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* '''Inverted''': TheImmodestOrgasm
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* '''Inverted''': TheImmodestOrgasmWhen Bob gives his rival Claire an orgasm, [[TheImmodestOrgasm she straight up bellows like a beast]].
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[[TheModestOrgasm Hm]]. That's it, for real. I'm done.
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[[TheModestOrgasm Hm]]. That's it, for real. Hm]], that's it. For real, I'm done.
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* '''Inverted''':
** TheImmodestOrgasm
* '''Subverted''':
** Alice looks by body language like she had an orgasm, so Bob finishes his business... then she comes loudly.
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ... but it was fake, she had it before.
** TheImmodestOrgasm
* '''Subverted''':
** Alice looks by body language like she had an orgasm, so Bob finishes his business... then she comes loudly.
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ... but it was fake, she had it before.
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* '''Inverted''':
**'''Inverted''': TheImmodestOrgasm
*'''Subverted''':
**'''Subverted''': Alice looks by body language like she had an orgasm, so Bob finishes his business... then she comes loudly.
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** ...Subverted''': ... but it was fake, she had it before.
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** Bob mistakenly takes it as a sign that Alice doesn't enjoy sex with him and stops iniciating, putting a strain in the relationship.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice and Bob express what they think in a conversation and their sex life goes back to normal, quiet orgasms and all.
** Bob mistakenly takes it as a sign that Alice doesn't enjoy sex with him and stops iniciating, putting a strain in the relationship.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice and Bob express what they think in a conversation and their sex life goes back to normal, quiet orgasms and all.
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* '''Deconstructed''':
**'''Deconstructed''': Bob mistakenly takes it as a sign that Alice doesn't enjoy sex with him and stops iniciating, putting a strain in the relationship.
*'''Reconstructed''':
**'''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob express what they think in a conversation and their sex life goes back to normal, quiet orgasms and all.
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[[TheModestOrgasm Hm]] That's it, for real, I'm done
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[[TheModestOrgasm Hm]] That's Hm]]. That's it, for real, I'm donedone.
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* '''Enforced''': Alice is portraited as a "pure girl", so she's shown as ladylike even in sex.
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* '''Enforced''': Alice is portraited portrayed as a "pure girl", so she's shown as ladylike even in sex.
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** CoitusUninterruptus during wich Alice looks straight up bored.
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** CoitusUninterruptus during wich which Alice looks straight up bored.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice's orgasm is quiet, but not unnoticible quiet - some small moans and gasping .
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice's orgasm is quiet, but not unnoticible quiet - some small moans and gasping .gasping.
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** They have roommates or children/the neighbours have complained, so Alice is holding back on porpuse.
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** They have roommates or children/the neighbours have complained, so Alice is holding back on porpuse.purpose.
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[[TheModestOrgasm , hm]] That's it, for real, I'm done
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** TheImodestOrgasm
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** TheImodestOrgasmTheImmodestOrgasm
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** Bob asks if Alice came and she says yes and compliments him in clear BlantantLies. Bob doesn't get it.
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** Bob asks if Alice came and she says yes and compliments him in clear BlantantLies.BlatantLies. Bob doesn't get it.
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'''Basic Trope''': When a woman is having sex, it's rather quiet.
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'''Basic Trope''': When a woman is having sex, an orgasm, it's rather quiet.
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'''Basic Trope''': When a woman is having sex, it's rather quiet.
* '''Straight''': Bob gives Alice an orgasm, and she barely makes a sound.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice not only doesn't make a sound when having sex, she barely moves, and her face doesn't change. If you pan to shoulders up, it can't even be told she's having sex, let alone having an orgasm.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice's orgasm is quiet, but not unnoticible quiet - some small moans and gasping .
* '''Justified''':
** That's just the way Alice is.
** She's not really having an orgasm.
** They have roommates or children/the neighbours have complained, so Alice is holding back on porpuse.
* '''Inverted''':
** TheImodestOrgasm
* '''Subverted''':
** Alice looks by body language like she had an orgasm, so Bob finishes his business... then she comes loudly.
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ... but it was fake, she had it before.
* '''Parodied''':
** CoitusUninterruptus during wich Alice looks straight up bored.
** Bob asks if Alice came and she says yes and compliments him in clear BlantantLies. Bob doesn't get it.
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''':
** Alice doesn't orgasm during sex.
** The orgasm is actually done realistically.
* '''Enforced''': Alice is portraited as a "pure girl", so she's shown as ladylike even in sex.
* '''Lampshaded''':
** Bob asks if Alice came, Alice says "yes" honestly, and Bob comments he can never tell.
* '''Invoked''':
** Alice comments that every woman is different, so some being quiet isn't abnormal.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''':
** Bob mistakenly takes it as a sign that Alice doesn't enjoy sex with him and stops iniciating, putting a strain in the relationship.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice and Bob express what they think in a conversation and their sex life goes back to normal, quiet orgasms and all.
* '''Implied''': ???
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice's quietness is talked about and treated as something regular... then we hear [[TheImmodestOrgasm her voice coming from the neighbour's house]]
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob doesn't feels like Alice just can't orgasm with him, but like he's straight up forcing himself on her, leading to lots of self loathing.
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[[TheModestOrgasm , hm]] That's it, for real, I'm done
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* '''Straight''': Bob gives Alice an orgasm, and she barely makes a sound.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice not only doesn't make a sound when having sex, she barely moves, and her face doesn't change. If you pan to shoulders up, it can't even be told she's having sex, let alone having an orgasm.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice's orgasm is quiet, but not unnoticible quiet - some small moans and gasping .
* '''Justified''':
** That's just the way Alice is.
** She's not really having an orgasm.
** They have roommates or children/the neighbours have complained, so Alice is holding back on porpuse.
* '''Inverted''':
** TheImodestOrgasm
* '''Subverted''':
** Alice looks by body language like she had an orgasm, so Bob finishes his business... then she comes loudly.
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ... but it was fake, she had it before.
* '''Parodied''':
** CoitusUninterruptus during wich Alice looks straight up bored.
** Bob asks if Alice came and she says yes and compliments him in clear BlantantLies. Bob doesn't get it.
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''':
** Alice doesn't orgasm during sex.
** The orgasm is actually done realistically.
* '''Enforced''': Alice is portraited as a "pure girl", so she's shown as ladylike even in sex.
* '''Lampshaded''':
** Bob asks if Alice came, Alice says "yes" honestly, and Bob comments he can never tell.
* '''Invoked''':
** Alice comments that every woman is different, so some being quiet isn't abnormal.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''':
** Bob mistakenly takes it as a sign that Alice doesn't enjoy sex with him and stops iniciating, putting a strain in the relationship.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice and Bob express what they think in a conversation and their sex life goes back to normal, quiet orgasms and all.
* '''Implied''': ???
* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice's quietness is talked about and treated as something regular... then we hear [[TheImmodestOrgasm her voice coming from the neighbour's house]]
* '''Played For Drama''': Bob doesn't feels like Alice just can't orgasm with him, but like he's straight up forcing himself on her, leading to lots of self loathing.
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[[TheModestOrgasm , hm]] That's it, for real, I'm done
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