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* CoolStarship: The ''Rebellion'' (but only in a CoolLoser kind of way)
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* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. And several things that don't move. And anyone or anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
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* FutureImperfect: One chapter includes references to Creator/MichelangeloBuonarroti's ''Art/{{David}}'' {{sculpture|s}} and Creator/EdvardMunch's famous Art/{{The Scream|Munch}} poster.
** Not to mention Regan's favorite author, the great Irish writer MacTwain!
** Not to mention Regan's favorite author, the great Irish writer MacTwain!
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* FutureImperfect: FutureImperfect:
** One chapter includes references to Creator/MichelangeloBuonarroti's ''Art/{{David}}'' {{sculpture|s}} and Creator/EdvardMunch's famous Art/{{The Scream|Munch}} poster.
** Not to mention Regan's favorite author, the great Irish writerMacTwain!MarcTwain!
** One chapter includes references to Creator/MichelangeloBuonarroti's ''Art/{{David}}'' {{sculpture|s}} and Creator/EdvardMunch's famous Art/{{The Scream|Munch}} poster.
** Not to mention Regan's favorite author, the great Irish writer
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* FutureImperfect: One chapter includes references to David's statue of Michaelangelo and Edvard Munch's famous poster.
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* FutureImperfect: One chapter includes references to David's statue of Michaelangelo Creator/MichelangeloBuonarroti's ''Art/{{David}}'' {{sculpture|s}} and Edvard Munch's Creator/EdvardMunch's famous Art/{{The Scream|Munch}} poster.
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* SpaceIsAnOcean: Completely averted. A ship that loses engine power has to shunt back to sub-light speed or risk destruction, but will continue to move in the same speed and direction. Quite a lot of SpaceDoesNotWorkThatWay is avoided, actually.
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* {{Badass}}: Cicada, Shays' hulking cybernetic bodyguard/enforcer/possible girlfriend.
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* {{Expy}}: Handy is essentially one of [[Creator/LoisMcMasterBujold Lois McMaster Bujold's]] [[VorkosiganSaga quaddies]] with her ComicallySerious knob turned up to 11.
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* {{Expy}}: Handy is essentially one of [[Creator/LoisMcMasterBujold Lois McMaster Bujold's]] [[VorkosiganSaga Creator/LoisMcMasterBujold's [[Literature/VorkosiganSaga quaddies]] with her ComicallySerious knob turned up to 11.
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''Shays Rebellion'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''.''Literature/TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''Shays Rebellion'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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* DramaticGunCock: Lampshaded. A button producing user selectable gun cock sound effects is built into Cicada's high-tech BFG.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. As well as several things that don't move and anyone or anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. As well as And several things that don't move and move. And anyone or anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
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* AnvilOnHead: When the ship is boarded, Handy drops various items including a bowling ball and an anchor out of the air ducts onto the intruders. The incongruity of keeping things like a bowling ball or an anchor in the duct system is noted.
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. And also several things that don't move, for that matter. And pretty much anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. And also several things that don't move, for that matter. And pretty much anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
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* AnvilOnHead: When the ship is boarded, Handy drops various items including potted plants, a bowling ball and an anchor out of the air ducts onto the intruders. The incongruity of keeping things like potted plants, a bowling ball or an anchor in the duct system is noted.
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea.And also As well as several things that don't move, for that matter. And pretty much move and anyone or anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea.
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* AnvilOnHead: When the ship is boarded, Handy drops various items including a bowling ball and an anchor onto the intruders.
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. And also several things that don't move, for that matter.
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* ActionSurvivor: Lilliana
* AnvilOnHead: When the ship is boarded, Handy drops various items including a bowling ball and an anchor out of the air ducts onto theintruders.
intruders. The incongruity of keeping things like a bowling ball or an anchor in the duct system is noted.
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. And also several things that don't move, for that matter. And pretty much anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
* AnvilOnHead: When the ship is boarded, Handy drops various items including a bowling ball and an anchor out of the air ducts onto the
* AnythingThatMoves: Galatea. And also several things that don't move, for that matter. And pretty much anything she hasn't been explicitly told not to.
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* TheCaptain: Not present among this crew of sociopaths
* CoolStarship: The ''Rebellion''.
* CoolStarship: The ''Rebellion''.
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* TheCaptain: Not present among this crew of sociopaths
sociopaths.
* CoolStarship: The''Rebellion''.''Rebellion'' (but only in a CoolLoser kind of way)
* CoolStarship: The
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* OrphanedEtymology: Lampshaded repeatedly, including a self deprecating reference to an "early 21st century writer" who was notorious for lampshading OrphanedEtymology.
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* OrphanedEtymology: Lampshaded repeatedly, including a self deprecating reference to an "early 21st century writer" who was notorious for her insistence on repeatedly lampshading OrphanedEtymology.
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* AnythingThatMoves: GalateaGalatea. And also several things that don't move, for that matter.
* TheCaptain: Not present among this crew of sociopaths
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* DirtyCoward: Daniel Shays. Is willing to throw non-essential personnel to a pursuing necromancer in order to make sure he gets away. Lilliana is a more pragmatic version of this.
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* DirtyCoward: Daniel Shays. Is He's willing to throw non-essential personnel to a pursuing necromancer in order to make sure he gets away. Lilliana is a more pragmatic version of this.this.
* {{Expy}}: Handy is essentially one of [[Creator/LoisMcMasterBujold Lois McMaster Bujold's]] [[VorkosiganSaga quaddies]] with her ComicallySerious knob turned up to 11.
* {{Expy}}: Handy is essentially one of [[Creator/LoisMcMasterBujold Lois McMaster Bujold's]] [[VorkosiganSaga quaddies]] with her ComicallySerious knob turned up to 11.
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* InsistentTerminology: Regan insists on putting a ''the'' before all names or nicknames
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* {{Technobabble}}: ruthlessly mocked as scientific-sounding excuses for AWizardDidIt
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* UsedFuture: used, abused, and sold at a discount.
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shays'_Rebellion Shays Rebellion]]'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shays'_Rebellion Shays Rebellion]]'', ''Shays Rebellion'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''ShaysRebellion'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''ShaysRebellion'', ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shays'_Rebellion Shays Rebellion]]'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Regan, full stop. Most of the time, she barely sees competent. When the fighting starts, it's a different story. It helps that she's also TheBerserker.
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* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: Regan, full stop. Most of the time, she barely sees seems competent. When the fighting starts, it's a different story. It helps that she's also TheBerserker.
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* PoliceCodeForEverything: The ''Fickle Finger'''s security has a code for "exiled royalty has detonated a bottle". They also have one for "exiled royalty has detonated a turtle".
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[[http://www.void-dogs.com/ ''Void Dogs'' Dogs'']] is a {{fantasy}} SpaceOpera by AlexandraErin, better known for the adult fantasy series ''TalesOfMU''. This lighter, more comedic story follows the misadventures of the crew of the ''ShaysRebellion'', a deep space cargo ship owned by a shady businessman and manned by nameless {{RedShirt}}s and a crew of "lovable" rogues, including:
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* AuthorFilibuster: In a couple places, the action halts while the narration or a character explains something that bugs the author about science fiction. It's played for laughs, but YourMileageMayVary.
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* AuthorFilibuster: In a couple places, the action halts while the narration or a character explains something that bugs the author about science fiction. It's played for laughs, but YourMileageMayVary.PlayedForLaughs.
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** Plus New York city was believed to be a myth for a long time, "An English colony on the American coast, seriously?"
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* SpacePeople: Liliana is a "space gypsy" while Handy is designed for zero-g work.