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** Maybe so, but she did MindRape ''her own mother'' into insanity, and it's heavily implied she would have tossed Mokkan into the lake with no second thoughts if he didn't do it to her first.
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** Maybe so, but she did MindRape ''her own mother'' into insanity, insanity (admittedly, said mother was TheCaligula and valued herself over her family), and it's heavily implied she would have tossed Mokkan into the lake with no second thoughts if he didn't do it to her first.
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* The most nightmarish death in the series by far is Ungatt Trunn's. First, his spine is broken by Lord Brocktree. Then his "carcass" is tossed out towards the sea. However, it is revealed later on that [[AndIMustScream he's still alive, but can't move or speak, is enduring an unbearable amount of pain, and the tide is slowly coming in, ready to take his body into the sea.]] It isn't until [[TheDogBitesBack one of his former comrades comes by and kicks him into the sea]] that he actually dies. Did we mention an entire (albeit short) chapter is dedicated to his death?
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* The most nightmarish death in the series by far is Ungatt Trunn's. First, his spine is broken by Lord Brocktree. Then his "carcass" is tossed out towards the sea. However, it is revealed later on that [[AndIMustScream he's still alive, but can't move or speak, is enduring an unbearable amount of pain, pain from his battle wounds and the sea salt that's "encrusting" his face, and the tide is slowly coming in, ready to take his body into the sea.]] It isn't until [[TheDogBitesBack one of his most greviously-abused former comrades comes by and kicks him into the sea]] that he actually dies.dies after spending an unspecified period of time being picked up and battered by the waves. Did we mention an entire (albeit short) chapter is dedicated to his death?
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* Balefur's death in ''Outcast''. He was a total jerk, but he didn't deserve such a horrible death.
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* Balefur's death in ''Outcast''. He was a total jerk, but he didn't deserve such a horrible death. Specifically, he and two henchmen are lured into an entire ''valley full'' of adders that quickly surround them. One of the henchmen quickly decides it's BetterToDieThanBeKilled, and the other two foxes vanish into "the rustling, many-coiled embrace of the serpents" before they have time to do anything.
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* In ''The Long Patrol'', several vermin scouts have to undergo both being submerged up to their necks in freezing water for a long time, and then (after being rescued and fighting against their BadBoss), the survivors are killed in a CementShoes method.
