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'''Kyle Katarn:''' You ''always'' sense a disturbance in the Force. But yeah, I sense it too.
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'''Kyle Katarn:''' You ''always'' sense a disturbance in the Force. ''(beat)'' But yeah, I sense it too.
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->'''Merc #1:''' I can hardly see a thing in this helmet. It's like being a stormtrooper all over again.\\
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->'''Merc #1:''' I can hardly see a thing in this helmet.thing. It's like being a stormtrooper all over again.\\
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->'''Merc #1:''' You used to be a Stormtrooper?\\
'''Merc #2:''' Yeah, years ago. I ''hated'' it.\\
'''Merc #1:''' What happened?\\
'''Merc #2:''' I was sick of taking orders. I jumped ship the first chance I got.\\
'''Merc #1:''' Smart move. [[HypocriticalHumor By the way, the boss gave us orders to patrol the north hall...]]
'''Merc #2:''' Yeah, years ago. I ''hated'' it.\\
'''Merc #1:''' What happened?\\
'''Merc #2:''' I was sick of taking orders. I jumped ship the first chance I got.\\
'''Merc #1:''' Smart move. [[HypocriticalHumor By the way, the boss gave us orders to patrol the north hall...]]
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->'''Merc #1:''' You used to be I can hardly see a Stormtrooper?\\
'''Merc #2:''' Yeah, years ago. I ''hated'' it.thing in this helmet. It's like being a stormtrooper all over again.\\
'''Merc #2:''' You were a stormtrooper?\\
'''Merc #1:'''What happened?\\
'''Merc #2:'''Yeah, but I was sick of couldn't stand taking orders. orders, so I jumped ship the first chance I got.\\
'''Merc#1:''' #2:''' Smart move. [[HypocriticalHumor move. By the way, the boss gave us orders to patrol the north hall...\\
'''Merc #1:''' [[HypocriticalHumor Okay. Let's go.]]
'''Merc #2:''' Yeah, years ago. I ''hated'' it.
'''Merc #2:''' You were a stormtrooper?\\
'''Merc #1:'''
'''Merc #2:'''
'''Merc
'''Merc #1:''' [[HypocriticalHumor Okay. Let's go.]]
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->'''Rosh Penin:''' Master Katarn, it's an honor to be serving under you!
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->'''Rosh Penin:''' Master Katarn, it's an honor to be serving under you!you!\\
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->They always lock the door. You’d think they’d have learned by now. Doesn't look like there's a key -- that would be too easy. The console to unlock the door is probably hidden in some room twelve floors up or something... how does that make sense?
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->'''Rosh Penin:''' Master Katarn, it's an honor to be serving under you!
'''Kyle Katarn:''' First off, just call me Kyle -- titles make my skin crawl. Secondly, you're not "serving under me." I'm gonna teach you, and you're gonna learn. That's it.\\
'''Rosh Penin:''' ...I-I'm sorry. I didn't mean to offend you.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(chuckles)'' Don't worry, Rosh, you didn't. I've been offended by professionals.
->They always lock the door.You’d You'd think they’d have learned by now. Doesn't look like there's a key -- that would be too easy. The console to unlock the door is probably hidden in some room twelve floors up or something... how does that make sense?
'''Kyle Katarn:''' First off, just call me Kyle -- titles make my skin crawl. Secondly, you're not "serving under me." I'm gonna teach you, and you're gonna learn. That's it.\\
'''Rosh Penin:''' ...I-I'm sorry. I didn't mean to offend you.\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' ''(chuckles)'' Don't worry, Rosh, you didn't. I've been offended by professionals.
->They always lock the door.
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'''Merc #1:''' Yeah. [[HypocriticalHumor By the way, we were told to patrol the sector...]]
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'''Merc #1:''' Yeah. Smart move. [[HypocriticalHumor By the way, we were told the boss gave us orders to patrol the sector...north hall...]]
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'''Snowtrooper #2:''' You did? Were you any good?\\
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'''Snowtrooper #2:''' You did? did, huh? Were you any good?\\
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'''Snowtrooper #2:''' So how come you aren't a scout trooper?\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Once I put the helmet on, I couldn't see. I sideswiped a cadet and caused a pile-up that destroyed twelve speeder bikes. I was kicked out of the trooper corps.\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Once I put the helmet on, I couldn't see. I sideswiped a cadet and caused a pile-up that destroyed twelve speeder bikes. I was kicked out of the trooper corps.\\
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'''Snowtrooper #2:''' So how come you aren't you're not a scout trooper?\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Once I put the helmet on, I couldn't see. I sideswipeda another cadet and caused a pile-up that destroyed twelve speeder bikes. I was kicked out of the trooper corps.\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Once I put the helmet on, I couldn't see. I sideswiped
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->'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Y'know, I used to race on the swoop circuit.\\
'''Snowtrooper #2:''' You did? Were you any good?\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' One of the best. Top three, every race.\\
'''Snowtrooper #2:''' So how come you aren't a scout trooper?\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Once I put the helmet on, I couldn't see. I sideswiped a cadet and caused a pile-up that destroyed twelve speeder bikes. I was kicked out of the trooper corps.\\
'''Snowtrooper #2:''' Oh... tough.
'''Snowtrooper #2:''' You did? Were you any good?\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' One of the best. Top three, every race.\\
'''Snowtrooper #2:''' So how come you aren't a scout trooper?\\
'''Snowtrooper #1:''' Once I put the helmet on, I couldn't see. I sideswiped a cadet and caused a pile-up that destroyed twelve speeder bikes. I was kicked out of the trooper corps.\\
'''Snowtrooper #2:''' Oh... tough.
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->'''Merc #1:''' You used to be a Stormtrooper?\\
'''Merc #2:''' Yeah, years ago. I ''hated'' it.\\
'''Merc #1:''' What happened?\\
'''Merc #2:''' I was sick of taking orders. I jumped ship the first chance I got.\\
'''Merc #1:''' Yeah. [[HypocriticalHumor By the way, we were told to patrol the sector...]]
'''Merc #2:''' Yeah, years ago. I ''hated'' it.\\
'''Merc #1:''' What happened?\\
'''Merc #2:''' I was sick of taking orders. I jumped ship the first chance I got.\\
'''Merc #1:''' Yeah. [[HypocriticalHumor By the way, we were told to patrol the sector...]]
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->They always lock the door. You’d think they’d have learned by now. Doesn't look like there's a key -- that would be too easy. The console to unlock the door is probably hidden in some room twelve floors up or something... how does that make sense?
-->-- '''Kyle Katarn''' on his extensive experience with Imperial Security
-->-- '''Kyle Katarn''' on his extensive experience with Imperial Security
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->'''Luke Skywalker:''' I sense a disturbance in the Force...\\
'''Kyle Katarn:''' You ''always'' sense a disturbance in the Force. But yeah, I sense it too.
'''Kyle Katarn:''' You ''always'' sense a disturbance in the Force. But yeah, I sense it too.
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[[folder:Opening Crawl]]
[[center:[[AC:Ten years after the Battle\\
of Endor, the IMPERIAL\\
REMNANT continues to\\
be driven back by the\\
NEW REPUBLIC, forcing\\
the Imperials to adopt\\
increasingly desperate\\
tactics in the ongoing\\
struggle.\\\
Meanwhile, Jedi Master\\
LUKE SKYWALKER\\
moves to restore the\\
JEDI to their formal place\\
as peacekeepers of the\\
galaxy at his JEDI\\
ACADEMY on Yavin 4.\\\
JADEN KORR, a\\
promising student from\\
Coruscant, is en route to\\
the Academy after\\
achieving the impossible:\\
creating a lightsaber\\
without any formal Jedi\\
training...]]]]
[[/folder]]
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[[center:[[AC:Ten years after the Battle\\
of Endor, the IMPERIAL\\
REMNANT continues to\\
be driven back by the\\
NEW REPUBLIC, forcing\\
the Imperials to adopt\\
increasingly desperate\\
tactics in the ongoing\\
struggle.\\\
Meanwhile, Jedi Master\\
LUKE SKYWALKER\\
moves to restore the\\
JEDI to their formal place\\
as peacekeepers of the\\
galaxy at his JEDI\\
ACADEMY on Yavin 4.\\\
JADEN KORR, a\\
promising student from\\
Coruscant, is en route to\\
the Academy after\\
achieving the impossible:\\
creating a lightsaber\\
without any formal Jedi\\
training...]]]]
[[/folder]]
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