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** "Pay attention to the road, a car could suddenly pop-up at full speed before we get this pane of glass to the other side."
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** The glass speeds though the car, breaking the latter.
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** The car misses a sheet of glass but drives into a second sheet of glass in front of the first one.
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* '''Implied''': Bob and Alice are carrying the pane of glass, with the next shot being a car chase. The next shot is a shot of them being fired.
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* '''Implied''': Bob and Alice are carrying the pane of glass, with the next shot being a car chase. The next shot is a shot of them being fired.
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** All the cars bother and manage to dodge the glass.
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** All the cars bother and manage to dodge the glass.
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** There is a organization completely devoted to carrying sheets of glass across to the other side of that road, the sheets breaking is a common occurrence.
** Alice and Bob, experienced window repairmen, are carrying a sheet of glass when they hear car chase sounds from distance, and panic.
** Alice and Bob, experienced window repairmen, are carrying a sheet of glass when they hear car chase sounds from distance, and panic.
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** There is a an organization completely devoted to carrying sheets of glass across to the other side of that road, the sheets breaking is a common occurrence.
** Alice and Bob, experienced window repairmen, are carrying a sheet of glass when they hear car chase soundsfrom in the distance, and panic.
** Alice and Bob, experienced window repairmen, are carrying a sheet of glass when they hear car chase sounds
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** Claire deliberately crashes into the sheet, using the millions of shards of flying glass to [[EyeScream blind their pursuers]], who are in a convertible.
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** Claire deliberately crashes into the sheet, using the millions of shards of flying glass to [[EyeScream blind their her pursuers]], who are in a convertible.
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** The car misses the glass sheet, and turns around to try again, and keeps doing so until he finally hits it.
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** The car misses the glass sheet, and turns around to try again, and keeps doing so until he it finally hits it.
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** The car misses the glass, much to Alice and Bob's relief. Then they proceed to throw it into the trash, breaking it.
