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* To maintain his superior intelligence, The Scarecrow harvests brain matter from smarter individuals, liquefies it, and has someone inject it into his own brain, which is now just a gooey pink mass.
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* To maintain his superior intelligence, The Scarecrow harvests brain matter from smarter individuals, liquefies it, and has someone servants inject it into his own brain, which is now just a gooey pink mass.
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* After the Scarecrow kills Jellia during interrogation, Dorothy magically reanimates her corpse so Jellia can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her. Her eyes are empty black sockets and her mouth hangs open in a frozen scream.
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* After Jellia is killed during interrogation (with the details thankfully left out), Dorothy has the Scarecrow kills Jellia during interrogation, Dorothy magically reanimates reanimate her corpse so Jellia she can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her. Her eyes are empty black sockets and her mouth hangs open in a frozen scream.
-->'''Dorothy''': Deceased or not, I wouldn't want my favorite servant to miss the most fabulous party Oz has ever seen.
-->'''Dorothy''': Deceased or not, I wouldn't want my favorite servant to miss the most fabulous party Oz has ever seen.
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* Shortly after being freed, Maude requests that Amy use her knife to cut her wings off so she can't be controlled anymore. And she can't even scream while it happens, or they'll be caught.
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* After the Scarecrow kills Jellia during interrogation, Dorothy kills Jellia, she magically reanimates her corpse so Jellia can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her. Her eyes are empty black sockets and her mouth hangs open in a frozen scream.
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* Not even minutes after arriving in Oz, Amy comes across a tortured monkey hung upside down from a post and left to die, with a placard next to him that reads "For the Crime of Sass."
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* Not even minutes after arriving in Oz, Amy comes across a tortured monkey hung upside down from a post and left to die, die of exposure, with a placard sign next to him that reads "For the Crime of Sass."
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* After Dorothy kills Jellia Jamb, she magically reanimates her corpse so Jellia can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her. Her eyes are empty black sockets and her mouth hangs open in a frozen scream.
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* To save Amy from being caught as the Order's mole after she frees Maude, Jellia says she did it. She tries to make a last stand against Dorothy with her own magic, but the Lion tears her arm off at the shoulder and ''eats it''.
* After Dorothy killsJellia Jamb, Jellia, she magically reanimates her corpse so Jellia can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her. Her eyes are empty black sockets and her mouth hangs open in a frozen scream.
* After Dorothy kills
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* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff brutally punished for the smallest of offenses. Maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second. Jellia accidentally drops a tiny blob of pink nail polish on the already pink carpet while painting Dorothy's nails, and Dorothy makes her kill a mouse by squeezing it to death and forces her to carry around the rotting corpse in her dress pocket.
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* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff brutally punished for the smallest of offenses. Maids Multiple maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second. Jellia accidentally drops a tiny blob of pink nail polish on the already pink carpet while painting Dorothy's nails, and Dorothy makes her kill a mouse by squeezing it to death and forces her to carry around the rotting corpse in her dress pocket.
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* The Flying Monkeys are bound to serve and obey whoever owns the Golden Cap. Naturally, this sucks, but if you are a Flying Monkey, there is one way to break the Golden Cap's control over you. What is it? Sawing your wings off!
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* The Flying Monkeys are bound to serve and obey whoever owns the Golden Cap. Naturally, this sucks, but if you are a Flying Monkey, there is they've discovered one way to break the Golden Cap's control over you. them. What is it? Sawing your their wings off!
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* After Dorothy kills Jellia Jamb, she magically reanimates her corpse so Jellia can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her.
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* After Dorothy kills Jellia Jamb, she magically reanimates her corpse so Jellia can "attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her. Her eyes are empty black sockets and her mouth hangs open in a frozen scream.
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* When Amy breaks into the Scarecrow's lab to rescue Maude, she sees tables filled with torture instruments, a chair with restraint straps, and jars filled with brains and other body parts like hands, ears, and tiny wings that she guesses came from baby monkeys.
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* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff brutally punished for the smallest of offenses. Maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second.
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* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff brutally punished for the smallest of offenses. Maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second. Jellia accidentally drops a tiny blob of pink nail polish on the already pink carpet while painting Dorothy's nails, and Dorothy makes her kill a mouse by squeezing it to death and forces her to carry around the rotting corpse in her dress pocket.
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* Two of the girls in the Revolutionary Order of the Wicked that Amy meets are Melindra, a girl who is half tin on one side of her body, and Annabel, who used to be a Horner but had her horn chopped off when Dorothy offered large rewards for anyone who brought her a Horner's horn, as it contained powerful magic.
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* Two Many of the girls in the Revolutionary Order of the Wicked that Amy meets are Melindra, Wicked's members have been personally mutilated by Dorothy or her cronies.
** Melindra is a girl who is half tin on one side of herbody, body from being experimented on by the Scarecrow. When she laughs, the flesh and Annabel, who blood side of her face reacts while the metal side remains frozen.
** Annabel used to be aHorner Horner, but had her horn chopped off when Dorothy offered started offering large rewards for anyone who brought her a Horner's horn, as it contained powerful magic.magic. She has a round scar on her forehead that is described as "smooth as exposed bone".
** Glamora has a crescent shaped hole in her cheek from her twin sister Glinda through which her teeth can be seen.
** Melindra is a girl who is half tin on one side of her
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** Glamora has a crescent shaped hole in her cheek from her twin sister Glinda through which her teeth can be seen.
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* The Flying Monkeys are bound to serve and obey whoever owns the Golden Cap. Naturally, this sucks, but if you are a Flying Monkey, there is one way to break the Golden Cap's control over you. What is it? Sawing your wings off!
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsaccharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld ruled by the mad tyrant Princess Dorothy, with her friends serving as her enforcers.
* Because HappinessIsMandatory in Dorothy-ruled Oz, people use a lipgloss-like cosmetic product called [=PermaSmile=] that forces the corners of your mouth upwards when applied.
* Because HappinessIsMandatory in Dorothy-ruled Oz, people use a lipgloss-like cosmetic product called [=PermaSmile=] that forces the corners of your mouth upwards when applied.
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsaccharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld ruled by the mad tyrant Princess Dorothy, with her friends the Scarecrow, Tin Man and Lion serving as her enforcers.
* Because HappinessIsMandatory in Dorothy-ruled Oz, people use a lipgloss-like cosmetic product called [=PermaSmile=] that forces the corners of your mouth upwards into a SlasherSmile.
* Two of the girls in the Revolutionary Order of the Wicked that Amy meets are Melindra, a girl who is half tin on one side of her body, and Annabel, who used to be a Horner but had her horn chopped off whenapplied.Dorothy offered large rewards for anyone who brought her a Horner's horn, as it contained powerful magic.
* Because HappinessIsMandatory in Dorothy-ruled Oz, people use a lipgloss-like cosmetic product called [=PermaSmile=] that forces the corners of your mouth upwards into a SlasherSmile.
* Two of the girls in the Revolutionary Order of the Wicked that Amy meets are Melindra, a girl who is half tin on one side of her body, and Annabel, who used to be a Horner but had her horn chopped off when
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!!''Dorothy Must Die''
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* Amy, while disguised as a maid named Astrid, gets a promotion to Dorothy's new lady-in-waiting because the previous one, Hannah, got mauled by the Lion and reconstructed by the Scarecrow into a Tin Soldier.
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* In Dorothy's prequel, ''No Place Like Oz,'' Aunt Em and Uncle Henry are dragged with Dorothy to Oz. Imagine the poor farm animals left behind, trapped and unable to eat.
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* To keep his superior intelligence, The Scarecrow takes the brain matter from smarter individuals, liquefies it, and has someone inject it into his own brain, which is now just a gooey pink mass.
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* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff tortured and executed brutally punished for the smallest of offenses. Maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second.
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsaccharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsaccharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.CrapsackWorld ruled by the mad tyrant Princess Dorothy, with her friends serving as her enforcers.
* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff tortured and executed for the smallest of offenses. Maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second.
* Dorothy regularly has palace servants and staff tortured and executed for the smallest of offenses. Maids have been executed because they brushed the princess's hair with 999 or 1,001 strokes instead of exactly 1,000. A young guard gets his eye popped out and eaten by the Lion for directly looking at Dorothy's face for a second.
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* After Dorothy kills Jelia Jamb, she intentionally reanimates her so she can stand around at her party.
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* After Dorothy kills Jelia Jellia Jamb, she intentionally magically reanimates her corpse so she Jellia can stand around at her party."attend" the party as a warning to anyone else thinking of crossing her.
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* In Dorothy's prequel, ''No Place Like Oz,'' Aunt Em and Uncle Henry are dragged with Dorothy to Oz. Imagine the poor farm animals left behind, trapped and unable to eat.
* In Dorothy's prequel, ''No Place Like Oz,'' Aunt Em and Uncle Henry are dragged with Dorothy to Oz. Imagine the poor farm animals left behind, trapped and unable to eat.
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsaccharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsaccharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.CrapsackWorld.
* After Dorothy kills Jelia Jamb, she intentionally reanimates her so she can stand around at her party.
* After Dorothy kills Jelia Jamb, she intentionally reanimates her so she can stand around at her party.
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* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsachharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.
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* [[spoiler: Indigo's death. Pink bubbles are blown at her by one of the Tin Woodsman's cronies, which stick to her skin and melt her into a puddle of blood and bones.]]
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* To keep his superior intelligence, The Scarecrow takes the brain matter from smarter individuals, liquefies it, and has someone inject it into his own brain, which is now just a gooey pink mass.mass.
* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsachharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.
* Oz isn't beating any bushes - it's not even a CrapsachharineWorld, it's an utterly CrapsackWorld.
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* [[spoiler: To keep his superior intelligence, The Scarecrow takes the brain matter from smarter individuals, liquefies it, and has someone inject it into his own brain, which is now just a gooey pink mass.]]
