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* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill entire families. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
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* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill entire families.them. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
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also this happens in the prologue, not really a spoiler
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* Venomania has to activate his powers through [[spoiler: stabbing himself in the chest with the venom sword]]. And he's perfectly okay with this.
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* Venomania has to activate his powers through [[spoiler: stabbing himself in the chest with the venom sword]].sword. And he's perfectly okay with this.
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* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill people. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
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* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill people.entire families. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
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That entry feels written by someone who only heard the scene in question secondhand
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* The fate of the lesbian Lolan Eve. The brainwashing Venomania does to her has to be extra-powerful to make her forget her sexuality, and her mental burden over being brainwashed into this heterosexual affair is so great she often is found lying still on the floor and eventually just... [[KilledOffForReal doesn't wake up one morning]]. What makes this worse is that the Venom sword keeps its victims brainwashed through regular sexual intercourse.
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* The fate What happens to Lolan Eve in the latter half of the lesbian Lolan Eve. The brainwashing novel. After spending a short while bedridden, Lukana just finds her dead in her room when bringing her breakfast. When she talks to Venomania does to about it the following night he casually reveals that the demon has been feeding on all of their life energy each time he has sex with them, and Lolan died because her has to be extra-powerful to make her forget her sexuality, and her mental burden over spirit was already weak from being brainwashed into forgetting she's a lesbian. He tries to reassure Lukana that it won't happen to her because her spirit is stronger, but she realizes the clear implication that even a perfectly healthy woman could die by having sex with him if their spirit was weak enough, and this heterosexual affair is so great she often is found lying still on the floor and eventually just... [[KilledOffForReal fact doesn't wake up one morning]]. What makes this worse is that the Venom sword keeps its victims brainwashed through regular sexual intercourse.bother him at all.
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Gonna rewrite a little bit
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** Going off of that, things that would ordinarily just be creepy with other characters become downright unsettling considering the amount of financial, political, and magical power he wields. Such as drooling over Gumina when he kidnaps her.
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* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill people. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
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* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill people. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.imagery.
** Particular mention should go to his kidnapping of Gumina, wherein the only thing that looks remotely human on him is his face. He has Carol pin her arms behind her before brainwashing her, drooling from his demon fangs as he gets nearer. Utterly disturbing.
** Particular mention should go to his kidnapping of Gumina, wherein the only thing that looks remotely human on him is his face. He has Carol pin her arms behind her before brainwashing her, drooling from his demon fangs as he gets nearer. Utterly disturbing.
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* Venomania progressively kidnapping more and more women into his harem to keep his lust satisfied--he's undergoing a gradual SanitySlippage throughout the whole novel, becoming more callous and cruel as time goes on.
** Going off of that, things that would ordinarily just be creepy with other characters become downright unsettling considering the amount of financial, political, and magical power he wields. Such as drooling over Gumina when he kidnaps her.
* Venomania has to activate his powers through [[spoiler: stabbing himself in the chest with the venom sword]]. And he's perfectly okay with this.
* The fate of the lesbian Lolan Eve. The brainwashing Venomania does to her has to be extra-powerful to make her forget her sexuality, and her mental burden over being brainwashed into this heterosexual affair is so great she often is found lying still on the floor and eventually just... [[KilledOffForReal doesn't wake up one morning]]. What makes this worse is that the Venom sword keeps its victims brainwashed through regular sexual intercourse.
* Much of the focus on other material, including the songs, is on Venomania's lusts and kidnapping. Less remarked upon are the brutal murders he commits to keep people from discovering his crimes, including slaughtering entire families. At one point while fighting Yufina's bodyguard he rips the man's arms off.
* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill people. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
** Going off of that, things that would ordinarily just be creepy with other characters become downright unsettling considering the amount of financial, political, and magical power he wields. Such as drooling over Gumina when he kidnaps her.
* Venomania has to activate his powers through [[spoiler: stabbing himself in the chest with the venom sword]]. And he's perfectly okay with this.
* The fate of the lesbian Lolan Eve. The brainwashing Venomania does to her has to be extra-powerful to make her forget her sexuality, and her mental burden over being brainwashed into this heterosexual affair is so great she often is found lying still on the floor and eventually just... [[KilledOffForReal doesn't wake up one morning]]. What makes this worse is that the Venom sword keeps its victims brainwashed through regular sexual intercourse.
* Much of the focus on other material, including the songs, is on Venomania's lusts and kidnapping. Less remarked upon are the brutal murders he commits to keep people from discovering his crimes, including slaughtering entire families. At one point while fighting Yufina's bodyguard he rips the man's arms off.
* Venomania is also one of the few sinners to regularly make use of his demonic transformations to hunt down victims or just kill people. He grows multiple wings and horns in classical demonic imagery.
