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** After having proven her incompetence one time too many, she is barred from furthering her training as a pilot.
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** After having proven her incompetence one time too many, she is barred from furthering her training as a pilot, and is forced to move on.
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** Alice is simply incompetent in general, and piloting is just one of the many things she sucks at.
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* '''Defied''': Knowing she's horrible at flying, Alice never pursues it in the first place.
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** After having proven her incompetence one time too many, she is barred from furthering her training as a pilot.
** Knowing she's horrible at flying, Alice never pursues it in the first
** After having proven her incompetence one time too many, she is barred from furthering her training as a pilot.
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** The audience is sick of never seeing Alice achieve anything, DarknessInducedAudienceApathy ensues and the show is cancelled.
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** The audience is sick of never seeing Alice achieve anything, DarknessInducedAudienceApathy TooBleakStoppedCaring ensues and the show is cancelled.
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* '''Enforced''': The story is an allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing your]] TragicDream.
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* '''Enforced''': The story is an allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing your]] giving up your TragicDream.
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** The audience is sick of never seeing Alice achieve anything, DarknessInducedAudienceApathy ensues and the show is cancelled.
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* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Played For Drama''': ???Alice runs herself ragged trying to pass flight training, but the stress and repeated failures take their toll on a psyche that ''cannot'' admit to the possibility that she can't do this.
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* '''Played Straight''': Alice really wants to be a pilot, but has no talent for it and cannot fly [[HardWorkHardlyWorks no matter how hard she tries]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has only ever dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has only ever dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
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* '''Played Straight''': Alice is passionate about flying and really wants to be a pilot, but has no talent for it and cannot fly [[HardWorkHardlyWorks no matter how hard she tries]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice hasonly ever dreamt for every waking hour of being a pilot for her whole life, since she was born, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has
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* '''Inverted''': Alice is TheAce, and cannot be bothered about flying.
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* '''Inverted''': Alice is TheAce, the AcePilot, and cannot be bothered about flying.
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???
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* '''Lampshaded''': ???"I know you're really passionate about flying, but maybe it's just not your thing."
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** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] medical procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream.
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** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] medical procedures AppliedPhlebotinum in the hope that she can pursue her dream.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character deeply desires to be part of a certain field, but has no talent for it.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character deeply desires to be part of a certain field, become something, but has no talent for it.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has only ever dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
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** Alice suffers from a severe case of [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADHD]] that makes it very difficult for her to safely operate a plane.
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** Alice suffers from a severe serious case of [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADHD]] that makes it very difficult for her to safely operate a plane.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches on fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches on fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her get near to.
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** Alice suffers from a severe case of ADHD that makes it very difficult for her to safely operate a plane.
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** Alice suffers from a severe case of ADHD [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny ADHD]] that makes it very difficult for her to safely operate a plane.
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** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to pilot and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal accident.
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** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to pilot and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal serious accident.
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** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] medical procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
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* '''Reconstructed''': ???
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** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] medical procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
dream.
* '''Reconstructed''':???Alice comes to terms with her lack of talent, and while she still hopes and trains hard to become a pilot someday, she acknowledges and is accepting of the fact that she may never become one.
* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Everyone screams and [[OhCrap runs for their lives]] when Alice steps onto the airfield.
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* '''PlayedForLaughs''': Everyone screams and [[OhCrap runs for their lives]] when Alice steps onto the airfield.
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** Alice has extremely poor eyesight, and cannot have the medical clearance to fly.
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** Alice has extremely poor eyesight, and this DreamCrushingHandicap means she cannot have the medical clearance to fly.
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** Alice is passionate about flying, [[{{Determinator}} tries very hard]] to become a competent pilot, but [[HardWorkHardlyWorks hardly goes anywhere despite her efforts]] and the help she gets. Realizing that she likely will never become one, Alice sinks into a long depression.
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** Alice is passionate about flying, and [[{{Determinator}} tries very hard]] to become a competent pilot, but [[HardWorkHardlyWorks hardly goes anywhere despite her efforts]] and the help she gets. Realizing that she likely will never become one, Alice sinks into a long depression.
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** Having failed to become a pilot [[HardWorkHardlyWorks after trying so hard for so long]], Alice becomes a bitter [[TheResenter resenter]] and GreenEyedMonster towards her more successful friends, and her relationships with them sours.
** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
* '''Reconstructed''':
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** Having failed to become a pilot [[HardWorkHardlyWorks after trying so hard for so long]], Alice becomes a bitter [[TheResenter bitter resenter]] and GreenEyedMonster towards her more successful friends, and her relationships with them sours.
** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] medical procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
*'''Reconstructed''':'''Reconstructed''': ???
** Alice in her desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] medical procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
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** Alice suffers from a severe case of ADHD that makes it very difficult for her to safely fly a plane.
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** Alice suffers from a severe case of ADHD that makes it very difficult for her to safely fly operate a plane.
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* '''Discussed''': "To see a passionate person go nowhere with their passions because they don't have the talent for it...It's really sad."
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* '''Discussed''': "To see a passionate person go nowhere with their passions because they don't have the talent for it...it. It's really sad."
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** Alice [[{{Determinator}} tries very hard]] to become a competent pilot, but [[HardWorkHardlyWorks hardly goes anywhere despite her efforts]] and the help she gets. Realizing that she likely will never become one, Alice sinks into a long depression.
** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to fly and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal accident.
** Having failed to become a pilot after trying so hard for so long, Alice becomes TheResenter and a GreenEyedMonster and breaks off her friendship with her close friends who succeeded.
** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to fly and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal accident.
** Having failed to become a pilot after trying so hard for so long, Alice becomes TheResenter and a GreenEyedMonster and breaks off her friendship with her close friends who succeeded.
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** Alice is passionate about flying, [[{{Determinator}} tries very hard]] to become a competent pilot, but [[HardWorkHardlyWorks hardly goes anywhere despite her efforts]] and the help she gets. Realizing that she likely will never become one, Alice sinks into a long depression.
** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability tofly pilot and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal accident.
** Having failed to become a pilot [[HardWorkHardlyWorks after trying so hard for solong, long]], Alice becomes TheResenter a bitter [[TheResenter resenter]] and a GreenEyedMonster towards her more successful friends, and breaks off her friendship relationships with them sours.
** Alice in herclose friends who succeeded.desperation tries dangerous [[{{Transhumanism}} transhumanist]] procedures in the hope that she can pursue her dream once again.
* '''Reconstructed''':
** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to
** Having failed to become a pilot [[HardWorkHardlyWorks after trying so hard for so
** Alice in her
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* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her eighth year of training for her basic private pilot license [[note]]The most basic flying license[[/note]].
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* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her eighth year of training for her basic private pilot license [[note]]The license[[note]]The most basic flying license[[/note]].
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* '''Played For Drama''':
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* '''Deconstructed''':
** Alice [[{{Determinator}} tries very hard]] to become a competent pilot, but [[HardWorkHardlyWorks hardly goes anywhere despite her efforts]] and the help she gets. Realizing that she likely will never become one, Alice sinks into a long depression.
** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to fly and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal accident.
** Having failed to become a pilot after trying so hard for so long, Alice becomes TheResenter and a GreenEyedMonster and breaks off her friendship with her close friends who succeeded.
* '''Played ForDrama''':Drama''': ???
** Alice [[{{Determinator}} tries very hard]] to become a competent pilot, but [[HardWorkHardlyWorks hardly goes anywhere despite her efforts]] and the help she gets. Realizing that she likely will never become one, Alice sinks into a long depression.
** She keeps training to become a pilot despite her lack of ability to fly and the risks of her flying, and eventually gets into a fatal accident.
** Having failed to become a pilot after trying so hard for so long, Alice becomes TheResenter and a GreenEyedMonster and breaks off her friendship with her close friends who succeeded.
* '''Played For
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches on fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her touch.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she flies in the simulator catches on fire before they even leave the ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her touch.get near to.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice's performance varies wildly; sometimes she'll be an astounding acrobatic [[TheAce ace]], and sometimes she'll fail to even start the plane.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice's performance varies wildly; sometimes she'll be an astounding acrobatic prodigious [[TheAce ace]], and sometimes she'll fail to even start the plane.
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* '''Enforced''': The story is an allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing your dreams]].
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* '''Enforced''': The story is an allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing your dreams]].your]] TragicDream.
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* '''Defied''': ???
* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her fifth year of training for her private pilot license.
* '''Discussed''': "It's really sad to see a passionate person go nowhere with their passions because they don't have the talent for it."
* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her fifth year of training for her private pilot license.
* '''Discussed''': "It's really sad to see a passionate person go nowhere with their passions because they don't have the talent for it."
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* '''Defied''': ???
Knowing she's horrible at flying, Alice never pursues it in the first place.
* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in herfifth eighth year of training for her basic private pilot license.
license [[note]]The most basic flying license[[/note]].
* '''Discussed''':"It's really sad to "To see a passionate person go nowhere with their passions because they don't have the talent for it.it...It's really sad."
* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her
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* '''Played For Drama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
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* '''Played For Drama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."Drama''':
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* '''Parodied''': ???
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* '''Enforced''': The story is an allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing dreams]].
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* '''Enforced''': The story is an allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing your dreams]].
* '''Lampshaded''': ???
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* '''Discussed''': "It's really sad to see a passionate person go nowhere with their passion because they weren't born with the talent for it."
* '''PlayedForDrama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
* '''PlayedForDrama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
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* '''Discussed''': "It's really sad to see a passionate person go nowhere with their passion passions because they weren't born with don't have the talent for it."
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* '''Played For Drama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
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* '''Played For Drama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she touches catches on fire before they even leave the ground.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she touches flies in the simulator catches on fire before they even leave the ground.ground, let alone real aircraft which they are wary of letting her touch.
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** Alice has extremely poor eyesight.
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** Alice has extremely poor eyesight.eyesight, and cannot have the medical clearance to fly.
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* '''ZigZagged''': Alice's performance varies wildly; sometimes she'll be an astounding acrobatic [[TheAce ace]], and sometimes she'll fail to even start the plane.
* '''Averted''': Alice is a competent pilot, and is on her way to flying better aircraft.
* '''Enforced''': The story delivers an {{Aesop}} about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing dreams]].
* '''Averted''': Alice is a competent pilot, and is on her way to flying better aircraft.
* '''Enforced''': The story delivers an {{Aesop}} about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing dreams]].
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* '''ZigZagged''': '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice's performance varies wildly; sometimes she'll be an astounding acrobatic [[TheAce ace]], and sometimes she'll fail to even start the plane.
* '''Averted''': Alice is a competent pilot, and is on her way toflying better aircraft.
a professional career of flying.
* '''Enforced''': The storydelivers is an {{Aesop}} allegory about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing dreams]].dreams]].
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* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her fifth year of training for her private pilot license.
* '''Discussed''': "It's really sad to see a passionate person go nowhere with their passion because they weren't born with the talent for it."
* '''PlayedForDrama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
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* '''Enforced''': The story
* '''Lampshaded''':
* '''Implied''': Alice is a passionate pilot-in-training who is noted to be in her fifth year of training for her private pilot license.
* '''Discussed''': "It's really sad to see a passionate person go nowhere with their passion because they weren't born with the talent for it."
* '''PlayedForDrama''': "Alice is a very eager and committed student, and I cannot have a student with a better attitude than her. But she just isn't cut out for flying, and it really pains me to say this...I believe it would be better for her to pursue another course in life."
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* '''Played Straight''': Alice really wants to be a pilot, but has no talent for it.
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* '''Played Straight''': Alice really wants to be a pilot, but has no talent for it.it and cannot fly [[HardWorkHardlyWorks no matter how hard she tries]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice wants to be a pilot, and she can take off, fly, and land one reasonably well, but not at the level a commercial or military pilot requires.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice really wants to be a pilot, and she can take off, fly, and land one reasonably well, fly a plane safely, but not at the level being a commercial or military pilot requires.requires.
* '''Justified''':
** Alice has extremely poor eyesight.
** Alice suffers from a severe case of ADHD that makes it very difficult for her to safely fly a plane.
* '''Inverted''': Alice is TheAce, and cannot be bothered about flying.
* '''Subverted''': Alice starts out as the last of her class in flight school, but becomes competent by the end of the course.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except she never progresses from flying light aircraft, never managing to handle anything more advanced.
* '''ZigZagged''': Alice's performance varies wildly; sometimes she'll be an astounding acrobatic [[TheAce ace]], and sometimes she'll fail to even start the plane.
* '''Averted''': Alice is a competent pilot, and is on her way to flying better aircraft.
* '''Enforced''': The story delivers an {{Aesop}} about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing dreams]].
* '''Justified''':
** Alice has extremely poor eyesight.
** Alice suffers from a severe case of ADHD that makes it very difficult for her to safely fly a plane.
* '''Inverted''': Alice is TheAce, and cannot be bothered about flying.
* '''Subverted''': Alice starts out as the last of her class in flight school, but becomes competent by the end of the course.
* '''Double Subverted''': ...Except she never progresses from flying light aircraft, never managing to handle anything more advanced.
* '''ZigZagged''': Alice's performance varies wildly; sometimes she'll be an astounding acrobatic [[TheAce ace]], and sometimes she'll fail to even start the plane.
* '''Averted''': Alice is a competent pilot, and is on her way to flying better aircraft.
* '''Enforced''': The story delivers an {{Aesop}} about [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop forgoing dreams]].
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'''Basic Trope''': A character deeply desires to be part of a certain field, but has no talent for it.
* '''Played Straight''': Alice really wants to be a pilot, but has no talent for it.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she touches catches on fire before they even leave the ground.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice wants to be a pilot, and she can take off, fly, and land one reasonably well, but not at the level a commercial or military pilot requires.
* '''Played Straight''': Alice really wants to be a pilot, but has no talent for it.
* '''Exaggerated''': Alice has dreamt of being a pilot for her whole life, but every plane she touches catches on fire before they even leave the ground.
* '''Downplayed''': Alice wants to be a pilot, and she can take off, fly, and land one reasonably well, but not at the level a commercial or military pilot requires.