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** Sally orgasms in the middle of her fight with Master Death
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** Sally orgasms in the middle of her fight with Master DeathDeath.
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** As a side effect of the experiments that gave Sally powers, her [=pleasure/pain/empathy/shadenfreud=] impulses have been altered causing arousal during a fight.
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** As a side effect of the experiments that gave Sally powers, her [=pleasure/pain/empathy/shadenfreud=] pleasure/pain/empathy/schadenfreude impulses have been altered causing arousal during a fight.
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* '''Conversed''': "'''NO''' I '''DO NOT''' need to see close up pleasure faces during a fight scene what the fuck?"
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* '''Conversed''': "'''NO''' I '''DO NOT''' need to see close up pleasure faces during a fight scene scene, what the fuck?"
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* '''Downplayed''': Sally smirks when given a thinly veiled threat, as if she was hit on.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Sally smirks when given a thinly veiled threat, as if she was hiton.on.
** InterplayOfSexAndViolence
** Sally smirks when given a thinly veiled threat, as if she was hit
** InterplayOfSexAndViolence
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** Master Death immediately [[IHaveYouKnowMyPretty immediately tries to jump Sally's bones after defeating her]]... only to find out Sally is not only ''willing'' to be ravished by him, she's ''begging'' for it.
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** Master Death immediately [[IHaveYouKnowMyPretty [[IHaveYouNowMyPretty immediately tries to jump Sally's bones after defeating her]]... only to find out Sally is not only ''willing'' to be ravished by him, she's ''begging'' for it.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Sally gains an uncontrollable urge to masturbate during a verbal dispute.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Sally gains an uncontrollable urge to masturbate during a verbal dispute.
** Sally gains an uncontrollable urge to masturbate during a verbal dispute.
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** Master Death immediately [[IHaveYouKnowMyPretty immediately tries to jump Sally's bones after defeating her]]... only to find out Sally is not only ''willing'' to be ravished by him, she's ''begging'' for it.
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* '''Downplayed''': Sally begins to think about ThePowerOfFriendship while fighting Master Death with a creepy level of interest, but nothing sexual.
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* '''Downplayed''': Sally begins to think about ThePowerOfFriendship while fighting Master Death with smirks when given a creepy level of interest, but nothing sexual.thinly veiled threat, as if she was hit on.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character becomes sexually aroused when fighting
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'''Basic Trope''': A character becomes sexually aroused when fightingfighting.
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* '''Defied''': ???
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* '''Defied''': ???Sally thinks this will distract her, and decides to ThinkUnsexyThoughts.
* '''Implied''': Sally's grunts while fighting sound oddly sexual, and she licks some blood of her blade, but it's not clear why.
* '''Deconstructed''': Sally's arousal while fighting makes her a liability, and she is taken away from the fighting to be psychologically evaluated.
* '''Reconstructed''': Sally learns to turn it off while in a high-stakes fight, and fulfills her desires by playfighting with her lover.
* '''Deconstructed''': Sally's arousal while fighting makes her a liability, and she is taken away from the fighting to be psychologically evaluated.
* '''Reconstructed''': Sally learns to turn it off while in a high-stakes fight, and fulfills her desires by playfighting with her lover.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???"'''NO''' I '''DO NOT''' need to see close up pleasure faces during a fight scene what the fuck?"
* '''Played For Laughs''': Sally and Bob get into an argument, when Bob threatens to hurt Sally she acts frisky as if they were about to hook up. Bob angrily explains that they are not about to sex while Sally keeps acting as though they are.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Sally and Bob get into an argument, when Bob threatens to hurt Sally she acts frisky as if they were about to hook up. Bob angrily explains that they are not about to sex while Sally keeps acting as though they are.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character becomes sexually aroused when fighting
* '''Straight''': As [[MyKungFuIsStrongerThanYours Sally Manderine]] [[AnimalThemedSuperbeing "Sallymander"]] and [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Master]] [[MyKungFuIsStrongerThanYours Death]] trade blows, Sally begins monologuing about how aroused she is.
* '''Exaggerated''': Sally gains an uncontrollable urge to masturbate during a verbal dispute.
** Sally orgasms in the middle of her fight with Master Death
* '''Downplayed''': Sally begins to think about ThePowerOfFriendship while fighting Master Death with a creepy level of interest, but nothing sexual.
* '''Justified''': Sally is mentally unstable CombatSadomasochist with a HealingFactor.
** As a side effect of the experiments that gave Sally powers, her [=pleasure/pain/empathy/shadenfreud=] impulses have been altered causing arousal during a fight.
* '''Inverted''': Sally finds herself increasingly aroused whenever she isn't fighting.
** Sally becomes disgusted when fighting.
* '''Subverted''': Sally claims she is aroused as a means of throwing off Master Death.
* '''Double Subverted''': ... But she actually is.
* '''Parodied''': Sally begins dueling with her trainer behind closed doors. Fellow students flock by the dojo believed they are actually having sex. Turns out they're both {{Combat Sadomasochist}}s
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': Sally is not aroused by fighting.
* '''Enforced''': "We need a quirk that's often PlayedForLaughs"
* '''Lampshaded''': "Sally's kinda hot, but I wish she'd stop moaning every time we sparred. It's creepy"
* '''Invoked''': "We need to make the fight scene between Master Death and Sally interesting..."
* '''Exploited''': Emperor Evulz recruits Sally and makes her his TortureTechnician. Since she enjoys harming people, it works as a means of psychological torture on her would-be victims.
* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Straight''': As [[MyKungFuIsStrongerThanYours Sally Manderine]] [[AnimalThemedSuperbeing "Sallymander"]] and [[NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast Master]] [[MyKungFuIsStrongerThanYours Death]] trade blows, Sally begins monologuing about how aroused she is.
* '''Exaggerated''': Sally gains an uncontrollable urge to masturbate during a verbal dispute.
** Sally orgasms in the middle of her fight with Master Death
* '''Downplayed''': Sally begins to think about ThePowerOfFriendship while fighting Master Death with a creepy level of interest, but nothing sexual.
* '''Justified''': Sally is mentally unstable CombatSadomasochist with a HealingFactor.
** As a side effect of the experiments that gave Sally powers, her [=pleasure/pain/empathy/shadenfreud=] impulses have been altered causing arousal during a fight.
* '''Inverted''': Sally finds herself increasingly aroused whenever she isn't fighting.
** Sally becomes disgusted when fighting.
* '''Subverted''': Sally claims she is aroused as a means of throwing off Master Death.
* '''Double Subverted''': ... But she actually is.
* '''Parodied''': Sally begins dueling with her trainer behind closed doors. Fellow students flock by the dojo believed they are actually having sex. Turns out they're both {{Combat Sadomasochist}}s
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': Sally is not aroused by fighting.
* '''Enforced''': "We need a quirk that's often PlayedForLaughs"
* '''Lampshaded''': "Sally's kinda hot, but I wish she'd stop moaning every time we sparred. It's creepy"
* '''Invoked''': "We need to make the fight scene between Master Death and Sally interesting..."
* '''Exploited''': Emperor Evulz recruits Sally and makes her his TortureTechnician. Since she enjoys harming people, it works as a means of psychological torture on her would-be victims.
* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
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%% * '''Played For Horror''': ???
