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** Carlos wonders for a few seconds about outsourcing Alexi's death, but then decides it's best for him to do it himself so he never writes the letter to Bjorn.
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** Alexi has done her absolute damnedest to be the perfect subordinate to Carlos because [[YouHaveFailedMe she's afraid of being killed for any failures]], and she's still killed anyway for [[MisplacedRetribution errors that are completely beyond her control]], she did not know about and were completely inconsequential, or worse yet, [[ForThe
Evulz because Carlos thought it would be a cool gag]]. The moment Bjorn pulls out his gun to shoot her in the head, Alexi's face showcases her immense disappointment that her efforts were AllForNothing.
Evulz because Carlos thought it would be a cool gag]]. The moment Bjorn pulls out his gun to shoot her in the head, Alexi's face showcases her immense disappointment that her efforts were AllForNothing.
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** Alexi has done her absolute damnedest to be the perfect subordinate to Carlos because [[YouHaveFailedMe she's afraid of being killed for any failures]], and she's still killed anyway for [[MisplacedRetribution errors that are completely beyond her control]], she did not know about and were completely inconsequential, or worse yet, [[ForThe
Evulz[[ForTheEvulz because Carlos thought it would be a cool gag]]. The moment Bjorn pulls out his gun to shoot her in the head, Alexi's face showcases her immense disappointment that her efforts were AllForNothing.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Bjorn is shocked and disgusted by Carlos' request but still regretfully proceeds with killing Alexi.
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* '''Played For Drama''': Drama''':
** Bjorn is shocked and disgusted by Carlos' request but still regretfully proceeds with killingAlexi.Alexi.
** Alexi has done her absolute damnedest to be the perfect subordinate to Carlos because [[YouHaveFailedMe she's afraid of being killed for any failures]], and she's still killed anyway for [[MisplacedRetribution errors that are completely beyond her control]], she did not know about and were completely inconsequential, or worse yet, [[ForThe
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* '''Played For Horror''': Unknown to Alexi, Bjorn is Carlos' SnuffFilm dealer and the letter reads "I want you to make her a 'star'."
** Bjorn is shocked and disgusted by Carlos' request but still regretfully proceeds with killing
** Alexi has done her absolute damnedest to be the perfect subordinate to Carlos because [[YouHaveFailedMe she's afraid of being killed for any failures]], and she's still killed anyway for [[MisplacedRetribution errors that are completely beyond her control]], she did not know about and were completely inconsequential, or worse yet, [[ForThe
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* '''Played For Horror''': Unknown to Alexi, Bjorn is Carlos' SnuffFilm dealer and the letter reads "I want you to make her a 'star'."
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* '''Downplayed''': The letter instructs Bjorn that while they prefer that he didn't he still has permission to drain Alexi if [[IDidWhatIHadToDo necessary to prepare for a threat that could kill billions]].
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** The letter instructs Bjorn that while they prefer that he didn't he still has permission to drain Alexi if [[IDidWhatIHadToDo necessary to prepare for a threat that could killbillions]].billions]].
** The letter instructs Bjorn to imprison Alexi.
** The letter instructs Bjorn to break Alexi's legs.
** The letter instructs Bjorn that while they prefer that he didn't he still has permission to drain Alexi if [[IDidWhatIHadToDo necessary to prepare for a threat that could kill
** The letter instructs Bjorn to imprison Alexi.
** The letter instructs Bjorn to break Alexi's legs.
** Alexi is TheStarscream and Carlos wants her out of the way.
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** Bjorn reads the letter, tells Alexi what's going on, and then uses the death threat as leverage to recruit him.
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** Bjorn reads the letter, tells Alexi what's going on, and then uses the death threat as leverage to recruit him.her.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-topfashion.fashion.
** Carlos requests that Bjorn to slap Alexi in the face or call her an idiot.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bjorn is shocked and disgusted by Carlos' request but still regretfully proceeds with killing Alexi.
** Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top
** Carlos requests that Bjorn to slap Alexi in the face or call her an idiot.
* '''Played For Drama''': Bjorn is shocked and disgusted by Carlos' request but still regretfully proceeds with killing Alexi.
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** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.
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* '''Played For Laughs''':
** Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.
** Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.
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* '''Played For Laughs''':
**Laughs''': Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.fashion.
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** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.
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** The letter ends "P.S., shoot the woman who delivers this", and Bjorn immediately does so. Then he reads further; "P.P.S., change of plan, that woman's been taken care of. This one's my niece, I think you two would really hit it off!"
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** The letter ends "P.S., shoot the woman who delivers this", and Bjorn immediately does so. Then he reads further; "P.P.S., change of plan, that woman's been taken care of. This one's is my niece, I think you two would really hit it off!"
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-topfashion.fashion.
** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.
** Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top
** Dave writes a letter that mentions at the bottom to shoot whoever delivered this message, and asks Carlos to deliver it to Bjorn through Alexi. Carlos takes a look at the letter, then shoots Dave.
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* '''Exploited''': This is used as a SecretTestOfCharacter. "Alexi" is really a robot decoy that would detonate when shot.
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* '''Exploited''': '''Exploited''':
** This is used as a SecretTestOfCharacter. "Alexi" is really a robot decoy that would detonate whenshot.shot.
** Bjorn reads the letter, tells Alexi what's going on, and then uses the death threat as leverage to recruit him.
** This is used as a SecretTestOfCharacter. "Alexi" is really a robot decoy that would detonate when
** Bjorn reads the letter, tells Alexi what's going on, and then uses the death threat as leverage to recruit him.
* '''Reconstructed''': Dave takes the letter and Alexi is RewardedAsATraitorDeserves.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
* '''Played For Laughs''': Carlos requests in the letter that Alexi be killed in a very specific, over-the-top fashion.
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** Alexi takes a sneak peek of the letter, and throws it away. "Phew, that CouldHaveBeenMessy."
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* '''Implied''': Alexi has recently pissed Carlos off, but doesn't think he knows about it. She's sent to deliver a letter to Bjorn, who the viewers know [[DramaticIrony (but Alexi doesn't)]] is Carlos' [[HiredKillers wet work guy]], and the last shot of the episode is her entering Bjorn's office and shutting the door behind her. Neither Alexi, nor the contents of that letter, are ever discussed again.
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* '''Implied''': Alexi has recently pissed Carlos off, but doesn't think he knows about it. She's sent to deliver a letter to Bjorn, who the viewers know [[DramaticIrony (but Alexi doesn't)]] is Carlos' [[HiredKillers [[HiredGuns wet work guy]], and the last shot of the episode is her entering Bjorn's office and shutting the door behind her. Neither Alexi, nor the contents of that letter, are ever discussed again.
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** Carlos receives word from Bjorn that "P.S. [[SpySpeak The invoice came in from the pest control company - please pay the account due when you can.]]" In reality, though, Alice [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal became]] or [[DoubleAgent was always]] an ally of Bjorn, who [[FakingTheDead arranged it to look like he killed Alexi]] so that he himself remained out of Carlos' suspicions.
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** Carlos receives word from Bjorn that "P.S. [[SpySpeak The invoice came in from the pest control company - please pay the account due when you can.]]" In reality, though, Alice Alexi [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal became]] or [[DoubleAgent was always]] an ally of Bjorn, who [[FakingTheDead arranged it to look like he killed Alexi]] so that he himself remained out of Carlos' suspicions.
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* '''Subverted''': Bjorn looks up at Alexi and hesitates, his hand hovering over his gun. Then he says "I'd run far away if I were you. Seems your boss wants you dead."
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** Bjorn looks up at Alexi and hesitates, his hand hovering over his gun. Then he says "I'd run far away if I were you. Seems your boss wants you dead.""
** Carlos receives word from Bjorn that "P.S. [[SpySpeak The invoice came in from the pest control company - please pay the account due when you can.]]" In reality, though, Alice [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal became]] or [[DoubleAgent was always]] an ally of Bjorn, who [[FakingTheDead arranged it to look like he killed Alexi]] so that he himself remained out of Carlos' suspicions.
** Bjorn looks up at Alexi and hesitates, his hand hovering over his gun. Then he says "I'd run far away if I were you. Seems your boss wants you dead.
** Carlos receives word from Bjorn that "P.S. [[SpySpeak The invoice came in from the pest control company - please pay the account due when you can.]]" In reality, though, Alice [[MistreatmentInducedBetrayal became]] or [[DoubleAgent was always]] an ally of Bjorn, who [[FakingTheDead arranged it to look like he killed Alexi]] so that he himself remained out of Carlos' suspicions.
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** Bjorn finds offing the messenger [[EvenEvilHasStandards too petty or not becoming of their not-quite-legal-but-still-respectable organization]], so he offers Alexi protection and employment with him instead. He also suggests that this is [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse an offer she would be unwise to refuse]].
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** Bjorn finds offing the messenger [[EvenEvilHasStandards too petty or not becoming unbecoming of their not-quite-legal-but-still-respectable organization]], so he offers Alexi protection and employment with him instead. He also suggests that this is [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse an offer she would be unwise to refuse]].
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alexi is suspicious of Carlos' intentions and reads the letter before delivering it. After reading 'P.S. Please, kill the messenger' Alexi decides to bring the letter to Dave, Carlos enemy.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alexi is suspicious of Carlos' intentions and reads the letter before delivering it. After reading 'P.S. Please, kill the messenger' Alexi decides to bring the letter to Dave, Carlos Carlos' enemy.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alexi is suspicious of Carlos' intentions and reads the letter before delivering it. After reading 'P.S. Please, kill the messenger' Alexi decides to bring the letter to Dave, Carlos enemy.
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** The letter contains sensitive information which is too important to risk Alexi knowing about lest she fall into enemy hands and have the secret extracted by torture. The killing is an unfortunate but necessary precaution. (Or, at least it's seen that way by the characters.)
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** The letter contains sensitive information which is too important to risk Alexi knowing about lest she fall into enemy hands and have the secret extracted by torture. The killing is deemed an unfortunate but necessary precaution. (Or, at least it's seen that way by the characters.)
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** The letter contains sensitive information which is too important to risk Alexi knowing about lest she fall into enemy hands and have the secret extracted by torture. The killing is an unfortunate but necessary precaution.
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** The letter contains sensitive information which is too important to risk Alexi knowing about lest she fall into enemy hands and have the secret extracted by torture. The killing is an unfortunate but necessary precaution. (Or, at least it's seen that way by the characters.)
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* '''Justified''': Alexi and Bjorn work for rival gangs. Alexi's boss Carlos knew there was a danger of the [[ShootTheMessenger messenger getting killed]] ''anyway'', so he sent someone he wanted dead.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Alexi and Bjorn work for rival gangs. Alexi's boss Carlos knew there was a danger of the [[ShootTheMessenger messenger getting killed]] ''anyway'', so he sent someone he wanteddead.dead.
** The letter contains sensitive information which is too important to risk Alexi knowing about lest she fall into enemy hands and have the secret extracted by torture. The killing is an unfortunate but necessary precaution.
** Alexi and Bjorn work for rival gangs. Alexi's boss Carlos knew there was a danger of the [[ShootTheMessenger messenger getting killed]] ''anyway'', so he sent someone he wanted
** The letter contains sensitive information which is too important to risk Alexi knowing about lest she fall into enemy hands and have the secret extracted by torture. The killing is an unfortunate but necessary precaution.
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* '''Subverted''': Bjorn looks up a Alexi and hesitates, his hand hovering over his gun. Then he says "I'd run far away if I were you. Seems your boss wants you dead."
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* '''Subverted''': Bjorn looks up a at Alexi and hesitates, his hand hovering over his gun. Then he says "I'd run far away if I were you. Seems your boss wants you dead."
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** "P.S. I've poisoned Alexi without her knowing. Please give her this antidote once she delivers your letter."
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** "P.S. I've poisoned Alexi without her knowing. knowing, as I suspect she might be misdirecting my messages. Please give her this antidote once should she delivers your letter.deliver this letter in a timely fashion."
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* '''Conversed''': ???"Wouldn't it make more sense to get somebody ''else'' to deliver that message?"
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* '''Inverted''': "It says you're here to kill me." "Seemed polite to warn you." *BLAM*
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** "It says you're here to kill me." "Seemed polite to warn you."*BLAM**BLAM*
** "P.S. I've poisoned Alexi without her knowing. Please give her this antidote once she delivers your letter."
** "It says you're here to kill me." "Seemed polite to warn you."
** "P.S. I've poisoned Alexi without her knowing. Please give her this antidote once she delivers your letter."
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* '''Exploited''': This is used as a SecretTestOfCharacter. Alexi's robot decoy that would detonate when shot.
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* '''Exploited''': This is used as a SecretTestOfCharacter. Alexi's "Alexi" is really a robot decoy that would detonate when shot.
* '''Implied''': Alexi has recently pissed Carlos off, but doesn't think he knows about it. She's sent to deliver a letter to Bjorn, who the viewers know [[DramaticIrony (but Alexi doesn't)]] is Carlos' [[HiredKillers wet work guy]], and the last shot of the episode is her entering Bjorn's office and shutting the door behind her. Neither Alexi, nor the contents of that letter, are ever discussed again.
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* '''Parodied''': Mercury Couriers demand a Messenger Execution Deposit up front.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** Mercury Couriers demand a Messenger Execution Deposit upfront.front.
** The letter ends "P.S., shoot the woman who delivers this", and Bjorn immediately does so. Then he reads further; "P.P.S., change of plan, that woman's been taken care of. This one's my niece, I think you two would really hit it off!"
** Mercury Couriers demand a Messenger Execution Deposit up
** The letter ends "P.S., shoot the woman who delivers this", and Bjorn immediately does so. Then he reads further; "P.P.S., change of plan, that woman's been taken care of. This one's my niece, I think you two would really hit it off!"
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* '''Enforced''': The writers want to reinforce the bleak AnyoneCanDie tone and Carlos' ruthlessness, so they give minor recurring messenger Alexi ADeathInTheLimelight.
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* '''Enforced''': The writers want to reinforce the bleak AnyoneCanDie tone and Carlos' ruthlessness, so they give [[MauveShirt minor recurring messenger messenger]] Alexi ADeathInTheLimelight.
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** Bjorn finds offing the messenger [[EvenEvilHasStandards too petty or not becoming of their not-quite-legal-but-still-respectable organization]], so he offers Alexi protection and employment with him instead. He also suggests this would be [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse she would be unwise to refuse]].
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** Bjorn finds offing the messenger [[EvenEvilHasStandards too petty or not becoming of their not-quite-legal-but-still-respectable organization]], so he offers Alexi protection and employment with him instead. He also suggests that this would be is [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse an offer she would be unwise to refuse]].
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* '''Defied''': Alexi slides the letter under the door. "If there's anything in there about killing me, just know I've got a SawnOffShotgun pointing at your office door right now. You can send your own reply to Carlos; I'm getting out of this cutthroat business while I can."
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Alexi slides the letter under the door. "If there's anything in there about killing me, just know I've got a SawnOffShotgun pointing at your office door right now. You can send your own reply to Carlos; I'm getting out of this cutthroat business while I can."
** Alexi slides the letter under the door. "If there's anything in there about killing me, just know I've got a SawnOffShotgun pointing at your office door right now. You can send your own reply to Carlos; I'm getting out of this cutthroat business while I can."
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* '''Invoked''': ???Alexi [[HeKnowsTooMuch knows too much]] about something Carlos is doing, but she doesn't realize that. Carlos does, but he gets Bjorn to do it by UriahGambit in order to keep his hands clean.
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** Bjorn finds offing the messenger [[EvenEvilHasStandards too petty or not becoming of their not-quite-legal-but-still-respectable organization]], so he offers Alexi protection and employment with him instead. He also suggests this would be [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse she would be unwise to refuse]].
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* '''Exploited''': This is used as a HiddenTestOfCharacter. Alexi's robot decoy that would detonate when shot.
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* '''Exploited''': This is used as a HiddenTestOfCharacter.SecretTestOfCharacter. Alexi's robot decoy that would detonate when shot.
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Click here to go back to [[PleaseShootTheMessenger Please Shoot the Messen-]] *[[KilledMidSentence BLAM]]*
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Click here to go back to [[PleaseShootTheMessenger Please {{Please Shoot the Messen-]] The Mess|enger}}- *[[KilledMidSentence BLAM]]*
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* '''Downplayed''': The letter instructs Bjorn that while they prefer that he didn't he still has permission to drain Alexi if [[IDidWhatIHadToDo necessary to prepare for a threat that could kill billions]].
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* '''Exploited''': ???This is used as a HiddenTestOfCharacter. Alexi's robot decoy that would detonate when shot.
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Back to PleaseShootTheMessenger.
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