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* '''Defied''': B'obh decides not to show its true form and just tells Alice it's best to not even imagine it.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** B'obh decides not to show its true form and just tells Alice it's best to not even imagineit.it.
** AFormYouAreComfortableWith
** B'obh decides not to show its true form and just tells Alice it's best to not even imagine
** AFormYouAreComfortableWith
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** B'obh's true form is just a big ball of light, [[BoringButPractical but it is a light so bright that]] [[BlindedByTheLight it makes literally anyone blind that those who see it.]]
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** B'obh's true form is just a big ball of light, [[BoringButPractical but it is a light so bright that]] [[BlindedByTheLight it makes literally anyone blind that those who see it.it go permanently blind.]]
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** B'obh's true form is just a big ball of light, [[BoringButPractical but it is a light so bright that]] [[BlindedByLight it makes literally anyone blind that those who see it.]]
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** B'obh's true form is just a big ball of light, [[BoringButPractical but it is a light so bright that]] [[BlindedByLight [[BlindedByTheLight it makes literally anyone blind that those who see it.]]
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** B'obh's true form is just a big ball of light, [[BoringButPractical but it is a light so bright that]] [[BlindedByLight it makes literally anyone blind that those who see it.]]
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* '''Enforced''': The author wants to show people in-unverse and outside that there indeed exists higher dimensional beings who transcends what the perception of all three-dimensional creatures, not just humans and humanoid species, will permit.
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** The author wants to show people in-unverse and outside that there indeed exists higher dimensional beings who transcends what the perception of all three-dimensional creatures, not just humans and humanoid species, willpermit.permit.
** The author couldn't be bothered to describe B'obh.
** The author wants to show people in-unverse and outside that there indeed exists higher dimensional beings who transcends what the perception of all three-dimensional creatures, not just humans and humanoid species, will
** The author couldn't be bothered to describe B'obh.
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** If following an aversion, people absolutely can't grasp onto a true form because B'obh has none to begin with.
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** Alternatively, B'obh has no true form to begin with.
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** B'obh's true form can't be seen in whole at one time (akin to how projections of a globe aren't fully accurate) and he always appears as bizarre three dimensional objects shifting. With his cooperation to 'rotate' around he his full form can be described mathematically. It isn't dangerous to behold but it is confusing and likely to give most who aren't familiar with higher dimensional mathematics headaches.
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** B'obh's true form can't be seen in whole at one time (akin to how projections of a globe aren't fully accurate) and he always appears as bizarre three dimensional objects shifting. shifting in ways that don't retain a consistent volume. With his cooperation to 'rotate' around he his full form can be described mathematically. It isn't dangerous to behold but it is confusing and likely to give most who aren't familiar with higher dimensional mathematics headaches.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': certain people can see the real form of B'obh's
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* '''Zig Zagged''': certain Certain people can see the real form of B'obh's
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** B'obh's true form can't be seen in whole at one time (akin to how projections of a globe aren't fully accurate) and he always appears as bizarre three dimensional objects shifting. With his cooperation to 'rotate' around he his full form can be described mathematically. It isn't dangerous to behold but it is confusing and likely to give most who aren't familiar with higher dimensional mathematics headaches.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???certain people can see the real form of B'obh's
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* '''Invoked''': B'obh places a weak PerceptionFilter on himself to prevent people from remembering his appearance.
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* '''Invoked''': B'obh places a weak PerceptionFilter on himself to prevent people from remembering his appearance.
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* '''Discussed''': "Do you believe in elder gods?" "You mean the ones that drive you insane when you look at them? Nah, those are just stories."
* '''Conversed''': "Just once, I'd like to read about an interdimensional monster that's safe for humans to look at."
* '''Conversed''': "Just once, I'd like to read about an interdimensional monster that's safe for humans to look at."
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* '''Discussed''': "Do you believe in elder gods?" "You mean the ones "Legends speak of a being so alien, that drive you insane when you look at them? Nah, those are just stories.it's very appearance is impossible for human minds to comprehend."
* '''Conversed''': "Just once, I'd like toread hear about an interdimensional monster that's safe for that humans to can actually look at."
* '''Conversed''': "Just once, I'd like to
* '''Reconstructed''': Someone is brave enough to meet B'obh in person, and finds out that it is harmless. This person then relates their encounter to the other humans, reducing the fear they have for B'obh.
* '''Implied''': B'obh only appears off-screen, and nobody is able to talk about its physical appearance.
* '''Implied''': B'obh only appears off-screen, and nobody is able to talk about its physical appearance.
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* '''Invoked''': ???B'obh places a weak PerceptionFilter on himself to prevent people from remembering his appearance.
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* '''Discussed''': ???
"Do you believe in elder gods?" "You mean the ones that drive you insane when you look at them? Nah, those are just stories."
* '''Conversed''':???"Just once, I'd like to read about an interdimensional monster that's safe for humans to look at."
* '''Conversed''':
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* '''Subverted''': B'obh was going to show their true, original form, but decided not to.
* '''Doubled Subverted''': WWW
* '''Doubled Subverted''': WWW
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* '''Subverted''': B'obh was going B'obh, a great being from beyond the stars, is assumed to show their true, original form, be imperceptible, but decided not to.
turns out to be much more normal than advertised.
* '''Doubled Subverted''':WWWB'obh then explains this as the human brain rejecting what they see in favor of something that makes more sense.
* '''Doubled Subverted''':
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** B'obh [[InformedAttribute insist's]] that people can't comprehend his true form, despite people already having seen it and tries to inform him otherwise.
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** B'obh [[InformedAttribute insist's]] insists]] that people can't comprehend his true form, despite people already having seen it and tries trying to inform him otherwise.
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* '''Parodied:''' B'obh's true form is something completely mundane or silly, like a refrigerator or a pineapple. Yet people still go insane when seeing it.
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* '''Parodied:''' '''Parodied:'''
** B'obh's true form is something completely mundane or silly, like a refrigerator or a pineapple. Yet people still go insane when seeingit.it.
** B'obh [[InformedAttribute insist's]] that people can't comprehend his true form, despite people already having seen it and tries to inform him otherwise.
** B'obh's true form is something completely mundane or silly, like a refrigerator or a pineapple. Yet people still go insane when seeing
** B'obh [[InformedAttribute insist's]] that people can't comprehend his true form, despite people already having seen it and tries to inform him otherwise.
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* '''Doubled Subverted''': But it ends up doing it anyway as Alice starts becoming [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu powerful enough to threaten it]].
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* '''Doubled Subverted''': But it ends up doing it anyway as Alice starts becoming [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu powerful enough to threaten it]].WWW
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* '''Defied''': B'obh decides not to show its true form and just tells tAlice hem it's best to not even imagine it.
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* '''Defied''': B'obh decides not to show its true form and just tells tAlice hem Alice it's best to not even imagine it.
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* '''Straight''': The true form will make people literally insane and unable to see the entirety of what they are.
* '''Exaggerated''': Not only the true form cannot be perceived, but can actually obliterate [[TheMultiverse entire universes]] whenever someone senses it.
* '''Downplayed''': The true form can be fully grasped by sufficiently powerful three-dimensional species, but weaker beings cannot.
* '''Justified''': Unlike other people, the being is a [[MoreThanThreeDimensions genuinely hyperdimensional being]], not just a human with powers of a higher dimension. Not just anyone can view the true form.
* '''Inverted''': The beings shows their true form. It wasn't making people insane and people are able to grasp and describe it.
* '''Subverted''': They were going to show their true, original form, but decided not to.
* '''Doubled Subverted''': But the person will keep bothering them, so they decided to make them permanently leave the being alone.
* '''Parodied:''' The being decides to show the true form by putting on a business outfit.
* '''Exaggerated''': Not only the true form cannot be perceived, but can actually obliterate [[TheMultiverse entire universes]] whenever someone senses it.
* '''Downplayed''': The true form can be fully grasped by sufficiently powerful three-dimensional species, but weaker beings cannot.
* '''Justified''': Unlike other people, the being is a [[MoreThanThreeDimensions genuinely hyperdimensional being]], not just a human with powers of a higher dimension. Not just anyone can view the true form.
* '''Inverted''': The beings shows their true form. It wasn't making people insane and people are able to grasp and describe it.
* '''Subverted''': They were going to show their true, original form, but decided not to.
* '''Doubled Subverted''': But the person will keep bothering them, so they decided to make them permanently leave the being alone.
* '''Parodied:''' The being decides to show the true form by putting on a business outfit.
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* '''Straight''': The [[EldritchAbomination B'obh's]] true form will make people literally insane and unable to see the entirety of what they are.
* '''Exaggerated''': Not onlythe B'obh's true form cannot be perceived, but can actually obliterate [[TheMultiverse entire universes]] whenever someone senses it.
* '''Downplayed''':The B'obh's true form can be fully grasped by sufficiently powerful three-dimensional species, but weaker beings cannot.
* '''Justified''': Unlike other people,the being B'obh is a [[MoreThanThreeDimensions genuinely hyperdimensional being]], not just a human with powers of a higher dimension. Not just anyone can view the true form.
* '''Inverted''':The beings B'obh shows their its true form. It wasn't making people insane and people are able to grasp and describe it.
* '''Subverted''':They were B'obh was going to show their true, original form, but decided not to.
* '''Doubled Subverted''': Butthe person will keep bothering them, so they decided it ends up doing it anyway as Alice starts becoming [[DidYouJustPunchOutCthulhu powerful enough to make them permanently leave the being alone.
threaten it]].
* '''Parodied:'''The being decides to show the B'obh's true form by putting on is something completely mundane or silly, like a business outfit.refrigerator or a pineapple. Yet people still go insane when seeing it.
* '''Exaggerated''': Not only
* '''Downplayed''':
* '''Justified''': Unlike other people,
* '''Inverted''':
* '''Subverted''':
* '''Doubled Subverted''': But
* '''Parodied:'''
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* '''Averted''': Nobody's true form is imperceptible to each other.
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* '''Averted''': Nobody's B'obh's true form is not imperceptible to each other.at all.
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* '''Exploited''': Because the true form cannot be grasped, the being cannot be perceptible, and can attack without retaliation against it.
* '''Defied''': The being decides not to show their true form and just tell them it's best to not even imagine it.
* '''Defied''': The being decides not to show their true form and just tell them it's best to not even imagine it.
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* '''Exploited''': Because the B'obh's true form cannot be grasped, the being it cannot be perceptible, and can attack without retaliation against it.
* '''Defied''':The being B'obh decides not to show their its true form and just tell them tells tAlice hem it's best to not even imagine it.
* '''Defied''':
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because of this being's higher-dimensional nature should they be shown what they actually look like, they are only approachable in their true form by other inherently hyperdimensional beings.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Because of this being's higher-dimensional nature should they be shown what they B'obh is actually look like, they are only approachable in their true form by other inherently hyperdimensional beings. not a malevolent entity, but because regular beings cannot perceive it as anything else but an incomprehensible abomination, it ends up being hated and feared.