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* Sachi Mima's initial appearance. Not just as a faceless background character, but as a more fleshed-out person. Seeing Koharu hanging out with [[GamerGirl Shiki Futaki]] and her club gave her all she needed to single-handedly cut ties with her friend group of her, Koharu, Nori, and Maki, all because she didn't like the latter two. She gives [[SlasherSmile a happy sneer]] to Koharu, instigates some nasty insults towards Fuuka for supposedly being loose, and then takes advantage of a faux pas Koharu lets slip, to let their friend group dissolve in an instant. And she let the group end on a whim.
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* Sachi Mima's initial appearance. Not just as a faceless background character, but as a more fleshed-out person. Seeing Koharu hanging out with [[GamerGirl [[GamerChick Shiki Futaki]] and her club gave her all she needed to single-handedly cut ties with her friend group of her, Koharu, Nori, and Maki, all because she didn't like the latter two. She gives [[SlasherSmile a happy sneer]] to Koharu, instigates some nasty insults towards Fuuka for supposedly being loose, and then takes advantage of a faux pas Koharu lets slip, to let their friend group dissolve in an instant. And she let the group end on a whim.
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* The way Kabukichō, the RedLightDistrict Tomoko goes to, is depicted is very unsettling. The whole place is riddled with shady-looking people, including one man who keeps approaching women with an obvious ModelScam in mind, illegal items are being openly sold on the streets, and there are bright neon lights everywhere that make everything disorienting. While nothing happens to Tomoko and she quickly leaves after realizing how in over her head she's getting, there's still a feeling that she's somewhere she ''really'' shouldn't be in and she's in very real danger.
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* The way Kabukichō, the RedLightDistrict Tomoko goes to, is depicted is very unsettling. The whole place is riddled with shady-looking people, including one man who keeps approaching women with an obvious ModelScam in mind, illegal items are being openly sold on the streets, and there are bright neon lights everywhere that make everything disorienting. While nothing happens to Tomoko and she quickly leaves after realizing how in over her head she's getting, there's still a feeling that she's somewhere she ''really'' shouldn't be in and she's in very real danger.danger.
* Sachi Mima's initial appearance. Not just as a faceless background character, but as a more fleshed-out person. Seeing Koharu hanging out with [[GamerGirl Shiki Futaki]] and her club gave her all she needed to single-handedly cut ties with her friend group of her, Koharu, Nori, and Maki, all because she didn't like the latter two. She gives [[SlasherSmile a happy sneer]] to Koharu, instigates some nasty insults towards Fuuka for supposedly being loose, and then takes advantage of a faux pas Koharu lets slip, to let their friend group dissolve in an instant. And she let the group end on a whim.
** While she has been slightly neutered in later chapters due to re-establishing a curious rapport with Koharu, as well as finding herself attracted to Tomoki, any time her featureless face reveals [[DullEyesOfUnhappiness her dark, empty eyes]], typically paired with [[AlphaBitch her nasty attitude towards other girls]].
* Sachi Mima's initial appearance. Not just as a faceless background character, but as a more fleshed-out person. Seeing Koharu hanging out with [[GamerGirl Shiki Futaki]] and her club gave her all she needed to single-handedly cut ties with her friend group of her, Koharu, Nori, and Maki, all because she didn't like the latter two. She gives [[SlasherSmile a happy sneer]] to Koharu, instigates some nasty insults towards Fuuka for supposedly being loose, and then takes advantage of a faux pas Koharu lets slip, to let their friend group dissolve in an instant. And she let the group end on a whim.
** While she has been slightly neutered in later chapters due to re-establishing a curious rapport with Koharu, as well as finding herself attracted to Tomoki, any time her featureless face reveals [[DullEyesOfUnhappiness her dark, empty eyes]], typically paired with [[AlphaBitch her nasty attitude towards other girls]].
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* The scene where Tomoko applies for a job in a cake factory, which turns out to be nothing like she imagined it. She's put on a darkened assembly line with masked workers all around her, surrounded by roaring machinery, and can hardly function due to stress.
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* The scene where Tomoko applies for a job in a cake factory, which turns out to be nothing like she imagined it. She's put on a darkened assembly line with masked workers all around her, surrounded by roaring machinery, and can hardly function due to stress.stress.
* The way Kabukichō, the RedLightDistrict Tomoko goes to, is depicted is very unsettling. The whole place is riddled with shady-looking people, including one man who keeps approaching women with an obvious ModelScam in mind, illegal items are being openly sold on the streets, and there are bright neon lights everywhere that make everything disorienting. While nothing happens to Tomoko and she quickly leaves after realizing how in over her head she's getting, there's still a feeling that she's somewhere she ''really'' shouldn't be in and she's in very real danger.
* The way Kabukichō, the RedLightDistrict Tomoko goes to, is depicted is very unsettling. The whole place is riddled with shady-looking people, including one man who keeps approaching women with an obvious ModelScam in mind, illegal items are being openly sold on the streets, and there are bright neon lights everywhere that make everything disorienting. While nothing happens to Tomoko and she quickly leaves after realizing how in over her head she's getting, there's still a feeling that she's somewhere she ''really'' shouldn't be in and she's in very real danger.
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* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least For example, in the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
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* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least least. For example, in the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
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* There's also Kii's unsettling DeathGlare in Episode 8, which even scares Tomoko.
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* There's also Kii's unsettling DeathGlare in Episode 8, which even scares Tomoko.Tomoko.
* The scene where Tomoko applies for a job in a cake factory, which turns out to be nothing like she imagined it. She's put on a darkened assembly line with masked workers all around her, surrounded by roaring machinery, and can hardly function due to stress.
* The scene where Tomoko applies for a job in a cake factory, which turns out to be nothing like she imagined it. She's put on a darkened assembly line with masked workers all around her, surrounded by roaring machinery, and can hardly function due to stress.
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* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least.
** For example: the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
** The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...
** For example: the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
** The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...
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* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least.
** For example: the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
**The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...still...
* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least For example, in the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
** For example: the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
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* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least For example, in the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
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** The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...
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** The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...still...
* There's also Kii's unsettling DeathGlare in Episode 8, which even scares Tomoko.
* There's also Kii's unsettling DeathGlare in Episode 8, which even scares Tomoko.
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* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least.
** For example: the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
** The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...
* Some of Tomoko's expressions are unsettling, to say the least.
** For example: the first episode, where she threatens Tomoki that she would kill herself if he didn't talk to her. With the aforementioned expressions and dark atmosphere, it makes it seem like she would seriously kill herself.
** The anime's opening provides a good example during the sequence where Tomoko is posing like a prison inmate. After a couple frames, Tomoko flashes a SlasherSmile. A half-second later, she [[CameraAbuse lunges forwards and claws the camera]] with a crazed expression on her face. The semi-stop motion way the sequence is animated, plus Tomoko's stringy black hair, bring Film/TheRing to mind. Tomoko's actual character is [[ShrinkingViolet hardly intimidating]], but still...
