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** LovableAlphaBitch: Despite the first impression she usually makes, deep down she is actually quite a decent person that cares about others deeply.
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** LovableAlphaBitch: Despite the first impression she usually makes, deep down she is actually quite a decent person that cares about others deeply.
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* AssholeVictim: Even though his suicide is meant to be seen as an Alas, Poor Villain moment, it's really hard to feel any sympathy for [[Spoiler:Yuusuke Nonomiya]], because of how much of a cruel parent he was to [[spoiler:Yuuta]].
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* AssholeVictim: Even though his suicide is meant to be seen as an Alas, Poor Villain moment, it's really hard to feel any sympathy for [[Spoiler:Yuusuke [[spoiler:Yuusuke Nonomiya]], because of how much of a cruel parent he was to [[spoiler:Yuuta]].
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* AssholeVictim: Even though his suicide is meant to be seen as an Alas, Poor Villain moment, it's really hard to feel any sympathy for [[Spoiler:Yuusuke Nonomiya]], because of how much of a cruel parent he was to [[spoiler:Yuuta]].
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* AccidentalPervert: Played with; more than once Nono seizes on the assumption that s/he's a pervert transvestite rather than a girl.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Nono likes Amatsu, who likes Kourogi, who likes Yuuta (Nono). [[spoiler:Kishitani]] likes Nono after finding out she's a girl, and the Emperor falls for her as well after seeing her dressed as a girl named Noriko. Komachi, the Emperor's sister, has a crush on Nono's disguise as Yuuta. There's also Satou, a side character, who has his fascination with "Yuuta" explored in a chapter of the manga.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Nono likes Amatsu, who likes Kourogi, who likes Yuuta (Nono).(Nono), who like Kourogi. [[spoiler:Kishitani]] likes Nono after finding out she's a girl, and the Emperor falls for her as well after seeing her dressed as a girl named Noriko. Komachi, the Emperor's sister, has a crush on Nono's disguise as Yuuta. There's also Satou, a side character, who has his fascination with "Yuuta" explored in a chapter of the manga.
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* ShownTheirWork: Okamoto did quite a bit of travelling to study ski jumping rules and techniques, and shows great attention to detail with each jump the characters make.
* SlasherSmile: It's from the creator of ''ElfenLied'', what do you expect? The Emperor gets the best ones by far, but Nonomiya of all people gets plenty of good ones too. Mostly when she's trying to play it up for intimidation.
* SlasherSmile: It's from the creator of ''ElfenLied'', what do you expect? The Emperor gets the best ones by far, but Nonomiya of all people gets plenty of good ones too. Mostly when she's trying to play it up for intimidation.
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* ShownTheirWork: Okamoto [[Creator/LynnOkamoto Okamoto]] did quite a bit of travelling to study ski jumping rules and techniques, and shows great attention to detail with each jump the characters make.
* SlasherSmile: It's from the creator of''ElfenLied'', ''Manga/ElfenLied'', what do you expect? The Emperor gets the best ones by far, but Nonomiya of all people gets plenty of good ones too. Mostly when she's trying to play it up for intimidation.
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* TheWatson: Every ski jumping scene has someone around who doesn't know anything about the sport, just so they can have the statistics of each jump explained to them.
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* InsaneTrollLogic: [[spoiler:Kishitani was forced to changing Nono's clothes after she got into a fever when trying to look for the Emperor's trinket. Kishitani believes that since he likes ''her'' and considers her a ''guy'', it is perfectly fine for him to erotically change her clothes.]]
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* UpToEleven: The only decidedly Science Fiction aspect is the reporter's ability to sense aura, which determines the person's success later on in life. Katou, the earlier ski jumper who pulled an impressive stunt, was sensed as having a pretty good aura. Nono?
-->''Geez, where did he crawl out of...''\\
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''Wh--[[BigWhat WHAT THE HELL?!]]''
-->''Geez, where did he crawl out of...''\\
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''Wh--[[BigWhat WHAT THE HELL?!]]''
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Nono Nonomiya's father was a skilled ski jumper, but never won an Olympic medal. His dreams of his children winning one were destroyed when Nono inherited all his ability and not her brother Yuuta, as women are not allowed into the sport. After the death of both her father and Yuuta, Nono decides to honor their memory by taking on her brother's identity and enrolling in a college famed for producing winter sports athletes. But she quickly discovers it will be very hard to keep her secret, let alone earn the respect of her fellow students while aiming to become the school's best jumper.
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Nono Nonomiya's father was a skilled ski jumper, but never won an Olympic medal. His dreams of his children winning one were destroyed when Nono inherited all his ability and not her brother Yuuta, as women are not allowed into the sport. After the death of both her father and Yuuta, Nono decides to honor honour their memory by taking on her brother's identity and enrolling in a college famed for producing winter sports athletes. But she quickly discovers it will be very hard to keep her secret, let alone earn the respect of her fellow students while aiming to become the school's best jumper.
jumper.
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* ItGotWorse: At first it looks like the manga is just about a girl cross-dressing to enter the olympics. From there on the story slowly ups the rape, violence, and asshole antes.
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: "The autopsy said the the body was of a girl" (even though it was Yuuta - a boy's). Even if only the skeleton remains, the shape of the pelvic girdle clearly gives away the real gender.
** However, for the actual focus of the manga (ski jumping), the author [[ShownTheirWork DID do a lot of research]].
** Given the huge amounts of NoticeThis in that particular scene, it may also be setting up for some kind of [[TheReveal reveal]].
** However, for the actual focus of the manga (ski jumping), the author [[ShownTheirWork DID do a lot of research]].
** Given the huge amounts of NoticeThis in that particular scene, it may also be setting up for some kind of [[TheReveal reveal]].
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* [[GratuitousEnglish Gratuitous Norwegian]]: In chapter 3 page 9 are some guys talking Norwegian. Norwegians use å, not ä. So the correct spelling would be forstått not forstätt. And it's one word as you can see. Forstått means understood.
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* CosmicDeadline: The final chapter comes very suddenly, forgetting all about the numerous plot threads that were just introduced in the last tournament.
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* BornLucky: Kishitani. Many people in the series believe that luck is the special skill that he brings to the Okushin team, as he's normally a wildly inconsistent jumper. [[spoiler: A flashback to when he was younger and Chapters 140 and 141]] all but cement that he's blessed by some outside force.
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* EvenTheGuysWantHim: At least one guy has an erotic drems about Nonomiya wihtout knownig that in reality he is a she, and that isn't counting the one guy that tried to rape Nono ''because'' [[DepravedHomosexual he thinks she's a boy.]]
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* EvenTheGuysWantHim: At least one guy has an erotic drems dream about Nonomiya wihtout knownig Nono without knowing that in reality he is a she, and that isn't counting the one guy that tried to rape Nono ''because'' [[DepravedHomosexual he thinks she's a boy.]]
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* BarbieDollAnatomy: Averted when [[spoiler: Kishitani "helps" dress 'Yutta' when she is sick and bedridden. ]]
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* TrainingFromHell: Shiriya's ski jumping practice.
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** LovableAlphaBitch: Despite the first impression she usually makes deep down she is if not kind then at least very decent person that cares about others deeply.
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* AttemptedRape: Ogata was fooled by his new rommate 'Yuuta', but [[DepravedHomosexual that was the problem]].
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** Terashi and his love of cats. Do not insult cats and do not imply that he rapes them, if you know what's good for you.
** Terashi and his love of cats. Do not insult cats and do not imply that he rapes them, if you know what's good for you.
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* CompleteMonster: Many characters apply. But there is a subversion with [[spoiler:Shiriya/Emperor who is later revealed to be quite honorable, if still a total asshole.]]
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* [[EvenEvilHasStandards Even Jerks Have Standards]]:
** Terashi may be incredibly arrogant, as well as being possibly the biggest jerk in the series, but he loves cats and will not tolerate any negative remarks towards them.
** Negita may be a borderline sociopath, but even he finds the jury's attempt to rig the inter-high competition to be over the line.
* EvenTheGuysWantHim: At least one guy has an erotic drems about Nonomiya wihtout knownig that in reality he is a she, and that isn't counting the one guy that tried to rape Nono ''because'' [[DepravedHomosexual hethought she is thinks she's a boy]]boy.]]
** Terashi may be incredibly arrogant, as well as being possibly the biggest jerk in the series, but he loves cats and will not tolerate any negative remarks towards them.
** Negita may be a borderline sociopath, but even he finds the jury's attempt to rig the inter-high competition to be over the line.
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* ItGotWorse: At first it looks like the chapter it's manga is just about a girl cross-dressing to enter the olympics. From there on the story slowly ups the rape, violence, and asshole antes.
* {{Jerkass}}: Many, many characters, ranging from the violent assholes to the snobby elitists.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Many, many characters, ranging from the violent assholes to the snobby elitists.
* LoveDodecahedron: Nono likes Amatsu, who likes Kourogi, who likes Yuuta (Nono).
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* TsunDere: {{Tsundere}}: Kourogi, after the first few chapters. Unusually, she is ''not'' ObliviousToLove, confessing (and being rejected) at their first meeting, and continuing to declare herself his girlfriend throughout the series. Also unusually, the boy she is tsundere for (Yuuta) is actually a girl (Nono).
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* TheWoobie: Nono. Come on, the poor kid has been training all this time to win the Olympic gold medal, [[spoiler:but her dad just didn't care about her effort because, of course, there isn't a women's category in ski jumping, and focused all his attention on Yuuta, whose ability... just wasn't good enough.]]
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