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* '''Exaggerated''':
** Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some having several.
** Sailor Bob has a wife and family in every one of the dozens of ports his ship stops at.
** Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some having several.
** Sailor Bob has a wife and family in every one of the dozens of ports his ship stops at.
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* '''Exaggerated''':
** Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some having several.
**'''Exaggerated''': Sailor Bob has [[AGirlInEveryPort a wife and family in every one of the dozens of ports his ship stops at.port]].
** Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some having several.
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* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California. Neither families know about the other.
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* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California. Neither families know family knows about the other.
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* '''Justified''': Bob fell for Carol and had a daughter with her, despite still being with Alice and already having another child, but he seems to love both women too much to leave the other.
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* '''Justified''': Bob fell for Carol and had a daughter with her, despite still being with Alice and already having another child, but he seems to love both women too much to leave the other.either one.
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** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol knowing about Bob’s relation to the other ([[SelectiveObliviousness or refusing to consider the very obvious possibility]]).
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** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol knowing knows about Bob’s relation to the other ([[SelectiveObliviousness or refusing to consider the very obvious possibility]]).
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** When Alice and Carol find out, they are both angry at Bob with them resolving to leave Bob and taking their respective kids with them.
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, [[ParentalNeglect who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him]].
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, [[ParentalNeglect who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him]].
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** When Alice and Carol find out, they are both angry at Bob Bob, with them resolving to leave Bob and taking their respective kids with them.
** Bob’s frequent business tripsleads lead to issues with his children Dave and Esther, [[ParentalNeglect who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him]].
** Bob’s frequent business trips
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob [[LukeYouAreMyFather recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship]], though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing having another child.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Bob [[LukeYouAreMyFather recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship]], though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing having anotherchild.child.
** Bob reveals that he got his now ex-girlfriend pregnant.
** Bob [[LukeYouAreMyFather recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship]], though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing having another
** Bob reveals that he got his now ex-girlfriend pregnant.
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** ...but they aren’t aware of Bob’s ''[[ReallyGetsAround third]]'' wife Juanita, who lives in Canada with their twins.
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** ...but they aren’t aware of Bob’s ''[[ReallyGetsAround third]]'' [[ReallyGetsAround third]] wife Juanita, who lives in Canada with their twins.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some having several.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some havingseveral. several.
** Sailor Bob has a wife and family in every one of the dozens of ports his ship stops at.
** Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family, some having
** Sailor Bob has a wife and family in every one of the dozens of ports his ship stops at.
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* '''Conversed''': ???
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* '''Conversed''': ???Bob asks his wife Alice how she would feel if she found out Bob had another family she didn’t know about. Alice laughs off the question stating that wouldn’t happen in real life since it’s too much work for one to handle for so long.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice thinks that Bob has another wife and child when she accidentally spots all them together. [[RelativeError Turns out she’s actually his cousin Haley and her child Isaac]]. But it turns out that Bob does another wife and child - Carol and their daughter Esther. However, Carol is divorced from Bob and had been for a while by the time he met Alice. Then, another woman claims to be pregnant with Bob’s child.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice thinks that Bob has another wife and child when she accidentally spots all them together. [[RelativeError Turns out she’s actually his cousin Haley and her child Isaac]]. Isaac]], both of whom Alice has never met. But it turns out that Bob does have another wife and child - Carol and their daughter Esther. However, Carol is divorced from Bob and had been for a while by the time he met Alice. Then, another woman claims to be pregnant with Bob’s child.
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** Dave and Esther meet, fall in love, and [[BrotherSisterIncest start having sex with each other]] [[SurpriseIncest without knowing that they're related]].
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** ...because he has a girlfriend with a baby on the way.
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** ...[[ExactWords because he has a girlfriend with a baby on the way.way]].
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** ...but they aren’t aware of Bob’s ''third'' wife Juanita, who lives in Canada with their twins.
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** ...but they aren’t aware of Bob’s ''third'' ''[[ReallyGetsAround third]]'' wife Juanita, who lives in Canada with their twins.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing having another child.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob [[LukeYouAreMyFather recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, relationship]], though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing having another child.
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** Alice visits Bob on one of these trips, suspecting him of cheating, only to discover he does actually have a business trip there without any ulterior motives...
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** Alice visits Bob on one of these trips, [[MistakenForCheating suspecting him of cheating, cheating]], only to discover he does actually have a business trip there without any ulterior motives...
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** ...because his second wife and child don't live in that state, but in the neighboring one.
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** ...[[RightForTheWrongReasons because his second wife and child don't live in that state, but in the neighboring one.one]].
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** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol knowing about Bob’s relation to the other.
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** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol knowing about Bob’s relation to the other.other ([[SelectiveObliviousness or refusing to consider the very obvious possibility]]).
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice thinks that Bob has another wife and child when she accidentally spots all them together. Turns out she’s actually his cousin Haley and her child Isaac. But it turns out that Bob does another wife and child - Carol and their daughter Esther. However, Carol is divorced from Bob and had been for a while by the time he met Alice. Then, another woman claims to be pregnant with Bob’s child.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': Alice thinks that Bob has another wife and child when she accidentally spots all them together. [[RelativeError Turns out she’s actually his cousin Haley and her child Isaac.Isaac]]. But it turns out that Bob does another wife and child - Carol and their daughter Esther. However, Carol is divorced from Bob and had been for a while by the time he met Alice. Then, another woman claims to be pregnant with Bob’s child.
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** Bob is in a polygamous marriage to Alice and Carol with all parties living together under the same roof without any secrets between them.
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** Bob is [[{{Polyamory}} in a polygamous marriage to Alice and Carol Carol]] with all parties living together under the same roof without any secrets between them.
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* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, who had another family with another woman while still married to Bob’s mother, and remains faithful to his family.
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* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to [[IAmNotMyFather end up like his father, father]], [[FreudianExcuse who had another family with another woman while still married to Bob’s mother, mother]], and remains faithful to his family.
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** When Alice and Carol find out, they are both angry at Bob with both resolving to leave Bob and take their respective kids with them.
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him.
* '''Played For Drama''':
** Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, but can’t find the courage.
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him.
* '''Played For Drama''':
** Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, but can’t find the courage.
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** When Alice and Carol find out, they are both angry at Bob with both them resolving to leave Bob and take taking their respective kids with them.
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, [[ParentalNeglect who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention fromhim.
him]].
* '''Played ForDrama''':
**Drama''': Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, [[CannotSpitItOut but can’t find the courage.
courage]].
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, [[ParentalNeglect who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from
* '''Played For
**
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** Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, but can’t find the courage.
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** Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, but can’t find the courage.courage.
Go back to [[SecretOtherFamily Secret Other Family but don’t tell them.]]
Go back to [[SecretOtherFamily Secret Other Family but don’t tell them.]]
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* '''Lampshaded''': “Bob, you don’t have another family I am unaware about when you go on these trips?” “No, dear, that only happens on TV.”
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* '''Lampshaded''': “Bob, you don’t have another family I am unaware about when you go on these trips?” trips, do you?” “No, dear, that only happens on TV.”
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing have another child.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet because he’s still processing have having another child.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet. yet because he’s still processing have another child.
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** Carol is married to another man who isn’t Bob, who is the father of her daughter Esther.
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** Carol is Bob has only been married to another man who isn’t Bob, who is the father of her Carol, with whom he has a daughter Esther.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family.family, some having several.
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** Alice is the one with the secret family, marrying a second husband, keeping up a another household, having a second job, and having dozens of children with her second husband without her first husband and other children suspecting a thing.
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** Alice is the one with the secret family, marrying a second husband, keeping up a another household, having working a second job, and having dozens of children with her second husband without her first husband and other children suspecting a thing.
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** Both Bob’s families are aware of the other despite Bob taking great lengths to avoid their meeting...
** ...but they aren’t aware of Bob’s ''third'' wife Juanita, who lives in Canada with their twins.
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** Carol is married to another man, who’s the father of her daughter Esther.
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** Carol is married to another man, who’s man who isn’t Bob, who is the father of her daughter Esther.Esther.
** Bob is in a polygamous marriage to Alice and Carol with all parties living together under the same roof without any secrets between them.
** Bob is in a polygamous marriage to Alice and Carol with all parties living together under the same roof without any secrets between them.
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** ...except his second wife and child don't live in that state, but in the neighboring one.
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** ...except because his second wife and child don't live in that state, but in the neighboring one.
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** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol know about Bob’s relation to the other.
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** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol know knowing about Bob’s relation to the other.
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* '''Exploited''': Carol’s brother Greg learns that Bob already has another wife and child and blackmails him.
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* '''Exploited''': Carol’s brother Greg learns that Bob already has another wife and child and blackmails him.him into leaving them.
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'''Basic Trope''': A man with a family has another family with the others knowing.
* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California.
* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California.
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'''Basic Trope''': A man with a family has another family with without the others knowing.
* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California. Neither families know about the other.
* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California. Neither families know about the other.
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* '''Gender-Inverted''': Alice has a secret husband and other child.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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** Alice is the one with the secret family, marrying a second husband, keeping up a another household, having a second job, and having dozens of children with her second husband without her first husband and other children suspecting a thing.
* '''Zig Zagged''':???Alice thinks that Bob has another wife and child when she accidentally spots all them together. Turns out she’s actually his cousin Haley and her child Isaac. But it turns out that Bob does another wife and child - Carol and their daughter Esther. However, Carol is divorced from Bob and had been for a while by the time he met Alice. Then, another woman claims to be pregnant with Bob’s child.
* '''Zig Zagged''':
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, who left the family for another woman, and remains faithful to his family.
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, who left the family for another woman, and remains faithful to his family.
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
“Bob, you don’t have another family I am unaware about when you go on these trips?” “No, dear, that only happens on TV.”
* '''Invoked''':???
Bob, in order to divorce Alice, claims he has a second wife.
* '''Exploited''':???
Carol’s brother Greg learns that Bob already has another wife and child and blackmails him.
* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, wholeft the family for had another woman, family with another woman while still married to Bob’s mother, and remains faithful to his family.
* '''Invoked''':
* '''Exploited''':
* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, who
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'''Basic Trope''': A man with a family has another family with the others knowing.
* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California.
* '''Exaggerated''': Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family.
* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet.
* '''Justified''': Bob fell for Carol and had a daughter with her, despite still being with Alice and already having another child, but he seems to love both women too much to leave the other.
* '''Gender-Inverted''': Alice has a secret husband and other child.
* '''Subverted''':
** Bob doesn’t have another wife and child...
** Alice visits Bob on one of these trips, suspecting him of cheating, only to discover he does actually have a business trip there without any ulterior motives...
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ...because he has a girlfriend with a baby on the way.
** ...except his second wife and child don't live in that state, but in the neighboring one.
* '''Parodied''':
** Bob’s second family lives next door and yet no one ever figures out Bob’s secret.
** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol know about Bob’s relation to the other.
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''':
** Bob has only been married to Alice, with whom he has one son Dave.
** Carol is married to another man, who’s the father of her daughter Esther.
* '''Enforced''': The network wanted a more dramatic subplot for Bob, whose convenient job as a business executive always out of town, provided an explanation for the storyline.
* '''Lampshaded''': ???
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, who left the family for another woman, and remains faithful to his family.
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''':
** When Alice and Carol find out, they are both angry at Bob with both resolving to leave Bob and take their respective kids with them.
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him.
* '''Played For Drama''':
** Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, but can’t find the courage.
* '''Straight''': Traveling business executive Bob has a wife Alice and a son Dave in New York, while also having a second wife Carol and daughter Esther in California.
* '''Exaggerated''': Almost everyone in the cast has a secret other family.
* '''Downplayed''': Bob recently learned he has a daughter Fiona through a previous relationship, though hasn’t told his wife yet.
* '''Justified''': Bob fell for Carol and had a daughter with her, despite still being with Alice and already having another child, but he seems to love both women too much to leave the other.
* '''Gender-Inverted''': Alice has a secret husband and other child.
* '''Subverted''':
** Bob doesn’t have another wife and child...
** Alice visits Bob on one of these trips, suspecting him of cheating, only to discover he does actually have a business trip there without any ulterior motives...
* '''Double Subverted''':
** ...because he has a girlfriend with a baby on the way.
** ...except his second wife and child don't live in that state, but in the neighboring one.
* '''Parodied''':
** Bob’s second family lives next door and yet no one ever figures out Bob’s secret.
** Bob’s second family lives ''with'' the first family but neither Alice nor Carol know about Bob’s relation to the other.
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''':
** Bob has only been married to Alice, with whom he has one son Dave.
** Carol is married to another man, who’s the father of her daughter Esther.
* '''Enforced''': The network wanted a more dramatic subplot for Bob, whose convenient job as a business executive always out of town, provided an explanation for the storyline.
* '''Lampshaded''': ???
* '''Invoked''': ???
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Defied''': Bob doesn’t want to end up like his father, who left the family for another woman, and remains faithful to his family.
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''':
** When Alice and Carol find out, they are both angry at Bob with both resolving to leave Bob and take their respective kids with them.
** Bob’s frequent business trips leads to issues with his children Dave and Esther, who feel that they aren’t getting the proper attention from him.
* '''Played For Drama''':
** Bob wants to come clean about the other family to both his wives, but can’t find the courage.