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** Aliens begin to invade the world, everybody, everywhere simultaneously craps themselves.
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** Aliens begin to invade the world, world; everybody, everywhere simultaneously craps themselves.
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** [[BigBrotherInstinct Bill]], a DrillSergeantNasty in his work hours, gets in everybody's face and roars out that the first person to so much as think of reacting to Alice wetting herself in fear from the moment he finishes saying his threat onwards, let alone actually saying anything about it, will be shitting themselves in a much worse - as in [[NoDeadBodyPoops terminal]] - way. [[ApplyToForce Everybody keeps quiet forevermore]].
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** [[BigBrotherInstinct Bill]], a DrillSergeantNasty in his work hours, gets in everybody's face and roars out that the first person to so much as think of reacting to Alice wetting herself in fear from the moment he finishes saying his threat onwards, let alone actually saying anything about it, will be shitting themselves in a much worse - as in [[NoDeadBodyPoops terminal]] - way. [[ApplyToForce [[AppealToForce Everybody keeps quiet forevermore]].
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* '''Defied''': Alice takes some pills ''before'' she gets scared which will prevent this.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Alice takes some pills ''before'' she gets scared which will preventthis.this.
** [[BigBrotherInstinct Bill]], a DrillSergeantNasty in his work hours, gets in everybody's face and roars out that the first person to so much as think of reacting to Alice wetting herself in fear from the moment he finishes saying his threat onwards, let alone actually saying anything about it, will be shitting themselves in a much worse - as in [[NoDeadBodyPoops terminal]] - way. [[ApplyToForce Everybody keeps quiet forevermore]].
** Alice takes some pills ''before'' she gets scared which will prevent
** [[BigBrotherInstinct Bill]], a DrillSergeantNasty in his work hours, gets in everybody's face and roars out that the first person to so much as think of reacting to Alice wetting herself in fear from the moment he finishes saying his threat onwards, let alone actually saying anything about it, will be shitting themselves in a much worse - as in [[NoDeadBodyPoops terminal]] - way. [[ApplyToForce Everybody keeps quiet forevermore]].
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* '''Played For Horror''': Alice's farting is a DeadlyGas, making all of the creatures around her gag and suffer a CruelAndUnusualDeath.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Horror''':
** Alice's farting is a DeadlyGas, making all of the creatures around her gag and suffer aCruelAndUnusualDeath.CruelAndUnusualDeath.
** HorrorHatesARulebreaker, and the rule is "body waste release in designated bathrooms only". Being scared out of your mind is most definitely not a mitigating factor for this rule. Alice broke it. [[DisproportionateRetribution Oops]].
** Alice's farting is a DeadlyGas, making all of the creatures around her gag and suffer a
** HorrorHatesARulebreaker, and the rule is "body waste release in designated bathrooms only". Being scared out of your mind is most definitely not a mitigating factor for this rule. Alice broke it. [[DisproportionateRetribution Oops]].
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice emits a comically loud farting sound.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** Alice emits a comically loud fartingsound.sound.
** The bear gets distracted by the smell, he runs away screaming like a woman.
** Alice emits a comically loud farting
** The bear gets distracted by the smell, he runs away screaming like a woman.
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* '''Played For Horror''': Alice's farting is a DeadlyGas, making all of the creatures around her gag and suffer a CruelAndUnusualDeath.
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** Alice constipates or has a ShyBladder when he's afraid.
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** Alice constipates or has a ShyBladder when he's she's afraid.
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** Alice is naked from the waist down after she escapes, and refuses to explain why.
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** Alice suffered injuries to her rectum due to a [[RapeByBackstory particularly violent rape]] in the past.
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** Alice suffered injuries to her rectum due to a [[RapeByBackstory [[RapeAsBackstory particularly violent rape]] in the past.past.
** Alice's soiling of herself was brought on due to torture and starvation.
** Alice's soiling of herself was brought on due to torture and starvation.
