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** It gets even worse when you remember that [[AgeLift in this story]], Keith is in ''[[WouldHurtAChild high school]],'' and his mother is [[AdultFear totally unaware]] of his situation, thinking that he's still at the convention.
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** It gets even worse when you remember that [[AgeLift in this story]], Keith is in ''[[WouldHurtAChild high school]],'' and his mother is [[AdultFear totally unaware]] unaware of his situation, thinking that he's still at the convention.
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** It gets even worse when you remember that [[AgeLift this version of Boyfriend]] is in ''[[WouldHurtAChild high school]],'' and his mother is [[AdultFear totally unaware]] of his situation, thinking that he's still at the convention.
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** It gets even worse when you remember that [[AgeLift in this version of Boyfriend]] story]], Keith is in ''[[WouldHurtAChild high school]],'' and his mother is [[AdultFear totally unaware]] of his situation, thinking that he's still at the convention.
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* While humorous at first, Daddy Dearest interrogating Keith on his relationship with his daughter takes a turn for the unsettling pretty fast, with him implying to do something ''[[AndShowItToYou quite]]'' [[AndShowItToYou graphic]] to the poor boy.
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* While humorous at first, Daddy Dearest interrogating Keith on his relationship with his daughter takes a turn for the unsettling pretty fast, with him implying to do something ''[[AndShowItToYou quite]]'' [[AndShowItToYou quite graphic]] to the poor boy.
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* While messing around with Daddy Dearest's stone tablets, Keith accidentally catches a glimpse of a BlackSpeech-uttering EldritchAbomination. DD's panicked reaction while grabbing it from the boy's hands hints that, had he not stopped him from viewing it, he'd presumably meet a FateWorseThanDeath.
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* While messing around with Daddy Dearest's stone tablets, Keith accidentally catches a glimpse of a BlackSpeech-uttering EldritchAbomination. DD's panicked reaction while grabbing it from the boy's hands hints that, had he not stopped him from viewing it, he'd presumably meet he would've met a FateWorseThanDeath.
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* While messing around with Daddy Dearest's stone tablets, Keith accidentally catches a glimpse of a BlackSpeech-uttering EldritchAbomination. DD's panicked reaction while grabbing it from the boy's hands hints that, had he not stopped him from viewing it, he'd presumably meet a FateWorseThanDeath.
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* While messing around with Daddy Dearest's stone tablets, Keith accidentally catches a glimpse of a BlackSpeech-uttering EldritchAbomination. DD's panicked reaction while grabbing it from the boy's hands hints that, had he not stopped him from viewing it, he'd presumably meet a FateWorseThanDeath.FateWorseThanDeath.
** This is [[NightmareRetardant somewhat mitigated]] by DD explaining it to be a demonic equivalent to ''Series/SaturdayNightLive.''
** This is [[NightmareRetardant somewhat mitigated]] by DD explaining it to be a demonic equivalent to ''Series/SaturdayNightLive.''
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* While humorous at first, Daddy Dearest interrogating Keith on his relationship with his daughter takes a turn for the unsettling pretty fast, with him implying to do something ''[[AndShowItToYou quite]]'' [[AndShowItToYou graphic]] to the poor boy.
--> "C'mon, little man." the ex-rockstar growled. He pointed a finger at Keith's heart. "Just make this easier for everyone, and admit-"
** It gets even worse when you remember that [[AgeLift this version of Boyfriend]] is in ''[[WouldHurtAChild high school]],'' and his mother is [[AdultFear totally unaware]] of his situation, thinking that he's still at the convention.
* His way of challenging Keith to the sing-off is no slouch either:
--> He grabbed Keith roughly by the elbow and pointed at the theater. Keith noticed that there was a set of speakers there. "See that stage? We'll both go there and prove our mettle. Two mics, two men, one victor!" Daddy Dearest faced Keith. "So..." he said, glaring at Keith menacingly. "Whaddya say...?"
* While messing around with Daddy Dearest's stone tablets, Keith accidentally catches a glimpse of a BlackSpeech-uttering EldritchAbomination. DD's panicked reaction while grabbing it from the boy's hands hints that, had he not stopped him from viewing it, he'd presumably meet a FateWorseThanDeath.
--> "C'mon, little man." the ex-rockstar growled. He pointed a finger at Keith's heart. "Just make this easier for everyone, and admit-"
** It gets even worse when you remember that [[AgeLift this version of Boyfriend]] is in ''[[WouldHurtAChild high school]],'' and his mother is [[AdultFear totally unaware]] of his situation, thinking that he's still at the convention.
* His way of challenging Keith to the sing-off is no slouch either:
--> He grabbed Keith roughly by the elbow and pointed at the theater. Keith noticed that there was a set of speakers there. "See that stage? We'll both go there and prove our mettle. Two mics, two men, one victor!" Daddy Dearest faced Keith. "So..." he said, glaring at Keith menacingly. "Whaddya say...?"
* While messing around with Daddy Dearest's stone tablets, Keith accidentally catches a glimpse of a BlackSpeech-uttering EldritchAbomination. DD's panicked reaction while grabbing it from the boy's hands hints that, had he not stopped him from viewing it, he'd presumably meet a FateWorseThanDeath.
