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->''Four pairs of eyes were looking at me now. Mom was still towering over me, her stern expression still intact, but I could see tears in her eyes again. Dad looked like he was torn somewhere between anger and fear, the same sort of expression he had worn the time he [[AdultFear caught me eating rat poison when I was four]]. It was the girls' faces that made me feel the worst though; Minnie, still curled up in Dad's lap, and Mimmie, looking up from the pages of a children's book she had found, were both looking at me as if worried I was about to hit them.''
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->''Four pairs of eyes were looking at me now. Mom was still towering over me, her stern expression still intact, but I could see tears in her eyes again. Dad looked like he was torn somewhere between anger and fear, the same sort of expression he had worn the time he [[AdultFear caught me eating rat poison when I was four]].four. It was the girls' faces that made me feel the worst though; Minnie, still curled up in Dad's lap, and Mimmie, looking up from the pages of a children's book she had found, were both looking at me as if worried I was about to hit them.''
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->''[[ArmorPiercingQuestion "Ninten, do you think it's any coincidence you've never met anybody else that could do what you can?"]]''
->''The question confused me at first, then…''
->''I remembered what I'd been worrying on and off about since I had woken up yesterday; it may have only been indirectly mentioned by a disembodied voice in my dream, but had still hung around in the corner of my mind, waiting for a moment like this to leap out and seize me. All of my anger was almost immediately drained out, replaced by a feverish, icy feeling of fear. And with it gone, I was finally able to take in the effects of my outburst.''
->''While I had been shouting, something had been happening to my surroundings, something I wasn't even aware of until it had stopped. It was as if I had been building up some sort of charge that was humming violently in the air around the room, threatening to go off at any second. But the instant I stopped shouting, that charge had immediately vanished, replaced instead by an air that felt tense and numb.''
->''Four pairs of eyes were looking at me now. Mom was still towering over me, her stern expression still intact, but I could see tears in her eyes again. Dad looked like he was torn somewhere between anger and fear, the same sort of expression he had worn the time he [[AdultFear caught me eating rat poison when I was four]]. It was the girls' faces that made me feel the worst though; Minnie, still curled up in Dad's lap, and Mimmie, looking up from the pages of a children's book she had found, were both looking at me as if worried I was about to hit them.''
->''"I... I don't..." I stammered, unsure of what I was saying.''
-->-- ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/9920341/2/ MOTHER - The Novelization]]''
->''The question confused me at first, then…''
->''I remembered what I'd been worrying on and off about since I had woken up yesterday; it may have only been indirectly mentioned by a disembodied voice in my dream, but had still hung around in the corner of my mind, waiting for a moment like this to leap out and seize me. All of my anger was almost immediately drained out, replaced by a feverish, icy feeling of fear. And with it gone, I was finally able to take in the effects of my outburst.''
->''While I had been shouting, something had been happening to my surroundings, something I wasn't even aware of until it had stopped. It was as if I had been building up some sort of charge that was humming violently in the air around the room, threatening to go off at any second. But the instant I stopped shouting, that charge had immediately vanished, replaced instead by an air that felt tense and numb.''
->''Four pairs of eyes were looking at me now. Mom was still towering over me, her stern expression still intact, but I could see tears in her eyes again. Dad looked like he was torn somewhere between anger and fear, the same sort of expression he had worn the time he [[AdultFear caught me eating rat poison when I was four]]. It was the girls' faces that made me feel the worst though; Minnie, still curled up in Dad's lap, and Mimmie, looking up from the pages of a children's book she had found, were both looking at me as if worried I was about to hit them.''
->''"I... I don't..." I stammered, unsure of what I was saying.''
-->-- ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/9920341/2/ MOTHER - The Novelization]]''
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->'''Applejack:''' I'd say she's handing things pretty well, considering...
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->'''Applejack:''' I'd say she's handing handling things pretty well, considering...
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->'''Spike:''' ''[[ThisIsGOnnaSuck (puts on army helmet and a suit of pillows)]]'' Uh... yes?
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->'''Spike:''' ''[[ThisIsGOnnaSuck ''[[ThisIsGonnaSuck (puts on army helmet and a suit of pillows)]]'' Uh... yes?
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->'''Spike:''' Twilight, calm down. It's just a test.
->'''Twilight:''' ''Just'' a test?
->''[[OhCrap (Spike realizes what he's said)]]''
->'''Twilight:''' JUST A TEST?! Princess Celestia wants to give me some kind of exam, and you're trying to tell me to calm down because... ''IT'S JUST A '''TEST?!'''''
->'''Spike:''' ''[[ThisIsGOnnaSuck (puts on army helmet and a suit of pillows)]]'' Uh... yes?
->''(Twilight growls angrily as her horn begins to glow)''
->'''Applejack:''' I'd say she's handing things pretty well, considering...
->''([[DistantReactionShot cut to a wide shot of Ponyville]]; an explosion is heard, and the library is seen being blown sky-high)''
-->--''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', "The Crystal Empire (Part 1)"
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->'''Twilight:''' ''Just'' a test?
->''[[OhCrap (Spike realizes what he's said)]]''
->'''Twilight:''' JUST A TEST?! Princess Celestia wants to give me some kind of exam, and you're trying to tell me to calm down because... ''IT'S JUST A '''TEST?!'''''
->'''Spike:''' ''[[ThisIsGOnnaSuck (puts on army helmet and a suit of pillows)]]'' Uh... yes?
->''(Twilight growls angrily as her horn begins to glow)''
->'''Applejack:''' I'd say she's handing things pretty well, considering...
->''([[DistantReactionShot cut to a wide shot of Ponyville]]; an explosion is heard, and the library is seen being blown sky-high)''
-->--''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'', "The Crystal Empire (Part 1)"
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