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-->--'''T-Bird''', about '''Tin Tin''', the first guy to fall to Eric Draven's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, ''Film/TheCrow''
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-->--'''T-Bird''', about '''Tin Tin''', the first guy to fall to Eric Draven's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, ''Film/TheCrow''
''Film/TheCrow1994''
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->''The Emperor was [[{{Understatement}} not pleased]] when the Death Star was destroyed, and [[MakeAnExampleOfThem I was chosen to suffer as an example]]. As I stood in a cage, he released the [[TheSwarm piranha-beetles]] through holes in the floor: one bit me, and at the smell of blood, the others swarmed over me. Mandibles with serrated razor edges cut into my flesh, slicing through the skin on my thighs, chest, and cheeks. [[DeathOfAThousandCuts Thousands and thousands more swarmed at me]]. They buzzed in my ears, [[EyeScream tearing at my eyes, blinding me]]. I screamed, and begged, but the Emperor only laughed at my pain. After I was blinded, I could feel their pain for an hour or so afterwards, then-''
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->''The Emperor was [[{{Understatement}} not pleased]] when the Death Star was destroyed, and [[MakeAnExampleOfThem I was chosen to suffer as an example]]. As I stood in a cage, he released the [[TheSwarm piranha-beetles]] through holes in the floor: one bit me, and at the smell of blood, the others swarmed over me. Mandibles with serrated razor edges cut into my flesh, slicing through the skin on my thighs, chest, and cheeks. [[DeathOfAThousandCuts Thousands and thousands more swarmed at me]]. They buzzed in my ears, [[EyeScream tearing at my eyes, blinding me]]. I screamed, and begged, [[{{Sadist}} but the Emperor only laughed at my pain.pain]]. After I was blinded, I could feel their pain for an hour or so afterwards, then-''
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-->--'''Symbiotic Scorpion item log''', ''[[VideoGame/RiskOfRain2 Risk of Rain 2: Survivors of the Void]]''
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-->--'''Symbiotic Scorpion item log''', ''[[VideoGame/RiskOfRain2 Risk of Rain 2: Survivors of the Void]]''Void]]''
->"At 6:31 CST a momentary increase in AC Bus 2 voltage occurred. Nine seconds later, both Grissom and Popovich exclaimed “Hey! Fire!” over their microphones and the sounds of hurried, frantic motion were being picked up by mission control. Due to the nature of the air in the cabin, made exclusively of oxygen, the fire grew rapidly into a conflagration which consumed the entire interior of the module. Ironically, the hatch that was meant to serve as a shield from the heat wound up serving as the door to a giant oven, cooking the explorers with nary a way out, as the inner latch to release the hatch grew stuck in the heat."
-->--''Literature/BlueSkiesInCamelot''
->"At 6:31 CST a momentary increase in AC Bus 2 voltage occurred. Nine seconds later, both Grissom and Popovich exclaimed “Hey! Fire!” over their microphones and the sounds of hurried, frantic motion were being picked up by mission control. Due to the nature of the air in the cabin, made exclusively of oxygen, the fire grew rapidly into a conflagration which consumed the entire interior of the module. Ironically, the hatch that was meant to serve as a shield from the heat wound up serving as the door to a giant oven, cooking the explorers with nary a way out, as the inner latch to release the hatch grew stuck in the heat."
-->--''Literature/BlueSkiesInCamelot''
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-->--''Literature/{{Kraken}}''
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->''"There's countless ways to defeat your enemy. You can shoot them. You can punch them. Beat them, mash them, stick them in a stew, list goes on. But man, one thing that really makes me laugh...? That's right:''\\
''Burying them under a mound of scorpions."''\\
''"You're messed up in the head, Bill."''
-->--'''Symbiotic Scorpion item log''', ''[[VideoGame/RiskOfRain2 Risk of Rain 2: Survivors of the Void]]''
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-->--'''Creator/GoreVidal''' on the September 11th World Trade Center attacks
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-->--'''Creator/GoreVidal''' on [[UsefulNotes/TheWarOnTerror the September 11th World Trade Center attacks
attacks]]
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If he betrayed Britain and was executed by them for doing so, then it’s not Rewarded As A Traitor Deserves
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-->--Sentence given to '''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/François_Henri_de_la_Motte Francis Henry De la Motte]]''' and others in the British history for [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves High Treason]]
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-->--Sentence given to '''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/François_Henri_de_la_Motte Francis Henry De la Motte]]''' and others in the British history for [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves High Treason]]
Treason
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-->--''Manga/DeathNote, LightNovel/AnotherNote: The Los Angeles BB Murder Cases'' pg 9 (Leaping over the MoralEventHorizon in the first paragraph)
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-->--''Manga/DeathNote, LightNovel/AnotherNote: Literature/AnotherNote: The Los Angeles BB Murder Cases'' pg 9 (Leaping over the MoralEventHorizon in the first paragraph)
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->''[[AC:A.]]wesomeness\\
[[AC:R.]][[RuleOfCool idiculousness]]\\
[[AC:N.]][[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice umber of Holes Created in Victim]]\\
[[AC:O.]][[RoarBeforeBeating uuaggahhhaaaarrh!!!!]]\\
[[AC:L.]][[AnArmAndALeg imbs Removed]]\\
[[AC:D.]][[BondOneLiner elivery of One Liner]]''
[[AC:R.]][[RuleOfCool idiculousness]]\\
[[AC:N.]][[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice umber of Holes Created in Victim]]\\
[[AC:O.]][[RoarBeforeBeating uuaggahhhaaaarrh!!!!]]\\
[[AC:L.]][[AnArmAndALeg imbs Removed]]\\
[[AC:D.]][[BondOneLiner elivery of One Liner]]''
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[[AC:R.]][[RuleOfCool
'''R.'''[[CrazyIsCool idiculousness]]\\
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-->-- '''Tanner''', ''Driver 2''
->''Of all the methods I employ, [[SincerityMode this is perhaps the cruelest]], causing my victim’s body to shrink on itself, crushing bones and rupturing organs ‘til the pressure inside burst the sac of fleshy skin, spraying its contents for all to see.''
->''Of all the methods I employ, [[SincerityMode this is perhaps the cruelest]], causing my victim’s body to shrink on itself, crushing bones and rupturing organs ‘til the pressure inside burst the sac of fleshy skin, spraying its contents for all to see.''
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-->-- '''Tanner''', ''Driver 2''
''VideoGame/Driver2''
->''Of all the methods I employ,[[SincerityMode this is perhaps the cruelest]], cruelest, causing my victim’s body to shrink on itself, crushing bones and rupturing organs ‘til the pressure inside burst the sac of fleshy skin, spraying its contents for all to see.''
->''Of all the methods I employ,
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->''Veruca Salt was once'' en pointe,
->''but watch as we dislocate each joint.''
->''Her ballet career is looking grim''
->''as we tear her apart from limb to LIMB!''
->''but watch as we dislocate each joint.''
->''Her ballet career is looking grim''
->''as we tear her apart from limb to LIMB!''
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->''Veruca Salt was once'' en pointe,
->''butonce ''en pointe\\
''but watch as we dislocate each joint.''
->''Her\\
Her ballet career is lookinggrim''
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->“Shall we make an apple tree?” [[HumanoidAbomination Goss]] said. “Shall we make a tortoise? [[ImpossiblyCompactFolding Fold and fold and fold]].” He began to fold. [[[[FoldSpindleMutilation Anders began to scream]]. “I’m not as good at it as you!” Goss laughed.
->Goss folded, with wet-flesh sounds and cracks. Eventually Anders stopped screaming, but Goss continued to fold.
->“I don’t know, Subby,” he said, at last. He wiped his hands on Anders’s coat. He squinted at his handiwork. “I need more practice, Subby,” he said. “It isn’t quite as much like a lotus as I’d have liked.”
->Goss folded, with wet-flesh sounds and cracks. Eventually Anders stopped screaming, but Goss continued to fold.
->“I don’t know, Subby,” he said, at last. He wiped his hands on Anders’s coat. He squinted at his handiwork. “I need more practice, Subby,” he said. “It isn’t quite as much like a lotus as I’d have liked.”
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->“Shall we make an apple tree?” [[HumanoidAbomination Goss]] said. “Shall we make a tortoise? [[ImpossiblyCompactFolding Fold and fold and fold]].” He began to fold. [[[[FoldSpindleMutilation [[FoldSpindleMutilation Anders began to scream]]. “I’m not as good at it as you!” Goss laughed.
->Gosslaughed.\\
Goss folded, with wet-flesh sounds and cracks. Eventually Anders stopped screaming, but Goss continued tofold.
->“Ifold.\\
“I don’t know, Subby,” he said, at last. He wiped his hands on Anders’s coat. He squinted at his handiwork. “I need more practice, Subby,” he said. “It isn’t quite as much like a lotus as I’d have liked.”
->Goss
Goss folded, with wet-flesh sounds and cracks. Eventually Anders stopped screaming, but Goss continued to
->“I
“I don’t know, Subby,” he said, at last. He wiped his hands on Anders’s coat. He squinted at his handiwork. “I need more practice, Subby,” he said. “It isn’t quite as much like a lotus as I’d have liked.”
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-->--'''WebVideo/AtomicShrimp''', "How To Get Started Foraging - Practical Guidance For Absolute Beginners"
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-->--'''WebVideo/AtomicShrimp''', "How To Get Started Foraging - Practical Guidance For Absolute Beginners"Beginners"
->“Shall we make an apple tree?” [[HumanoidAbomination Goss]] said. “Shall we make a tortoise? [[ImpossiblyCompactFolding Fold and fold and fold]].” He began to fold. [[[[FoldSpindleMutilation Anders began to scream]]. “I’m not as good at it as you!” Goss laughed.
->Goss folded, with wet-flesh sounds and cracks. Eventually Anders stopped screaming, but Goss continued to fold.
->“I don’t know, Subby,” he said, at last. He wiped his hands on Anders’s coat. He squinted at his handiwork. “I need more practice, Subby,” he said. “It isn’t quite as much like a lotus as I’d have liked.”
-->--''Literature/{{Kraken}}''
->“Shall we make an apple tree?” [[HumanoidAbomination Goss]] said. “Shall we make a tortoise? [[ImpossiblyCompactFolding Fold and fold and fold]].” He began to fold. [[[[FoldSpindleMutilation Anders began to scream]]. “I’m not as good at it as you!” Goss laughed.
->Goss folded, with wet-flesh sounds and cracks. Eventually Anders stopped screaming, but Goss continued to fold.
->“I don’t know, Subby,” he said, at last. He wiped his hands on Anders’s coat. He squinted at his handiwork. “I need more practice, Subby,” he said. “It isn’t quite as much like a lotus as I’d have liked.”
-->--''Literature/{{Kraken}}''
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-->-- '''[[SociopathicHero Kain]]''', ''Blood Omen: VideoGame/LegacyOfKain''
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-->-- '''[[SociopathicHero Kain]]''', ''Blood Omen: VideoGame/LegacyOfKain''
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-->--'''The Squirrels and Oompa Loompas''', ''Theatre/{{Charlie And The Chocolate Factory}}''
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-->--'''The Squirrels and Oompa Loompas''', ''Theatre/{{Charlie And The Chocolate Factory}}''
''Theatre/CharlieAndTheChocolateFactory''
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-->--'''The Crooked Man,''' ''Literature/TheBookOfLostThings''
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-->--'''The Crooked Man,''' ''Literature/TheBookOfLostThings''''Literature/TheBookOfLostThings''
->''The poison in [hemlock water-dropwort] causes death by muscle constriction. All of your muscles contract; your heart is made of muscles, your ribcage and diaphragm use muscles to enable you to breathe. So if all of your muscles all constrict and stay constricted, it's bad. In the final stages of poisoning the muscles of the face will constrict, so hey, [[GoOutWithASmile at least you die with a smile]].''
-->--'''WebVideo/AtomicShrimp''', "How To Get Started Foraging - Practical Guidance For Absolute Beginners"
->''The poison in [hemlock water-dropwort] causes death by muscle constriction. All of your muscles contract; your heart is made of muscles, your ribcage and diaphragm use muscles to enable you to breathe. So if all of your muscles all constrict and stay constricted, it's bad. In the final stages of poisoning the muscles of the face will constrict, so hey, [[GoOutWithASmile at least you die with a smile]].''
-->--'''WebVideo/AtomicShrimp''', "How To Get Started Foraging - Practical Guidance For Absolute Beginners"
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->''When Beyond Birthday committed his third murder, he attempted an experiment. Namely, to see if it were possible for a human being to die of internal hemorrhaging without rupturing any organs. Specifically, he drugged his victim so they fell unconscious, tied them up, and proceeded to beat their left arm thoroughly, being careful not to break the skin. He was hoping to bring about enough hemorrhaging to cause death from loss of blood, but this attempt ended, sadly, in failure. Blood congested in the arm and it turned purplish red beneath the skin, but the victim did not die. He simply shook, convulsed, and remained alive. He had been convinced the blood loss incurred was enough to kill someone, but apparently he had underestimated the matter. As far as Beyond Birthday was concerned, the actual method of murder rated fairly low on the amusement scale, and it was never more than an interesting experiment. It did not particularly matter to him whether it succeeded or not. Beyond Birthday simply shrugged, and took out a knife...''
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->''Know about Bluhm? ...They dragged him into the desert, [[TongueTrauma cut out his tongue]], [[GroinAttack chopped off his manly apparatus]] [[{{Squick}} and stuffed them where his tongue had been]]. Then they crucified the poor bugger. Pathologist's opinion is he was still alive when they nailed him up.''
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->''Know about Bluhm? ...They dragged him into the desert, [[TongueTrauma cut out his tongue]], [[GroinAttack chopped off his manly apparatus]] [[{{Squick}} and stuffed them where his tongue had been]].been. Then they crucified the poor bugger. Pathologist's opinion is he was still alive when they nailed him up.''
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->[[AC:A.]]wesomeness\\
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->The Emperor was [[{{Understatement}} not pleased]] when the Death Star was destroyed, and [[MakeAnExampleOfThem I was chosen to suffer as an example]]. As I stood in a cage, he released the [[TheSwarm piranha-beetles]] through holes in the floor: one bit me, and at the smell of blood, the others swarmed over me. Mandibles with serrated razor edges cut into my flesh, slicing through the skin on my thighs, chest, and cheeks. [[DeathOfAThousandCuts Thousands and thousands more swarmed at me]]. They buzzed in my ears, [[EyeScream tearing at my eyes, blinding me]]. I screamed, and begged, but the Emperor only laughed at my pain. After I was blinded, I could feel their pain for an hour or so afterwards, then-
->I woke up, whole, in a new body. The Emperor had found me [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou important enough to clone me]], giving me the warning that he'd find a more interesting way to kill me next time if I failed him again.
->I woke up, whole, in a new body. The Emperor had found me [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou important enough to clone me]], giving me the warning that he'd find a more interesting way to kill me next time if I failed him again.
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->''I woke up, whole, in a new body. The Emperor had found me [[CantKillYouStillNeedYou important enough to clone me]], giving me the warning that he'd find a more interesting way to kill me next time if I failed him again.''
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Kin was used to violent deaths. [[WhoWantsToLiveForever Oldsters]] [[DeathSeeker died that way]] - freefall diving without a backpack on, deliberately wandering near when they released the cloned elephants on a new world, banjaxing the safeties and stepping into the hopper of a [[{{Terraforming}} strata machine]] - but then the ambulance crews took over. There had never been anything to see, except in the strata machine case. And that was only a strange pattern in a freshly-laid coal measure.
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Kin was used to violent deaths. [[WhoWantsToLiveForever Oldsters]] [[DeathSeeker Oldsters died that way]] - freefall diving without a backpack on, deliberately wandering near when they released the cloned elephants on a new world, banjaxing the safeties and stepping into the hopper of a [[{{Terraforming}} strata machine]] - but then the ambulance crews took over. There had never been anything to see, except in the strata machine case. And that was only a strange pattern in a freshly-laid coal measure.
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->[[ExactWords I am a man of my word]]. Prepare to receive your bellyful of gold."
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-->--''Literature/TheBookOfLostThings''
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-->--'''Lieutenant Anderson''', ''Film/TheGoreGoreGirls''
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-->--'''Lieutenant Anderson''', ''Film/TheGoreGoreGirls''''Film/TheGoreGoreGirls''
->[[ExactWords I am a man of my word]]. Prepare to receive your bellyful of gold."
-->--''Literature/TheBookOfLostThings''
->[[ExactWords I am a man of my word]]. Prepare to receive your bellyful of gold."
-->--''Literature/TheBookOfLostThings''
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->but watch as we dislocate each joint.
->Her ballet career is looking grim
->as we tear her apart from limb to LIMB!''
->Her ballet career is looking grim
->as we tear her apart from limb to LIMB!''
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->Her
->''Her ballet career is looking
->as
->''as we tear her apart from limb to LIMB!''
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->''Veruca Salt was once ''en pointe'',
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->''Veruca Salt was once ''en pointe'', once'' en pointe,
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-->--'''T-Bird''', ''Film/TheCrow''
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-->--'''T-Bird''', about '''Tin Tin''', the first guy to fall to Eric Draven's RoaringRampageOfRevenge, ''Film/TheCrow''
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->''Veruca Salt was once en pointe,
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->''Veruca Salt was once en pointe, ''en pointe'',
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-->--'''The Joker''' to '''the Chechen''', ''Film/TheDarkKnight''
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-->--'''The Joker''' to '''the Chechen''', ''Film/TheDarkKnight''''Film/TheDarkKnight''
->''"Ah, face mutilated with a meat tenderizer, throat slit, and this one had her ass beat in."''
-->--'''Lieutenant Anderson''', ''Film/TheGoreGoreGirls''
->''"Ah, face mutilated with a meat tenderizer, throat slit, and this one had her ass beat in."''
-->--'''Lieutenant Anderson''', ''Film/TheGoreGoreGirls''
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-->--'''Watson Pritchard''', ''Film/HouseOnHauntedHill1959''
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-->--'''Watson Pritchard''', ''Film/HouseOnHauntedHill1959''''Film/HouseOnHauntedHill1959''
->''"Why don't we cut you up into little pieces and feed you to your pooches, hmm? And then we'll see just how loyal a hungry dog REALLY is!"''
-->--'''The Joker''' to '''the Chechen''', ''Film/TheDarkKnight''
->''"Why don't we cut you up into little pieces and feed you to your pooches, hmm? And then we'll see just how loyal a hungry dog REALLY is!"''
-->--'''The Joker''' to '''the Chechen''', ''Film/TheDarkKnight''
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-->--'''The Squirrels and Oompa Loompas''', ''Theatre/{{Charlie And The Chocolate Factory}}''
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->''"This is what she used on my brother and her sister, hacked them to pieces. We found parts of their bodies all over the house, in places you wouldn't think. A funny thing is the heads have never been found - hands and feet and things like that, but no heads."''
-->--'''Watson Pritchard''', ''Film/HouseOnHauntedHill1959''
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