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** It's more or less ambiguous [[spoiler:which group the Warden meant when she said they should just shoot them,]] though either implication won't end well for the kids [[spoiler:and [[EvenEvilHasStandards even Dr. Pendanski]] is caught off guard by the suggestion.]]
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** It's made worse (and more [[TearJerker heartbreaking]]) in the film. She pretty much [[spoiler:commits suicide by picking up the lizard and putting her arm to its mouth]]!
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** Even more horrifying; that was ''TruthInTelevision''.
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** TheFilmOfTheBook has Stanley have a close encounter with one when he discovers one crawling up the shower wall behind him. The thing ''hisses at him and begins chasing him'', but just as it leaps toward Stanley, Mr. Sir shoots it dead.
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** When Stanley finds a hole ''full of them''.
** And then when he and Zero [[spoiler:''get stuck in a hole full of them'']].
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* The Warden, Mr. Sir, and Pendanski [[spoiler:were willing to let the lizards bite Stanley and Zero. And after they realize that the lizards won't bite them, ''consider shooting them''. AdultFear, since the authorities that are suppose to protect you don't care if you were to live or die.]]
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* Sam's lynching. It's not really elaborated on, but the implications of the time are horrific.
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** In the ''Camp Greenlake Survival Guide'', it's implied that [[spoiler: [[{{Keet}} Twitch]]]] had an up close and personal encounter with one. [[FridgeHorror the implications behind this are]]...[[KilledOffForReal unsettling]].
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** And then when he and Zero ''get stuck in a hole full of them''.
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