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-->--'''[[VillainSong Onward, Sueish Soldiers]]''', by Cherylbites of ''Blog/DasSporking''[[note]]Sung to the tune of "[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hy9aaRAT__4 Onward, Christian Soldiers]]"[[/note]]
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-->--'''John Belsalhia''' in his review of [[http://www.shadowlocked.com/201106201921/reviews/doctor-who-complete-reviews-army-of-ghosts.htm "Army of Ghosts"]]
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->''"While normal characters are stuck obeying the laws of their own universe, in the case of a Mary Sue, the universe bends to obey the character.''"
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->''"While normal characters are stuck obeying the laws of their own universe, in the case of a Mary Sue, the universe bends to obey the character.''"
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-->-- [[https://youtu.be/KcXVGIi1m28?t=294 LiteratureDevil]]Devil]]
->''"THE LUCKY MALE IS OBLIVIOUS TO HIS PRIVILEGE. OF NOT BEING CHAINED TO HIS ROOM, WITH THE HORRIBLE SISTER HE DOESN'T HAVE. THE ADVANTAGE MAKES HIM WAY TOO OVERPOWERED, AND THEREFORE HE IS WHAT SOME REFER TO AS A "HUMAN MARY SUE". THIS MAKES HIM LESS SYMPATHETIC, AND GIVES YOU ANOTHER REASON. TO ACTIVELY ROUTE FOR HIS DEATH."''
-->-- '''Caliborn''', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''
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->''"THE LUCKY MALE IS OBLIVIOUS TO HIS PRIVILEGE. OF NOT BEING CHAINED TO HIS ROOM, WITH THE HORRIBLE SISTER HE DOESN'T HAVE. THE ADVANTAGE MAKES HIM WAY TOO OVERPOWERED, AND THEREFORE HE IS WHAT SOME REFER TO AS A "HUMAN MARY SUE". THIS MAKES HIM LESS SYMPATHETIC, AND GIVES YOU ANOTHER REASON. TO ACTIVELY ROUTE FOR HIS DEATH."''
-->-- '''Caliborn''', ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''
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-->-- [[https://youtu.be/KcXVGIi1m28?t=294 Literature Devil]]
->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addiction]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
(cuts to several examples of Rey excelling in things that she has never done before, like bypassing the compressor and flying the Millenium Falcon solo, which was the first time she ever flown a ship)\\
"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking 'how can I relate to this?' I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."
-->--''WebVideo/MauLer'' dissecting the protagonist of ''Film/TheLastJedi''
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addiction]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking 'how can I relate to this?' I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."
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-->-- [[https://youtu.be/KcXVGIi1m28?t=294 Literature Devil]]
->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addiction]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
(cuts to several examples of Rey excelling in things that she has never done before, like bypassing the compressor and flying the Millenium Falcon solo, which was the first time she ever flown a ship)\\
"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking 'how can I relate to this?' I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."
-->--''WebVideo/MauLer'' dissecting the protagonist of ''Film/TheLastJedi''
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addiction]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking 'how can I relate to this?' I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."
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->''"It's easy to justify a lot of things about [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline Kirito]] because he has no defined personality at all. But when you add to those traits the fact that he's got the scripting skills to not just hack the game from inside it, but to custom write code in the space of a few seconds'' '''to store data as an in-game object,''' ''I gotta call bullshit. Hacking games require time and at least some knowledge of the source code. There's no way Kirito has that. Even if the thousand or so carefully selected beta testers for SAO were data-mining the shit out of the game, they only had it for a little over a month over summer vacation, and they only had a fraction of the content. It would be hard to get a full picture of how the game works in that timeframe under normal circumstances, but SAO is also the first game of its kind built from the ground up for incredibly complicated brand-new proprietary hardware. So already, Kirito is doing something that nobody outside the company should know how to do. But even if we assume that there's a command already in place to store a script as an in-game object, think about what he's storing. Yui is a fucking A.I, the most complicated kind of program conceivable. Her code needs to be'' '''immense''' ''to account for the broad amount of situations she might need to deal with. And it also needs to be capable of re-writing itself on the fly in real time! Kirito is taking that huge complex code, saving its current state of operation, and converting that information into a custom item, in a game whose script he must be figuring out in real time, all in the space of a few seconds! [[BigNo NO!]] [[Main/PunctuatedForEmphasis Not! Fucking! Possible!]] In this moment, Kirito ceases to be a real human being, and I lose all suspension of disbelief for this entire show. It's just not believable that any person could be capable of pulling off the shit that we've seen him do up to this point. Maybe some of it. But not all of it. And especially not a'' '''fourteen year old fucking child!"'''
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->''"It's easy to justify a lot of things about [[LightNovel/SwordArtOnline [[Literature/SwordArtOnline Kirito]] because he has no defined personality at all. But when you add to those traits the fact that he's got the scripting skills to not just hack the game from inside it, but to custom write code in the space of a few seconds'' '''to store data as an in-game object,''' ''I gotta call bullshit. Hacking games require time and at least some knowledge of the source code. There's no way Kirito has that. Even if the thousand or so carefully selected beta testers for SAO were data-mining the shit out of the game, they only had it for a little over a month over summer vacation, and they only had a fraction of the content. It would be hard to get a full picture of how the game works in that timeframe under normal circumstances, but SAO is also the first game of its kind built from the ground up for incredibly complicated brand-new proprietary hardware. So already, Kirito is doing something that nobody outside the company should know how to do. But even if we assume that there's a command already in place to store a script as an in-game object, think about what he's storing. Yui is a fucking A.I, the most complicated kind of program conceivable. Her code needs to be'' '''immense''' ''to account for the broad amount of situations she might need to deal with. And it also needs to be capable of re-writing itself on the fly in real time! Kirito is taking that huge complex code, saving its current state of operation, and converting that information into a custom item, in a game whose script he must be figuring out in real time, all in the space of a few seconds! [[BigNo NO!]] [[Main/PunctuatedForEmphasis Not! Fucking! Possible!]] In this moment, Kirito ceases to be a real human being, and I lose all suspension of disbelief for this entire show. It's just not believable that any person could be capable of pulling off the shit that we've seen him do up to this point. Maybe some of it. But not all of it. And especially not a'' '''fourteen year old fucking child!"'''
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-->-- '''WebVideo/TheNostalgiaCritic''', on the ending of ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} Twilight Breaking Dawn: Part 2]]'' and the series in general during his review of the film at Shadocon 2012
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-->-- '''WebVideo/TheNostalgiaCritic''', on the ending of ''[[Literature/{{Twilight}} ''[[Literature/BreakingDawn Twilight Breaking Dawn: Part 2]]'' and the series in general during his review of the film at Shadocon 2012
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addicition]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addicition]], addiction]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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%%->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addicition]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous]], or [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addicition]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'. As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: [[IJustWantToBeLoved she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; guidance]]; [[AllLovingHero she believes in the good in people even if they are evil.evil]]. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, [[{{Greed}} greedy]], [[{{Pride}} prideful]], [[ItsAllAboutMe self-centered]], [[{{Manchild}} emotionally stunted, stunted]], [[PsychopathicManchild emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, unstable]], [[EntitledBastard selfish]], [[LeeroyJenkins reckless]], [[SuicidalOverconfidence overconfident]], [[NaiveNewcomer naïve]], [[LoveMakesYouDumb blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, love]], [[CasanovaWannabe womanizing]], [[TheDitz stupid]], [[AxCrazy psychopathic]], [[MoralMyopia self-righteous]], [[{{Narcissist}} narcissistic]], [[SkilledButNaive inexperienced]], [[AmbitionIsEvil overly ambitious, narrow-minded, ambitious]], [[PoliticallyIncorrectHero narrow-minded]], [[GreyAndGreyMorality morally ambiguous, ambiguous]], or arrogant. [[ArrogantKungFuGuy arrogant]]. She has no vendetta, addicition, [[{{Revenge}} vendetta]], [[FunctionalAddict addicition]], [[SmallNameBigEgo superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, complex]], [[BloodKnight bloodlust]], [[GreenEyedMonster jealousy]], or [[DrunkWithPower lust for power.power]]. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'. 'MarySue'. [[DiscussedTrope As much as people fight the tide on this, this]], it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'. As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'. As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'. As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking 'how can I relate to this?' I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."
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->"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking 'how can I relate to this?' I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'. As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'."\\
->"As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a 'Mary Sue'."\\
->"As As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."\\
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->''"As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."''\\
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->''"So, to review. Her(referring to Rey) literal flaws are: she wants to find people to love and give her guidance; she believes in the good in people even if they are evil. There is nothing wrong with this heavenly creature. No hardship or cross she had to bear. She's not greedy, prideful, self-centered, emotionally stunted, emotionally unstable, selfish, reckless, overconfident, naïve, blinded by love, womanizing, stupid, psychopathic, self-righteous, narcissistic, inexperienced, overly ambitious, narrow-minded, morally ambiguous, or arrogant. She has no vendetta, addicition, superiority complex, bloodlust, jealousy, or lust for power. She is a person with no flaw that can be considered something to work on personally while being incredible at every activity she engages in. This in common analysis is known as a "Mary Sue"."''\\
->''"As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."''\\
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->''"And I find myself watching her story unfold and thinking "how can I relate to this?" I am not, nor have I met, perfection. I didn't know it existed. So I don't believe in her or root for her as I am reassured that the writing will take good care of her, and I am just here for the ride."''\\
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->''"As much as people fight the tide on this, it is exactly what Rey is, she is a classic example. It has nothing to do with her being a girl. A Mary Sue character isn't good for a story because there's no room to grow, to learn, to change. She's already made it there, she's already better than Luke, Poe, Kylo, Finn, and the rest of the characters as they have a semblance of a flaw that is untilized in the film, arguably. But not her. She is perfection, while going through no hardship or tough lessons. In fact, she imparts lessons to other far more experienced characters."''\\
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->Mary sue: center of the universe
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