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[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk (*) are incompatible. (An asterisk next to the name means that the item is incompatible with Kris.) Items marked with a dagger (†) are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei, trigger dialogue from both Susie and Ralsei at once.[[/labelnote]]
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[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk (*) are incompatible. (An asterisk next to the name means that the item is incompatible with Kris.) Items marked with a dagger (†) are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei, trigger dialogue from both Susie and Ralsei at once.[[/labelnote]]
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'''Ralsei''': Yummy!!! Marshallows!! (Hey, feed ME!)\\
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'''Ralsei''': Yummy!!! Marshallows!! (Hey, (Susie: Hey, feed ME!)\\
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->'''Susie''': I'm ALIVE!!! (You weren't dead)\\
'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed! (Don't look it)\\
'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed! (Don't look it)\\
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->'''Susie''': I'm ALIVE!!! (You (Ralsei: You weren't dead)\\
'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed!(Don't (Susie: Don't look it)\\
'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed!
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And the shadow start to grow\\
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And the shadow shadows start to grow\\
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[[AC:Light Candy]]
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[[AC:Light Candy]]Candy]][[note]]Its Light World counterpart is the lunchbox of chalk Noelle gives to Susie before entering Castle Town, if Kris talked to Noelle about Susie in the end of Chapter 1[[/note]]
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[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk (*) are incompatible. (An asterisk next to the name means that the item is incompatible with Kris.) Items marked with a dagger (†) are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei, trigger dialogue from both Susie and Ralsei at once.[[/labelnote]]
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[[/folder]]
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----
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'''Noelle''': I-is this real meat…?
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'''Noelle''': [[CarnivoreConfusion I-is this real meat…?meat…?]]
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->YOU ACCEPT EVERYTHING THAT WILL HAPPEN FROM NOW ON.
-->--'''License Agreement''' for the "SURVEY_PROGRAM" version of Chapter 1
-->--'''License Agreement''' for the "SURVEY_PROGRAM" version of Chapter 1
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I'm with you in the dark
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I'm with you in the darkdark''
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dangit grammar
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'''Noelle''': (Thank goodness...)[[labelnote:Note]]Other rings requires VideoGameCrueltyPotential in obtaining them.[[/labelnote]]
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'''Noelle''': (Thank goodness...)[[labelnote:Note]]Other rings requires VideoGameCrueltyPotential in )[[labelnote:Note]]As obtaining them.other rings constitutes VideoGameCrueltyPotential.[[/labelnote]]
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holy shit
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->'''Susie'''[[labelnote:Note]]Once it's off, she refuses to use it again[[/labelnote]]: I'm too GOOD for that.\\
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'''Noelle''': (Thank goodness...)
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'''Noelle''': (Thank goodness...))[[labelnote:Note]]Other rings requires VideoGameCrueltyPotential in obtaining them.[[/labelnote]]
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->'''Susie*''': Heh, you steal this? Heh.\\
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->'''Susie*''': [[WhatTheHellPlayer Heh, you steal this? Heh.\\]]\\
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[[AC:Wood Blade]]
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[[AC:Wood Blade]]Blade]][[labelnote:Note]]Has a related Pencil item (Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
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[[AC:Spookysword]]
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[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Like Kris' other weapons, has a related Pencil item (Lucky Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
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[[AC:Mecha Sword]]
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[[AC:Mecha Sword]]Sabre]][[labelnote:Note]]Has a related Pencil item (Mech. Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
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[[AC: Bounce Blade]]
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[[AC: Bounce Blade]]Blade]][[labelnote:Note]]Has a related Pencil item (Eraser)[[/labelnote]]
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->HOW LONG IT HAS BEEN.\\
ONCE MORE I THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE IN THESE DIFFICULT TIMES.\\
YOU HAVE DONE EXCELLENTLY TO PERSEVERE.\\
DELTARUNE GLOWS BRIGHTLY FROM YOUR HOPE.\\
NOW. SHALL WE ? SHALL WE GO AGAIN ?\\
THE SECOND FIELD. THE SECOND CONNECTION.
-->--'''An unknown entity''' unveils the release of Chapter 2.
ONCE MORE I THANK YOU FOR YOUR PATIENCE IN THESE DIFFICULT TIMES.\\
YOU HAVE DONE EXCELLENTLY TO PERSEVERE.\\
DELTARUNE GLOWS BRIGHTLY FROM YOUR HOPE.\\
NOW. SHALL WE ? SHALL WE GO AGAIN ?\\
THE SECOND FIELD. THE SECOND CONNECTION.
-->--'''An unknown entity''' unveils the release of Chapter 2.
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[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk are incompatible. Items marked with a dagger are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei, trigger dialogue from both at once.[[/labelnote]]
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[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk (*) are incompatible. Items marked with a dagger (†) are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei, trigger dialogue from both Susie and Ralsei at once.[[/labelnote]]
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-->--██████/'''W.D. Gaster(?)''' before commencing the "connection" at the beginning of the game.
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Adding in all the new items and Noelle’s reactions to old items. There's another armor called Sky Mantle, but it only exists as code as far as I can read.
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'''Ralsei*''': That's yours, Kris...
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'''Ralsei*''': That's yours, Kris... \\
'''Noelle*''': (It has bite marks...)
'''Noelle*''': (It has bite marks...)
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'''Ralsei*''': Oh, it's too scary!
[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Like the other two weapons, has a related Pencil item (Lucky Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Like the other two weapons, has a related Pencil item (Lucky Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
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'''Ralsei*''': Oh, it's too scary!
scary!\\
'''Noelle*''': (It’s kinda cool...)
[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Likethe Kris' other two weapons, has a related Pencil item (Lucky Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
'''Noelle*''': (It’s kinda cool...)
[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Like
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'''Ralsei*''': Not my shade of green...
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'''Ralsei*''': Not my shade of green...\\
'''Noelle*''': Okay! ...? [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What do you mean, unused!?]]
[[AC:Mecha Sword]]
->'''Susie*''': *chk chk chk chk* Nah.\\
'''Ralsei*''': You'd look cool holding it, Kris!\\
'''Noelle*''': *chk* A-AHH! Scared myself...
[[AC: Bounce Blade]]
->'''Susie*''': What is this, rubber?\\
'''Ralsei*''': Soft and squishy!\\
'''Noelle*''': S-stop thwacking me!
[[AC:Broken Sword]]*[[labelnote:Note]]Although this is categorized as a weapon for Kris, Kris cannot equip it as it's broken.[[/labelnote]]
->'''Susie*''': ... this is trash.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Should we fix this...?\\
'''Noelle*''': (Wh... why give this to me?)
[[AC:Twisted Sword]]†
->'''Susie*''': ...Uhh, looks bad.\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's like a spiral.\\
'''Noelle*''': It's... kind of scary...
'''Noelle*''': Okay! ...? [[LeaningOnTheFourthWall What do you mean, unused!?]]
[[AC:Mecha Sword]]
->'''Susie*''': *chk chk chk chk* Nah.\\
'''Ralsei*''': You'd look cool holding it, Kris!\\
'''Noelle*''': *chk* A-AHH! Scared myself...
[[AC: Bounce Blade]]
->'''Susie*''': What is this, rubber?\\
'''Ralsei*''': Soft and squishy!\\
'''Noelle*''': S-stop thwacking me!
[[AC:Broken Sword]]*[[labelnote:Note]]Although this is categorized as a weapon for Kris, Kris cannot equip it as it's broken.[[/labelnote]]
->'''Susie*''': ... this is trash.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Should we fix this...?\\
'''Noelle*''': (Wh... why give this to me?)
[[AC:Twisted Sword]]†
->'''Susie*''': ...Uhh, looks bad.\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's like a spiral.\\
'''Noelle*''': It's... kind of scary...
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'''Ralsei*''': Ummm... it's a bit big.
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'''Ralsei*''': Ummm... it's a bit big.\\
'''Noelle*''': It... smells nice...
'''Noelle*''': It... smells nice...
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'''Ralsei*''': It's a bit too heavy...
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'''Ralsei*''': It's a bit too heavy...\\
'''Noelle*''': (W-wow, that presence...)
'''Noelle*''': (W-wow, that presence...)
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'''Ralsei*''': It's too, um, evil.
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'''Ralsei*''': It's too, um, evil.\\
'''Noelle*''': ...? It smiled at me?
[[AC:Auto Axe]]*
->'''Susie''': *chainsaw noises* Hahaha!!\\
'''Ralsei*''': (Is this a good idea?)\\
'''Noelle*''': *zrrt* A-AHH! Scared myself...
'''Noelle*''': ...? It smiled at me?
[[AC:Auto Axe]]*
->'''Susie''': *chainsaw noises* Hahaha!!\\
'''Ralsei*''': (Is this a good idea?)\\
'''Noelle*''': *zrrt* A-AHH! Scared myself...
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'''Ralsei''': Comfy! Touch it, Kris!
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'''Ralsei''': Comfy! Touch it, Kris!Kris!\\
'''Noelle*''': Huh? No, I’m not cold.
'''Noelle*''': Huh? No, I’m not cold.
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'''Ralsei''': Feels prickly... Nice!
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'''Ralsei''': Feels prickly... Nice!Nice!\\
'''Noelle*''': Ouch! ...kind of nice.
'''Noelle*''': Ouch! ...kind of nice.
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'''Ralsei''': I'll protect everyone!
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'''Ralsei''': I'll protect everyone!everyone!\\
'''Noelle*''': S-stop covering me with it!
[[AC:Fiber Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': (Soft...)\\
'''Ralsei''': Oh! My fur's staticy!\\
'''Noelle*''': Sure, I'll... huh? It's a weapon?
[[AC: [=Ragger2=]]]*
->'''Susie*''': This is Ralsei's deal.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm a prickly prince!\\
'''Noelle*''': (It's like Santa's beard?)
[[AC: Puppet Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': No way, that's creepy.\\
'''Ralsei''': If I have to fight...\\
'''Noelle*''': (Feels like guitar strings...)
[[AC: Snow Ring]]*
->'''Susie*''': Smells like Noelle.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Are you... proposing?\\
'''Noelle''': (Thank goodness...)
[[AC: Freeze Ring]]*
->'''Susie*''': Heh, you steal this? Heh.\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's beautiful...\\
'''Noelle''': ...
[[AC: Thorn Ring]]*
->'''Susie*''': A torture device?\\
'''Ralsei*''': ...\\
Noelle does not have a reaction to equipping the Thorn Ring.
'''Noelle*''': S-stop covering me with it!
[[AC:Fiber Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': (Soft...)\\
'''Ralsei''': Oh! My fur's staticy!\\
'''Noelle*''': Sure, I'll... huh? It's a weapon?
[[AC: [=Ragger2=]]]*
->'''Susie*''': This is Ralsei's deal.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm a prickly prince!\\
'''Noelle*''': (It's like Santa's beard?)
[[AC: Puppet Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': No way, that's creepy.\\
'''Ralsei''': If I have to fight...\\
'''Noelle*''': (Feels like guitar strings...)
[[AC: Snow Ring]]*
->'''Susie*''': Smells like Noelle.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Are you... proposing?\\
'''Noelle''': (Thank goodness...)
[[AC: Freeze Ring]]*
->'''Susie*''': Heh, you steal this? Heh.\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's beautiful...\\
'''Noelle''': ...
[[AC: Thorn Ring]]*
->'''Susie*''': A torture device?\\
'''Ralsei*''': ...\\
Noelle does not have a reaction to equipping the Thorn Ring.
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'''Ralsei''': A perfect fit!
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'''Ralsei''': A perfect fit!fit!\\
'''Noelle''': Wh... what is this?
'''Noelle''': Wh... what is this?
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'''Ralsei''': It's sticky, huh, Kris...
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'''Ralsei''': It's sticky, huh, Kris...\\
'''Noelle''': It's like a name-tag!
'''Noelle''': It's like a name-tag!
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'''Ralsei''': It says "Friendship!"
[[AC:Pink Ribbon]]†/[[AC:White Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': Nope. Not in 1st grade anymore.\\
'''Ralsei''': Um... D-do I look cute... ?
[[AC:Pink Ribbon]]†/[[AC:White Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': Nope. Not in 1st grade anymore.\\
'''Ralsei''': Um... D-do I look cute... ?
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'''Ralsei''': It says "Friendship!"
"Friendship!"\\
'''Noelle''': Hey, y-you jumbled it...
[[AC:PinkRibbon]]†/[[AC:White Ribbon/White Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': ->'''Susie* (Chapter 1)''': Nope. Not in 1st grade anymore.\\
'''Ralsei''': / '''(Chapter 2)''' I said NO! C'mon already!\\
'''Ralsei (Chapter 1)''': Um... D-do I look cute...?? / '''(Chapter 2)''' It's nice dressing up...\\
'''Noelle''': ... feels familiar.
'''Noelle''': Hey, y-you jumbled it...
[[AC:Pink
'''Ralsei''':
'''Ralsei (Chapter 1)''': Um... D-do I look cute...
'''Noelle''': ... feels familiar.
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'''Ralsei''': *jingle gangle* Haha!
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'''Ralsei''': *jingle gangle* Haha!Haha!\\
'''Noelle''': I’m the ghost of holidays past!
'''Noelle''': I’m the ghost of holidays past!
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'''Ralsei''': I'm a good devil, OK?
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'''Ralsei''': I'm a good devil, OK?OK?\\
'''Noelle''': ... (I like it...)
'''Noelle''': ... (I like it...)
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'''Ralsei''': Chu! Healing power UP!
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'''Ralsei''': Chu! Healing power UP!UP!\\
'''Noelle''': ... from the family entertainment center?
[[AC: Silver Card]]
->'''Susie''': Money. That's what I need.\\
'''Ralsei''': Do they take credit?\\
'''Noelle''': It goes with my watch!
[[AC: Glow Wrist]]
->'''Susie''': Whoops, it's tangled.\\
'''Ralsei''': Let me just untangle this...\\
'''Noelle''': It’s like holiday lights...
[[AC: Silver Watch]] [[labelnote:Note]]If equipped to Kris, this item has a Light World equivalent: the Wristwatch.[[/labelnote]]
->'''Susie''': It's clobbering time.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm late, I'm late!\\
'''Noelle''': (Th-this was mine...)
[[AC: Royal Pin]]
->'''Susie''': ROACH? Oh, brooch. Heh.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm a cute little corkboard!\\
'''Noelle''': Queen... gave this to me.
[[AC: Mannequin]]
->'''Susie*''': Not even gonna ask.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Um, the d-dress is cute...\\
'''Noelle*''': (Why did they spend $300 on this!?)
[[AC: [=B.ShotBowtie=]]]
->'''Susie''': Ugh, I look like a nerd.\\
'''Ralsei''': Can I have suspenders?\\
'''Noelle''': ... do I put it in my hair?
[[AC: Chain Mail]]
->'''Susie''': Damn, guess I'm cursed.\\
'''Ralsei''': A letter?... For me...?\\
'''Noelle''': Armor? (It's cool...)
[[AC: Frayed Bowtie]]
->'''Susie*''': Look. I have standards.\\
'''Ralsei''': It's still wearable!\\
'''Noelle''': (Reminds me of Asgore...)?
[[AC: Twin Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': ...it gets worse and worse.\\
'''Ralsei''': Try around my horns!\\
'''Noelle''': ...nostalgic, huh.
[[AC: Spike Band]]
->'''Susie''': Can't say no to spikes.\\
'''Ralsei''': Um, do I... look tough?\\
'''Noelle''': (Maybe Susie would like this look?)
[[AC: Dealmaker]]
->'''Susie''': Money, that's what I need.\\
'''Ralsei''': Two pairs of glasses?\\
'''Noelle''': (Seems... familiar?)
'''Noelle''': ... from the family entertainment center?
[[AC: Silver Card]]
->'''Susie''': Money. That's what I need.\\
'''Ralsei''': Do they take credit?\\
'''Noelle''': It goes with my watch!
[[AC: Glow Wrist]]
->'''Susie''': Whoops, it's tangled.\\
'''Ralsei''': Let me just untangle this...\\
'''Noelle''': It’s like holiday lights...
[[AC: Silver Watch]] [[labelnote:Note]]If equipped to Kris, this item has a Light World equivalent: the Wristwatch.[[/labelnote]]
->'''Susie''': It's clobbering time.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm late, I'm late!\\
'''Noelle''': (Th-this was mine...)
[[AC: Royal Pin]]
->'''Susie''': ROACH? Oh, brooch. Heh.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm a cute little corkboard!\\
'''Noelle''': Queen... gave this to me.
[[AC: Mannequin]]
->'''Susie*''': Not even gonna ask.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Um, the d-dress is cute...\\
'''Noelle*''': (Why did they spend $300 on this!?)
[[AC: [=B.ShotBowtie=]]]
->'''Susie''': Ugh, I look like a nerd.\\
'''Ralsei''': Can I have suspenders?\\
'''Noelle''': ... do I put it in my hair?
[[AC: Chain Mail]]
->'''Susie''': Damn, guess I'm cursed.\\
'''Ralsei''': A letter?... For me...?\\
'''Noelle''': Armor? (It's cool...)
[[AC: Frayed Bowtie]]
->'''Susie*''': Look. I have standards.\\
'''Ralsei''': It's still wearable!\\
'''Noelle''': (Reminds me of Asgore...)?
[[AC: Twin Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': ...it gets worse and worse.\\
'''Ralsei''': Try around my horns!\\
'''Noelle''': ...nostalgic, huh.
[[AC: Spike Band]]
->'''Susie''': Can't say no to spikes.\\
'''Ralsei''': Um, do I... look tough?\\
'''Noelle''': (Maybe Susie would like this look?)
[[AC: Dealmaker]]
->'''Susie''': Money, that's what I need.\\
'''Ralsei''': Two pairs of glasses?\\
'''Noelle''': (Seems... familiar?)
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'''Ralsei''': Yummy!!! Marshallows!! (Hey, feed ME!)
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'''Ralsei''': Yummy!!! Marshallows!! (Hey, feed ME!)ME!)\\
'''Noelle''': Oh, it's... sticky?
'''Noelle''': Oh, it's... sticky?
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'''Ralsei''': A bit burnt...?
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'''Ralsei''': A bit burnt...??\\
'''Noelle''': I-is this real meat…?
'''Noelle''': I-is this real meat…?
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'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed! (Don't look it)
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'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed! (Don't look it)it)\\
'''Noelle''': Mints? I love mints!
'''Noelle''': Mints? I love mints!
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'''Ralsei''': (uncomfortable)
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'''Ralsei''': (uncomfortable)(uncomfortable)\\
'''Noelle''': Umm, what is this? It's cute...
'''Noelle''': Umm, what is this? It's cute...
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'''Ralsei''': Aah, sticky...
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'''Ralsei''': Aah, sticky...\\
'''Noelle''': Mmm... what!? It's blood!?
'''Noelle''': Mmm... what!? It's blood!?
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'''Ralsei''': Aww, thanks, Kris!
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'''Ralsei''': Aww, thanks, Kris!Kris!\\
'''Noelle''': Umm, it's ok, Kris, I'll share...[[labelnote:Note]]Using the Choco Diamond on Noelle outside of battle heals both Kris and Noelle for 35 HP.[[/labelnote]]
'''Noelle''': Umm, it's ok, Kris, I'll share...[[labelnote:Note]]Using the Choco Diamond on Noelle outside of battle heals both Kris and Noelle for 35 HP.[[/labelnote]]
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'''Ralsei''': Whoops.
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'''Ralsei''': Whoops.\\
'''Noelle''': Happy birthday! Haha!
'''Noelle''': Happy birthday! Haha!
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'''Ralsei''': Mmm, thank you!
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'''Ralsei''': Mmm, thank you!you!\\
'''Noelle''': My eyes are spinning…
'''Noelle''': My eyes are spinning…
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'''Ralsei''': (It's cut evenly...)
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'''Ralsei''': (It's cut evenly...)\\
'''Noelle''': (Kris took two thirds of it...)
'''Noelle''': (Kris took two thirds of it...)
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'''Ralsei''': Yum, is this spaghetti?
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'''Ralsei''': Yum, is this spaghetti?spaghetti?\\
'''Noelle''': Tastes like... jumprope?
'''Noelle''': Tastes like... jumprope?
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'''Ralsei''': Let's be healthy!
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'''Ralsei''': Let's be healthy!healthy!\\
'''Noelle''': Something to graze on!
'''Noelle''': Something to graze on!
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'''Ralsei''': K-Kris!? I...
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'''Ralsei''': K-Kris!? I...\\
'''Noelle''': (Huh? I didn't know Kris liked this flavor.)
[[AC:Light Candy]]
->'''Susie''': Hey, this rules!\\
'''Ralsei''': Nice and chalky.\\
'''Noelle''': (I-isn’t this the chalk I gave her?)
[[AC:DD-Burger]]
->'''Susie''': C'mon, gimme the rest!\\
'''Ralsei''': M-maybe give Susie the rest?\\
'''Noelle''': Th... there’s MORE!?
[[AC:CD Bagel]]
->'''Susie''': It's got crunch.\\
'''Ralsei''': How elegant!\\
'''Noelle''': What a nice song...
[[AC:Kris Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: No reaction?) (Ralsei: ...no reaction?)\\
'''Susie''': Hell yeah, apple juice!! (Ralsei: Don't drink so fast!!)\\
'''Ralsei''': Tastes like blueberries! (Susie: Huh? Really?)\\
'''Noelle''': Tastes like cinnamon! (What is this aftertaste...?)
[[AC:Susie Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: STOP LOOKING AT ME!) (Ralsei: They seem into it)\\
'''Susie''': ... this is tea?\\
'''Ralsei''': It's grape juice! (Susie: Huh? Really?)\\
'''Noelle''': (Wonder if they sell this in gallons?)
[[AC:Ralsei Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: No reaction?) (Ralsei: I'm happy!)\\
'''Susie''': Hey, it's like marshmallows!! (Ralsei: D-don't drink so fast!)\\
'''Ralsei''': Um... isn't this water?\\
'''Noelle''': There's nothing in here!
[[AC:Noelle Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: ...do they like it?) (Ralsei: They're drinking it...) (Noelle: Umm, do they like it or not...?)\\
'''Susie''': Hell yeah, eggnog!! (Ralsei: D-don't drink so fast!)\\
'''Ralsei''': It's soft and sweet.\\
'''Noelle''': ...this is just water! You're pranking me, right?!
[[AC:Butler Juice]]
->'''Susie''': Hell'd you call this?\\
'''Ralsei''': I made this.\\
'''Noelle''': B-Brainfreeze! ... kidding!
[[AC:S.POISON]]
->'''Susie''': Ugh! ...tastes good?\\
'''Ralsei''': Ow... er, thanks, Kris!\\
'''Noelle''': (I'll... just pretend to drink it...)
[[AC:Spaghetti Code]]
->'''Susie''': I'm NOT wearing it.\\
'''Ralsei''': How sweet!\\
'''Noelle''': Reminds me of one of my sweaters.
[[AC:Revive Dust]]
->'''Susie''': Don't throw dust at me!\\
'''Ralsei''': It's minty!\\
'''Noelle''': What are you sprinkling?
[[AC:Java Cookie]]†
->'''Susie''': It says GUTS!\\
'''Ralsei''': It says Fluffy...\\
'''Noelle''': I... I can't read these symbols...
[[AC:Revive Brite]]†
->'''Susie''': Don't throw mints at me!\\
'''Ralsei''': It's minty!\\
'''Noelle''': What are you throwing?
'''Noelle''': (Huh? I didn't know Kris liked this flavor.)
[[AC:Light Candy]]
->'''Susie''': Hey, this rules!\\
'''Ralsei''': Nice and chalky.\\
'''Noelle''': (I-isn’t this the chalk I gave her?)
[[AC:DD-Burger]]
->'''Susie''': C'mon, gimme the rest!\\
'''Ralsei''': M-maybe give Susie the rest?\\
'''Noelle''': Th... there’s MORE!?
[[AC:CD Bagel]]
->'''Susie''': It's got crunch.\\
'''Ralsei''': How elegant!\\
'''Noelle''': What a nice song...
[[AC:Kris Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: No reaction?) (Ralsei: ...no reaction?)\\
'''Susie''': Hell yeah, apple juice!! (Ralsei: Don't drink so fast!!)\\
'''Ralsei''': Tastes like blueberries! (Susie: Huh? Really?)\\
'''Noelle''': Tastes like cinnamon! (What is this aftertaste...?)
[[AC:Susie Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: STOP LOOKING AT ME!) (Ralsei: They seem into it)\\
'''Susie''': ... this is tea?\\
'''Ralsei''': It's grape juice! (Susie: Huh? Really?)\\
'''Noelle''': (Wonder if they sell this in gallons?)
[[AC:Ralsei Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: No reaction?) (Ralsei: I'm happy!)\\
'''Susie''': Hey, it's like marshmallows!! (Ralsei: D-don't drink so fast!)\\
'''Ralsei''': Um... isn't this water?\\
'''Noelle''': There's nothing in here!
[[AC:Noelle Tea]]
->'''Kris''': (Susie: ...do they like it?) (Ralsei: They're drinking it...) (Noelle: Umm, do they like it or not...?)\\
'''Susie''': Hell yeah, eggnog!! (Ralsei: D-don't drink so fast!)\\
'''Ralsei''': It's soft and sweet.\\
'''Noelle''': ...this is just water! You're pranking me, right?!
[[AC:Butler Juice]]
->'''Susie''': Hell'd you call this?\\
'''Ralsei''': I made this.\\
'''Noelle''': B-Brainfreeze! ... kidding!
[[AC:S.POISON]]
->'''Susie''': Ugh! ...tastes good?\\
'''Ralsei''': Ow... er, thanks, Kris!\\
'''Noelle''': (I'll... just pretend to drink it...)
[[AC:Spaghetti Code]]
->'''Susie''': I'm NOT wearing it.\\
'''Ralsei''': How sweet!\\
'''Noelle''': Reminds me of one of my sweaters.
[[AC:Revive Dust]]
->'''Susie''': Don't throw dust at me!\\
'''Ralsei''': It's minty!\\
'''Noelle''': What are you sprinkling?
[[AC:Java Cookie]]†
->'''Susie''': It says GUTS!\\
'''Ralsei''': It says Fluffy...\\
'''Noelle''': I... I can't read these symbols...
[[AC:Revive Brite]]†
->'''Susie''': Don't throw mints at me!\\
'''Ralsei''': It's minty!\\
'''Noelle''': What are you throwing?
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->'''Susie''':... okay.\\
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->'''Susie*''': No. Just... no.\\
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->'''Susie*''': [[NoJustNoReaction No. Just... no.\\]]\\
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-->-- '''Seam regarding Jevil.'''
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-->-- '''Seam regarding Jevil.'''
Jevil'''
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[[TitleDrop This is the legend of DELTA RUNE]].\\
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-->--'''Don't Forget'''
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-->--'''Don't Forget'''Forget'''
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[[folder:Item-related dialogue]]
[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk are incompatible. Items marked with a dagger are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei trigger dialogue from both at once.[[/labelnote]]
[[AC:Wood Blade]]
->'''Susie*''': What's this!? A CHOPSTICK? \\
'''Ralsei*''': That's yours, Kris...
[[AC:Spookysword]]
->'''Susie*''': Ugh, it's too small!\\
'''Ralsei*''': Oh, it's too scary!
[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Like the other two weapons, has a related Pencil item (Lucky Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
->'''Susie*''': That tacky thing? No!\\
'''Ralsei*''': Not my shade of green...
[[AC:Mane Ax]]*
->'''Susie'''[[labelnote:Note]]Once it's off, she refuses to use it again[[/labelnote]]: I'm too GOOD for that.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Ummm... it's a bit big.
[[AC:Brave Ax]]*
->'''Susie''': Well, if I have to.\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's a bit too heavy...
[[AC:Devilsknife]]*
->'''Susie''': Let the games begin!\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's too, um, evil.
[[AC:Red Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': No. Just... no.\\
'''Ralsei''': Comfy! Touch it, Kris!
[[AC:Ragger]]*
->'''Susie*''': Ow! That can't be comfy!\\
'''Ralsei''': Feels prickly... Nice!
[[AC:Dainty Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': IT'S MADE OF DOILIES!\\
'''Ralsei''': I'll protect everyone!
[[AC:[=EverybodyWeapon=]]]†
->'''Susie''': Uhhh... Ok.\\
'''Ralsei''': A perfect fit!
[[AC:Amber Card]]
->'''Susie''': ... better than nothing.\\
'''Ralsei''': It's sticky, huh, Kris...
[[AC:Dice Brace]]
->'''Susie''':... okay.\\
'''Ralsei''': It says "Friendship!"
[[AC:Pink Ribbon]]†/[[AC:White Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': Nope. Not in 1st grade anymore.\\
'''Ralsei''': Um... D-do I look cute... ?
[[AC:Iron Shackle]]
->'''Susie''': (Damn, it's actually cool...)\\
'''Ralsei''': *jingle gangle* Haha!
[[AC:Jevilstail]]
->'''Susie''': Figured I'd grow one someday.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm a good devil, OK?
[[AC:[=MouseToken=]]]†
->'''Susie''': This guy's... familiar?\\
'''Ralsei''': Chu! Healing power UP!
[[AC:Dark Candy]]
->'''Susie''': Yeahh!! That's good!\\
'''Ralsei''': Yummy!!! Marshallows!! (Hey, feed ME!)
[[AC:Darkburger]]
->'''Susie''': Cooked to perfection!\\
'''Ralsei''': A bit burnt...?
[[AC:Revive Mint]]
->'''Susie''': I'm ALIVE!!! (You weren't dead)\\
'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed! (Don't look it)
[[AC:Lancer Cookie]]
->'''Susie''': Mmm... face\\
'''Ralsei''': (uncomfortable)
[[AC:Hearts Donut]]
->'''Susie''': Mmm, blood!\\
'''Ralsei''': Aah, sticky...
[[AC:Choco Diamond]]
->'''Susie''': THAT'S it?\\
'''Ralsei''': Aww, thanks, Kris!
[[AC:Top Cake]]
->'''Susie''': Mmm, seconds!\\
'''Ralsei''': Whoops.
[[AC:Spin Cake]]
->'''Susie''': I'm dizzy.\\
'''Ralsei''': Mmm, thank you!
[[AC:Clubs Sandwich]]
->'''Susie''': Quit hogging!\\
'''Ralsei''': (It's cut evenly...)
[[AC:[=RouxlsRoux=]]]
->'''Susie''': Cool, it's wriggling.\\
'''Ralsei''': Yum, is this spaghetti?
[[AC:[=GigaSalad=]]]†
->'''Susie''': Why this!?\\
'''Ralsei''': Let's be healthy!
[[AC:[=FavSandwich=]]]†
->'''Susie''': (It's SO good!)\\
'''Ralsei''': K-Kris!? I...
[[/folder]]
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[[folder:Item-related dialogue]]
[[labelnote:Note on the markers and one other thing]]Items marked with an asterisk are incompatible. Items marked with a dagger are unused. Revive Mint, as well as Dark Candy on Ralsei trigger dialogue from both at once.[[/labelnote]]
[[AC:Wood Blade]]
->'''Susie*''': What's this!? A CHOPSTICK? \\
'''Ralsei*''': That's yours, Kris...
[[AC:Spookysword]]
->'''Susie*''': Ugh, it's too small!\\
'''Ralsei*''': Oh, it's too scary!
[[AC:Trefoil]]†[[labelnote:Note]]Like the other two weapons, has a related Pencil item (Lucky Pencil)[[/labelnote]]
->'''Susie*''': That tacky thing? No!\\
'''Ralsei*''': Not my shade of green...
[[AC:Mane Ax]]*
->'''Susie'''[[labelnote:Note]]Once it's off, she refuses to use it again[[/labelnote]]: I'm too GOOD for that.\\
'''Ralsei*''': Ummm... it's a bit big.
[[AC:Brave Ax]]*
->'''Susie''': Well, if I have to.\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's a bit too heavy...
[[AC:Devilsknife]]*
->'''Susie''': Let the games begin!\\
'''Ralsei*''': It's too, um, evil.
[[AC:Red Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': No. Just... no.\\
'''Ralsei''': Comfy! Touch it, Kris!
[[AC:Ragger]]*
->'''Susie*''': Ow! That can't be comfy!\\
'''Ralsei''': Feels prickly... Nice!
[[AC:Dainty Scarf]]*
->'''Susie*''': IT'S MADE OF DOILIES!\\
'''Ralsei''': I'll protect everyone!
[[AC:[=EverybodyWeapon=]]]†
->'''Susie''': Uhhh... Ok.\\
'''Ralsei''': A perfect fit!
[[AC:Amber Card]]
->'''Susie''': ... better than nothing.\\
'''Ralsei''': It's sticky, huh, Kris...
[[AC:Dice Brace]]
->'''Susie''':... okay.\\
'''Ralsei''': It says "Friendship!"
[[AC:Pink Ribbon]]†/[[AC:White Ribbon]]
->'''Susie*''': Nope. Not in 1st grade anymore.\\
'''Ralsei''': Um... D-do I look cute... ?
[[AC:Iron Shackle]]
->'''Susie''': (Damn, it's actually cool...)\\
'''Ralsei''': *jingle gangle* Haha!
[[AC:Jevilstail]]
->'''Susie''': Figured I'd grow one someday.\\
'''Ralsei''': I'm a good devil, OK?
[[AC:[=MouseToken=]]]†
->'''Susie''': This guy's... familiar?\\
'''Ralsei''': Chu! Healing power UP!
[[AC:Dark Candy]]
->'''Susie''': Yeahh!! That's good!\\
'''Ralsei''': Yummy!!! Marshallows!! (Hey, feed ME!)
[[AC:Darkburger]]
->'''Susie''': Cooked to perfection!\\
'''Ralsei''': A bit burnt...?
[[AC:Revive Mint]]
->'''Susie''': I'm ALIVE!!! (You weren't dead)\\
'''Ralsei''': Ah, I'm refreshed! (Don't look it)
[[AC:Lancer Cookie]]
->'''Susie''': Mmm... face\\
'''Ralsei''': (uncomfortable)
[[AC:Hearts Donut]]
->'''Susie''': Mmm, blood!\\
'''Ralsei''': Aah, sticky...
[[AC:Choco Diamond]]
->'''Susie''': THAT'S it?\\
'''Ralsei''': Aww, thanks, Kris!
[[AC:Top Cake]]
->'''Susie''': Mmm, seconds!\\
'''Ralsei''': Whoops.
[[AC:Spin Cake]]
->'''Susie''': I'm dizzy.\\
'''Ralsei''': Mmm, thank you!
[[AC:Clubs Sandwich]]
->'''Susie''': Quit hogging!\\
'''Ralsei''': (It's cut evenly...)
[[AC:[=RouxlsRoux=]]]
->'''Susie''': Cool, it's wriggling.\\
'''Ralsei''': Yum, is this spaghetti?
[[AC:[=GigaSalad=]]]†
->'''Susie''': Why this!?\\
'''Ralsei''': Let's be healthy!
[[AC:[=FavSandwich=]]]†
->'''Susie''': (It's SO good!)\\
'''Ralsei''': K-Kris!? I...
[[/folder]]
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NOW ! SHOW YOURSELF ! '''DELTARUNE !'''\\
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NOW ! SHOW YOURSELF ! '''DELTARUNE !'''\\
!'''
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I'm with you in the dark\\
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I'm with you in the dark\\dark
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%%->''When the light is running low .\\
%%And the shadow start to grow.\\
%%And the places that you know \\
%%Seem like fantasy\\
%%There's a light inside your soul\\
%%That's still shining in the cold\\
%%With the truth\\
%%The promise in our hearts\\
%%Don't forget\\
%%I'm with you in the dark''
%%-->-- '''Don't forget'''
%%And the shadow start to grow.\\
%%And the places that you know \\
%%Seem like fantasy\\
%%There's a light inside your soul\\
%%That's still shining in the cold\\
%%With the truth\\
%%The promise in our hearts\\
%%Don't forget\\
%%I'm with you in the dark''
%%-->-- '''Don't forget'''
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%%And
And the shadow start to
%%And
And the places that you
%%Seem
Seem like fantasy\\
%%With
With the
%%The
The promise in our hearts\\
%%I'm
I'm with you in the
%%-->-- '''Don't forget'''
-->--'''Don't Forget'''
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->THANK YOU FOR WAITING SO LONG.\\
AFTER ALL YOU AND I, WE HAVE BOTH BEEN WAITING SUCH A VERY LONG TIME.\\
SO TO BE HERE FINALLY ON THE VERGE OF CONNECTION\\
IS QUITE EXCITING.\\
I LOOK FORWARD TO CREATING A NEW FUTURE WITH YOU.\\
NOW ! SHOW YOURSELF ! '''DELTARUNE !'''\\
-->--██████/'''W.D. Gaster(?)''' before commencing the "connection" at the beginning of the game.
AFTER ALL YOU AND I, WE HAVE BOTH BEEN WAITING SUCH A VERY LONG TIME.\\
SO TO BE HERE FINALLY ON THE VERGE OF CONNECTION\\
IS QUITE EXCITING.\\
I LOOK FORWARD TO CREATING A NEW FUTURE WITH YOU.\\
NOW ! SHOW YOURSELF ! '''DELTARUNE !'''\\
-->--██████/'''W.D. Gaster(?)''' before commencing the "connection" at the beginning of the game.
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->''Once upon a time, a LEGEND was whispered among shadows.\\
It was a LEGEND of HOPE. (It was a LEGEND of DREAMS.)\\
It was a LEGEND of LIGHT. (It was a LEGEND of DARK.)\\
[[TitleDrop This is the legend of DELTA RUNE]].\\
For millenia, LIGHT and DARK have lived in balance, bringing peace to the WORLD.\\
But if this harmony were to shatter...\\
A terrible calamity would occur.\\
The sky will run black with terror and the land will crack with fear.\\
Then, her heart pounding... \\
The EARTH will draw her final breath.\\
Only then, shining with hope... \\
Three HEROES appear at WORLDS' edge.\\
A HUMAN, a MONSTER, and a PRINCE FROM THE DARK.\\
Only they can seal the fountains and banish the ANGEL'S HEAVEN.\\
Only then will balance be restored, and the WORLD saved from destruction.''
-->--'''Ralsei''' recounting the prophecy
It was a LEGEND of HOPE. (It was a LEGEND of DREAMS.)\\
It was a LEGEND of LIGHT. (It was a LEGEND of DARK.)\\
[[TitleDrop This is the legend of DELTA RUNE]].\\
For millenia, LIGHT and DARK have lived in balance, bringing peace to the WORLD.\\
But if this harmony were to shatter...\\
A terrible calamity would occur.\\
The sky will run black with terror and the land will crack with fear.\\
Then, her heart pounding... \\
The EARTH will draw her final breath.\\
Only then, shining with hope... \\
Three HEROES appear at WORLDS' edge.\\
A HUMAN, a MONSTER, and a PRINCE FROM THE DARK.\\
Only they can seal the fountains and banish the ANGEL'S HEAVEN.\\
Only then will balance be restored, and the WORLD saved from destruction.''
-->--'''Ralsei''' recounting the prophecy
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->''When the light is running low .\\
And the shadow start to grow.\\
And the places that you know \\
Seem like fantasy\\
-> There's a light inside your soul\\
That's still shining in the cold\\
With the truth\\
The promise in our hearts\\
Don't forget\\
I'm with you in the dark''
-->-- '''Don't forget'''
And the shadow start to grow.\\
And the places that you know \\
Seem like fantasy\\
-> There's a light inside your soul\\
That's still shining in the cold\\
With the truth\\
The promise in our hearts\\
Don't forget\\
I'm with you in the dark''
-->-- '''Don't forget'''
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-->-- '''Seam regarding Jevil.'''
%%->''When the light is running low .\\
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There's a light inside your soul\\
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-> There's a light inside your soul\\ soul\\
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->''When the light is running low .\\
And the shadow start to grow.\\
And the places that you know \\
Seem like fantasy\\
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There's a light inside your soul\\
That's still shining in the cold\\
With the truth\\
The promise in our hearts\\
\\
Don't forget\\
I'm with you in the dark''
-->-- '''Don't forget'''
And the shadow start to grow.\\
And the places that you know \\
Seem like fantasy\\
\\
There's a light inside your soul\\
That's still shining in the cold\\
With the truth\\
The promise in our hearts\\
\\
Don't forget\\
I'm with you in the dark''
-->-- '''Don't forget'''
