... that’s good too.”
-->-- Jesse
-->-- Jesse
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fixing grammar crap
Changed line(s) 31 (click to see context) from:
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.”
to:
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- I- More than anyone else, you've been there... and there. And I- I don't want to leave if that it means... you're my best friend Jesse.”
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accidentally cut it
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to:
-->-- Jesse
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- meant to add this to the edit below* putting the quotes in order
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-->-- The Narrator
Changed line(s) 4,5 (click to see context) from:
-->-- Jesse
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Deleted line(s) 1,3 (click to see context) :
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
Changed line(s) 9,14 (click to see context) from:
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.”
-->-- Petra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-->-- Petra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
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-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.”
"Everyone's running away... except for you."
-->--Petra
Gabriel
->“You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
"Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->--Harper
Olivia
-->--
->
-->--
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me."
-->-- Stella
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.”
-->-- Harper
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me."
-->-- Stella
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-> "Everyone's running away... except for you."
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me."
-->-- Stella
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me."
-->-- Stella
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-> "Everyone's running away... except for you."
“You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.”
-->--Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me."
-->-- StellaPetra
-->--
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this."
-->-- Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me."
-->-- Stella
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Formating
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!” - LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
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-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!” - dreamwork!”
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-->-- LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
Changed line(s) 5,21 (click to see context) from:
-> “I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - Harper
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!" - Ivor
-> "Hey ugly! Taste my bravery!" - Radar
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this." - Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me." - Stella
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - Harper
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!" - Ivor
-> "Hey ugly! Taste my bravery!" - Radar
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this." - Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me." - Stella
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-> “I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - ”
-->-- Jesse
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - ”
-->-- Petra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - ”
-->-- Harper
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - ”
-->-- Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long livelava!" - lava!"
-->-- Ivor
-> "Hey ugly! Taste mybravery!" - bravery!"
-->-- Radar
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - "
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this." - "
-->-- Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me." - "
-->-- Stella
-->-- Jesse
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.
-->-- Petra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.
-->-- Harper
-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.
-->-- Lukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live
-->-- Ivor
-> "Hey ugly! Taste my
-->-- Radar
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you.
-->-- Gabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this.
-->-- Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me.
-->-- Stella
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-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - Gabriel
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-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - GabrielGabriel
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this." - Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me." - Stella
-> "Who'd have thought it huh? A bunch of small towners like us wrapped up in an adventure like this." - Olivia
-> "You heard the Admin. He only wants the best of the best. And that's going to be me." - Stella
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-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!" - Ivor
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-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!" - IvorIvor
-> "Hey ugly! Taste my bravery!" - Radar
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - Gabriel
-> "Hey ugly! Taste my bravery!" - Radar
-> "Everyone's running away... except for you." - Gabriel
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-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
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-> “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - LukasLukas
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!" - Ivor
-> "Long live my lava house! Long live lava!" - Ivor
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-> “ You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
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-> “ You “You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
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-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - Harper
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-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - HarperHarper
-> “ You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
-> “ You and me have made a pretty good team so far. I'd even call us friends.” - Lukas
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Changed line(s) 7 (click to see context) from:
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
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-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - PetraPetra
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - Harper
-> “You are a strange, strange man Ivor. But you know something? You're OK.” - Harper
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Changed line(s) 1,7 (click to see context) from:
“There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!” - CaptainSparklez
“Nothing built can last forever.”
“I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
“You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
“Nothing built can last forever.”
“I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
“You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
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-> “There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!” - CaptainSparklez
LetsPlay/CaptainSparklez
-> “Nothing built can last forever.”
-> “I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
-> “Nothing built can last forever.”
-> “I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
-> “You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
“I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
to:
“I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - JesseJesse
“You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
“You mean a lot to me Jesse, I-- More than anyone else, you've been there... and I don't want to leave if that means... you're my best friend Jesse.” - Petra
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Changed line(s) 1,4 (click to see context) from:
“There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
- CaptainSparklez
“Nothing built can last forever.”
- CaptainSparklez
“Nothing built can last forever.”
to:
“There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
dreamwork!” - CaptainSparklez
“Nothing built can last forever.””
“I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
“Nothing built can last forever.
“I don't know when; I don't know how; but someday, far in the future, when you're least expecting it... we WILL get our revenge.” - Jesse
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- CaptainSparklez
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- CaptainSparklezCaptainSparklez
“Nothing built can last forever.”
“Nothing built can last forever.”
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“There you go guys! Teamwork makes the dreamwork!”
- CaptainSparklez
- CaptainSparklez
