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* '''Averted''': The story takes place at midnight.
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* '''Averted''': '''Averted''':
** The story takes place atmidnight.midnight.
** The story takes place deep in the Arctic Circle in the dead of winter; the sun isn't going to rise for days.
** The story takes place at
** The story takes place deep in the Arctic Circle in the dead of winter; the sun isn't going to rise for days.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The entire story is about humanity's desperate attemps at surviving a [[WorldWarIII Nuclear]]/[[ColonyDrop Impact]]/[[ChekhovsVolcano Volcanic]] [[EndlessWinter Winter]], the thick cloud of dust and debris kicked off by the apocalypse blocking off the sun and being a disaster all by itself. The sunlight peering through the thick cloud of dust and debris, instead of being a metaphorical positive omen, is an indication of said cloud thinning out.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The entire story is about humanity's desperate attemps attempts at surviving a [[WorldWarIII Nuclear]]/[[ColonyDrop Impact]]/[[ChekhovsVolcano Volcanic]] [[EndlessWinter Winter]], the thick cloud of dust and debris kicked off by the apocalypse blocking off the sun and being a disaster all by itself. The sunlight peering through the thick cloud of dust and debris, instead of being a metaphorical positive omen, is an indication of said cloud thinning out.
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* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': The entire story is about humanity's desperate attemps at surviving a [[WorldWarIII Nuclear]]/[[ColonyDrop Impact]]/[[ChekhovsVolcano Volcanic]] [[EndlessWinter Winter]], the thick cloud of dust and debris kicked off by the apocalypse blocking off the sun and being a disaster all by itself. The sunlight peering through the thick cloud of dust and debris, instead of being a metaphorical positive omen, is an indication of said cloud thinning out.
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** The sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright, signalling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von Helios]].
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** The sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright, signalling signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von Helios]].Helios]].
** With Emperor Evulz's defeat, Bob [[RidingIntotheSunset walks off into the sunset]].
** With Emperor Evulz's defeat, Bob [[RidingIntotheSunset walks off into the sunset]].
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* '''Averted''': The story takes place in the midnight.
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* '''Averted''': The story takes place in the at midnight.
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* '''Justified''': As a lich, Emperor Evulz has power that blocks the sun from ever shining in his {{Mordor}}. [[NoOntologicalInertia When he's defeated, this spell is broken]].
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** As a lich, Emperor Evulz has power that blocks the sun from ever shining in his {{Mordor}}. [[NoOntologicalInertia When he's defeated, this spell isbroken]].broken]].
** The battle took what, ten hours? It's only logical for morning to break.
** As a lich, Emperor Evulz has power that blocks the sun from ever shining in his {{Mordor}}. [[NoOntologicalInertia When he's defeated, this spell is
** The battle took what, ten hours? It's only logical for morning to break.
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets, [[FinalDeath symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets, [[FinalDeath symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].life.
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** The rising sun has a smiling face and sings the ''OdeToJoy''.
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** The rising sun has a smiling face and sings the ''OdeToJoy''.''Music/OdeToJoy''.
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* '''Enforced''': This story is titled ''[[AdjectiveNounFred Samurai Punk Bob]]: The Return of [[EgyptianMythology Ra]]''.
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* '''Enforced''': This story is titled ''[[AdjectiveNounFred Samurai Punk Bob]]: The Return of [[EgyptianMythology [[Myth/EgyptianMythology Ra]]''.
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* '''Downplayed''': ???As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the night sky lightens a few degrees.
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets, [[FinalDeath Symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets, [[FinalDeath Symbolizing symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].
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** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von Helios]]
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** The Sun sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling bright, signalling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von Helios]]Helios]].
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** The rising sun has smiling face and sings the ''Series/{{Teletubbies}}''' theme song.
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** The rising sun has a smiling face and sings the ''Series/{{Teletubbies}}''' theme song.''OdeToJoy''.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bob fell Evulz with his blow, the sun rises from the east. But when Evulz rise again and go OneWingedAngel, the sun hides itself. After a difficult battle, Evulz is gone for good, but the sun won't rise. Turns out that Bob needs to [[DeaderThanDead kill Evulz's soul]] in TheUnderworld before the sun will rise. [[ToHellAndBack When he does so]], the sun itself rises in the realm of the dead.
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** Catching a glimpse of a painting of the sunset hanging on Evulz' wall gives Bob the fortitude to attack him properly.
* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bobfell fells Evulz with his blow, the sun rises from the east. But when Evulz rise again and go OneWingedAngel, the sun hides itself. After a difficult battle, Evulz is gone for good, but the sun won't rise. Turns out that Bob needs to [[DeaderThanDead kill Evulz's soul]] in TheUnderworld before the sun will rise. [[ToHellAndBack When he does so]], the sun itself rises in the realm of the dead.
* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bob
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* '''Exploited''': Bob rushes to Evulz's citadel before the sun rise, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendary hero.
* '''Defied''': Emperor Evulz hides somewhere safe until it's day.
* '''Defied''': Emperor Evulz hides somewhere safe until it's day.
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* '''Exploited''': Bob rushes to Evulz's citadel before the sun rise, rises, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendary hero.
* '''Defied''': Emperor Evulz hides somewhere safe untilit's day.daybreak.
* '''Defied''': Emperor Evulz hides somewhere safe until
* '''Implied''': Bob's final battle against Evulz takes place offscreen; the audience sees events from his daughter Grace's POV while he's fighting the emperor. Fifteen minutes after Grace takes note of the sun's ascent, Bob comes home holding Evulz's head by one hair.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Considering this, Bob [[PalsWithJesus asks his celestial friend Alice]] to shower the world with light shall he defeat Evulz.
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* '''Reconstructed''': Considering this, Bob [[PalsWithJesus asks his celestial friend Alice]] to shower the world with light shall should he defeat Evulz.
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets. [[spoiler: [[FinalDeath Symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].]]
** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz it rains. [[spoiler: Symbolizing the loss of his WorthyOpponent.]]
** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von Helios]]
** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz it rains. [[spoiler: Symbolizing the loss of his WorthyOpponent.]]
** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von Helios]]
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets. [[spoiler: sets, [[FinalDeath Symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].]]
life]].
** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz itrains. [[spoiler: Symbolizing rains, symbolizing the loss of his WorthyOpponent.]]
WorthyOpponent.
** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood VonHelios]] Helios]]
** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz it
** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Von
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** The rising sun has smiling face and sings the theme song of Teletubbies.
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** The rising sun has smiling face and sings the ''Series/{{Teletubbies}}''' theme song of Teletubbies.song.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Legends say that whenever a great evil is defeated, the sun will rise. Since Bob (a {{Ninja}}) defeats Evulz in the midnight, the people won't believe that he's their hero.
* '''Reconstructed''': Considering this, Bob [[PalsWithJesus asks his celestial friend Alice]] to shower the world with light shall he defeat Evulz.
* '''Reconstructed''': Considering this, Bob [[PalsWithJesus asks his celestial friend Alice]] to shower the world with light shall he defeat Evulz.
* '''Deconstructed''': Legends say that whenever a great evil is defeated, the sun will rise. Since Bob (a {{Ninja}}) defeats Evulz in the midnight, the people won't believe that he's their hero.
* '''Reconstructed''': Considering this, Bob [[PalsWithJesus asks his celestial friend Alice]] to shower the world with light shall he defeat Evulz.
* '''Reconstructed''': Considering this, Bob [[PalsWithJesus asks his celestial friend Alice]] to shower the world with light shall he defeat Evulz.
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* '''Inverted''': As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets. [[spoiler: [[FinalDeath Symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].]]
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets. [[spoiler: [[FinalDeath Symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].]]
** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz, the sun sets. [[spoiler: [[FinalDeath Symbolizing the definite end of Evulz' life]].]]
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* '''Parodied''': The rising sun has smiling face and sings the theme song of Teletubbies.
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* '''Parodied''': '''Parodied''':
** The rising sun has smiling face and sings the theme song of Teletubbies.
** The rising sun has smiling face and sings the theme song of Teletubbies.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bob fell Evulz with his blow, the sun rises from the east. But when Evulz rise again and go OneWingedAngel, the sun hides itself. After a difficult battle, Evulz is gone for good, but the sun won't rise. Turns out that Bob needs [[DeaderThanDead kill Evulz's soul]] in TheUnderworld before the sun will rise. [[ToHellAndBack When he does so]], the sun itself rises in the realm of the dead.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bob fell Evulz with his blow, the sun rises from the east. But when Evulz rise again and go OneWingedAngel, the sun hides itself. After a difficult battle, Evulz is gone for good, but the sun won't rise. Turns out that Bob needs to [[DeaderThanDead kill Evulz's soul]] in TheUnderworld before the sun will rise. [[ToHellAndBack When he does so]], the sun itself rises in the realm of the dead.
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* '''Subverted''': That which rise is not the sun.
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* '''Subverted''': That which rise rises is not the sun.
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* '''Subverted''': That which rise isn't the sun.
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* '''Subverted''': That which rise isn't is not the sun.
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** Evulz was defeated in the afternoon and a second sun rises out of nowhere.
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** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Van Helios]]
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** The Sun rises in the middle of the night, unusually bright. Signaling the invasion of Emperor Evulz [[LightIsNotGood Van Von Helios]]
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* '''Invoked''': Bob rushes to Evulz's citadel before the sun rise, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendary hero.
* '''Exploited''': Bob times his deathly blow to the rising of the sun.
* '''Exploited''': Bob times his deathly blow to the rising of the sun.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob times his deathly blow to the rising of the sun.
* '''Exploited''': Bob rushes to Evulz's citadel before the sun rise, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendaryhero.
* '''Exploited''': Bob times his deathly blow to the rising of the sun.hero.
* '''Exploited''': Bob rushes to Evulz's citadel before the sun rise, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendary
* '''Exploited''': Bob times his deathly blow to the rising of the sun.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bob fell Evulz with his blow, the sun rises from the east. But when Evulz rise again and go OneWingedAngel, the sun hides itself. After a difficult battle, Evulz is gone for good, but the sun won't rise. Turns out that Bob need [[DeaderThanDead kill Evulz soul]] in TheUnderworld before the sun will rise. [[ToHellAndBack When he does so]], the sun itself rise in the realm of the dead.
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* '''Zig Zagged''': As Bob fell Evulz with his blow, the sun rises from the east. But when Evulz rise again and go OneWingedAngel, the sun hides itself. After a difficult battle, Evulz is gone for good, but the sun won't rise. Turns out that Bob need needs [[DeaderThanDead kill Evulz Evulz's soul]] in TheUnderworld before the sun will rise. [[ToHellAndBack When he does so]], the sun itself rise rises in the realm of the dead.
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* '''Enforced''': This story is titled ''Samurai Punk Bob: The Return of [[EgyptianMythology Ra]].''.
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* '''Enforced''': This story is titled ''Samurai ''[[AdjectiveNounFred Samurai Punk Bob: Bob]]: The Return of [[EgyptianMythology Ra]].''.Ra]]''.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob rushes to Evulz' citadel before the sun rise, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendary hero.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob rushes to Evulz' Evulz's citadel before the sun rise, hoping that he can paint himself as the legendary hero.
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz it rains. [[spoiler: symbolizing the loss of his WorthyOpponent.]]
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz it rains. [[spoiler: symbolizing Symbolizing the loss of his WorthyOpponent.]]
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** As Bob defeats Emperor Evulz it rains. [[spoiler: symbolizing the loss of his WorthyOpponent.]]