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* "Deadlock" (ep. 9): The episode starts with nightmare fuel and continues all the way through. First, a mass-murderer escapes using a plastic weapon and key for his handcuffs, stabbing two officers on-screen. The police follow a trail of his friends and family, ending with the dead body of a guy he got a gun from, and a now armed mass murderer. He's finally caught after taking a school of girls hostage, and ultimately killing everyone of them in the room. Not to mention the fact that he threatens the ADA, and says every day in court gives him another chance to escape. When the father of one of the girls he shot kills him on the courthouse steps, you'd come close to cheering.
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* "Deadlock" (ep. 9): "Avatar" begins with a young boy looking online at a {{Website/Facebook}}/{{Website/MySpace}} {{Expy}} with a picture of a brutally murdered woman dressed as a prostitute, left tied to a chair and DiesWideOpen in an abandoned warehouse and the only picture profile of the assailant who put the picture up with a mysterious man with a large, distinctive scar on his neck. The man turns out to be a psychopath who eventually kidnaps and rapes the woman's teenaged daughter, only to learn that she was the one who set up her mother to be murdered because of their ''very'' troubled relationship and had initiated several people through sex into killing her.
* "Deadlock": The episode starts withnightmare fuel NightmareFuel and continues all the way through. First, a mass-murderer escapes using a plastic weapon [[SinisterShiv shiv]] and key for his handcuffs, stabbing two officers on-screen. The police follow a trail of his friends and family, ending with the dead body of a guy he got a gun from, and a now armed mass murderer. He's finally caught after taking a school of girls hostage, and ultimately killing everyone of them in the room. Not to mention the fact that he threatens the ADA, and says every day in court gives him another chance to escape. When the father of one of the girls he shot kills him on the courthouse steps, you'd come close to cheering.
* "Deadlock": The episode starts with
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* "Avatar" begins with a young boy looking online at a Facebook/Myspace expy with a picture of a brutally murdered woman dressed as a prostitute, left tied to a chair and DiesWideOpen in an abandoned warehouse and the only picture profile of the assailant who put the picture up with a mysterious man with a large, distinctive scar on his face. The man turns out to be a psychopath who eventually kidnaps and rapes the woman's teenaged daughter, only to learn that she was the one who set up her mother to be murdered because of their ''very'' troubled relationship and had initiated several people through sex into killing her.
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* "Choice of Evils" (ep. 15) has a realtor and her client annoyed that an apparent homeless man is squatting in a warehouse. When she stomps her foot to awaken the man, he doesn't wake, but a big black rat scurries from underneath his blanket, scaring her and it's revealed he's dead. Even worse is what an [[AssholeVictim absolute acumbag/sociopath the man was, being a violent killer]] [[InTheBlood just like his serial killer father]] who frequently beat his girlfiend, even after she became pregnant and threatened his family to the point that his own mother killed him just to protect those around him.
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* "Choice of Evils" (ep. 15) has a realtor and her client annoyed that an apparent homeless man is squatting in a warehouse. When she stomps her foot to awaken the man, he doesn't wake, but a big black rat scurries from underneath his blanket, scaring her and it's revealed he's dead. Even worse is what an [[AssholeVictim absolute acumbag/sociopath scumbag/sociopath the man was, being a violent killer]] [[InTheBlood just like his serial killer father]] who frequently beat his girlfiend, even after she became pregnant and threatened his family to the point that his own mother killed him just to protect those around him.
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* "Deadlock" (ep. 9): The episode starts with nightmare fuel and continues all the way through. First, a mass-murderer escapes using a plastic weapon and key for his handcuffs, stabbing two officers onscreen. The police follow a trail of his friends and family, ending with a dead body, and a now armed mass murderer. He's finally caught after taking a school of girls hostage, and ultimately killing everyone of them in the room. Not to mention the fact that he threatens the ADA, and says every day in court gives him another chance to escape. When the father of one of the girls he shot kills him on the courthouse steps, you'd come close to cheering.
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* "Deadlock" (ep. 9): The episode starts with nightmare fuel and continues all the way through. First, a mass-murderer escapes using a plastic weapon and key for his handcuffs, stabbing two officers onscreen. on-screen. The police follow a trail of his friends and family, ending with a the dead body, body of a guy he got a gun from, and a now armed mass murderer. He's finally caught after taking a school of girls hostage, and ultimately killing everyone of them in the room. Not to mention the fact that he threatens the ADA, and says every day in court gives him another chance to escape. When the father of one of the girls he shot kills him on the courthouse steps, you'd come close to cheering.
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-->'''Pollit''': ''(shakes his head)'' What's the point?
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-->'''Pollit''': ''(shakes his head)'' [[DespairEventHorizon What's the point?point?]]
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-->'''Defense Attorney:''' Ms. Schwimmer, did you conspire with Celeste [=McClure=] to [[MoralMyopia bomb the Chelsea Women's Choice Center]], as well as seven other abortion clinics?\\
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-->'''Defense Attorney:''' Ms. Schwimmer, did you conspire with Celeste [=McClure=] to [[MoralMyopia [[ActivistFundamentalistAntics bomb the Chelsea Women's Choice Center]], Center, as well as seven other abortion clinics?\\clinics]]?\\
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'''Schwimmer:''' [[TheFundamentalist Not before God.]]\\
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'''Schwimmer:''' [[TheFundamentalist [[MoralMyopia Not before God.]]\\
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-->'''Defense Attorney:''' Ms. Schwimmer, did you conspire with Celeste [=McClure=] to bomb the Chelsea Women's Choice Center, as well as seven other abortion clinics?\\
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-->'''Defense Attorney:''' Ms. Schwimmer, did you conspire with Celeste [=McClure=] to [[MoralMyopia bomb the Chelsea Women's Choice Center, Center]], as well as seven other abortion clinics?\\
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'''Schwimmer:''' How dare you object, Mr. Stone? We've done our homework. You were baptized. You go to communion, and you prosecute me?! [[MoralMyopia All the abortions in that clinic are murder, and you know it.]] It must stop! [[TheNeedsOfTheMany Mary Donovan's death was tragic, but if it prevents one abortion, the scales are balanced.]] Abortion must end! ''[[AntiquatedLinguistics Are we a nation who can tolerate the abortionist sticking his hand in a mother's womb and strangling God's creation?!]]''
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'''Schwimmer:''' How dare you object, Mr. Stone? We've done our homework. You were baptized. You go to communion, and you prosecute me?! [[MoralMyopia All the abortions in that clinic are murder, and you know it.]] it. It must stop! [[TheNeedsOfTheMany Mary Donovan's death was tragic, but if it prevents one abortion, the scales are balanced.]] Abortion must end! ''[[AntiquatedLinguistics Are we a nation who can tolerate the abortionist sticking his hand in a mother's womb and strangling God's creation?!]]''
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'''Schwimmer:''' How dare you object, Mr. Stone? We've done our homework. You were baptized. You go to communion, and you prosecute me?! All the abortions in that clinic are murder, and you know it. It must stop! [[TheNeedsOfTheMany Mary Donovan's death was tragic, but if it prevents one abortion, the scales are balanced.]] Abortion must end! ''[[AntiquatedLinguistics Are we a nation who can tolerate the abortionist sticking his hand in a mother's womb and strangling God's creation?!]]''
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'''Schwimmer:''' How dare you object, Mr. Stone? We've done our homework. You were baptized. You go to communion, and you prosecute me?! [[MoralMyopia All the abortions in that clinic are murder, and you know it. it.]] It must stop! [[TheNeedsOfTheMany Mary Donovan's death was tragic, but if it prevents one abortion, the scales are balanced.]] Abortion must end! ''[[AntiquatedLinguistics Are we a nation who can tolerate the abortionist sticking his hand in a mother's womb and strangling God's creation?!]]''
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%% * "In Memory Of" (ep. 7): In addition to the victim's WaitingSkeleton in the remains of an old hotel, who had been missing [[FinallyFoundTheBody since 1960]], it's discovered that he was only a small boy and the [[FromBadToWorse fact that his best friend was molested by her father throughout her childhood and that she walked in on said father brutally murdering the boy in the family's bathroom and washing his blood off of his hands.]]
