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-->-- '''[[https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Avitus#Chaos_Rising 1d4chan]]''', on [[spoiler: Avitus']] betrayal
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-->-- '''[[https://1d4chan.'''[[https://1d6chan.miraheze.org/wiki/Avitus#Chaos_Rising 1d4chan]]''', on [[spoiler: Avitus']] betrayal
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[[labelnote:*]]As I travel there now to face the monstrosity [[spoiler:that was once our Chapter Master]], I am comforted by this much: [[/labelnote]]Whether I am victorious or slain... my sins will know [[TitleDrop retribution]]. \\\
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[[labelnote:*]]As I travel there now to face the monstrosity [[spoiler:that was once our Chapter Master]], I am comforted confident by this much: [[/labelnote]]Whether I am victorious or slain... my sins will know [[TitleDrop retribution]]. \\\
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->''"I fear no evil, for I am fear incarnate."''
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->''"I fear no evil, for [[OutscaretheEnemy I am am]] [[HorrifyingTheHorror fear incarnate.incarnate]]."''
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->''This makes [[spoiler:Avitus]] a notable example of a 40k character becoming "self-aware". It isn't his [[BloodKnight love of violence]] or any lust for power or the corruption of Kyras that turns him traitor, but a sudden awareness of the galaxy in the way we as spectators understand: [[CrapsackWorld it is a hopeless meat grinder, and nothing more; the setting exists for violence alone, for our pleasure.]] [[spoiler:Avitus]] had been grappling with this doubt since the events of Victory Bay in Dark Crusade, and Kyras' cavorting with Eliphas pushes him over the edge. When he betrays the Imperium, it isn't because he suddenly hates it or his brothers or suddenly loves Khorne, but because of his new perspective.''
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->''This makes [[spoiler:Avitus]] a notable example of a 40k character becoming "self-aware". It isn't his [[BloodKnight love of violence]] or any lust for power or the corruption of Kyras that turns him traitor, but a sudden awareness of the galaxy in the way we as spectators understand: [[CrapsackWorld it is a hopeless meat grinder, and nothing more; the setting exists for violence alone, for our pleasure.]] [[spoiler:Avitus]] had been grappling with this doubt since the events of Victory Bay in Dark Crusade, and [[spoiler: Kyras' cavorting with Eliphas Eliphas]] pushes him over the edge. When he betrays the Imperium, it isn't because he suddenly hates it or his brothers or suddenly loves Khorne, but because of his new perspective.''
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->For once, be quiet and listen. The chapter expects us to be perfect, obedient instruments of its leaders. [[SurroundedByIdiots Leaders who are barely worthy of life, much less respect.]] Captain Boreale, [[GeneralFailure who walked three companies into the slaughter of Kaurava]]. Captain Angelos, [[GloryHound who lapped up the credit for our victories against the Tyranids]]. Even Captain Thule, [[AchillesInHisTent who chose to sulk on Calderis after the Kronus debacle]]. These are our leaders? The people we are supposed to obey without question? No, these are cowards and imbeciles, every bit as worthless as Governor Vandis and all the others. These incompetents learned nothing from my teachings. I owe them no loyalty.
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->For once, be quiet and listen. The chapter expects us to be perfect, obedient instruments of its leaders. [[SurroundedByIdiots Leaders who are barely worthy of life, much less respect.]] Captain Boreale, [[GeneralFailure who walked three companies into the slaughter of Kaurava]]. Captain Angelos, [[GloryHound who lapped up the credit for our victories against the Tyranids]]. Even Captain Thule, [[AchillesInHisTent who chose to sulk on Calderis after the Kronus debacle]]. These are our leaders? The people we are supposed to obey without question? No, these are cowards and imbeciles, every bit as worthless as [[DirtyCoward Governor Vandis Vandis]] and all the others. These incompetents learned nothing from my teachings. I owe them no loyalty.
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->''"This makes [[spoiler:Avitus]] a notable example of a 40k character becoming "self-aware". It isn't his [[BloodKnight love of violence]] or any lust for power or the corruption of Kyras that turns him traitor, but a sudden awareness of the galaxy in the way we as spectators understand: [[CrapsackWorld it is a hopeless meat grinder, and nothing more; the setting exists for violence alone, for our pleasure.]] [[spoiler:Avitus]] had been grappling with this doubt since the events of Victory Bay in Dark Crusade, and Kyras' cavorting with Eliphas pushes him over the edge. When he betrays the Imperium, it isn't because he suddenly hates it or his brothers or suddenly loves Khorne, but because of his new perspective.''
->''"When [[spoiler:Avitus]] [[FaceHeelTurn betrays the Imperium]], it is because he is a proud man with nothing left to ever take pride in again. Where he once held conviction he was only left with a death wish and he sought his demise in the only way he could ever respect it: amidst the heat of battle, in blood and fire, where the raging dead can be drowned out under the roar of bolter fire. In the end, [[spoiler: Avitus]] died staging his last stand not against the alien, heretic, or loyalists, but against the whole cruel, uncaring universe."''
->''"When [[spoiler:Avitus]] [[FaceHeelTurn betrays the Imperium]], it is because he is a proud man with nothing left to ever take pride in again. Where he once held conviction he was only left with a death wish and he sought his demise in the only way he could ever respect it: amidst the heat of battle, in blood and fire, where the raging dead can be drowned out under the roar of bolter fire. In the end, [[spoiler: Avitus]] died staging his last stand not against the alien, heretic, or loyalists, but against the whole cruel, uncaring universe."''
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->''"In truth, [[spoiler:Avitus]] did not fall to Chaos in the way his brothers might have understood it, instead he fell to the truth. He saw the galaxy for what it was once stripped of the comforting veneer of morality and higher purpose ingrained into him as a Space Marine; [[GoMadFromTheRevelation understood what it meant and could not stomach it.]]''
->''"This makes [[spoiler:Avitus]] a notable example of a 40k character becoming "self-aware". It isn't his [[BloodKnight love of violence]] or any lust for power or the corruption of Kyras that turns him traitor, but a sudden awareness of the galaxy in the way we as spectators understand: [[CrapsackWorld it is a hopeless meat grinder, and nothing more; the setting exists for violence alone, for our pleasure.]] [[spoiler:Avitus]] had been grappling with this doubt since the events of Victory Bay in Dark Crusade, and Kyras' cavorting with Eliphas pushes him over the edge. When he betrays the Imperium, it isn't because he suddenly hates it or his brothers or suddenly loves Khorne, but because of his new perspective.''
->''"When [[spoiler:Avitus]] [[FaceHeelTurn betrays the Imperium]], it is because he is a proud man with nothing left to ever take pride in again. Where he once held conviction he was only left with a death wish and he sought his demise in the only way he could ever respect it: amidst the heat of battle, in blood and fire, where the raging dead can be drowned out under the roar of bolter fire. In the end, [[spoiler: Avitus]] died staging his last stand not against the alien, heretic, or loyalists, but against the whole cruel, uncaring universe."''
-->-- '''[[https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Avitus#Chaos_Rising 1d4chan]]''', on [[spoiler: Avitus']] betrayal
->''"This makes [[spoiler:Avitus]] a notable example of a 40k character becoming "self-aware". It isn't his [[BloodKnight love of violence]] or any lust for power or the corruption of Kyras that turns him traitor, but a sudden awareness of the galaxy in the way we as spectators understand: [[CrapsackWorld it is a hopeless meat grinder, and nothing more; the setting exists for violence alone, for our pleasure.]] [[spoiler:Avitus]] had been grappling with this doubt since the events of Victory Bay in Dark Crusade, and Kyras' cavorting with Eliphas pushes him over the edge. When he betrays the Imperium, it isn't because he suddenly hates it or his brothers or suddenly loves Khorne, but because of his new perspective.''
->''"When [[spoiler:Avitus]] [[FaceHeelTurn betrays the Imperium]], it is because he is a proud man with nothing left to ever take pride in again. Where he once held conviction he was only left with a death wish and he sought his demise in the only way he could ever respect it: amidst the heat of battle, in blood and fire, where the raging dead can be drowned out under the roar of bolter fire. In the end, [[spoiler: Avitus]] died staging his last stand not against the alien, heretic, or loyalists, but against the whole cruel, uncaring universe."''
-->-- '''[[https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Avitus#Chaos_Rising 1d4chan]]''', on [[spoiler: Avitus']] betrayal
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Ave - ni mach fordena[[note]]Often [[{{Mondegreen}} Misheard as: "For then we march for Terra"]][[/note]]\\
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Ave - ni mach fordena[[note]]Often [[{{Mondegreen}} Misheard as: "For then we march for Terra"]][[/note]]\\Terra"[[/note]]\\
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->''"Sub-Sector Aurelia. This cluster of worlds stands on the very edge of the Imperium of Man. From this frontier came the Blood Ravens, a chapter of the Emperor's own Space Marines. Now, [[OurOrcsAreDifferent savage aliens]] seek to overrun the sector, and break the Blood Ravens once and for all. Captain Davian Thule and a handful of Space Marines lead the raw recruits defending these worlds. Now, another Space Marine joins this desperate battle. A newly promoted Commander, ready to lead in our darkest hour. You are this Space Marine. And you will tip the balance towards victory."'''
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->''"Sub-Sector Aurelia. This cluster of worlds stands on the very edge of the Imperium of Man. From this frontier came the Blood Ravens, a chapter of the Emperor's own Space Marines. Now, [[OurOrcsAreDifferent [[SpaceOrcs savage aliens]] seek to overrun the sector, and break the Blood Ravens once and for all. Captain Davian Thule and a handful of Space Marines lead the raw recruits defending these worlds. Now, another Space Marine joins this desperate battle. A newly promoted Commander, ready to lead in our darkest hour. You are this Space Marine. And you will tip the balance towards victory."'''
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And if we die this day, we die in glory. We die heroes' deaths! But we shall not die, no! It is the enemy who will taste death and defeat! AsYouKnow, most of our battle-brothers are stationed in space, prepared to deep strike!\\\
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And if we die this day, we die in glory. We die heroes' deaths! But we shall not die, no! It is the enemy who will taste death and defeat! AsYouKnow, As you know, most of our battle-brothers are stationed in space, prepared to deep strike!\\\
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->''"Look, Rhinos! RHIIIIIIINOS! Our enemies hide in [[MemeticMutation METAL BAWKSES,]] the cowards! [[{{Angrish}} Da FEWLS!]] We... ;;[inhales]'' ... we should take '''away''' their metal bawkses."''
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->''"Look, Rhinos! RHIIIIIIINOS! Our enemies hide in [[MemeticMutation METAL BAWKSES,]] BAWKSES, the cowards! [[{{Angrish}} Da FEWLS!]] We... ;;[inhales]'' ... we should take '''away''' their metal bawkses."''
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Our perimeter has been prepared in the event that our enemy should be so bold and so foolish! We have placed numerous beacons, allowing for multiple, simultaneous and [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal devastating defensive deep strikes]].\\\
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Our perimeter has been prepared in the event that our enemy should be so bold and so foolish! We have placed numerous beacons, allowing for multiple, simultaneous and [[AddedAlliterativeAppeal devastating defensive deep strikes]].strikes.\\\
