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* ContinuityNod: Charlie explains to Tress that a cup she got from a sailor was forged for an [[Literature/TheStormlightArchive Iriali]] nobleman -- but then all Iriali suddenly disappeared from their island.
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** Charlie explains to Tress that a cup she got from a sailor was forged for an [[Literature/TheStormlightArchive Iriali]] nobleman -- but then all Iriali suddenly disappeared from theirisland.island.
** Tress mentions that Death has [[Literature/WaxAndWayne nails in his eyes]].
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* MundaneSolution: How does [[spoiler:Xisis]] cure Ann of her [[ATeamFiring accuracy issues]]? Diagnose her with microscopia micropsia and give her prescription goggles.goggles.
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** Charlie manages to get out of a formal rich person party the same way [[Literature/TheBandsOfMourning Steris]] did: intentionally vomit on the table.
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** When Huck first meets Tress, he mentions that his usual strategy is to talk so much that his captors think he's not worth keeping. [[spoiler:Exactly the strategy he used as Charlie.]]
** Huck once knew a girl who was deaf but danced beautifully. [[spoiler:One of the princesses Charlie was supposed to marry was deaf]].
** When Tress describes her island, Huck remarks that he came from a similar place. [[spoiler:They're the same island]].
** Tress asks Huck if his family could talk like him, and he says yes. [[spoiler:He did not say that they were rats like him.]] He also mentions that his family drove him out into the world before he was ready, which [[spoiler:is what happened to Charlie]].
** When Huck first meets Tress, he mentions that his usual strategy is to talk so much that his captors think he's not worth keeping. [[spoiler:Exactly the strategy he used as Charlie.]]
** Huck once knew a girl who was deaf but danced beautifully. [[spoiler:One of the princesses Charlie was supposed to marry was deaf]].
** When Tress describes her island, Huck remarks that he came from a similar place. [[spoiler:They're the same island]].
** Tress asks Huck if his family could talk like him, and he says yes. [[spoiler:He did not say that they were rats like him.]] He also mentions that his family drove him out into the world before he was ready, which [[spoiler:is what happened to Charlie]].
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: The weather in the Crimson Sea acts so bizarre that many believe it's controlled by an evil spirit that's intentional screwing with people for fun. Given that this is the HighFantasy Cosmere series, believing in a spirit that controls the weather is [[{{Literature/TheStormlightArchive}} completely rational]], but whether or not it's true is unclear.
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* GodOfTheMoon: People on Lumar worship the twelve moons as gods, which Hoid notes is understandable when they hover physics-defyingly low in the sky and rain magical spores down on the planet.
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* MinionManipulatedIntoVillainy: [[spoiler:Crow's plan is to get her entire crew branded as 'Deadrunners' (pirates who sink ships, particularly hated by the authorities), so they can't abandon her once they discover her plan to sail to the Crimson Sea.]]
* MundaneSolution: How does [[spoiler:Xisis]] cure Ann of her [[ATeamFiring accuracy issues]]? Diagnose her with microscopia and give her prescription goggles.
* MundaneSolution: How does [[spoiler:Xisis]] cure Ann of her [[ATeamFiring accuracy issues]]? Diagnose her with microscopia and give her prescription goggles.
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* PragmaticVillainy: Discussed. Most pirates try to avoid killing or sinking ships, because the authorities are lenient on theft.
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* HostileWeather: What makes the Crimson Sea so dangerous is the unpredictable storms that can activate the spores.
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* HostileWeather: What makes the Crimson Sea so dangerous is the unpredictable storms that can activate the spores. [[spoiler:One storm nearly hits the ship ''twice'' and two more intersect right over the ship, which even Hoid {{lampshade|Hanging}}s as being hard to interpret as anything other than malevolent.]]
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* NondescriptNastyNutritious: Verdant spore vines are edible in a pinch when fully grown -- they're not nutritionally complete and are disparaged as "weeds", but they beat starving to death on the ocean.
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* TheThreeTrials: To win Charlie back from the Sorceress, Tress has to cross the deadly Midnight Sea, get past the indestructible [[GateGuardian guardians]] of her island, and find a way into her magic-proof sealed tower. [[spoiler:Subverted: the Sorceress is a petty sadist who didn't conceive of her defenses as a test and has no intention of honoring the victory.]]
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* AbnormalAmmo: Cannonballs are armed with spores and a charge of water to activate them, causing them to explode in a tangle of vines or some other debilitating substance.
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Crow leaves Tress to cling for her life to the side of her ship, only allows the crew to [[HopeSpot pull her up]] after fifteen minutes, and then tries to order her thrown overboard anyway. [[spoiler:Unsurprisingly, she doesn't get better.]]
* FantasticFirearms: In place of black powder, firearms and cannons use zephyr spores, an abundant natural resource that explosively release air when exposed to water.
* FightsLikeANormal: Crow's symbiotic aether can act with incredible speed and power to protect her, but she suppresses it in a fight specifically to [[HopeCrusher rub her enemies' faces]] in how dangerous she is without any supernatural help.
* FightsLikeANormal: Crow's symbiotic aether can act with incredible speed and power to protect her, but she suppresses it in a fight specifically to [[HopeCrusher rub her enemies' faces]] in how dangerous she is without any supernatural help.
* ImprobableAimingSkills: Not only can Crow pick people off a distant ship in a naval battle, she can do it with an archaic musket that doesn't shoot straight. The TimeAbyss Hoid concedes that she's one of the best crack shots he's ever seen.
* MageTower: The [[EvilSorcerer Sorceress]]' tower is built on an island in a deadly spore sea, walled with AntiMagic, and contains incredibly advanced {{Magitek}} inside. [[spoiler:It's the spaceship she used to travel to the planet, and she [[KnowWhenToFoldEm leaves in it]] when defeated.]]
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** During her DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Crow was going to sell her into slavery to the dragon Xisis, Tress instead pretends that ''she'' was actually the one her to sell ''Crow''.]] The [[spoiler:dragon]] is so amused by the obvious bluff that he decides to hear her out.
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** During her DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Crow was going to sell her into slavery to the dragon Xisis, Tress instead pretends that ''she'' was actually the one her came to sell ''Crow''.]] The [[spoiler:dragon]] is so amused by the obvious bluff that he decides to hear her out.
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Tress actually averts this at every opportunity, carefully gathering information and planning her actions instead of jumping to conclusions. The narrator considers it one of the rarest traits for a story's hero.
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* TongueTied: The Sorceress' {{Curse}}s prevent the victims from telling others that they're cursed or what the CurseEscapeClause is -- if they try, they break down stuttering. [[spoiler:Huck's caginess about his background is {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Tress actuallyaverts avoids this at every opportunity, carefully gathering information and planning her actions instead of jumping to conclusions. The narrator considers it one of the rarest traits for a story's hero.hero.
* TrappedInVillainy: Crow's crew believe that the sinking of [[spoiler:''Oot's Dream'']] marks them forever as deadrunners, meaning they have to survive through piracy alone and will be killed or executed if they ever falter. [[spoiler:Crow {{invoked|trope}} this to force them to obey her, and Tress ultimately {{defie|dTrope}}s it by getting them pardoned.]]
* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Tress actually
* TrappedInVillainy: Crow's crew believe that the sinking of [[spoiler:''Oot's Dream'']] marks them forever as deadrunners, meaning they have to survive through piracy alone and will be killed or executed if they ever falter. [[spoiler:Crow {{invoked|trope}} this to force them to obey her, and Tress ultimately {{defie|dTrope}}s it by getting them pardoned.]]
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** [[spoilerCharlie's curse requires that he bring the woman he loves to the Sorceress's dwelling, there to be cursed. Hoid manages to change it so that he can break the curse by bringing the woman he loves to ''her'' home, there to be ''versed''.]]
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** [[spoilerCharlie's [[spoiler:Charlie's curse requires that he bring the woman he loves to the Sorceress's dwelling, there to be cursed. Hoid manages to change it so that he can break the curse by bringing the woman he loves to ''her'' home, there to be ''versed''.]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: the ''Oot's Dream'' are all covertly smugglers, and their captain is a lech. They’re also willing to enslave Huck because he’s a talking rat and to drug Tress bccause they believe she actually is a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since, while they didn't wish for their deaths, they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew crew of [[spoiler: the ''Oot's Dream'' are all covertly smugglers, and their captain is a lech. They’re also willing to enslave Huck because he’s a talking rat and to drug Tress bccause they believe she actually is a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since, while they didn't wish for their deaths, they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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** Heavy pewter tankard that Charlie sends Tress from his journeys and that Tress takes with her when she leaves the Rock turns out to be very useful several times in the story.
** Two midnight spores that Tress accidentally leaves on her work table when she rushes out of her cabin are later used by [[spoiler: Captain Crow to spy on the mutineers.]]
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* CurseEscapeClause: Apparently, all the Sorceress's curses include one purely out of sadism (She likes having her victims know that there ''is'' a way to break their curse and what it is, but takes care to make it either exceedingly difficult or profoundly horrifying or both).
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: It turns out that Hoid made one with Riina. He let her curse him into a blithering idiot, but if he ever broke the curse he would become an Elantrian.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It turns out that Hoid made one with Riina. He let her curse him into a blithering idiot, but if he ever broke the curse he would become an Elantrian.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Tress is ready for it several times, in order to protect the crew from Captain Crow and the Sorceress. The crew don't want to hear about it.
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* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Captain Crow plots to [[spoiler:sell Tress into slavery to a dragon in exchange for a magical cure for her terminal illness.]] However, when she [[spoiler: drags Tress to Xisis, Tress tells him that she is the one selling Captain Crow to him as a slave. Crow tries to argue, but the dragon decides Crow would make a more useful servant and accepts Tress's offer.]]
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* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Captain Crow plots to [[spoiler:sell Tress into slavery to a dragon in exchange for a magical cure for her terminal illness.]] However, when she [[spoiler: drags [[spoiler:drags Tress to Xisis, Tress tells him that she is the one selling Captain Crow to him as a slave. Crow tries to argue, but the dragon decides Crow would make a more useful servant and accepts Tress's offer.]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: the Oot's Dream are all covertly smugglers, and their captain is a lech. They’re also willing to enslave Huck because he’s a talking rat and to drug Tress bccause they believe she actually is a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since, while they didn't wish for their deaths, they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: the Oot's Dream ''Oot's Dream'' are all covertly smugglers, and their captain is a lech. They’re also willing to enslave Huck because he’s a talking rat and to drug Tress bccause they believe she actually is a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since, while they didn't wish for their deaths, they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: The Oot's Dream are all covertly smugglers, their captain is a lech, they're willing to enslave Huck as he is a talking rat, and to drug Tress cause they believe she actually is a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since while they didn't wish for their deaths,and they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: The the Oot's Dream are all covertly smugglers, and their captain is a lech, they're lech. They’re also willing to enslave Huck as he is because he’s a talking rat, rat and to drug Tress cause bccause they believe she actually is a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since since, while they didn't wish for their deaths,and deaths, they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: The Oot's Dream are all covertly smugglers, their captain is a lech, they're willing to enslave Huck as he is a talking rat, and to drug Tress cause they believe she actually is an a royal inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since while they didn't wish for their deaths, deaths,and they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* AssholeVictim: The Crew of [[spoiler: The Oot's Dream are all covertly smugglers, their captain is a lech, they're willing to enslave Huck as he is a talking rat, and to drug Tress cause they believe she actually is an inspector. And they all end up dead as part of Crow's covert plan to turn her crew deadrunner. Despite this, the crew of the Crow's Song is troubled by their deaths since while they didn't wish for their deaths, they recognize they were complicit in them. ]]
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* RedShirt: The narration lumps all the unimportant rating crew members together under the term "Doug". [[spoiler: Only one of them ends up dying, and its an event has a modest impact on both the characters and the narration]]
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* BeneficialDisease: The aether parasite in Crow's blood is constantly leeching water from her body to send back to the prime aether on the moon, but it also uses its powers to protect her from other threats so that it can keep draining her.
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* CurseEscapeClause: Apparently, all the Sorceress's curses include one purely out of sadism (She likes having her victims know that there ''is'' a way to break their curse and what it is, but takes care to make it either exceedingly difficult or profoundly horrifying or both).
** Hoid's curse can be broken by returning him to the Sorceress's dwelling.
** [[spoiler: Charlie's curse requires that he bring the woman he loves to the Sorceress's dwelling, there to be cursed. Hoid manages to change it so that he can break the curse by bringing the woman he loves to ''her'' home, there to be ''versed''.]]
** Hoid's curse can be broken by returning him to the Sorceress's dwelling.
** [[spoiler: Charlie's curse requires that he bring the woman he loves to the Sorceress's dwelling, there to be cursed. Hoid manages to change it so that he can break the curse by bringing the woman he loves to ''her'' home, there to be ''versed''.]]
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* ShownTheirWork: As Hoid notes, the spore seas act like water seas due to the process of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liquefaction liquefaction,]] a completely real phenomenon where air blown through a loose medium (typically sand, but in this case spores) makes it act like water. Massive vents beneath the seas blow out air almost constantly, stirring the spores and giving them water-like tides and currents.
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* ShownTheirWork: As Hoid notes, the spore seas act like water seas due to the process of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liquefaction liquefaction,]] org/wiki/Fluidization fluidization,]] a completely real phenomenon where air blown through a loose medium (typically sand, but in this case spores) makes it act like water. Massive vents beneath the seas blow out air almost constantly, stirring the spores and giving them water-like tides and currents.
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* FantasyGunControl: {{Averted}}, guns have been invented on Tress's world and are used repeatedly throughout the story.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: After learning that Captain Crow [[spoiler:is dying from a magic parasite and has weeks to live]], Tress starts to feel sorry for her. [[spoiler:But Captain Crow really is just a remorseless, bloodthirsty pirate who murders several people and is willing to sell another into slavery just to save her own life. Ultimately, Tress has no choice but to find a way to defeat her.]]
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: After learning that Captain Crow [[spoiler:is dying from a magic parasite and has weeks to live]], Tress starts to feel sorry for her. [[spoiler:But Captain Crow really is just a remorseless, bloodthirsty pirate who murders several people and is willing to sell another into slavery just to save her own life. Ultimately, Tress has no choice but to find a way to defeat her.]]
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** Heavy pewter tankard that Charlie sends Tress from his journeys and that Tress takes with her when she leaves the Rock turns out to be very useful several times in the story.
** Two midnight spores that Tress accidentally leaves on her work table when she rushes out of her cabin are later used by [[spoiler: Captain Crow to spy on the mutineers.]]
** Heavy pewter tankard that Charlie sends Tress from his journeys and that Tress takes with her when she leaves the Rock turns out to be very useful several times in the story.
** Two midnight spores that Tress accidentally leaves on her work table when she rushes out of her cabin are later used by [[spoiler: Captain Crow to spy on the mutineers.]]
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* NobodyPoops: Averted. There's a story about a Tosher who has to go through the sewage of everyone in a castle and he even converses with the king while the latter is busy. Tress is mentioned to void her bowels twice as well.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Tress is ready for it several times, in order to protect the crew from Captain Crow and the Sorceress. The crew don't want to hear about it.
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* AnimalCompanion: Shortly after leaving, Tress meets a talking rat named Huck who teams up with her for the rest of her journey. [[spoiler: He's really [[ItWasWithYouAllAlong Charlie]] after being cursed.]]
* PirateGirl: Most of the female characters, even Tress eventually, but especially Captain Crow.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: After overcoming so many problems with brilliance and sheer determination, Tress finds herself at a loss for how to [[spoiler:overcome the Sorceress's defenses]] and wonders what's wrong with her. The answer is incredibly mundane: she's ''tired''. The narrator points out that while stories love to portray clever heroes as always ready for acts of cleverness, pushing an actual person too far will eventually wear them down.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** After overcoming so many problems with brilliance and sheer determination, Tress finds herself at a loss for how to [[spoiler:overcome the Sorceress's defenses]] and wonders what's wrong with her. The answer is incredibly mundane: she's ''tired''. The narrator points out that while stories love to portray clever heroes as always ready for acts of cleverness, pushing an actual person too far will eventually wear them down.
** You would think pirates would be a brutal bunch even in this lighthearted story, and you'd be right. While the pirate crew Tress joins ''are'' [[FriendlyPirate pretty nice]], it's because [[JustifiedTrope they only just started the pirate lifestyle out of desperation]]. The one actual pirate, Captain Crow, is amongst the most vile characters in the Cosmere so far being a murderer and [[spoiler: slave trader]] who goes out of her way to make everyone around her miserable and terrified.
** After overcoming so many problems with brilliance and sheer determination, Tress finds herself at a loss for how to [[spoiler:overcome the Sorceress's defenses]] and wonders what's wrong with her. The answer is incredibly mundane: she's ''tired''. The narrator points out that while stories love to portray clever heroes as always ready for acts of cleverness, pushing an actual person too far will eventually wear them down.
** You would think pirates would be a brutal bunch even in this lighthearted story, and you'd be right. While the pirate crew Tress joins ''are'' [[FriendlyPirate pretty nice]], it's because [[JustifiedTrope they only just started the pirate lifestyle out of desperation]]. The one actual pirate, Captain Crow, is amongst the most vile characters in the Cosmere so far being a murderer and [[spoiler: slave trader]] who goes out of her way to make everyone around her miserable and terrified.
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: After learning that Captain Crow [[spoiler: is dying from a magic parasite and has weeks to live]] Tress starts to feel sorry for her. [[spoiler: But Captain Crow really is just a remorseless, bloodthirsty pirate who murders several people and is willing to sell another into slavery just to save her own life. Ultimately, Tress has no choice but to find a way to defeat her.]]
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* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: After learning that Captain Crow [[spoiler: is [[spoiler:is dying from a magic parasite and has weeks to live]] live]], Tress starts to feel sorry for her. [[spoiler: But [[spoiler:But Captain Crow really is just a remorseless, bloodthirsty pirate who murders several people and is willing to sell another into slavery just to save her own life. Ultimately, Tress has no choice but to find a way to defeat her.]]
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* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Captain Crow plots to [[spoiler: sell Tress into slavery to a dragon in exchange for a magical cure for her terminal illness.]] However, when she [[spoiler: drags Tress to the Dragon, Tress tells him that she is the one selling Captain Crow to him as a slave. Captain Crow tries to argue, but the Dragon decides Crow would make a more useful servant and accepts Tress's offer.]]
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* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Captain Crow plots to [[spoiler: sell [[spoiler:sell Tress into slavery to a dragon in exchange for a magical cure for her terminal illness.]] However, when she [[spoiler: drags Tress to the Dragon, Xisis, Tress tells him that she is the one selling Captain Crow to him as a slave. Captain Crow tries to argue, but the Dragon dragon decides Crow would make a more useful servant and accepts Tress's offer.]]
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** Hoid keeps insisting that Tress already has everything she needs to defeat Captain Crow, even as Crow is [[spoiler: taking Tress to the Dragon.]] It turns out that what she needs to defeat Captain Crow is [[spoiler: Captain Crow. When she takes Tress to trade to the Dragon, Tress simply trades ''her'' instead.]]
** [[spoiler: Huck the talking Rat ''is'' Charlie after the Sorceress cursed him. Even if Tress had known this she still would have had to go on her quest, but things would have been a lot easier if she knew the whole time.]]
** [[spoiler: Huck the talking Rat ''is'' Charlie after the Sorceress cursed him. Even if Tress had known this she still would have had to go on her quest, but things would have been a lot easier if she knew the whole time.]]
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** Hoid keeps insisting that Tress already has everything she needs to defeat Captain Crow, even as Crow is [[spoiler: taking [[spoiler:taking Tress to the Dragon.Xisis.]] It turns out that what she needs to defeat Captain Crow is [[spoiler: Captain [[spoiler:Captain Crow. When she takes Tress to trade to the Dragon, Tress simply trades ''her'' instead.]]
**[[spoiler: Huck [[spoiler:Huck the talking Rat rat ''is'' Charlie after the Sorceress cursed him. Even if Tress had known this this, she still would have had to go on her quest, but things would have been a lot easier if she knew the whole time.]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: [[spoiler:Surrounded by guns and a newly Elantrian Hoid, Riina decides to flee the planet as Tress demanded. Hoid notes that the ancient witch actually may have been able to win that fight, but one doesn't become an '''ancient''' witch by fighting unnecessary battles.]]
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* KnowWhenToFoldEm: [[spoiler:Surrounded by guns and a newly Elantrian newly-Elantrian Hoid, Riina decides to flee the planet as Tress demanded. Hoid notes that the ancient witch actually may have been able to win that fight, but one doesn't become an '''ancient''' witch by fighting unnecessary battles.]]
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** During her DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Crow was going to sell her into slavery to the dragon Xisisrefliel, Tress instead pretends that ''she'' was actually the one her to sell ''Crow''.]] The [[spoiler:dragon]] is so amused by the obvious bluff that he decides to hear her out.
** After Tress watches [[spoiler:Hoid become an Elantrian]], she commands the blatantly powerful demigod to handle [[spoiler:the Sorceress]] for her, on the grounds that [[spoiler:he's still her cabin boy]].
** After Tress watches [[spoiler:Hoid become an Elantrian]], she commands the blatantly powerful demigod to handle [[spoiler:the Sorceress]] for her, on the grounds that [[spoiler:he's still her cabin boy]].
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** During her DarkestHour when [[spoiler:Crow was going to sell her into slavery to the dragon Xisisrefliel, Xisis, Tress instead pretends that ''she'' was actually the one her to sell ''Crow''.]] The [[spoiler:dragon]] is so amused by the obvious bluff that he decides to hear her out.
** After Tress watches [[spoiler:Hoid become anElantrian]], Elantrian, she commands the blatantly powerful demigod to handle [[spoiler:the Sorceress]] the Sorceress for her, on the grounds that [[spoiler:he's he's still her cabin boy]].
** After Tress watches [[spoiler:Hoid become an
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* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: Fort's "Awakened tablet with Connection circuits" is blatantly some form of magically created tablet computer, complete with predictive text. [[spoiler:Riina takes this even further, creating full blown Investiture computers, AI, cameras, and even a rocket ship.]]
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* SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic: Fort's "Awakened tablet with Connection circuits" is blatantly some form of magically created magically-created tablet computer, complete with predictive text. [[spoiler:Riina takes this even further, creating full blown Investiture computers, AI, cameras, and even a rocket ship.]]
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* ThroughHisStomach: Tress managed to win over the Dougs of ''Crow's Song'' by helping Fort prepare one meal a day, plus dessert.
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* ThroughHisStomach: Tress managed to win over the Dougs of the ''Crow's Song'' by helping Fort prepare one meal a day, plus dessert.
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* UriahGambit: When Charlie makes too much of a nuisance of himself, he is sent to sail the Midnight Sea and attempt to woo the sorceress who lives there. He is declared dead basically the second his ship is out of sight. It technically works as the Sorceress does capture him, but she decides to hold him for ransom [[spoiler: and turn him into a rat]] rather than kill him.
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* UriahGambit: When Charlie makes too much of a nuisance of himself, he is sent to sail the Midnight Sea and attempt to woo the sorceress who lives there. He is declared dead basically the second his ship is out of sight. It technically works as the Sorceress does capture him, but she decides to hold him for ransom [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and turn him into a rat]] rather than kill him.
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* TheWorfEffect: When Hoid shows up, he's been driven insane. Tress soon learns this is because the Sorceress cursed him. [[spoiler: This gets PlayedWith though. It turns out Hoid ''let'' the Sorceress curse him as part of a bet. After his sanity is restored, he blocks another curse with his own spell. Having said that though, Hoid himself admits the Sorceress might be able to defeat him in a fair fight, but she decides to [[DirtyCoward flee]] when Tress gives her the option to leave without a fight provided, she leaves the world entirely.]]
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* TheWorfEffect: TheWorfEffect:
** When Hoid shows up, he's been driven insane. Tress soon learns this is because the Sorceress cursed him.[[spoiler: This [[spoiler:This gets PlayedWith though. It turns out Hoid ''let'' the Sorceress curse him as part of a bet. After his sanity is restored, he blocks another curse with his own spell. Having said that though, Hoid himself admits the Sorceress might be able to defeat him in a fair fight, but she decides to [[DirtyCoward flee]] when Tress gives her the option to leave without a fight provided, fight, [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere she leaves the world entirely.entirely]].]]
** When Hoid shows up, he's been driven insane. Tress soon learns this is because the Sorceress cursed him.
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* DamselInDistress: Tress notes that it's a pretty common fate for the women of most stories and suspects she's doomed to become one. [[spoiler:She actually does get captured by the Sorceress at the end but comes to realize that everyone needs help every once in a while, and having earned the love and respect of people who'll risk their life for yours is quite and accomplishment in and of itself. Also, she uses it as an opportunity to distract the Sorceress, giving her crew the opening, they need to get Hoid into the tower.]]
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* DamselInDistress: Tress notes that it's a pretty common fate for the women of most stories and suspects she's doomed to become one. [[spoiler:She actually does get captured by the Sorceress at the end end, but comes to realize that everyone needs help every once in a while, and having earned the love and respect of people who'll risk their life for yours is quite and the accomplishment in and of itself. Also, she uses it as an opportunity to distract the Sorceress, giving her crew the opening, opening they need to get Hoid into the tower.]]
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* ShownTheirWork: As Hoid notes, the spore seas act like water seas due to the process of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Liquefaction liquefaction,]] a completely real phenomenon where air blown through a loose medium (typically sand, but in this case spores) makes it act like water. Massive vents beneath the seas blow out air almost constantly, stirring the spores and giving them water-like tides and currents.
-->'''Hoid:''' The science is really quite fascinating.
-->'''Hoid:''' The science is really quite fascinating.
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* DamselInDistress: Tress notes that it's a pretty common fate for the women of most stories and suspects she's doomed to become one. [[spoiler:She actually does get captured by the Sorceress at the end but comes to realize that everyone needs help every once in a while, and having earned the love and respect of people who'll risk their life for yours is quite and accomplishment in and of itself.]]
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* DamselInDistress: Tress notes that it's a pretty common fate for the women of most stories and suspects she's doomed to become one. [[spoiler:She actually does get captured by the Sorceress at the end but comes to realize that everyone needs help every once in a while, and having earned the love and respect of people who'll risk their life for yours is quite and accomplishment in and of itself. Also, she uses it as an opportunity to distract the Sorceress, giving her crew the opening, they need to get Hoid into the tower.]]
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: Hoid is one of the most powerful and cunning members of the cosmere ''and'' knows where the Sorceress is located. Shame he spends the novel cursed into a blathering idiot instead of helping.
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* DramaPreservingHandicap: Hoid is one of the most powerful and cunning members of the cosmere Cosmere ''and'' knows where the Sorceress is located. Shame he spends the novel cursed into a blathering idiot instead of helping.
* FreudianExcuseIsNoExcuse: After learning that Captain Crow [[spoiler: is dying from a magic parasite and has weeks to live]] Tress starts to feel sorry for her. [[spoiler: But Captain Crow really is just a remorseless, bloodthirsty pirate who murders several people and is willing to sell another into slavery just to save her own life. Ultimately, Tress has no choice but to find a way to defeat her.]]
* HoistByHerOwnPetard: Captain Crow plots to [[spoiler: sell Tress into slavery to a dragon in exchange for a magical cure for her terminal illness.]] However, when she [[spoiler: drags Tress to the Dragon, Tress tells him that she is the one selling Captain Crow to him as a slave. Captain Crow tries to argue, but the Dragon decides Crow would make a more useful servant and accepts Tress's offer.]]
* ItWasWithYouAllAlong: Hoid directly mentions this, noting that a lot of adventures could have been avoided if the heroine just checked to make sure she didn't already have what she was looking for.
** Hoid keeps insisting that Tress already has everything she needs to defeat Captain Crow, even as Crow is [[spoiler: taking Tress to the Dragon.]] It turns out that what she needs to defeat Captain Crow is [[spoiler: Captain Crow. When she takes Tress to trade to the Dragon, Tress simply trades ''her'' instead.]]
** [[spoiler: Huck the talking Rat ''is'' Charlie after the Sorceress cursed him. Even if Tress had known this she still would have had to go on her quest, but things would have been a lot easier if she knew the whole time.]]
* KickTheDog: After seeing that she accidentally made Tress happy, Captain Crow kicks her in the stomach to make up for it.
** Hoid keeps insisting that Tress already has everything she needs to defeat Captain Crow, even as Crow is [[spoiler: taking Tress to the Dragon.]] It turns out that what she needs to defeat Captain Crow is [[spoiler: Captain Crow. When she takes Tress to trade to the Dragon, Tress simply trades ''her'' instead.]]
** [[spoiler: Huck the talking Rat ''is'' Charlie after the Sorceress cursed him. Even if Tress had known this she still would have had to go on her quest, but things would have been a lot easier if she knew the whole time.]]
* KickTheDog: After seeing that she accidentally made Tress happy, Captain Crow kicks her in the stomach to make up for it.
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* UriahGambit: When Charlie makes too much of a nuisance of himself, he is sent to sail the Midnight Sea and attempt to woo the sorceress who lives there. He is declared dead basically the second his ship is out of sight.
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* UriahGambit: When Charlie makes too much of a nuisance of himself, he is sent to sail the Midnight Sea and attempt to woo the sorceress who lives there. He is declared dead basically the second his ship is out of sight. It technically works as the Sorceress does capture him, but she decides to hold him for ransom [[spoiler: and turn him into a rat]] rather than kill him.
* TheWorfEffect: When Hoid shows up, he's been driven insane. Tress soon learns this is because the Sorceress cursed him. [[spoiler: This gets PlayedWith though. It turns out Hoid ''let'' the Sorceress curse him as part of a bet. After his sanity is restored, he blocks another curse with his own spell. Having said that though, Hoid himself admits the Sorceress might be able to defeat him in a fair fight, but she decides to [[DirtyCoward flee]] when Tress gives her the option to leave without a fight provided, she leaves the world entirely.]]
** Captain Crow is [[spoiler: ImmuneToBullets]] and an incredibly skilled sharpshooter and fighter. [[spoiler: The dragon defeats her by waving a claw in her direction and summoning cloth to hold her.]]
* TheWorfEffect: When Hoid shows up, he's been driven insane. Tress soon learns this is because the Sorceress cursed him. [[spoiler: This gets PlayedWith though. It turns out Hoid ''let'' the Sorceress curse him as part of a bet. After his sanity is restored, he blocks another curse with his own spell. Having said that though, Hoid himself admits the Sorceress might be able to defeat him in a fair fight, but she decides to [[DirtyCoward flee]] when Tress gives her the option to leave without a fight provided, she leaves the world entirely.]]
** Captain Crow is [[spoiler: ImmuneToBullets]] and an incredibly skilled sharpshooter and fighter. [[spoiler: The dragon defeats her by waving a claw in her direction and summoning cloth to hold her.]]
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Nor was the rock like the one you have imagined. The girl, however, ''might'' be as you imagined--assuming you imagined her as thoughtful, soft-spoken, and overly fond of collecting cups.
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Nor was the rock like the one you have imagined. \\
The girl, however, ''might'' be as you imagined--assuming you imagined her as thoughtful, soft-spoken, and overly fond of collecting cups.
The girl, however, ''might'' be as you imagined--assuming you imagined her as thoughtful, soft-spoken, and overly fond of collecting cups.