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* Joshua James is this in a different way, as, after a lifetime of being generally ignored, he decides he’s going to [[IJustWantToBeSpecial stand out]]. He starts by holding one of his classmates at gunpoint and '' licking her face. '' It just keeps [[DepravedBisexual escalating]] from there, with all of his good sense eroding until he’s declaring [[spoiler: his own death]] a victory because he got to [[spoiler: kill and kiss the girl who murdered him.]] The quote below summarizes his [[spoiler: FromNobodyToNightmare trajectory]] beautifully:
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
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* Joshua James is this in a different way, as, after a lifetime of being generally ignored, he decides he’s going to [[IJustWantToBeSpecial stand out]]. He starts by holding one of his classmates at gunpoint and and '' licking her face. '' It just keeps [[DepravedBisexual escalating]] from there, with all of his good sense eroding until he’s declaring [[spoiler: his own death]] a victory because he got to [[spoiler: kill and kiss the girl who murdered him.]] The quote below summarizes his [[spoiler: FromNobodyToNightmare [[FromNobodyToNightmare trajectory]] beautifully:
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye.
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* Przemyslaw Ziemak gets his eyes put out with a nail studded baseball bat and things somehow only get ''worse '' for him from then on as he continually wanders into high risk situations, eventually being reduced to Shu Hawthornes “pet” before he gets brutally murdered with a rock as he futilely tries to save himself. It’s almost a MercyKill at that stage, and the fact his killer wins the Best Kill Award only makes it worse.
* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death with ''barbed wire '' and later convinces and assists a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt an easy target]].
** His… ''[[NoYay relationship]] '' with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]], he is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of '''[[FromNobodyToNightmare ants! ]] '''
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death with ''barbed wire '' and later convinces and assists a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt an easy target]].
** His… ''[[NoYay relationship]] '' with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]], he is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of '''[[FromNobodyToNightmare ants! ]] '''
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
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* Przemyslaw Ziemak gets his eyes put out with a nail studded baseball bat and things somehow only get ''worse '' for him from then on as he continually wanders into high risk situations, eventually being reduced to Shu Hawthornes “pet” before he gets [[spoiler: brutally murdered with a rock as he futilely tries to save himself. himself.]] It’s almost a MercyKill at that stage, like the universe was conspiring to make his time on the island hell.
* Shu Hawthorne and his pursuit of his “light,” which is essentially just him trying to find some kind of happiness on thefact his killer wins the Best Kill Award only makes it worse.
* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to deathisland. It starts with ''barbed him [[DisproportionateRetribution garrotting his girlfriend with barbed wire '' over a petty argument]] and doesn’t improve from there.
** He laterconvinces and assists a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target goes on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt cart the above mentioned Prezemyslaw around like some kind of pet, as well as pushing an easy target]].
** His… ''[[NoYay relationship]] ''[[HeroicBSOD emotionally devastated]] Amos Flanagan into [[spoiler: hanging himself]].
*** His interactions withfellow creep Josh James are incredibly eerie, with Shu being portrayed more like some otherworldly being than the deranged human he actually is, like Josh finds him to be an object of worship.
* Joshua James isan avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them this in a way that leaves it unclear as different way, as, after a lifetime of being generally ignored, he decides he’s going to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of[[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]], he is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face stand out]]. He starts by holding one of his classmates at gunpoint. gunpoint and '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating licking her face. '' It just keeps [[DepravedBisexual escalating]] from there, with all of his good sense eroding until he’s declaring [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands own death]] a victory because he got to [[spoiler: kill and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on kiss the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of '''[[FromNobodyToNightmare ants! girl who murdered him.]] '''
The quote below summarizes his [[spoiler: FromNobodyToNightmare trajectory]] beautifully:
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''\n ''
* Shu Hawthorne and his pursuit of his “light,” which is essentially just him trying to find some kind of happiness on the
* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death
** He later
** His… ''[[NoYay relationship]] ''
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* The death of Ken Mendel has him try to swim for it, only to be incapacitated by gunfire from the terrorists patrol boats. Standard practice up until one of the boats accidentally runs the still alive Ken over and he gets ''sucked into the propellers!'' The resulting mess is so graphic that [[EvenEvilHasStandards even the men who killed him are disgusted]].
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* Nathan Coleman being on the island '' at all '' is this for the simple fact that he has Down syndrome, leaving him both physically and mentally handicapped in a scenario where everyone is expected to kill each other. [[spoiler: His death is as tragic as it is gruesome as well.]]
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* Nathan Coleman being on the island '' at all '' is this for the simple fact that he has Down syndrome, leaving him both physically and mentally handicapped in a scenario where everyone is expected to kill each other. [[spoiler: His death is as tragic as it is gruesome as well.gruesome.]]
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* Nathan Coleman being on the island '' at all '' is this for the simple fact that he has Down syndrome, leaving him both physically and mentally handicapped on an island where everyone is expected to kill each other. [[spoiler: His death is as tragic as it is gruesome as well.]]
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* Nathan Coleman being on the island '' at all '' is this for the simple fact that he has Down syndrome, leaving him both physically and mentally handicapped on an island in a scenario where everyone is expected to kill each other. [[spoiler: His death is as tragic as it is gruesome as well.]]
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* Nathan Coleman being on the island '' at all '' is this for the simple fact that he has Down syndrome, leaving him both physically and mentally handicapped on an island where everyone is expected to kill each other. [[spoiler: His death is as tragic as it is gruesome as well.]]
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* Przemyslaw Ziemak gets his eyes put out with a nail studded baseball bat and things somehow only get ''worse '' for him from then on as he continually wanders into high risk situation after high risk situation, eventually being reduced to Shu Hawthornes “pet” before he gets brutally murdered with a rock as he futilely tries to save himself. It’s almost a MercyKill at that stage, and the fact his killer wins the Best Kill Award only makes it worse.
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* Przemyslaw Ziemak gets his eyes put out with a nail studded baseball bat and things somehow only get ''worse '' for him from then on as he continually wanders into high risk situation after high risk situation, situations, eventually being reduced to Shu Hawthornes “pet” before he gets brutally murdered with a rock as he futilely tries to save himself. It’s almost a MercyKill at that stage, and the fact his killer wins the Best Kill Award only makes it worse.
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* The death of [[spoiler: Shawn Bellamy]] is both [[AssholeVictim richly deserved]] and gruesome enough to warrant a content warning. The spoilered character, after getting shot, falls [[spoiler: face first into a spike trap that sends several wooden stakes into his neck and face]]. It is not pretty, especially because that isn’t actually what kills them.
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** He encounters a fellow classmate by a lake while completely naked and, apropos of nothing but his own deviance [[spoiler: ejaculates on her face while she’s asleep]]
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** He encounters a fellow classmate by a lake while completely naked and, apropos of nothing but his own deviance [[spoiler: ejaculates on her face while she’s asleep]]asleep]] This is just one example of the kind of things he gets up to in the vast majority of his posts.
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* Sam Sorensen, a Christian boy whose background consists of his being a good Christian boy who’d never hurt a fly, developing at a startling pace into a deranged [[ILoveTheDead necrophiliac]] wandering around the island is… a lot.
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* Sam Sorensen, a Christian boy whose background consists of his being a good Christian boy who’d never hurt a fly, completely harmless, developing at a startling pace into a deranged [[ILoveTheDead necrophiliac]] wandering around the island is… a lot.lot.
** He encounters a fellow classmate by a lake while completely naked and, apropos of nothing but his own deviance [[spoiler: ejaculates on her face while she’s asleep]]
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** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of '''[[FromNobodyToNightmare ants! ]] '''
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** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] James]], he is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of '''[[FromNobodyToNightmare ants! ]] '''
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** His… [[NoYay relationship]] with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
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** His… [[NoYay relationship]] His… ''[[NoYay relationship]] '' with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of[[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
'''[[FromNobodyToNightmare ants! ]] '''
--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of
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** His… [[NoYay ''relationship '']] with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''like their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''like their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
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** His… [[NoYay ''relationship '']] relationship]] with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and''like ''lick their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands. hands and he still manages to come across as unnaturally earnest during it all. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
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--> ''A vile, sharp toothed version of himself appeared in his minds eye. ''
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and
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** His… [[NoYay ''relationship '']] with fellow creep Joshua James is an avid source of this, especially because it only seems to bring the worst out of them in a way that leaves it unclear as to who is getting into who’s [[MindGameShip head.]]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''like their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
** On the topic of [[IJustWantToBeSpecial Joshua James]] is a uniquely skin crawling contestant, who’s very first act in the game is to take [[spoiler: Ingrid]] hostage in the dining hall and ''like their face at gunpoint. '' After that, he quickly graduates to [[RapeAsDrama sexually assaulting]] other classmates and beating [[spoiler: Zora Morrison]] to death with his bare hands. Literally every moment [[NightmareFuelStationAttendant he’s]] on the island is a parade of horrors, and this kid used to take care of [[FromNobodyToNightmare '''ants! ''']]
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*** Her murder and desecration of [[spoiler: Stepeny Cruz]] is like something from a horror film with how it’s describe. It ends with her ''crucifying '' the spoilered person to the side of a boat after [[{{Gorn}}tearing out all of their internal organs by hand.]]
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*** Her murder and desecration of [[spoiler: Stepeny Cruz]] is like something from a horror film with how it’s describe. It ends with her ''crucifying '' the spoilered person to the side of a boat after [[{{Gorn}}tearing [[{{Gorn}} tearing out all of their internal organs by hand.]] ]]
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*** Her murder and desecration of [[spoiler: Stepeny Cruz]] is like something from a horror film with how it’s describe. It ends with her ''crucifying '' the spoilered person to the side of a boat after [[Gorn tearing [[{{Gorn}}tearing out all of their internal organs by hand.]] ]]
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* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death with ''barbed wire '' and later convinces and assist a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt an easy target]].
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* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death with ''barbed wire '' and later convinces and assist assists a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt an easy target]].
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* Prezmyslaw Przemyslaw Ziemak gets his eyes put out with a nail studded baseball bat and things somehow only get ''worse '' for him from then on as he continually wanders into high risk situation after high risk situation, eventually being reduced to Shu Hawthornes “pet” before he gets brutally murdered with a rock as he futilely tries to save himself. It’s almost a MercyKill at that stage, and the fact his killer wins the Best Kill Award only makes it worse.
* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death with ''barbed wire '' and later convinces and assist a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt an easy target]].
* On the topic of Shu Hawthorne, he’s a brutal {{Sadist}} who’s first kill is by strangling someone to death with ''barbed wire '' and later convinces and assist a suicidal person in ending their own life. The worst part about that is that isn’t entirely clear if he did that for pragmatic reasons (multiple murders would paint a target on his back) or if he just wanted to [[ForTheEvulz hurt an easy target]].
