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** Her decay was accelerated after [[spoiler: the Auditor shoved her arm through the Void gate]]. Nice.
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* Commander R_V of the State satellite O-Warp Fortune sent out a distress message to any facilities that happened to be listening; only A_J replied. He spoke of his lack of food, his dying crew, his ship's inevitable crash into the earth. A month later, the crash happened not so far from the facility - he was the ''only'' survivor. He would have been entirely alone while his crew died around him [[spoiler: or rather, were killed and devoured by him]], most likely expecting to die upon impact himself. How's ''that'' for NightmareFuel?
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* Commander R_V of the State satellite O-Warp Fortune sent out a distress message to any facilities that happened to be listening; only A_J replied. He spoke of his lack of food, his dying crew, his ship's inevitable crash into the earth. A month later, the crash happened not so far from the facility - he was the ''only'' survivor. He would have been entirely alone while his crew died around him [[spoiler: or rather, were killed and devoured by him]], him, most likely expecting to die upon impact himself. How's ''that'' for NightmareFuel?NightmareFuel?
** Added horror with the realisation that his crew ''didn't'' die around him. [[spoiler: He killed and ate them.]]
** Added horror with the realisation that his crew ''didn't'' die around him. [[spoiler: He killed and ate them.]]
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* Commander R_V of the State satellite O-Warp Fortune sent out a distress message to any facilities that happened to be listening; only A_J replied. He spoke of his lack of food, his dying crew, his ship's inevitable crash into the earth. A month later, the crash happened not so far from the facility - he was the ''only'' survivor. He would have been entirely alone while his crew died around him, most likely expecting to die upon impact himself. How's ''that'' for NightmareFuel?
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* Commander R_V of the State satellite O-Warp Fortune sent out a distress message to any facilities that happened to be listening; only A_J replied. He spoke of his lack of food, his dying crew, his ship's inevitable crash into the earth. A month later, the crash happened not so far from the facility - he was the ''only'' survivor. He would have been entirely alone while his crew died around him, him [[spoiler: or rather, were killed and devoured by him]], most likely expecting to die upon impact himself. How's ''that'' for NightmareFuel?
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* A_J and Breyos have [[spoiler:recently begun capturing anyone outside the Silo who wanders by to experiment on]]. The most recent victim [[spoiler:is Blue, who was watching the Silo with Cy who had left to get food. Imagine Cy's horror when she returned to find her friend gone and BLOOD ALL OVER THE FLOOR]].
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* A_J and Breyos have [[spoiler:recently begun capturing anyone outside the Silo who wanders by to experiment on]]. The most recent victim [[spoiler:is Blue, who was watching the Silo with Cy who had left to get food. Imagine Cy's horror when she returned to find her friend gone and BLOOD ALL OVER THE FLOOR]].FLOOR]].
* Commander R_V of the State satellite O-Warp Fortune sent out a distress message to any facilities that happened to be listening; only A_J replied. He spoke of his lack of food, his dying crew, his ship's inevitable crash into the earth. A month later, the crash happened not so far from the facility - he was the ''only'' survivor. He would have been entirely alone while his crew died around him, most likely expecting to die upon impact himself. How's ''that'' for NightmareFuel?
* Commander R_V of the State satellite O-Warp Fortune sent out a distress message to any facilities that happened to be listening; only A_J replied. He spoke of his lack of food, his dying crew, his ship's inevitable crash into the earth. A month later, the crash happened not so far from the facility - he was the ''only'' survivor. He would have been entirely alone while his crew died around him, most likely expecting to die upon impact himself. How's ''that'' for NightmareFuel?
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* Hector regrowing his damaged eye right in front of Req is up there among 'creepiest things to have ever happened'.
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* Hector regrowing his damaged eye right in front of Req is up there among 'creepiest things to have ever happened'.happened'.
* A_J and Breyos have [[spoiler:recently begun capturing anyone outside the Silo who wanders by to experiment on]]. The most recent victim [[spoiler:is Blue, who was watching the Silo with Cy who had left to get food. Imagine Cy's horror when she returned to find her friend gone and BLOOD ALL OVER THE FLOOR]].
* A_J and Breyos have [[spoiler:recently begun capturing anyone outside the Silo who wanders by to experiment on]]. The most recent victim [[spoiler:is Blue, who was watching the Silo with Cy who had left to get food. Imagine Cy's horror when she returned to find her friend gone and BLOOD ALL OVER THE FLOOR]].
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** Everything about the Auditor, really. Everything. But especially the face.
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* What's under Nights' mask. [[spoiler:The numbers 4 and 2 branded across her mouth to mark her as a slave/'asset' of the State]].
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* What's under Nights' mask. [[spoiler:The numbers 4 and 2 branded across her mouth to mark her as a slave/'asset' of the State]].State]].
* Hector regrowing his damaged eye right in front of Req is up there among 'creepiest things to have ever happened'.
* Hector regrowing his damaged eye right in front of Req is up there among 'creepiest things to have ever happened'.
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* A_J is ''literally decaying'' due to extended exposure to the Void. The grey patches on her skin have slowly grown with each trip through it.
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* A_J is ''literally decaying'' literally decaying due to extended exposure to the Void. The grey patches on her skin have slowly grown with each trip through it.
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* Pythos being left behind after the Needle Incident, having to survive ''on her own'' in the middle of what could best be described as a ''nuclear winter''.
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* Pythos being left behind after the Needle Incident, having to survive ''on on her own'' own in the middle of what could best be described as a ''nuclear winter''.nuclear winter.
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* Pythos being left behind after the Needle Incident, having to survive ''on her own'' in the middle of what could best be described as a ''nuclear winter'.
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* Pythos being left behind after the Needle Incident, having to survive ''on her own'' in the middle of what could best be described as a ''nuclear winter'.winter''.
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* Kaja's true form.
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* Kaja's true form.form.
* Pythos being left behind after the Needle Incident, having to survive ''on her own'' in the middle of what could best be described as a ''nuclear winter'.
* What's under Nights' mask. [[spoiler:The numbers 4 and 2 branded across her mouth to mark her as a slave/'asset' of the State]].
* Pythos being left behind after the Needle Incident, having to survive ''on her own'' in the middle of what could best be described as a ''nuclear winter'.
* What's under Nights' mask. [[spoiler:The numbers 4 and 2 branded across her mouth to mark her as a slave/'asset' of the State]].
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* A_J is ''literally decaying'' due to extended exposure to the Void. The grey patches on her skin have slowly grown with each trip through it.
* Similarly...whatever it is that's happened to the Auditor's face, it's ''horrifying''.
* Kaja's true form.
* Similarly...whatever it is that's happened to the Auditor's face, it's ''horrifying''.
* Kaja's true form.
