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* AndNowForSomethingCompletelyDifferent: Between episode 4 and 5, we get Dan Roddlestein's Holiday Hoopla, an annual Christmas radio telephone hosted by Dan on 88.7 Classical Cleveland. Which features characters from the previous episodes, those being:
** Jennifer, who unlike her fellow girl scouts is boycotting the event (for the fourth year in the row) because the lack of other religious faiths present on the show, but does call in to give a wish list, which is more of a political rant.
** The twins, Meryl and Sheryl who perform a dance routine while singing Silent Night, and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior drawing a pentagram on the floor and then burning a small effigy of Dan.]]
** Sheila Panzerelli, who was part of a choir performance but showed up late.
** Carol, who Dan met at an amateur pottery night and performs a set of three haikus about the honey wasp.
** Diana Greasefire, performs at the piano with Dan while flirting with him the entire time, which culminates into a rendition of O Come, Old Ye Faithful, [[TheImmodestOrgasm almost literally]].
** Jennifer, who unlike her fellow girl scouts is boycotting the event (for the fourth year in the row) because the lack of other religious faiths present on the show, but does call in to give a wish list, which is more of a political rant.
** The twins, Meryl and Sheryl who perform a dance routine while singing Silent Night, and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior drawing a pentagram on the floor and then burning a small effigy of Dan.]]
** Sheila Panzerelli, who was part of a choir performance but showed up late.
** Carol, who Dan met at an amateur pottery night and performs a set of three haikus about the honey wasp.
** Diana Greasefire, performs at the piano with Dan while flirting with him the entire time, which culminates into a rendition of O Come, Old Ye Faithful, [[TheImmodestOrgasm almost literally]].
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* FormulaBreakingEpisode: Between episode 4 and 5, we get Dan Roddlestein's Holiday Hoopla, an annual Christmas radio telephone hosted by Dan on 88.7 Classical Cleveland. Which features characters from the previous episodes, those being:
** Jennifer, who unlike her fellow girl scouts is boycotting the event (for the fourth year in the row) because the lack of other religious faiths present on the show, but does call in to give a wish list, which is more of a political rant.
** The twins, Meryl and Sheryl who perform a dance routine while singing Silent Night, and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior drawing a pentagram on the floor and then burning a small effigy of Dan.]]
** Sheila Panzerelli, who was part of a choir performance but showed up late.
** Carol, who Dan met at an amateur pottery night and performs a set of three haikus about the honey wasp.
** Diana Greasefire, performs at the piano with Dan while flirting with him the entire time, which culminates into a rendition of O Come, Old Ye Faithful, [[TheImmodestOrgasm almost literally]].
** Jennifer, who unlike her fellow girl scouts is boycotting the event (for the fourth year in the row) because the lack of other religious faiths present on the show, but does call in to give a wish list, which is more of a political rant.
** The twins, Meryl and Sheryl who perform a dance routine while singing Silent Night, and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior drawing a pentagram on the floor and then burning a small effigy of Dan.]]
** Sheila Panzerelli, who was part of a choir performance but showed up late.
** Carol, who Dan met at an amateur pottery night and performs a set of three haikus about the honey wasp.
** Diana Greasefire, performs at the piano with Dan while flirting with him the entire time, which culminates into a rendition of O Come, Old Ye Faithful, [[TheImmodestOrgasm almost literally]].
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* DyeingForYourArt: Discussed in-universe,
nbyane and Luke, when the former brings up that the way they get their bruises could end up going badly one day.
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* DyeingForYourArt: Discussed in-universe,
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* DyeingForYourArt: Discussed between Dane and Luke, when the former brings up that the way they get their bruises could end up going badly one day.
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* DyeingForYourArt: Discussed between Dane in-universe,
nbyane and Luke, when the former brings up that the way they get their bruises could end up going badly one day.
nbyane and Luke, when the former brings up that the way they get their bruises could end up going badly one day.
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* CoolOldLady: Cora Delaroux, Dane's neighbour.
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* CoolOldLady: Cora Delaroux, Dane's neighbour. She seems like a generally nice person, always greeting Dan with a "howdy" when he passes her place on his way to work and bakes cakes for people, such as Luke, [[spoiler: unfortunately for Luke, she only ever does this when she has a dream of someone who is going to die.]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Cora claims to have these, [[spoiler: which is unfortunate for Luke since the people she dreams about end up dying.]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Cora claims to have these, [[spoiler: which is unfortunate for Luke since the people that when she dreams about of people[[spoiler: they end up dying.]]
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* TitleDrop: Luke referees to the shared dream that Dane and him share as Dreamboy.
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* TitleDrop: Luke referees to the shared dream that Dane and him share as Dreamboy.Dreamboy, and its the name of the song performed by The Delaroux Sisters.
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** Sheila, who was part of a choir performance but showed up late.
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** Sheila, Sheila Panzerelli, who was part of a choir performance but showed up late.
* CoolOldLady: Cora Delaroux, Dane's neighbour.
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* DeadallAlong: [[spoiler: Zoe has been dead all along. Whether she died during the incident with the boy or the incident didn't even happened to begin with is not explained, but as its pointed out, she was old.]]
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* DeadallAlong: [[spoiler: Zoe has been dead all along. Whether she died during the incident with the boy or the incident didn't even happened to begin with What caused her death is not explained, but as its pointed out, she was old.]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Cora Delaroux claims to have these, [[spoiler: which is unfortunate for Luke since the people she dreams about end up dying.]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Cora Delaroux claims to have these, [[spoiler: which is unfortunate for Luke since the people she dreams about end up dying.]]
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* TheGhost: Dan's friend Emily whose house he's staying in during the events of the story while she on vacation.
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* TheGhost: Dan's friend Emily whose house he's staying in during the events of the story while she story. Justified, since she's on vacation.
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--> ''The Delaroux Sisters''
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** The twins, Meryl and Sheryl who perform a dance routine while singing Silent Night and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior burning a small effigy of Dan.]]
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** The twins, Meryl and Sheryl who perform a dance routine while singing Silent Night Night, and [[TroublingUnchildlikeBehavior drawing a pentagram on the floor and then burning a small effigy of Dan.]]
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* GirlGroup: The Delaroux Sisters. A group from the 60s who was made of Cora's mother, her mother's friend and the friend's sister (Cora's mother had the better name), whose music is played at the Pepper Heights zoo, one of which is called [[TitleDrop Dreamboy]].
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* GirlGroup: The Delaroux Sisters. A group from the 60s who was were made up of Cora's mother, her mother's friend and the friend's sister (Cora's mother had the better name), whose music is played at the Pepper Heights zoo, one of which is called [[TitleDrop Dreamboy]].
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* OldMoney: The StoneFall's are described as this, [[SelfMadeMan John StoneFall]] having founding the Pepper Heights a hundred years ago.
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* OldMoney: The StoneFall's Stonefall's are described as this, [[SelfMadeMan John StoneFall]] Stonefall]] having founding the Pepper Heights a hundred years ago.
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* OldMoney: The StoneFall are described as this, [[SelfMadeMan John StoneFall]] having founding the Pepper Heights a hundred years ago.
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* OldMoney: The StoneFall StoneFall's are described as this, [[SelfMadeMan John StoneFall]] having founding the Pepper Heights a hundred years ago.
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* DeadallAlong: [[spoiler: Zoe has been dead all along. What she actually died off is not explained, but as its put, she was old.]]
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* CreepyChild: Jennifer and the twins are like this at times, even seeming to appear out of nowhere.
* DeadallAlong: [[spoiler: Zoe has been dead all along.What Whether she actually died off during the incident with the boy or the incident didn't even happened to begin with is not explained, but as its put, pointed out, she was old.]]
* DeadallAlong: [[spoiler: Zoe has been dead all along.
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* KillerRabbit: Killer Zebra in this case. Before Dane came to Pepper Heights, a child got into Zoe the Zebra's cage and was apparently killed by Zoe, described to have been so in a rather gruesome manner.
