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->''It's the fear of Death that makes monsters of us all.''
-->--''Manny''
->''We are all citizens of the same nation, and our king [[TheGrimReaper rides a pale horse]].''
-->--''Chowchilla Charlie''
-->--''Manny''
->''We are all citizens of the same nation, and our king [[TheGrimReaper rides a pale horse]].''
-->--''Chowchilla Charlie''
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-->--'''Manny (and Velasco, Year Two only)'''
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-->--'''Manny (and Velasco, Year Dockmaster Velasco[[note]]Year Two only)'''
only[[/note]])'''
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-->--'''Manny and Velasco (Year Two only)'''
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-->--'''Manny and Velasco (Year (and Velasco, Year Two only)'''
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->''It shone, pale as bone\\
As I stood there alone,\\
And I thought to myself how the moon\\
That night cast its light\\
On my heart's true delight\\
And the reef where her body was strewn.''
-->--'''Manny and Velasco (Year Two only)'''
As I stood there alone,\\
And I thought to myself how the moon\\
That night cast its light\\
On my heart's true delight\\
And the reef where her body was strewn.''
-->--'''Manny and Velasco (Year Two only)'''
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'''Mr. Flores:''' Take me? Take me where?
'''Manny:''' Now, now. There's no need to be nervous.
'''Mr. Flores:''' Nervous? Me? No. Just your appearance is... a little intimidating.
'''Manny:''' Intimidating? Me? But I'm your friend. My name is Manny Calvera. I'm your new travel agent.
'''Mr. Flores:''' I don't want a new travel agent; I want to go home.
'''Manny:''' You can't go home Celso, you're dead! But you're not alone! Everybody here is just as dead as you! That's why we call it the Land of the Dead. Are you ready for your big journey?
'''Mr. Flores:''' No... What journey?
'''Manny:''' Now, now. There's no need to be nervous.
'''Mr. Flores:''' Nervous? Me? No. Just your appearance is... a little intimidating.
'''Manny:''' Intimidating? Me? But I'm your friend. My name is Manny Calvera. I'm your new travel agent.
'''Mr. Flores:''' I don't want a new travel agent; I want to go home.
'''Manny:''' You can't go home Celso, you're dead! But you're not alone! Everybody here is just as dead as you! That's why we call it the Land of the Dead. Are you ready for your big journey?
'''Mr. Flores:''' No... What journey?
to:
'''Mr. Flores:''' Take me? Take me where?
where?\\
'''Manny:''' Now, now. There's no need to benervous.
nervous.\\
'''Mr. Flores:''' Nervous? Me? No. Just your appearance is... a littleintimidating.
intimidating.\\
'''Manny:''' Intimidating? Me? But I'm your friend. My name is Manny Calvera. I'm your new travelagent.
agent.\\
'''Mr. Flores:''' I don't want a new travel agent; I want to gohome.
home.\\
'''Manny:''' You can't go home Celso, you're dead! But you're not alone! Everybody here is just as dead as you! That's why we call it the Land of the Dead. Are you ready for your bigjourney?
journey?\\
'''Mr. Flores:'''No... No!... What journey?journey?\\
'''Manny:''' Now, now. There's no need to be
'''Mr. Flores:''' Nervous? Me? No. Just your appearance is... a little
'''Manny:''' Intimidating? Me? But I'm your friend. My name is Manny Calvera. I'm your new travel
'''Mr. Flores:''' I don't want a new travel agent; I want to go
'''Manny:''' You can't go home Celso, you're dead! But you're not alone! Everybody here is just as dead as you! That's why we call it the Land of the Dead. Are you ready for your big
'''Mr. Flores:'''
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->'''Manny:''' Sorry for the wait Mr. Flores, I am ready to take you now.\\
'''Mr. Flores:''' Take me? Take me where?
'''Manny:''' Now, now. There's no need to be nervous.
'''Mr. Flores:''' Nervous? Me? No. Just your appearance is... a little intimidating.
'''Manny:''' Intimidating? Me? But I'm your friend. My name is Manny Calvera. I'm your new travel agent.
'''Mr. Flores:''' I don't want a new travel agent; I want to go home.
'''Manny:''' You can't go home Celso, you're dead! But you're not alone! Everybody here is just as dead as you! That's why we call it the Land of the Dead. Are you ready for your big journey?
'''Mr. Flores:''' No... What journey?
'''Manny:''' The four year Journey of the Soul. It's quite a big trip. And I can't lie to you, Celso. It could be very, very dangerous. Unless! You take that money you were buried with and buy a better travel package from us! I mean, wouldn't you rather cross the Land of the Dead in your own personal sports car? Maybe try a luxury ocean cruise? Or, if you've led a very good life, you may even qualify for the Number Nine itself.
'''Mr. Flores:''' Take me? Take me where?
'''Manny:''' Now, now. There's no need to be nervous.
'''Mr. Flores:''' Nervous? Me? No. Just your appearance is... a little intimidating.
'''Manny:''' Intimidating? Me? But I'm your friend. My name is Manny Calvera. I'm your new travel agent.
'''Mr. Flores:''' I don't want a new travel agent; I want to go home.
'''Manny:''' You can't go home Celso, you're dead! But you're not alone! Everybody here is just as dead as you! That's why we call it the Land of the Dead. Are you ready for your big journey?
'''Mr. Flores:''' No... What journey?
'''Manny:''' The four year Journey of the Soul. It's quite a big trip. And I can't lie to you, Celso. It could be very, very dangerous. Unless! You take that money you were buried with and buy a better travel package from us! I mean, wouldn't you rather cross the Land of the Dead in your own personal sports car? Maybe try a luxury ocean cruise? Or, if you've led a very good life, you may even qualify for the Number Nine itself.
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-->--'''Membrillo'''
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->''You know, sweetheart, if there's one thing I've learned, it's this: nobody knows what's gonna happen at the end of the line, so you might as well enjoy the trip.''
-->--'''Manny'''
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-->--'''Olivia Ofrenda'''
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-->--'''Olivia Ofrenda'''Ofrenda'''
->''We may have years, we may have hours, but sooner or later, we push up flowers.''
-->--'''Membrillo'''
->''We may have years, we may have hours, but sooner or later, we push up flowers.''
-->--'''Membrillo'''
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and will for years until we rest.''
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and will for four years until we rest.''
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->''With bony hands I hold my partner,''
->''on soulless feet we cross the floor,''
->''the music stops as if to answer,''
->''an empty knocking at the door,''
->''it seems his skin was sweet as mango,''
->''when last I held him to my breast,''
->''but now, we dance this [[TitleDrop grim fandango]],''
->''and will for years until we rest.''
->--'''Olivia Ofrenda''', GrimFandango
->''on soulless feet we cross the floor,''
->''the music stops as if to answer,''
->''an empty knocking at the door,''
->''it seems his skin was sweet as mango,''
->''when last I held him to my breast,''
->''but now, we dance this [[TitleDrop grim fandango]],''
->''and will for years until we rest.''
->--'''Olivia Ofrenda''', GrimFandango
to:
->''With bony hands I hold my partner,''
->''onpartner,\\
on soulless feet we cross thefloor,''
->''thefloor.\\
The music stops as if toanswer,''
->''ananswer,\\
an empty knocking at thedoor,''
->''itdoor.\\
It seems his skin was sweet asmango,''
->''whenmango\\
when last I held him to mybreast,''
->''butbreast.\\
But now, we dance this [[TitleDrop grimfandango]],''
->''andfandango]],\\
and will for years until we rest.''
->--'''Olivia Ofrenda''', GrimFandango-->--'''Olivia Ofrenda'''
->''on
on soulless feet we cross the
->''the
The music stops as if to
->''an
an empty knocking at the
->''it
It seems his skin was sweet as
->''when
when last I held him to my
->''but
But now, we dance this [[TitleDrop grim
->''and
and will for years until we rest.''
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It\'s the other \"for\", as in, \"We will dance until we rest in peace\", I think.
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->''and will four years until we rest.''
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->''and will four for years until we rest.''
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->''With bony hands I hold my partner,''
->''on soulless feet we cross the floor,''
->''the music stops as if to answer,''
->''an empty knocking at the door,''
->''it seems his skin was sweet as mango,''
->''when last I held him to my breast,''
->''but now, we dance this [[TitleDrop grim fandango]],''
->''and will four years until we rest.''
->--'''Olivia Ofrenda''', GrimFandango
->''on soulless feet we cross the floor,''
->''the music stops as if to answer,''
->''an empty knocking at the door,''
->''it seems his skin was sweet as mango,''
->''when last I held him to my breast,''
->''but now, we dance this [[TitleDrop grim fandango]],''
->''and will four years until we rest.''
->--'''Olivia Ofrenda''', GrimFandango
