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* '''Exploited''': The military recriuts teens because unleashing them as they are is more effective than having to train non teen soldiers at causing death and destruction.
* '''Defied''': Alice tries her best to be a good daughter for her parents, a good sister for her siblings, and a good student for her teachers.
* '''Defied''': Alice tries her best to be a good daughter for her parents, a good sister for her siblings, and a good student for her teachers.
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* '''Exploited''': The military recriuts recruits teens because unleashing them as they are is more effective than having to train non teen soldiers at causing death and destruction.
* '''Defied''': Alice tries her best to be a good daughter for her parents, a good sister for her siblings,and a good student for her teachers.teachers, and a good friend to her classmates.
* '''Defied''': Alice tries her best to be a good daughter for her parents, a good sister for her siblings,
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** Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
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** Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority. [[GoodIsNotNice She's still not that much of a nice person though.]]
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* '''Subverted''': Alice dresses like a rebel and is always listening to rap and heavy metal music on her headphones, but she does all her chores, takes good care of her little siblings, and is overall a good person, [[GoodIsNotNice albeit not particularly nice]].
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* '''Subverted''': Alice dresses like a rebel and is always listening to rap and heavy metal music on her headphones, but she does all her chores, takes good care of her little siblings, and is overall a good person, [[GoodIsNotNice albeit not particularly nice]].person.
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** Teenagers have raging hormones but their pre-frontal cortex is yet to develop
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** Teenagers have raging hormones but their pre-frontal cortex is yet to developdevelop.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice dresses like a rebel and is always listening to rap and heavy metal music on her headphones, but she does all her chores, takes good care of her little siblings, and is overall a good person.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice dresses like a rebel and is always listening to rap and heavy metal music on her headphones, but she does all her chores, takes good care of her little siblings, and is overall a good person.person, [[GoodIsNotNice albeit not particularly nice]].
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice looks like a rebel, but she listens to her parents and volunteers at her church. But at night, she gets drunk and vandalizes public property. But she feels bad for this the next day and turns herself in and agrees to repair the damage she's done.
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** Alice looks like a rebel, but she listens to her parents and volunteers at her church. But at night, she gets drunk and vandalizes public property. But she feels bad for this the next day and turns herself in and agrees to repair the damage she'sdone.done.
** Alice varies between levels of angst. She is definitely rebellious but she has a damn good reason to be and is fighting against evil. Not being rebellious would mean condoning horrible things.
** Teenaged characters are all over the map. Alice is the typical rebellious example. Bob is a BitchInSheepsClothing who appears to be nice but is actually evil. Charles looks the part but is cheerful, respectful, does good and puts most adults to shame. Daina is certainly rebellious and angsty but is essentially a living saint - most of her angst is related to not being able to help enough people.
** Alice looks like a rebel, but she listens to her parents and volunteers at her church. But at night, she gets drunk and vandalizes public property. But she feels bad for this the next day and turns herself in and agrees to repair the damage she's
** Alice varies between levels of angst. She is definitely rebellious but she has a damn good reason to be and is fighting against evil. Not being rebellious would mean condoning horrible things.
** Teenaged characters are all over the map. Alice is the typical rebellious example. Bob is a BitchInSheepsClothing who appears to be nice but is actually evil. Charles looks the part but is cheerful, respectful, does good and puts most adults to shame. Daina is certainly rebellious and angsty but is essentially a living saint - most of her angst is related to not being able to help enough people.
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** Teens are [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Jerks With A Heart Of Gold]].
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** Teens are [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Jerks With A Heart Of Gold]].Gold]] or at least have [[EvenEvilHasStandards certain lines they don't cross.]]
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* '''Straight''': Alice, the 16 year old girl, becomes a JerkAss who rebels against authority, gets drunk at parties, and picks on her little siblings.
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* '''Straight''': Alice, the 16 year old girl, becomes a JerkAss {{Jerkass}} who rebels against authority, gets drunk at parties, and picks on her little siblings.
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* '''Downplayed''': Teens are kinda thoughtless.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Teens are kindathoughtless.thoughtless.
** Teens are [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Jerks With A Heart Of Gold]].
** Teens are apathetic, [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]], [[TheCynic cynical]], and [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] if not outright cruel.
** Teens are kinda
** Teens are [[JerkWithAHeartOfGold Jerks With A Heart Of Gold]].
** Teens are apathetic, [[ItsAllAboutMe selfish]], [[TheCynic cynical]], and [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]] if not outright cruel.
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** Alice acts like a monster, gets caught, punished, and learns not to do that anymore.
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** Alice acts like a monster, gets caught, punished, and learns not to do that anymore. ([[ChronicVillainy Or does she?]])
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** "We know teens are total bitches. [[DesignatedHero We need a main character that appeals to them]]."
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** "We know teens are [[ViewersAreMorons total bitches.bitches]]. [[DesignatedHero We need a main character that appeals to them]]."
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* '''Enforced''': "We know that teenagers are hard to deal with. Let's create a character that reflects this."
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** "We know teens are total bitches. [[DesignatedHero We need a main character that appeals to them]]."
** "We know that teenagers are hard to deal with. Let's create a character that reflects this."
** "We know teens are total bitches. [[DesignatedHero We need a main character that appeals to them]]."
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** Alice is a teenager, trying to transitions into being an adult while still being treated like a kid. She rebels against authority to give herself a sense of power and breaks the rules to prove that she can make her own decisions.
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** Alice is a teenager, trying to transitions transition into being an adult while still being treated like a kid. She rebels against authority to give herself a sense of power and breaks the rules to prove that she can make her own decisions.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice is a good teenager, always listens to her parents, volunteers at the homeless shelter during the weekend, and helps anyone in need.
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice is a good teenager, always listens to her parents, volunteers at the homeless shelter during the weekend, and helps anyone inneed.need.
** The teenagers are the only sensible characters in a world of [[SocialServicesDoesNotExist monstrous adults]].
** Alice is a good teenager, always listens to her parents, volunteers at the homeless shelter during the weekend, and helps anyone in
** The teenagers are the only sensible characters in a world of [[SocialServicesDoesNotExist monstrous adults]].
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** Alice is the [[BigBad main antagonist]] of the story; her rebellious and possibly outright sociopathic behavior poses a real and severe threat to those around her.
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** [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}s
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** [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}sAre Monsters]]
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* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going againstauthority.authority.
** Alice acts like a monster, gets caught, punished, and learns not to do that anymore.
** Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against
** Alice acts like a monster, gets caught, punished, and learns not to do that anymore.
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** On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap and heavy metal music]].
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** On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap and heavy metal music]].
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???The military recriuts teens because unleashing them as they are is more effective than having to train non teen soldiers at causing death and destruction.
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* '''Justified''': Teens have less life experience than most adults but are expected to act as mautre. The contrast is not always flattering.
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* '''Justified''': Teens have less life experience than most adults but are expected to act as mautre. The contrast is not always flattering.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???
Teens are kinda thoughtless.
* '''Justified''': Teens have less life experience than most adults but are expected to act as mautre. The contrast is not always flattering.
* '''Justified''': Teens have less life experience than most adults but are expected to act as mautre. The contrast is not always flattering.
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* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap and heavy metal music]].
* '''UpToEleven''': [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}s
* '''UpToEleven''': [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}s
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap and heavy metal music]].
* '''UpToEleven''': ** [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}s
** On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap and heavy metal music]].
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* '''Justified''': Alice is a teenager, trying to transistion into being an adult while still being treated like a kid. She rebels against authority to give herself a sense of power and breaks the rules to prove that she can make her own decisions.
** Teenagers have raging hormones but their prefrontal cortex is yet to develop
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* '''Justified''': '''Downplayed''': ???
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** Alice is a teenager, trying totransistion transitions into being an adult while still being treated like a kid. She rebels against authority to give herself a sense of power and breaks the rules to prove that she can make her own decisions.
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** Teenagers have raging hormones but their
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* '''Parodied''': All teenagers are evil overlords trying to TakeOverTheWorld.
** Or the the teens are literal monsters, once a child reaches the age of 13 they become a bloodthirsty demon until the reach their mid twenties, when they become [[AdultsAreUseless somewhat apathetic adults]]
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is a terrible teenager, never listening to authority, breaking several laws, and never going to any of her classes. She alienates herself from her family and her friends and all of her teachers have given up on her a long time ago. Her behavior causes her parents to kick her out of the house. Without a home or friends to rely on, and without any skills or qualifications to get a decent job, she resorts to a life of crime. She is thrown in prison, where she dies alone.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
** Or the the teens are literal monsters, once a child reaches the age of 13 they become a bloodthirsty demon until the reach their mid twenties, when they become [[AdultsAreUseless somewhat apathetic adults]]
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is a terrible teenager, never listening to authority, breaking several laws, and never going to any of her classes. She alienates herself from her family and her friends and all of her teachers have given up on her a long time ago. Her behavior causes her parents to kick her out of the house. Without a home or friends to rely on, and without any skills or qualifications to get a decent job, she resorts to a life of crime. She is thrown in prison, where she dies alone.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** All teenagers are evil overlords trying toTakeOverTheWorld.
TakeOverTheWorld.
**Or the the The teens are literal monsters, once a child reaches the age of 13 they become a bloodthirsty demon until the reach their mid twenties, when they become [[AdultsAreUseless somewhat apathetic adults]]
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is a terrible teenager, never listening to authority, breaking several laws, and never going to any of her classes. She alienates herself from her family and her friends and all of her teachers have given up on her a long time ago. Her behavior causes her parents to kick her out of the house. Without a home or friends to rely on, and without any skills or qualifications to get a decent job, she resorts to a life of crime. She is thrown in prison, where she dies alone.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.adults]]
** All teenagers are evil overlords trying to
**
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is a terrible teenager, never listening to authority, breaking several laws, and never going to any of her classes. She alienates herself from her family and her friends and all of her teachers have given up on her a long time ago. Her behavior causes her parents to kick her out of the house. Without a home or friends to rely on, and without any skills or qualifications to get a decent job, she resorts to a life of crime. She is thrown in prison, where she dies alone.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': Alice is a terrible teenager, never listening to authority, breaking several laws, and never going to any of her classes. She alienates herself from her family and her friends and all of her teachers have given up on her a long time ago. Her behavior causes her parents to kick her out of the house. Without a home or friends to rely on, and without any skills or qualifications to get a decent job, she resorts to a life of crime. She is thrown in prison, where she dies alone.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice discovers that growing up is hard. She's tired of being treated as a kid, so she rebels, which causes her to be treated even more as a kid. Alice eventually learns that growing up means getting along with others, but does not necessarily mean blindly following authority all the time. As a result, she becomes a rebel who learns when it's right to listen to authority and when not to, but is always considerate of other people and will help them out whenever they are in need, even if that means going against authority.
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* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap music]].
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* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap and heavy metal music]].
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* '''Subverted''': Alice dresses like a rebel and is always listening to rap music on her headphones, but she does all her chores, takes good care of her little siblings, and is overall a good person.
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* '''Subverted''': Alice dresses like a rebel and is always listening to rap and heavy metal music on her headphones, but she does all her chores, takes good care of her little siblings, and is overall a good person.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I'm a teenager! I'm supposed to be a bitch and this is what I will be, [[ForTheEvulz BECAUSE I FUCKING CAN!}}"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I'm a teenager! I'm supposed to be a bitch and this is what I will be, [[ForTheEvulz BECAUSE I FUCKING CAN!}}"CAN!]]"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I'm a teenager! I'm supposed to act this way!"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "I'm a teenager! I'm supposed to act be a bitch and this way!"is what I will be, [[ForTheEvulz BECAUSE I FUCKING CAN!}}"
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* '''Conversed''': "Teenages "Teenagers are so horrible in this show."
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** Teenagers have raging hormones yet but their prefrontal cortex is yet to developdevelop
** Adolescence provides an opportunity to let out one's psychologically repressed and latent behaviours ([[FreudWasRight for instance, sexuality]])
** Adolescence provides an opportunity to let out one's psychologically repressed and latent behaviours ([[FreudWasRight for instance, sexuality]])
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* '''Straight''': Alice, the 16 year old girl, rebels against authority, gets drunk at parties, and picks on her little siblings.
* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to rap music]].
** Or rather, Alice actually ''does'' turn into a CompleteMonster!
* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to rap music]].
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* '''Straight''': Alice, the 16 year old girl, becomes a JerkAss who rebels against authority, gets drunk at parties, and picks on her little siblings.
* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap music]].
* '''UpToEleven''': [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}s
** Or rather,Alice actually ''does'' turn into a CompleteMonster! All Teens ''[[LiteralMetaphor Are]]'' [[AndThenJohnWasAZombie Monsters!]]
* '''Exaggerated''': On top of all that, Alice joins a gang, robs stores, mugs old ladies, [[KickTheDog kicks several small puppies]], and [[MurderArsonAndJaywalking listens to gangsta rap music]].
* '''UpToEleven''': [[TeenageWasteland All Teens Are]] {{Complete Monster}}s
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** Or rather, Alice actually ''does'' turn into a monster! CompleteMonster!
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** Or rather, Alice actually ''does'' turn into a monster!
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** Or the the teens are literal monsters, once a child reaches the age of 13 they become a bloodthirsty demon until the reach their mid twenties, when they become [[AdultsAreUseless: [[AdultsAreUseless somewhat apathetic adults]]
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** Or the the teens are literal monsters, once a child reaches the age of 13 they become a bloodthirsty demon until the reach their mid twenties, when they become [[AdultsAreUseless: somewhat apathetic adults]]