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Romantic Two Girl Friendship (or rather, Pseudo Romantic Friendship as it's been renamed to) is not for crushes or potential (or actual) romantic feelings. Please find more appropriate tropes for such examples


* RomanticTwoGirlFriendship: Anis and Sherine, with heavy emphasis on ''romantic''; playing their first meeting like LoveAtFirstSight is just the tip of the iceberg, and it reaches ThreesomeSubtext after [[spoiler:Sherine marries Anis's husband at Anis's request]].
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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: Several characters do this from time to time, but Amir is definitely the greatest offender. In particular:

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* CompletelyMissingThePoint: ComicallyMissingThePoint: Several characters do this from time to time, but Amir is definitely the greatest offender. In particular:
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Amira or Amir? The official English translation went with Amir (which is based on the kana ''actually'' used by [[Creator/KaoruMori Mori]]) yet her name is spelled Amira in other official translations, like Spanish (which is based in "Amira" being the ''actual'', real-world female name). Fans still debate the issue. That [[Creator/KaoruMori Mori]] has made "interesting" official spellings of non-Japanese names in [[Manga/VictorianRomanceEmma other works of hers]] didn't help, either. This applies to a lot of the names due to the ''huge'' disconnect between Japanese and Turkic languages.

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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Amira or Amir? The official English translation went with Amir (which is based on the kana ''actually'' used by [[Creator/KaoruMori Mori]]) yet her name is spelled Amira in other official translations, like Spanish (which is based in "Amira" being the ''actual'', real-world female name). Fans still debate the issue. That [[Creator/KaoruMori Mori]] has made "interesting" official spellings of non-Japanese names in [[Manga/VictorianRomanceEmma [[Manga/EmmaAVictorianRomance other works of hers]] didn't help, either. This applies to a lot of the names due to the ''huge'' disconnect between Japanese and Turkic languages.
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* MistakenForSpies: Mr.Smith was thrown into a prison once for this reason and only released a few days latter after Ali vouched for him. It remains a concern for him during his travel in Turkestan afterward, as his obvious European look means he will always be suspected as a Russian spy thanks to the then political tension. For this reason Smith sometime assumes fake identity when he's on the road, such as a doctor or a Tatar.

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* MistakenForSpies: Mr.Smith was thrown into a prison once for this reason and only released a few days latter after Ali vouched for him. It remains a concern for him during his travel in Turkestan afterward, as his obvious European look means he will always be suspected as a Russian spy thanks to the then political tension. For this reason This is why Smith sometime assumes fake identity when he's on the road, such as a doctor or a Tatar.
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* MistakenForSpies: Mr.Smith was thrown into a prison once for this reason and only released a few days latter after Ali vouched for him. It remains a concern for him during his travel in Turkestan afterward, as his obvious European look means he will always be suspected as a Russian spy thanks to the then political tension. For this reason Smith sometime assumes fake identity when he's on the road, such as a doctor or a Tatar.

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* RealityEnsues: In volume three, [[spoiler:Mr. Smith and Talas's]] sudden engagement seems to be going along the usual romantic rails, until chapter seventeen. The entire chapter makes it abundantly clear how unrealistic it actually was due to the cultural differences and family ties. [[spoiler:This turns out to be something of a [[SubvertedTrope subverted trope]] in chapter seventy-two, thanks to Talas's determination and the unexpected help from her sixth husband]].


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: In volume three, [[spoiler:Mr. Smith and Talas's]] sudden engagement seems to be going along the usual romantic rails, until chapter seventeen. The entire chapter makes it abundantly clear how unrealistic it actually was due to the cultural differences and family ties. [[spoiler:This turns out to be something of a [[SubvertedTrope subverted trope]] in chapter seventy-two, thanks to Talas's determination and the unexpected help from her sixth husband]].

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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar:
** At the end of chapter nine, Karluk's parents kiss in one panel, the next one is black.
** There are several scenes with Anis and her husband in bed together and nude. [[DidTheyOrDidntThey Whether they were doing anything or not is unclear,]] but it's implied that they did.
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** There are several scenes with Anis and her husband in bed together and nude. [[DidTheyOrDidntThey Whether they were doing anything or not is unclear,]] but it's implied that they did.
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* GildedCage: Anis evidently feels this way about her luxurious home, since her husband is often absent, her baby is being raised by another woman, and she's not allowed to leave or even interact with people other than family. [[spoiler:This feeling is gone when Anis has her husband take Sherine as a second wife; she genuinely enjoys her home and her lush garden with Sherine to share it with, they spend time together as a family, and she gains a new appreciation for her husband and how he cares about her happiness]]. In chapter 86, Anis outright states that before she began to go to the bathes, she was very lonely.

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* GildedCage: Anis evidently feels this way about her luxurious home, since her husband is often absent, her baby is being raised by another woman, and she's not allowed to leave or even interact with people other than family. [[spoiler:This feeling is gone when Anis has her husband take Sherine as a second wife; she genuinely enjoys her home and her lush garden with Sherine to share it with, they spend time together as a family, and she gains a new appreciation for her husband and how he cares about her happiness]]. In chapter 86, Anis outright states that before she began to go to the bathes, baths, she was very lonely.
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* SickEpisode: In Chapter 5, Karluk falls ill with a fever and Amir looks after him until he's healthy again.
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* CornerOfWoe: A variant; when Pariya gets particularly depressed she rolls herself up in a blanket in the middle of the floor like a potato bug.


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* PoorCommunicationKills: When Pariya decides to try and reinvent herself by observing Kamola to learn [[TheAce how she's such a perfect girl]], she starts stalking Kamola around the village, watching her intensely from the shadows in a rather sinister fashion. When Kamola eventually notices her and asks Pariya what she wants, Pariya's nervousness gets the better of her, and even though she's ''thinking "Oh just pretend I'm not here! I'm just watching to see if I can pick up any useful tips!"'', it instead comes out as ''"I was just watching! So leave me alone! It isn't like I wanted to talk to you or anything!"'' Unsurprisingly Kamola goes to see her mother, upset that she seems to have offended Pariya somehow without realising it, and the rumour starts running around the village that Pariya resents Kamola out of jealousy. Fortunely it gets straightened out rather quickly when Kamola comes to apologise to Pariya and, with a bit of help from Amir, they clear up the misunderstanding and become friends instead.
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** Doenplayed by the head of Karluk’s town, who thinks that the armaments left by [[spoiler:the Badan]] will increase their chances, but is wise enough to realize that Russia is ''not'' another tribe, although he has no idea just how large it is.

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** Doenplayed Downplayed by the head of Karluk’s town, who thinks that the armaments left by [[spoiler:the Badan]] will increase their chances, but is wise enough to realize that Russia is ''not'' another tribe, although he has no idea just how large it is.

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Amir isn’t especially tall for a woman, it’s just that Karluk is a kid.


** Somewhat averted by the head of Karluk’s town, who thinks that the armaments left by [[spoiler:the Badan]] will increase their chances, but is wise enough to realize that Russia is ''not'' another tribe, although he has no idea just how large it is.

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** Somewhat averted Doenplayed by the head of Karluk’s town, who thinks that the armaments left by [[spoiler:the Badan]] will increase their chances, but is wise enough to realize that Russia is ''not'' another tribe, although he has no idea just how large it is.



* OneHeadTaller: In an inversion of the usual trope, Amir is one head taller than her husband Karluk because he’s only twelve years old to start with. This is clear whenever they hug, although Karluk is also growing over time.



* TinyGuyHugeGirl: Amir and Karluk. She’s fully-grown, but he’s only twelve and has quite a lot of growing left to do.

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* ACupAngst: Anis is a thin, delicate beauty with a practically flat chest; her breasts didn't even grow after she had a baby. She's kind of fascinated with Sherine's big breasts, then gets downright insecure when the ladies at the bathhouse quip that she looks like a bundle of twigs and ought to put some more meat on her bones. However, when she asks her husband if that's true he tells her in no uncertain terms that he likes her the way she is.

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* ACupAngst: Anis Downplayed in regard to Anis, who is a thin, delicate beauty with a practically flat chest; her breasts didn't even grow after she had a baby. chest. She's kind of fascinated with Sherine's big breasts, then gets downright remaking that her own didn’t grow even after having a baby. She doesn’t seem particularly envious, though, and if she feels insecure when the ladies at the bathhouse quip that she looks like a bundle of twigs and ought to put some more meat on it’s about her bones. However, when she asks overall thin figure rather than just her husband if that's true he tells her in no uncertain terms that he likes her the way she is.breasts.



* AmbiguouslyBi: Both Anis and Sherine love their husbands, but it is very much implied that their feelings for each other are more than just simple friendship. After [[spoiler:Sherine's husband dies, Anis begs her own husband to marry Sherine as well, which leads to Anis and Sherine getting even more intimate, and their story arc ends with all three being happily in love with each other]]. This arrangement results in Anis spending chapter 83 gushing over Sherine and chapter 85 gushing over her husband. Given the sociohistorical context -- private and public segregation of sexes, as well as commonality of marriage -- it's very difficult to tell what these two women’s preferences are.
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: After a brief moment of [[InsecureLoveInterest insecurity]] on Karluk’s part, Amir gives him one in chapter sixty-six. He responds in kind.

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* AmbiguouslyBi: Both Anis and Sherine love their husbands, but it is very much implied that their feelings for each other are more than just simple friendship. After [[spoiler:Sherine's husband dies, Anis begs her own husband to marry Sherine as well, which leads to Anis and Sherine getting even more intimate, and their story arc ends with all three being happily in love with each other]]. This arrangement results in Anis spending chapter 83 gushing over Sherine and chapter 85 gushing over her husband. Given the sociohistorical context -- private and public segregation of sexes, as well as commonality of marriage strong incentives to marry -- it's very difficult to tell what these two women’s preferences are.
* AnachronismStew: Anis owns a Persian cat, but it has the ultra-typed flat face created by American breeders since the 1950s rather than the short-muzzled look of traditional Persians.
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AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: After a brief moment of [[InsecureLoveInterest insecurity]] on Karluk’s part, Amir gives him one in chapter sixty-six. He responds in kind.



* {{Biseinen}} / {{Hunk}}: Many characters tote the line on this one. Azel and Joruk, Amir’s elder brother and cousin respectively, fit this category, as does Mr. Smith’s guide, Ali, to a lesser extent. Yusuf and Mr. Smith (when you can actually see his face) are regular {{Biseinen}}, while Amir’s cousin, Baimat, is arguably a {{Hunk}}.

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* {{Biseinen}} / {{Hunk}}: Many characters tote the line on this one. Azel and Joruk, Amir’s elder brother and cousin respectively, fit this category, as does Mr. Smith’s guide, Ali, to a lesser extent. Yusuf and Mr. Smith (when you can actually see his face) are regular {{Biseinen}}, while Amir’s cousin, Baimat, is arguably kind of a {{Hunk}}.



* BlackWidow: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted.]] Talas ''is'' a serial widow for five brothers, but she did love some of them and had no part in their deaths. Also she or her family gained no extra dowries for the "bonus" marriages.



* CycleOfRevenge: In chapter 68, Mr. Smith's caravan runs into a man who's been hiding in the mountains for sixteen years to escape revenge by the best friend of the man he killed (the victim had no living relatives). Ali notes that killing always begets killing in retaliation: "Even if it was two hundred years ago, if they take one of yours, you take one of theirs. No matter what."
* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Talas' stepfather-in-law won't allow [[spoiler:Mr. Smith]] to even see her.

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* CycleOfRevenge: In chapter 68, Mr. Smith's caravan runs into a man who's been hiding in the mountains for sixteen years to escape revenge by the relatives of a man he murdered; it turns out those relatives have since died, and now the victim’s best friend of has come looking for revenge on the man he killed (the victim had no living relatives).murderer. Ali notes that killing always begets killing in retaliation: "Even if it was two hundred years ago, if they take one of yours, you take one of theirs. No matter what."
* DatingWhatDaddyHates: Talas' stepfather-in-law won't allow [[spoiler:Mr. Smith]] Mr. Smith to even see her.her, since Smith could impede his plans to arrange Talas’s marriage in a way that benefits himself.



* RealWomenHaveCurves: Discussed as being a common standard in mid-19th century Persia. Anis gets insecure about her thinness when the ladies at the bathhouse quip that she looks like a bundle of twigs, and ought to put some more meat on her bones. However, when she asks her husband if that's true he tells her that regardless of what other men prefer, he likes her just the way she is.



* SilverFox: Sanira already has a few grandchildren, but is still very beautiful. Her husband, Akunbek, [[LampshadeHanging notes this]] even while she's suffering from a cold. Also, as curmudgeonly as he is, Belqat is ''physically'' attractive.

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* SilverFox: Sanira already has a few grandchildren, but is still very beautiful. Her husband, Akunbek, [[LampshadeHanging notes this]] even while she's suffering from a cold. Also, as curmudgeonly as he is, Belqat is ''physically'' attractive.



%% * YuriGenre: Entire volume seven arc. Even if you decide to lean more in favor of emotional ambiguity provided by historical setting, it was clearly meant to be portrayed as girl-girl romance. Refer to RomanticTwoGirlFriendship trope mentioned above for more context.

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Belqat's actions, while evil, were neither gratuitous nor done on a a whim. He’s got a ruthless but very logical plan to form a marriage alliance that could prevent his tribe from starving.


* KickTheDog:
** The conflict caused by Belqat has him have clan members, including her own brother, try to kidnap his daughter from her PerfectlyArrangedMarriage in order to marry her off to a man who has abused his previous wives, her sisters and cousins, to death.
** The end of [[spoiler:Talas’ first arc]], has the bride and groom split up last minute, due to her mother-in-law (who did approve) remarrying.

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** Children have to pay complete obedience to their fathers, people come-of-age a lot earlier, and most marriages are to some extent if not completely [[ArrangedMarriage arranged]]. One example is Amir and Karluk’s marriage -- Karluk is only twelve years old, but in that time period, he would be considered of age. By modern standards, their union would be equivalent to a twenty-one year old college graduate marrying a woman in her thirties. Although the author explained in her endnotes to volume one that the actual average marrying couple in the region realistically would have been fifteen to sixteen years of age, and admits that she decided to have such a wide age gap between the two main leads for dramatic purposes.

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Amir and Karluk’s marriage -- is treated very differently in their culture than it would be in the modern developed world. Today we would consider twelve-year-old Karluk is a child and way too young get married, and at the same time consider Amir to still be quite young at twenty, certainly in the prime of beauty. Karluk's uncle doesn’t even mention a boy that age getting married as anything notable, and only twelve years old, but in talks about how Amir is much older than the ideal age for a bride. In that time period, he would be considered of age. By modern standards, their union would be equivalent to a twenty-one twelve year old college graduate marrying boy was considered, if not fully grown physically, then at least socially an adult and old enough to get married. Meanwhile, due to shorter life expectancy and higher infant mortality it was thought necessary for a woman to start young in her thirties. Although order to have a lot of children. However, the author explained explains in her endnotes to volume one that the actual average marrying couple in the region realistically would have been fifteen to sixteen years of age, and admits that she decided to have such a wide age gap between the two main leads for dramatic purposes.



* TheJailbaitWait: Voluntarily, rather than legally. By his culture's standards, twelve-year-old Karluk is old enough for marriage and everything that entails. His grandmother is able to bluff to Amir's relatives that Amir is already pregnant with Karluk's child, and while admitting it isn't true, she says it's going to happen sooner or later anyway. Even so, Karluk and Amir both recognize it's better to wait until he's older. So far they're only kissing, holding hands, and sleeping as a couple. Chapter twenty-three still has Amir wishing that he'd grow up faster, as it's strongly implied that she wants to get a lot more intimate with him.

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* TheJailbaitWait: Voluntarily, rather than legally. By his culture's standards, twelve-year-old Karluk is old enough for marriage and everything that entails. His grandmother is able to bluff to Amir's relatives that Amir is already pregnant with Karluk's child, and while admitting it isn't true, she says it's going to happen sooner or later anyway. Even so, there seems to be a tacit agreement between Amir and Karluk and Amir both recognize it's better that they’re going to wait until he's older. So wait: so far they're only kissing, holding hands, and sleeping as a couple. Chapter twenty-three still has Amir wishing that he'd loves Karluk unconditionally and regardless of his age. Having said that, while she may adore his cuteness she tends not to feel physically ''attracted'' to him except when he shows a manlier side she hadn’t noticed. She intends to take the next step with him when he’s older, and since she’s convinced he’s going to make a great man someday she sometimes wishes he would grow up faster, as it's strongly implied a little faster. Karluk, meanwhile, is very self-conscious of not being grown enough to bring out those feelings in Amir, and his pride is such that she wants he probably won't initiate anything until he feels he’s achieved his personal goals and proven himself to get a lot more intimate with him.her.



* WiseBeyondHisYears: To modern sensibilities, twelve year old Karluk comes off as surprisingly mature for his age. In the setting, though, he's considered an adult and expected to act as such.

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Okay, maybe I was wrong to think it fits The Straight And Arrow Path, but that doesn't change the fact that you can't just pothole Bows Versus Crossbows to be about bows versus rifles instead. We need to take this to the forums or something.


* [[BowsVersusCrossbows Bows Versus Rifles]]: Occurs whenever more traditional groups face off against less traditional ones or groups in bed with Czarist Russia. In chapter fifty-three, in reaction to having seen [[OneManArmy Azel’s]] prowess with a bow, Karluk notes that if you know how to use them, a bow and arrow can outperform a rifle (overruling Yusuf’s objection that they’re harder and more time-consuming). This is TruthInTelevision, as the rifles of the period took a long time to load, were not repeating, and were less than accurate, giving competent archers a considerable advantage; until the wide-spread adoption of repeating firearms, Central Asian mounted archery was nearly indomitable.
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* [[BowsVersusCrossbows %%* Bows Versus Rifles]]: Rifles: Occurs whenever more traditional groups face off against less traditional ones or groups in bed with Czarist Russia. In chapter fifty-three, in reaction to having seen [[OneManArmy Azel’s]] prowess with a bow, Karluk notes that if you know how to use them, a bow and arrow can outperform a rifle (overruling Yusuf’s objection that they’re harder and more time-consuming). This is TruthInTelevision, as the rifles of the period took a long time to load, were not repeating, and were less than accurate, giving competent archers a considerable advantage; until the wide-spread adoption of repeating firearms, Central Asian mounted archery was nearly indomitable.
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* TallDarkAndHandsome: Azel and Joruk are both portrayed this way, with a decent measure of snarkiness in the mix.

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* ChekhovsGun: Remember how Amir panics whenever someone gets sick and how it apparently took her father seven years to find a groom to despite her many qualifications and being the daughter of clan chief? There’s a reason for that... [[spoiler:Apparently an epidemic killed many members of her clan, combined with Belqat not realizing that the best is the enemy of the good]], and you get the present results. This continues to effect her. [[spoiler:Azel, Baimat, and Joruk]] are unmarried for the same reason.

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* ChekhovsGun: Remember how Amir panics whenever someone gets sick and how it apparently took her father seven years to find a groom to despite her many qualifications and being the daughter of clan chief? There’s a reason for that... [[spoiler:Apparently an epidemic killed many members of her clan, combined with Belqat not realizing that the best is the enemy of the good]], and you get the present results. This continues to effect her. [[spoiler:Azel, Baimat, and Joruk]] are unmarried for the same reason.



* TheIngenue: Amir is innocent and occasionally oblivious, so she can come off this way to despite being otherwise mature. This includes a few {{Cloudcuckoolander}} moments (one word: hedgehogs), despite otherwise not fitting the trope.

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* [[BowsVersusCrossbows Bows Versus Rifles]]: Occurs whenever more traditional groups face off against less traditional ones or groups in bed with Czarist Russia. In chapter fifty-three, in reaction to having seen [[OneManArmy Azel’s]] prowess with a bow, Karluk notes that if you know how to use them, a bow and arrow can outperform a rifle (overruling Yusuf’s objection that they’re harder and more time-consuming). This is TruthInTelevision, as the rifles of the period took a long time to load, were not repeating, and were less than accurate, giving competent archers a considerable advantage; until the wide-spread adoption of repeating firearms, Central Asian mounted archery was nearly indomitable.
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* TheStraightAndArrowPath: Bows versus rifles occurs whenever more traditional groups face off against less traditional ones or groups in bed with Czarist Russia. In chapter fifty-three, in reaction to having seen [[OneManArmy Azel’s]] prowess with a bow, Karluk notes that if you know how to use them, a bow and arrow can outperform a rifle (overruling Yusuf’s objection that they’re harder and more time-consuming). This is TruthInTelevision, as the rifles of the period took a long time to load, were not repeating, and were less than accurate, giving competent archers a considerable advantage; until the wide-spread adoption of repeating firearms, Central Asian mounted archery was nearly indomitable.
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* TheIngenue: Amir is innocent and occasionally oblivious, so she can come off this way to despite being otherwise mature. This includes a few {{Cloudcuckoolander}} moments (one word: hedgehogs), to despite otherwise not fitting the trope.

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* TheIngenue: Amir is innocent and occasionally oblivious, so she can come off this way to despite being otherwise mature. This includes a few {{Cloudcuckoolander}} moments (one word: hedgehogs), to despite otherwise not fitting the trope.



* TheJailbaitWait: Voluntarily, rather than legally. By his culture's standards, twelve-year-old Karluk is old enough for marriage and everything that entails. His grandmother is able to bluff to Amir's relatives that Amir is already pregnant with Karluk's child, and while admitting it isn't true, she says it's going to happen sooner or later anyway. Even so, Karluk and Amir both recognize it's better to wait until he's older. So far they're only kissing, holding hands, and sleeping as a couple. Chapter twnety-three still has Amir wishing that he'd grow up faster, as it's strongly implied that she wants to get a lot more intimate with him.

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* TheJailbaitWait: Voluntarily, rather than legally. By his culture's standards, twelve-year-old Karluk is old enough for marriage and everything that entails. His grandmother is able to bluff to Amir's relatives that Amir is already pregnant with Karluk's child, and while admitting it isn't true, she says it's going to happen sooner or later anyway. Even so, Karluk and Amir both recognize it's better to wait until he's older. So far they're only kissing, holding hands, and sleeping as a couple. Chapter twnety-three twenty-three still has Amir wishing that he'd grow up faster, as it's strongly implied that she wants to get a lot more intimate with him.
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* LikesOlderWomen: Despite this being a culture in which a girl of twenty like Amir [[DeliberateValuesDissonance is considered old for a bride]], Karluk states that her age doesn't bother him one bit, and in fact he wouldn't have her any other way. [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] in that it is unclear if Karluk thinks this way about women in general or if it is because Amir happens to be older than him.

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* LikesOlderWomen: Despite this being a culture in which a girl of twenty like Amir [[DeliberateValuesDissonance is considered old for a bride]], Karluk states that her age doesn't bother him one bit, and in fact he wouldn't have her any other way. [[DownplayedTrope Downplayed]] in that it is unclear if Karluk thinks this way about women in general or if it is because Amir ''Amir'' happens to be older than him.



** A subversion: the twins try to pull off what by modern standards would be awkward and cute. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance In nineteenth century Central Asia?--]] They're trying to use circumstances to [[ShotgunWedding force attractive guys to marry them.]]

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** A subversion: the twins Laila and Leili try to pull off what by modern standards would be awkward and cute. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance In nineteenth century Central Asia?--]] They're trying to use circumstances to [[ShotgunWedding force attractive guys to marry them.]]
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: After a brief moment of [[InsecureLoveInterest insecurity]] on Karluk’s part, Amir gives him one in chapter sixty-six.

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** Karluk’s grandmother, Balkirsh, is an expert archer, and while she mostly stopped using her bow after she got married, she’s still got the touch, as well as NervesOfSteel. She also uses her talent for riding ''goats'' to rescue a small child from a steep cliff in a side chapter. [[NeverMessWithGranny She isn’t ''exactly'' young either.]]

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** Karluk’s grandmother, Balkirsh, is an expert archer, and while she mostly stopped using her bow after she got married, she’s still got the touch, as well as NervesOfSteel. She also uses her talent for riding ''goats'' to rescue a small child from a steep cliff in a side chapter. [[NeverMessWithGranny She isn’t ''exactly'' isn’t]] ''[[NeverMessWithGranny exactly]]'' [[NeverMessWithGranny young either.]]
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** Karluk’s grandmother, Balkirsh, is an expert archer, and while she mostly stopped using her bow after she got married, she’s still got the touch, as well as nerves of steel. She also uses her talent for riding ''goats'' to rescue a small child from a steep cliff in a side chapter. She isn’t ''exactly'' young either.

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** Karluk’s grandmother, Balkirsh, is an expert archer, and while she mostly stopped using her bow after she got married, she’s still got the touch, as well as nerves of steel.NervesOfSteel. She also uses her talent for riding ''goats'' to rescue a small child from a steep cliff in a side chapter. [[NeverMessWithGranny She isn’t ''exactly'' young either.]]
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* BeYourself: A big part of Pariya's character arc, particularly in chapters 50-52. She's [[NoManWantsAnAmazon put off so many suitors]] with her [[BrutalHonesty blunt speaking]] and unladylike enthusiasm that she's petrified of Umar seeing what kind of girl she is and being driven off as well, to the point that she even tries to reinvent herself by copying Karola, the most popular girl in town. But it's only when she talks to Umar directly that she discovers that [[AmazonChaser he's actually really attracted to her energy, enthusiasm and honesty]], and all she needs to do is act natural with him.

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* BeYourself: A big part of Pariya's character arc, particularly in chapters 50-52. She's [[NoManWantsAnAmazon put off so many suitors]] with her [[BrutalHonesty blunt speaking]] and unladylike enthusiasm that she's petrified of Umar seeing what kind of girl she is and being driven off as well, to the point that she even tries to reinvent herself by copying Karola, Kamola, the most popular girl in town. But it's only when she talks to Umar directly that she discovers that [[AmazonChaser he's actually really attracted to her energy, enthusiasm and honesty]], and all she needs to do is act natural with him.
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** Kamola is considered the finest and most eligible girl in the village (sort of like the regional equivalent of a YamatoNadeshiko) and her family is inundated with marriage proposals for her despite her being too young to marry quite yet. When Pariya is looking for an ideal girl to use as a role model (and, as mentioned above, writes off Amir as impossible for her to match) she settles on Kamola, and starts to stalk her around observing her, accidentally giving Kamola the idea that Pariya hates her. Ironically, when Pariya owns up to being jealous of Kamola's perfection, Kamola admits that she actually envies Pariya's ability to boldly speak her mind without reservation, and the two become friends.
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* FourthDateMarriage: Anis asks Sherine to be her Avowed Sister (effectively a lesbian marriage, albeit without the sexual element) after only meeting her a handful of times. Sherine observes that normally women spend a year in each other's company before becoming Avowed Sisters to ensure they're compatible.
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** Chapter 79, full stop.

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** %%** Chapter 79, full stop.
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* [[BowsVersusCrossbows Bows Versus Rifles]]: This occurs whenever more traditional groups face off against less traditional ones or groups in bed with Czarist Russia. In chapter fifty-three, in reaction to having seen [[OneManArmy Azel’s]] prowess with a bow, Karluk notes that if you know how to use them, a bow and arrow can outperform a rifle (overruling Yusuf’s objection that they’re harder and more time-consuming). This is TruthInTelevision, as the rifles of the period took a long time to load, were not repeating, and were less than accurate, giving competent archers a considerable advantage; until the wide-spread adoption of repeating firearms, Central Asian mounted archery was nearly indomitable.


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* TheStraightAndArrowPath: Bows versus rifles occurs whenever more traditional groups face off against less traditional ones or groups in bed with Czarist Russia. In chapter fifty-three, in reaction to having seen [[OneManArmy Azel’s]] prowess with a bow, Karluk notes that if you know how to use them, a bow and arrow can outperform a rifle (overruling Yusuf’s objection that they’re harder and more time-consuming). This is TruthInTelevision, as the rifles of the period took a long time to load, were not repeating, and were less than accurate, giving competent archers a considerable advantage; until the wide-spread adoption of repeating firearms, Central Asian mounted archery was nearly indomitable.

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