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* NoRomanticResolution: Azuma harbors a crush on Shizuka that leads him to make bad decisions, while [[spoiler:the original timeline had him involved with Marina and Shizuka romantically]]. By the end, the focus is put on [[spoiler:the budding friendship between the final timeline's version of the main characters]] over all else, with no romance mentioned at all.
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* CycleOfRevenge: Marina bullying Shizuka and taking [[BigFriendlyDog Chappy]] away from her, caused Shizuka's [[spoiler: attempted suicide, leading to Shizuka to ruin Marina's life leading to [[MurderSuicide Marina murdering her mother in self-defense and killing herself soon after.]]]]

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* CycleOfRevenge: Marina bullying Shizuka and taking [[BigFriendlyDog Chappy]] away from her, caused Shizuka's [[spoiler: attempted suicide, leading to Shizuka to ruin Marina's life steal her boyfriend Azuma years later, leading to [[MurderSuicide Marina murdering her mother in self-defense and killing herself soon after.]]]]
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* BlameTheParamour: Marina's toxic home life includes her abusive father staying out late with prostitutes and fighting with his wife when he's home. Marina blames this on Shizuka's mother, his favorite prostitute, and bullies Shizuka as a proxy for her.
* BullyTurnedBuddy: [[spoiler:With his help, Takopi eventually ends up causing Shizuka and Marina to become friends]].



* GenreRefugee: The title character is a tiny octopus alien that wouldn't be out of place in a {{Kodomomuke}} series, supplying ''Anime/{{Doraemon}}''-style gadgets to kids to help them be happy. The world he landed in, however, is a cynical drama where the children's problems extend far beyond what Takopi can assist with his gadgets.
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* DeconReconSwitch: The entire story is a deconstruction of ''Manga/{{Doraemon}}''-style "magical buddy" wish-fulfillment stories, with Takopi's inventions often making Shizuka's situation much worse. Takopi can barely understand humans and has no idea how we really think, so his simplistic, short-term fixes to the problems the three main characters face just end up causing more problems in the future. [[spoiler:Before he lost his memories, he also adopted the idea of killing Shizuka to make Marina happy ''scarily'' quickly, which shows just how dangerous his shallow worldview really is.]] That being said, Takopi ''really does want to help'', [[spoiler:and he eventually fixes the situation by sacrificing his own life.]]

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* DeconReconSwitch: The entire story is a deconstruction of ''Manga/{{Doraemon}}''-style "magical buddy" wish-fulfillment stories, with Takopi's inventions often making Shizuka's situation much worse. Takopi can barely understand humans and has no idea how we really think, so his simplistic, short-term fixes to the problems the three main characters face just end up causing more problems in the future. [[spoiler:Before he lost his memories, he also adopted the idea of killing Shizuka to make Marina happy ''scarily'' quickly, which shows just how dangerous his shallow worldview really is.]] That being said, Takopi ''really does want to help'', [[spoiler:and he eventually fixes the situation by sacrificing his own life. And for what it's worth, the final chapters show that beyond him just dying, Takopi's influence on the two main girls actually stuck with them in the final timeline, showing that his compassion for them wasn't misplaced and did allow them to come together and heal.]]
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* DramaticIrony: [[spoiler:Takopi's initial goal after befriending Marina in 2022 is to kill Shizuka. When he time travels to the past to do it and loses his memories, befriending Shizuka in his amnesiac state flips his goal to making her happy in a much less violent manner; yet the first time he gets Shizuka to crack a smile is by accidentally killing Marina, the girl he originally set out to save.]]

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* TheChainOfHarm: Marina's father takes his frustrations out on her mother, whom in turn abuses her. Marina herself uses bullying Shizuka as an outlet. There are multiple manga panels showcasing how Marina's actions mirror that of her mother's.



* TheChainOfHarm: There are multiple manga panels showcasing how Marina's actions mirror that of her mother's.
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** Azuma turns into a LoveMartyr, willing to do anything Marina says at the cost of his own sanity out of fear he'll lose the only person who's shown him positive affection.

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** Azuma turns into a LoveMartyr, willing to do anything Marina Shizuka says at the cost of his own sanity out of fear he'll lose the only person who's shown him positive affection.
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Shizuka lives a hard life. Her father isn't living with her, her mother is rarely home, and she's mercilessly bullied at school her cruel classmate Marina. But it isn't all bad -- she has her [[BigFriendlyDog pet Chappy]], who makes everything okay. Unbeknownst to her, Shizuka is about to get a very special guest in [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Takopi]], an alien from another world! His first order of business is to spread happiness throughout our planet, and his first person to help is Shizuka. After spending some time together, Takopi promises to make her smile, and Shizuka accepts his friendship.

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Shizuka lives a hard life. Her father isn't living with her, her mother is rarely home, and she's mercilessly bullied at school by her cruel classmate classmate, Marina. But it isn't all bad -- she has her [[BigFriendlyDog pet Chappy]], who makes everything okay. Unbeknownst to her, Shizuka is about to get a very special guest in [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Takopi]], an alien from another world! His first order of business is to spread happiness throughout our planet, and his first person to help is Shizuka. After spending some time together, Takopi promises to make her smile, and Shizuka accepts his friendship.
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* DeathIsTheOnlyOption: Takopi exhausts every option he can think of through time travel to make the main characters happy. He uses the last of his power to rewind time and help Shizuka and Marina become friends, which kills him.

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* DeathIsTheOnlyOption: Takopi exhausts every option he can think of through time travel to make the main characters happy. He [[spoiler:He uses the last of his power to rewind time and help Shizuka and Marina become friends, which kills him.]]
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* AdultsAreUseless: Every single adult in the entire story is terrible at their job in ''some'' way. Shizuka's mom is never home and her dad abandoned her [[spoiler:to start another family]], Marina's father left her mother when [[spoiler:he was found to be visiting Shizuka's mother for prostitution]] and as a result her mother has become [[SanitySlippage highly volatile]], and Azuma's mother is demanding and emotionally abusive.

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* AdultsAreUseless: Every single adult in the entire story is terrible at their job in ''some'' way. Shizuka's mom is never home and her dad abandoned her [[spoiler:to start another family]], Marina's father left her mother when [[spoiler:he was found to be visiting Shizuka's mother for prostitution]] and as a result her mother has become [[SanitySlippage highly volatile]], and Azuma's mother is demanding and emotionally abusive.abusive while his father doesn't seem to be around much.
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* CycleOfRevenge: Marina bullying Shizuka and taking [[BigFriendlyDog Chappy]] away from her, caused Shizuka's [[spoiler: attempted suicide, which leading to Shizuka Azuma to ruin Marina's life leading to

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* CycleOfRevenge: Marina bullying Shizuka and taking [[BigFriendlyDog Chappy]] away from her, caused Shizuka's [[spoiler: attempted suicide, which leading to Shizuka Azuma to ruin Marina's life leading to [[MurderSuicide Marina murdering her mother in self-defense and killing herself soon after.]]]]
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* CycleOfRevenge: Marina bullying Shizuka and taking [[BigFriendlyDog Chappy]] away from her, caused Shizuka's [[spoiler: attempted suicide, which leading to Shizuka Azuma to ruin Marina's life leading to
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* TheChainOfAbuse:

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* TheChainOfAbuse:TheChainOfHarm: There are multiple manga panels showcasing how Marina's actions mirror that of her mother's.
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* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: Azuma's mother often bribes him with fluffy pancakes he can eat if he gets a perfect score on his tests. He's never gotten the chance to because he typically [[TheBGrade gets a point or two off]], causing his mom to take them away at dinnertime and berate him for his failure. The practice has conditioned him into [[DesperatelyCravesAffection desperately craving affection]] from others, and believing that he needs to do everything they ask in order to maintain it. When stress from [[spoiler:being a SecretKeeper for Marina's death]] causes his grades to drop, his mom seems to understand what she's doing and gives him the pancakes as consolation... before revealing she thought it was a stunt for attention, and if he's not going to try to do better anymore, she won't try for him either. The pancakes she gives to him are a sign of giving up on him.

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* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: Azuma's mother often bribes him with fluffy pancakes he can eat if he gets a perfect score on his tests. He's never gotten the chance to because he typically [[TheBGrade gets a point or two off]], causing his mom to take them away at dinnertime and berate him for his failure. The practice has conditioned him into [[DesperatelyCravesAffection desperately craving affection]] from others, and believing that he needs to do everything they ask in order to maintain it. When stress from [[spoiler:being a SecretKeeper for Marina's death]] causes his grades to drop, his mom seems to understand what she's doing and gives him the pancakes as consolation... before revealing she thought it was a stunt for attention, and if he's not going to try to do better anymore, she won't try for expect anything from him either. The pancakes she gives to him are a sign of giving up on him.

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* DeathIsTheOnlyOption: Takopi exhausts every option he can think of through time travel to make the main characters happy. He uses the last of his power to rewind time and help Shizuka and Marina become friends, which kills him.



* FlashSideways: [[spoiler:In the final timeline, all three kids still have some memory of Takopi despite him never meeting them. Marina makes fun of Shizuka for not wearing her usual head flower, and both girls tear up at a doodle of Takopi in Shizuka's notebook, imagining it would be an annoying but good friend if it was real. They even think a pen with a cat topper resembles the Saturn Cat Ball Pen, despite both considering it a case of StrangeMindsThinkAlike at the time. Azuma also starts a genuine relationship with his brother by fighting over something petty like he told Takopi to tell his past self.]]



* FlashSideways: [[spoiler:In the final timeline, all three kids still have some memory of Takopi despite him never meeting them. Marina makes fun of Shizuka for not wearing her usual head flower, and both girls tear up at a doodle of Takopi in Shizuka's notebook, imagining it would be an annoying but good friend if it was real. They even think a pen with a cat topper resembles the Saturn Cat Ball Pen, despite both considering it a case of StrangeMindsThinkAlike at the time. Azuma also starts a genuine relationship with his brother by fighting over something petty like he told Takopi to tell his past self.]]

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* FlashSideways: [[spoiler:In the final timeline, all three GenreRefugee: The title character is a tiny octopus alien that wouldn't be out of place in a {{Kodomomuke}} series, supplying ''Anime/{{Doraemon}}''-style gadgets to kids still have some memory of to help them be happy. The world he landed in, however, is a cynical drama where the children's problems extend far beyond what Takopi despite him never meeting them. Marina makes fun of Shizuka for not wearing her usual head flower, and both girls tear up at a doodle of Takopi in Shizuka's notebook, imagining it would be an annoying but good friend if it was real. They even think a pen with a cat topper resembles the Saturn Cat Ball Pen, despite both considering it a case of StrangeMindsThinkAlike at the time. Azuma also starts a genuine relationship can assist with his brother by fighting over something petty like he told Takopi to tell his past self.]]gadgets.



* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Chapter 12 reveals this happened to [[spoiler:Takopi. He came to Earth in 2022, and after coming to understand Marina and her problems, believes the only way he can help her be happy is by killing Shizuka. When he went back home to use the Big Happy Clock, his mother took his memories for breaking their planet's law.]]

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* InnocentMeansNaive: Takopi is a Happian, an {{Innocent Alien|s}} from a planet where all the inhabitants generally get along (with some rules) and he's taught to help others. However, his childlike innocence means he's not accustomed to the more complex morality of Earth, and he's unaware of what concepts like murder are. [[spoiler:This proves to be a problem, as he resolves to help a BadFuture version of Marina be happy by killing Shizuka in the past, despite not knowing the full weight of what this means.]]
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Chapter 12 reveals this happened to [[spoiler:Takopi. He that [[spoiler:Takopi came to Earth in 2022, and after coming to understand Marina and her problems, believes the only way he can help her be happy is by killing Shizuka. When he went back home to use the Big Happy Clock, his mother took his memories for breaking their planet's law.]]


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* TenderTomboyishnessFoulFemininity: Zig-zagged with Shizuka and Marina. Shizuka is unkempt and wears plain t-shirts and shorts, and initially is the victim of bullying by haughty, stylish Marina, who torments her with her GirlPosse. However, the timeline where [[spoiler:Marina dies]] has Shizuka slowly become more manipulative and unhinged, while the timeline where [[spoiler:Shizuka lives to attend high school]] puts spotlight on Marina's own crappy home life. Both are portrayed sympathetically in addition to showing what would drive them to do their deeds, [[spoiler:and the FlashSideways from other timelines help them to end the story as friends.]]

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* TwentyMinutesIntoThePast: The story takes place in 2016, five years before the manga was published.

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* TwentyMinutesIntoThePast: The story takes place in 2016, five years before the manga was published. [[spoiler:The future segments, on the other hand, take place in 2022.]]



* TitleDrop: Chapter 13 is titled "Takopi's Original Sin", the name of this manga.

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* SanitySlippage: Shizuka and Azuma slowly start falling apart after [[spoiler:disposing of Marina]].
** Shizuka's desperation to get Chappy back and see her father leads to a downward spiral of manipulation and spur-of-the-moment plans, culminating in an incident where she [[spoiler: kidnaps her dad's other kids, thinking them impostors]].
** Azuma turns into a LoveMartyr, willing to do anything Marina says at the cost of his own sanity out of fear he'll lose the only person who's shown him positive affection.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: Done multiple times by Takopi throughout the story:
** Takopi uses the power of the Happy Camera to prevent [[spoiler:Shizuka's suicide]] (which he succeeds at), as well as attempt to prevent Chappy getting sent away (which he fails at).
** [[spoiler:After becoming friends with Marina, Takopi decides to go back to make sure her future isn't miserable... by killing Shizuka, the "source" of her problems.]]
** [[spoiler:In the end, Takopi uses the last of his power to turn back time far enough and help the kids start reaching out to each other, at the cost of his own life.]]
* TitleDrop: Chapter 13 is titled "Takopi's Original Sin", the name [[spoiler:which turns out to be helping Shizuka kill and dispose of this manga.Marina.]]
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* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: Azuma's mother often bribes him with fluffy pancakes he can eat if he gets a perfect score on his tests. He's never gotten the chance to because he typically [[TheBGrade gets a point or two off]], causing his mom to take them away at dinnertime and berate him for his failure. The practice has conditioned him into [[DesperatelyCravesAffection desperately craving affection]] from others, and believing that he needs to do everything they ask in order to maintain it. When stress from [[spoiler:being a SecretKeeper for Marina's death]] causes his grades to drop, his mom seems to understand what she's doing and gives him the pancakes as consolation... before revealing she thought it was a stunt for attention, and if he's not going to try to do better anymore, she won't try for him either. The pancake she gives to him is a sign of giving up on him.

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* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: Azuma's mother often bribes him with fluffy pancakes he can eat if he gets a perfect score on his tests. He's never gotten the chance to because he typically [[TheBGrade gets a point or two off]], causing his mom to take them away at dinnertime and berate him for his failure. The practice has conditioned him into [[DesperatelyCravesAffection desperately craving affection]] from others, and believing that he needs to do everything they ask in order to maintain it. When stress from [[spoiler:being a SecretKeeper for Marina's death]] causes his grades to drop, his mom seems to understand what she's doing and gives him the pancakes as consolation... before revealing she thought it was a stunt for attention, and if he's not going to try to do better anymore, she won't try for him either. The pancake pancakes she gives to him is are a sign of giving up on him.
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The pancake isn't ill-prepared. Its look come from Azuma's perspective after his mom says she give up on him


* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: Azuma's mother often bribes him with fluffy pancakes he can eat if he gets a perfect score on his tests. He's never gotten the chance to because he typically [[TheBGrade gets a point or two off]], causing his mom to take them away at dinnertime and berate him for his failure. The practice has conditioned him into [[DesperatelyCravesAffection desperately craving affection]] from others, and believing that he needs to do everything they ask in order to maintain it. When stress from [[spoiler:being a SecretKeeper for Marina's death]] causes his grades to drop, his mom seems to understand what she's doing and gives him the pancakes as consolation... before revealing she thought it was a stunt for attention, and if he's not going to try to do better anymore, she won't try for him either. He's then "rewarded" with the inverse: he can eat ill-prepared pancakes any time he wants.

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* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: Azuma's mother often bribes him with fluffy pancakes he can eat if he gets a perfect score on his tests. He's never gotten the chance to because he typically [[TheBGrade gets a point or two off]], causing his mom to take them away at dinnertime and berate him for his failure. The practice has conditioned him into [[DesperatelyCravesAffection desperately craving affection]] from others, and believing that he needs to do everything they ask in order to maintain it. When stress from [[spoiler:being a SecretKeeper for Marina's death]] causes his grades to drop, his mom seems to understand what she's doing and gives him the pancakes as consolation... before revealing she thought it was a stunt for attention, and if he's not going to try to do better anymore, she won't try for him either. He's then "rewarded" with the inverse: he can eat ill-prepared pancakes any time he wants.The pancake she gives to him is a sign of giving up on him.
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Shizuka lives a hard life. Her father isn't living with her, her mother is rarely home, and she's mercilessly bullied at school her cruel classmate Marina. But it isn't all bad- she has her [[BigFriendlyDog pet Chappy]], who makes everything okay. Unbeknownst to her, Shizuka is about to get a very special guest in [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Takopi]], an alien from another world! His first order of business is to spread happiness throughout our planet, and his first person to help is Shizuka. After spending some time together, Takopi promises to make her smile, and Shizuka accepts his friendship.

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Shizuka lives a hard life. Her father isn't living with her, her mother is rarely home, and she's mercilessly bullied at school her cruel classmate Marina. But it isn't all bad- bad -- she has her [[BigFriendlyDog pet Chappy]], who makes everything okay. Unbeknownst to her, Shizuka is about to get a very special guest in [[RidiculouslyCuteCritter Takopi]], an alien from another world! His first order of business is to spread happiness throughout our planet, and his first person to help is Shizuka. After spending some time together, Takopi promises to make her smile, and Shizuka accepts his friendship.

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