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-->-- Murong Bang, '''Dog of War'''
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-->-- liu Jiangou, '''The Black Storm Dragon'''
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-->-- liu Qing Jiangou, '''The Black Storm Dragon'''
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-->-- Liu/Qing Jin, '''"The Young Dragon"'''
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-->-- Liu/Qing Jin, '''"The '''The Young Dragon"'''
Dragon'''
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-->-- liu Jiangou, '''"The '''The Former Black Storm Dragon"'''
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-->-- liu Jiangou, '''"The '''The Black Storm Dragon'''
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-->-- Old Jiang, '''"Divine Doctor"'''
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-->-- Old Jiang, '''"Divine Doctor"'''
'''Divine Doctor'''
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-->-- Patriarch Feng Zheng '''"The Divine Flame"'''
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-->-- Patriarch Feng Zheng '''"The Zheng, '''The Divine Flame"'''
Flame'''
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-->-- ''Liu/Qing Jin, '''"The Young Dragon"'''
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-->-- ''Liu/Qing Liu/Qing Jin, '''"The Young Dragon"'''
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-->-- ''liu liu Jiangou, '''"The Former Black Storm Dragon"'''
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-->-- ''Xiao Nan, '''Prodigy of the Xiao Sect'''
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-->-- ''Xiao Xiao Nan, '''Prodigy of the Xiao Sect'''
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-->-- ''Patriarch Feng Zheng '''"The Divine Flame"'''
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-->-- ''Patriarch Patriarch Feng Zheng '''"The Divine Flame"'''
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-->-- ''Liu/Qing Jin Jin, '''"The Young Dragon"'''
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-->-- ''liu Jiangou Jiangou, '''"The Former Black Storm Dragon"'''
Dragon"'''
--> "You said your eyes would never recognize me. That's why I have given you new eyes,If these eyes still don't recognize me, we can change them. If your knees refuse to kneel, I will give you new knees. If your tongue speaks of disloyalty, I will give you a new tongue. If your heart does not beat for me, I will give you a new heart. Bit by bit, piece by piece. Until the man you were before meeting me no longer exists."
-->-- liu Jiangou, '''"The Black Storm Dragon'''
--> "You said your eyes would never recognize me. That's why I have given you new eyes,If these eyes still don't recognize me, we can change them. If your knees refuse to kneel, I will give you new knees. If your tongue speaks of disloyalty, I will give you a new tongue. If your heart does not beat for me, I will give you a new heart. Bit by bit, piece by piece. Until the man you were before meeting me no longer exists."
-->-- liu Jiangou, '''"The Black Storm Dragon'''
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-->-- ''Old Jiang Jiang, '''"Divine Doctor"'''
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Sect'''
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"A good cultivator is one who rages against the Heavens, We look at the world and find it wanting. We struggle and devour everything in our path so that we might gain the power to shape the world into our image."''
"A good cultivator is one who rages against the Heavens, We look at the world and find it wanting. We struggle and devour everything in our path so that we might gain the power to shape the world into our image."''
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"A''"A good cultivator is one who rages against the Heavens, We look at the world and find it wanting. We struggle and devour everything in our path so that we might gain the power to shape the world into our image."''
"A
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[[header: Character Conversions]]Conversions]]
[[quoteblock]]
--> ''"And what of Patriarch Feng? How does he shape the world?"''
--> ''"Child, I have already done it. This whole Eternal Flame Clan is my body, and you are in it. Now, I exist above others, so they may be forever unsatisfied that they are not in my place. That is why my good friend will never rise beyond Emperor. He is content." Patriarch Feng's eyes look into his soul. "You are not."''
-->Liu Jin flinches.
-->"I daresay you hate this."
-->"Of course I do!" Liu Jin snaps. "Who wouldn't hate it? Who wouldn't hate all of this?"
-->He waves his arm at the Eternal Flame Clan below them.
-->"You risked our lives and have not a shred of remorse. You spared Xun Huwen, not because he is your friend's grandson but because you deem him a valuable cultivator! Who are you to decide who is worth more? Why should your words matter more than everyone else's?!"
-->"Rain."
-->It rains.
-->In the blink of an eye, the sunny sky is gone, and heavy rain pours down from the heavens without stopping.
-->One word.
-->Just one word.
-->"It seems," Patriarch Feng says. "My words do matter more than yours."
-->Liu Jin does not answer.
-->Liu Jin cannot answer.
-->He can only glare at the Patriarch in impotent rage.
-->"There it is. That is a good look. If only my sons had dared to look at me like that."
-->Patriarch Feng places a hand on Liu Jin's shoulder and smiles at him like a kind grandfather.
-->"You will be a wonderful cultivator."
[[/quoteblock]]
-->-- Liu/Qing Jin and Patriarch Feng having a '''Conversation'''
[[quoteblock]]
--> ''"And what of Patriarch Feng? How does he shape the world?"''
--> ''"Child, I have already done it. This whole Eternal Flame Clan is my body, and you are in it. Now, I exist above others, so they may be forever unsatisfied that they are not in my place. That is why my good friend will never rise beyond Emperor. He is content." Patriarch Feng's eyes look into his soul. "You are not."''
-->Liu Jin flinches.
-->"I daresay you hate this."
-->"Of course I do!" Liu Jin snaps. "Who wouldn't hate it? Who wouldn't hate all of this?"
-->He waves his arm at the Eternal Flame Clan below them.
-->"You risked our lives and have not a shred of remorse. You spared Xun Huwen, not because he is your friend's grandson but because you deem him a valuable cultivator! Who are you to decide who is worth more? Why should your words matter more than everyone else's?!"
-->"Rain."
-->It rains.
-->In the blink of an eye, the sunny sky is gone, and heavy rain pours down from the heavens without stopping.
-->One word.
-->Just one word.
-->"It seems," Patriarch Feng says. "My words do matter more than yours."
-->Liu Jin does not answer.
-->Liu Jin cannot answer.
-->He can only glare at the Patriarch in impotent rage.
-->"There it is. That is a good look. If only my sons had dared to look at me like that."
-->Patriarch Feng places a hand on Liu Jin's shoulder and smiles at him like a kind grandfather.
-->"You will be a wonderful cultivator."
[[/quoteblock]]
-->-- Liu/Qing Jin and Patriarch Feng having a '''Conversation'''
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--> ''"I have no masters. Once, I had a father, a teacher and an older brother. They are dead, and nobody has taken their place. What I do have are responsabilities. Responsabilities towards the Eternal Flame Clan, towards my comrades who rely on me to lead them and towards my wife Xiao Shuang."''
-->-- ''Liu/Qing Jin '''"The Young Dragon"'''
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"A good cultivator is one who rages against the Heavens, We look at the world and find it wanting. We struggle and devour everything in our path so that we might gain the power to shape the world into our image."''
-->-- ''Patriarch Feng Zheng '''"The Divine Flame"'''
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--> '' "My fate, it seems, is to be amazing, so amazing I even scare myself."''
-->-- ''Xiao Nan '''Prodigy of the Xiao Sect "'''
-->-- ''Xiao Nan '''Prodigy of the Xiao Sect "'''
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-->-- ''liu Jiangou '''"The Former Black Storm Dragon"'''Dragon"'''
--> ''"Oh, foolish disciple of mine, if you want to be a doctor even half as good as me, you cannot be so accepting of everything. Someone who accepts everything as it is will never be extraordinary."''
-->-- ''Old Jiang '''"Divine Doctor"'''
--> ''"Oh, foolish disciple of mine, if you want to be a doctor even half as good as me, you cannot be so accepting of everything. Someone who accepts everything as it is will never be extraordinary."''
-->-- ''Old Jiang '''"Divine Doctor"'''
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-->''"When it comes to being a father, I have found pride and worry to be inexplicably linked. Now, you best reacquaint yourself with your legs. The port is a long way from here."''
--> ''liu Jiangou '''"The Former Black Storm Dragon"'''
-->''"When it comes to being a father, I have found pride and worry to be inexplicably linked. Now, you best reacquaint yourself with your legs. The port is a long way from here."''
--> ''liu Jiangou '''"The Former Black Storm Dragon"'''