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* ExtranormalInstitute: Kuiper's Academy of Natural Philosophy and Skiltakraft (which is also a BoardingSchool) specializes in training dragoneers how to control their dragons. However, Kuiper's is more accurately a college with students ranging from ages 14 to 20 and taking about four to six years of education. Nearly every student who attends have already attended primary school, with girls and boys [[OneGenderSchool going to separate schools]]. Currently the only two students who didn't attend any primary school at all are Anequs and Theod, who are both nackies and both there on scholarships.

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* ExtranormalInstitute: Kuiper's Academy of Natural Philosophy and Skiltakraft (which is also a BoardingSchool) specializes in training dragoneers how to control their dragons. However, Kuiper's is more accurately a college or an upper level high school, with students ranging from ages 14 to 20 and taking about four to six years of education.education before leaving. Nearly every student who attends have already attended primary school, with girls and boys [[OneGenderSchool going to separate schools]]. Currently the only two students who didn't attend any primary school at all are Anequs and Theod, who are both nackies and both there on scholarships.

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Anequs ([[PronouncingMyNameForYou pronounced]] ''ahn-eh-KOOS'', not ''anna-kiss'') has lived her fifteen years on Masquapaug Island (a place off the Eastern coast of the continental mainland of Lindemarden, part of North Markesland) and among her people and traditions. She--and the rest of the Indigenous people of the land--have has not seen Indigenous dragons in their area since the Anglish colonized the lands and caused the great dying two hundred years ago. Her people remember and still tell tales of dragons from before and of those who bonded with them. When Anequs encounters a [[LastOfHisKind Native dragon]] that flies away and finds its dragon's egg close to her home island, she [[BondCreatures bonds with it at hatching]] and the people of Masquapaug revere her as a ''Nampeshiweisit''-- a person bonded to a dragon--and the first in several generations.

The colonizing Anglish, however, have different and very strict opinions about how dragons should be trained, where--and often [[DragonTamer who those dragoneers]] ''should'' be, and Anequs is none of it. Despite her differences, Anequs is offered the opportunity--or more accurately, required--to leave her native home, go among the Anglish, and train Kasaqua through a "proper" [[BoardingSchool Anglish academy]] for dragon training to learn the ways they expect of dragons--or risk Kasaqua being put down if she does not do so. Anequs, however, is smart, determined, and resolved to do exactly as the Anglish demand to learn how to train Kasaqua--but will not become the kind of meek, cultured [[ProperLady Anglish miss]] expected of her in the process.

Anequs and Kasaqua are coming both of age and into power--and in a world that hasn't changed in generations, they together might be the ones to do it.

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Anequs ([[PronouncingMyNameForYou pronounced]] ''ahn-eh-KOOS'', not ''anna-kiss'') has lived her fifteen years on Masquapaug Island (a place off the Eastern coast of the continental mainland of Lindemarden, part of North Markesland) and among her people and traditions. She--and She -- and the rest of the Indigenous people of the land--have land -- have has not seen Indigenous dragons in their area since the Anglish colonized the lands and caused the great dying two hundred years ago. Her people remember and still tell tales of dragons from before and of those who bonded with them. When Anequs encounters a [[LastOfHisKind Native dragon]] that flies away and finds its dragon's egg close to her home island, she [[BondCreatures bonds with it at hatching]] and the people of Masquapaug revere her as a ''Nampeshiweisit''-- ''Nampeshiweisit'' -- a person bonded to a dragon--and the first in several generations.

The colonizing Anglish, however, have different and very strict opinions about how dragons should be trained, where--and where -- and often [[DragonTamer who those dragoneers]] ''should'' be, and Anequs is none of it. Despite her differences, Anequs is offered the opportunity--or opportunity -- or more accurately, required--to required -- to leave her native home, go among the Anglish, and train Kasaqua through a "proper" [[BoardingSchool Anglish academy]] for dragon training to learn the ways they expect of dragons--or dragons or risk Kasaqua being put down if she does not do so. Anequs, however, is smart, determined, and resolved to do exactly as the Anglish demand to learn how to train Kasaqua--but Kasaqua -- but will not become the kind of meek, cultured [[ProperLady Anglish miss]] expected of her in the process.process and will hold on to her culture.

Anequs and Kasaqua are coming both of age and into power--and power in a world that hasn't changed in generations, and they together might be the ones to do it.






* AlchemyIsMagic: Skiltakraft--the "shaping" and directing of dragon's breath--is a magical form of chemistry. It's done by drawing skiltas (various diagrams) to direct a dragon's breath to form various athers. The Periodic Table of Skilta, of which there are twenty-four known athers (and many more theorized), line up with the actual periodic table but are named in Tysklandish (e.g hydrogen is instead ''vetna'', while carbon is ''kolfni'') and symbolized with multi-line stars. For example, a seven-pointed star symbolizes zurfni (nitrogen). Containing circles are drawn around the skilta to keep the athers contained within during skiltakrafing.
* AlternateHistory: The book is set in an alternate 1840s where, rather than the "English" having been the ones to colonize "North America" (North Markesland) it was the Norse--they and the people from Anglesland are both collectively referred to as the Anglish. The Norse also conquered much of "Europe" including the British Isles, France, and Germany. The Roman empire never existed, nor Greece, so the ancient seat of art and philosophy was Tyskland ("Germany"). This reflects across the culture in the names used everywhere and for everything; from cities and places (North and South Markesland, New Linvik) to terms used for language in studies ("erelore" for history), and elements on the periodic table (athers) and the written diagrams to shape them (skilta). This also makes the dominant faith of the Anglish based on Myth/NorseMythology, with festivals such as Jule and Valkyrjafax.

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* AlchemyIsMagic: Skiltakraft--the Skiltakraft -- the "shaping" and directing of dragon's breath--is breath -- is a magical form of chemistry. It's done by drawing skiltas (various diagrams) to direct a dragon's breath to form various athers. The Periodic Table of Skilta, of which there are twenty-four known athers (and many more theorized), line up with the actual periodic table but are named in Tysklandish (e.g hydrogen is instead ''vetna'', while carbon is ''kolfni'') and symbolized with multi-line stars. For example, a seven-pointed star symbolizes zurfni (nitrogen). Containing circles are drawn around the skilta to keep the athers contained within during skiltakrafing.
* AlternateHistory: The book is set in an alternate 1840s where, rather than the "English" having been the ones to colonize "North America" (North Markesland) it was the Norse--they Norse -- they and the people from Anglesland are both collectively referred to as the Anglish. The Norse also conquered much of "Europe" including the British Isles, France, and Germany. The Roman empire never existed, nor Greece, so the ancient seat of art and philosophy was Tyskland ("Germany"). This reflects across the culture in the names used everywhere and for everything; from cities and places (North and South Markesland, New Linvik) to terms used for language in studies ("erelore" for history), and elements on the periodic table (athers) and the written diagrams to shape them (skilta). This also makes the dominant faith of the Anglish based on Myth/NorseMythology, with festivals such as Jule and Valkyrjafax.



** The Naquipaug Island massacre--what the Anglish call [[WrittenByTheWinners the Nack Island Uprising]]--is the most brutal example of Native massacres in recent history, having occurred only seventeen years ago in 1825. Coal was discovered on the island, leading to the Anglish breaking their treaty with the Naquisit to get to it. They tried to grab land they had no rights to, ignoring how land was passed from mother to daughter. Anglish went so far as to burn farms, poison wells and corn stocks, and use dragons against villages and people to kill them. The Naquisit people first attempted to send a council to talk things out and everyone who went was killed. When the Naquisit then attempted to fight back, they were close to wiped out. Half of the population was killed or executed with several survivors of South Village having hid inside an empty corn silo storage to not be found, mostly children and elders. Those who were spared or survived were scattered--either having moved to the nearby Masquapaug, living isolated across various cities and towns of the mainland, or still living on Naquipaug but now only where they are allowed to be while the Anglish own much more of the island and control the port. Any family that leaves their land loses all rights to it under the new 1825 treaty, which is why Anequs' Aunt Shanuckee still lives there. The Naquipaug massacre is in active memory of many people. Anequs' father could have been among the massacred at the time but he had just left for sea, and his brother Motuckquas and father were both among the murdered. Women, even pregnant, were not spared either--Theod's mother Nepinnae was hanged [[OrphansOrdeal the day after his birth]], and his father Menukkis was executed. In what used to be South Village, no one between the ages of fourteen and fifty at the time survived.
* BondCreatures: Dragons when born immediately bond with one of the people in the vicinity; from that moment on, the two are connected. Anequs "knew" Kasaqua's name soon after she was born, and feels all her discomfort, pain, hunger, curiosity, [[spoiler:murderous rage]], etc. Bonding is heavily influenced by those around them at birth; among the Masquisit, they are hatched collectively, and the dragon then bonds to someone nearby. Dragon eggs in Anglish culture are often purchased quickly after laying, registered immediately, and kept near the one the dragon is "intended" to bond to; the hopeful trainer interacts with the egg as much as possible to facilitate proper bonding after birth. Eggs may be hatched in front of multiple siblings so as to pick any one of them, or set with only one person, and to become part of the dragonsthede a dragon must bond with you. The bonding doesn't always go as wanted and if a dragon isn't bonded to anyone--or anyone they deem proper according to Anglish expectations--it can be labeled feral and summarily executed, with those blamed for interfering fined for the egg's high value or even killed for stepping out of their place. This is what happened with Theod's Copper; rather than the newborn hatchling bonding to the intended sons of his master Herr Melher, it immediately bit the older of the two, escaped from the presentation room, and went to where Theod was doing scullery work instead having bonded to him. The resulting scandal of a nackie having a dragon at ''all'' was large enough it rose to the level of a legal challenge, and it was Frau Kuiper's intervention and willing to take Theod into the school that let Theod keep Copper at all. Furthermore, dragons whose dragoneers are executed may also be put down, and people who are declared unfit to be dragoneers can have their dragons taken away or put down. [[spoiler:Even if they ask for mercy.]]

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** The Naquipaug Island massacre--what massacre -- what the Anglish call [[WrittenByTheWinners the Nack Island Uprising]]--is Uprising]] -- is the most brutal example of Native massacres in recent history, having occurred only seventeen years ago in 1825. Coal was discovered on the island, leading to the Anglish breaking their treaty with the Naquisit to get to it. They tried to grab land they had no rights to, ignoring how land was passed from mother to daughter. Anglish went so far as to burn farms, poison wells and corn stocks, and use dragons against villages and people to kill them. The Naquisit people first attempted to send a council to talk things out and everyone who went was killed. When the Naquisit then attempted to fight back, they were close to wiped out. Half of the population was killed or executed with several survivors of South Village having hid inside an empty corn silo storage to not be found, mostly children and elders. Those who were spared or survived were scattered--either scattered -- either having moved to the nearby Masquapaug, living isolated across various cities and towns of the mainland, or still living on Naquipaug but now only where they are allowed to be while the Anglish own much more of the island and control the port. Any family that leaves their land loses all rights to it under the new 1825 treaty, which is why Anequs' Aunt Shanuckee still lives there. The Naquipaug massacre is in active memory of many people. Anequs' father could have been among the massacred at the time but he had just left for sea, and his brother Motuckquas and father were both among the murdered. Women, even pregnant, were not spared either--Theod's either -- Theod's mother Nepinnae was hanged [[OrphansOrdeal the day after his birth]], and his father Menukkis was executed. In what used to be South Village, no one between the ages of fourteen and fifty at the time survived.
* BondCreatures: Dragons when born immediately bond with one of the people in the vicinity; from that moment on, the two are connected. Anequs "knew" Kasaqua's name soon after she was born, and feels all her discomfort, pain, hunger, curiosity, [[spoiler:murderous rage]], etc. Bonding is heavily influenced by those around them at birth; among the Masquisit, they are hatched collectively, and the dragon then bonds to someone nearby. Dragon eggs in Anglish culture are often purchased quickly after laying, registered immediately, and kept near the one the dragon is "intended" to bond to; the hopeful trainer interacts with the egg as much as possible to facilitate proper bonding after birth. Eggs may be hatched in front of multiple siblings so as to pick any one of them, or set with only one person, and to become part of the dragonsthede a dragon must bond with you. The bonding doesn't always go as wanted and if a dragon isn't bonded to anyone--or anyone -- or anyone they deem proper according to Anglish expectations--it expectations -- it can be labeled feral and summarily executed, with those blamed for interfering fined for the egg's high value or even killed for stepping out of their place. This is what happened with Theod's Copper; rather than the newborn hatchling bonding to the intended sons of his master Herr Melher, it immediately bit the older of the two, escaped from the presentation room, and went to where Theod was doing scullery work instead having bonded to him. The resulting scandal of a nackie having a dragon at ''all'' was large enough it rose to the level of a legal challenge, and it was Frau Kuiper's intervention and willing to take Theod into the school that let Theod keep Copper at all. Furthermore, dragons whose dragoneers are executed may also be put down, and people who are declared unfit to be dragoneers can have their dragons taken away or put down. [[spoiler:Even if they ask for mercy.]]



* DancesAndBalls: The Valkyrafax celebration, after the rite of the Valkyrja, includes a ball; as there are many more male students at Kuiper's, they invite female relatives to attend. Anequs and Theod are persuaded to attend for social appearances, and Marta takes the opportunity to arrange to have both of them outfitted properly, with Anequs getting a bronze taffeta evening gown of the latest fashions. She also takes the next few weekends, with Sander's help, to teach Anequs some of the more expected dances. Anequs does exactly two dances--the opening dance with Theod for appearance's sake and a dance with Sander--before she and Theod sneak off and go to where the servants are celebrating.

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* DancesAndBalls: The Valkyrafax celebration, after the rite of the Valkyrja, includes a ball; as there are many more male students at Kuiper's, they invite female relatives to attend. Anequs and Theod are persuaded to attend for social appearances, and Marta takes the opportunity to arrange to have both of them outfitted properly, with Anequs getting a bronze taffeta evening gown of the latest fashions. She also takes the next few weekends, with Sander's help, to teach Anequs some of the more expected dances. Anequs does exactly two dances--the dances -- the opening dance with Theod for appearance's sake and a dance with Sander--before Sander since she's his friend and not many will dance with him -- before she and Theod sneak off and go to where the servants are celebrating.



* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Otrygg Otryggsson, a former jarl's guard who in the aftermath of the attempt on the jarl's life confesses to sending the threatening letter Anequs and Theod received during the winter break. He is brought before a moot and declared unfit to be a dragoneer with the consequence being that his dragon is sentenced to be put down. He [[HangingAround hangs himself]] in prison the day before her execution, leaving behind a plea to spare her and claiming she won't harm anyone without him around. [[AllForNothing His dragon is still put to death.]]]]
* EurekaMoment: Anequs has one regarding skiltakraft after nearly a whole term of struggling through it while at home for the whaler's return celebration. [[spoiler:She realizes that the paths of dances her people have done for generations--with curved lines, rather than straight--are drawing skilta.]] She passes this on to Theod, with his promise that they both won't inform anyone at the school what they've discovered.
* FantasticSlurs: All Indigenous North Markesland peoples--regardless of their many personal names and variances among different people--are lumped together as "nackies" by the Anglish, after Nack Island. This is used both as a general term and a slur.
* FantasyAmericana: North America--specifically, the New England area--if it was colonized by the Norse and had native dragons.
* FantasyCounterpartMap: The front of the book has a map where--while based on the earth's continents in shape--the lands have different borders and names as befitting the history. For example, "Japan" is Zhippon, "France" is Frankland (a lot of countries that were colonized by the Norse in Europe are simply called -land at the end), and "North and South America" are instead North and South Markesland. Several countries, such as Greece or Portugal, do not exist, and most of Aprika south of the Sahara is undivided. Furthermore a good portion of North Markesland west of the Appalachians is obscured in fog, indicating it has not been explored and mapped (or controlled) by the Anglish; it is known as the western frontier.
* FantasyCounterpartReligion: Due to the Norsmen being the major colonizers not only of Europe but no Roman empire to spread Christianity through it, the dominant faith of the Anglish is based on Myth/NorseMythology. People use the names of Joden, Fyra, and Enki to curse ("sweet Fyra's milky tits" seems to be a favorite of Frau Kuiper) and annual festivals such as Jule, Valkyrjafax, and Fyrafax are based around their gods and the seasons. Other faiths exist--Zhina, of Kindah background, believes in one god with many prophets and doesn't eat pork or other unclean animals--but the Norsmen naturally believe their faith to be the most accurate and truthful.

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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Otrygg Otryggsson, a former jarl's guard who in the aftermath of the attempt on the jarl's life confesses to sending the threatening letter Anequs and Theod received during the winter break. He is brought before a moot and declared unfit to be a dragoneer with the consequence being that his dragon is sentenced to be put down. He [[HangingAround hangs himself]] in prison the day before her execution, leaving behind a plea to spare her and claiming she won't harm anyone without him around. [[AllForNothing His dragon is still put to death.]]]]
death]].]]
* EurekaMoment: Anequs has one regarding skiltakraft after nearly a whole term of struggling through it while at home for the whaler's return celebration. [[spoiler:She realizes that the paths of dances her people have done for generations--with generations -- with curved lines, rather than straight--are straight -- are drawing skilta.]] She passes this on to Theod, with his promise that they both won't inform anyone at the school what they've discovered.
* ExtranormalInstitute: Kuiper's Academy of Natural Philosophy and Skiltakraft (which is also a BoardingSchool) specializes in training dragoneers how to control their dragons. However, Kuiper's is more accurately a college with students ranging from ages 14 to 20 and taking about four to six years of education. Nearly every student who attends have already attended primary school, with girls and boys [[OneGenderSchool going to separate schools]]. Currently the only two students who didn't attend any primary school at all are Anequs and Theod, who are both nackies and both there on scholarships.
* FantasticSlurs: All Indigenous North Markesland peoples--regardless peoples -- regardless of their many personal names and variances among different people--are people -- are lumped together as "nackies" by the Anglish, after Nack Island. This is used both as a general term and a slur.
* FantasyAmericana: North America--specifically, America -- specifically, the New England area--if area -- if it was colonized by the Norse and had native dragons.
* FantasyCounterpartMap: The front of the book has a map where--while based on the earth's continents in shape--the shape with the lands have having different borders and names as befitting the history.AlternateHistory. For example, "Japan" is Zhippon, "France" is Frankland (a lot of countries that were colonized by the Norse in Europe are simply called -land at the end), and "North and South America" are instead North and South Markesland. Several countries, such as Greece or Portugal, do not exist, and most of Aprika south of the Sahara is undivided. Furthermore a good portion of North Markesland west of the Appalachians is obscured in fog, indicating it has not been explored and mapped (or controlled) by the Anglish; it is known as the western frontier.
* FantasyCounterpartReligion: Due to the Norsmen being the major colonizers not only of Europe but no Roman empire to spread Christianity through it, the dominant faith of the Anglish is based on Myth/NorseMythology. People use the names of Joden, Fyra, and Enki to curse ("sweet Fyra's milky tits" seems to be a favorite of Frau Kuiper) and annual festivals such as Jule, Valkyrjafax, and Fyrafax are based around their gods and the seasons. Other faiths exist--Zhina, exist -- Zhina, of Kindah background, believes in one god with many prophets and doesn't eat pork or other animals her faith calls unclean animals--but -- but the Norsmen naturally believe their faith to be the most accurate and truthful.



** and the Ravens of Joden, a minority who believe Norsfolk [[MasterRace as the superior people]] should return to securing their rule and spreading their empire using the ways of old--namely, [[RightWingMilitiaFanatic violent military raids]] into "lesser" lands and any people indigenous to the area either slaughtered or enslaved, and never mind the violence of it.

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** and the Ravens of Joden, a minority who believe Norsfolk [[MasterRace as the superior people]] should return to securing their rule and spreading their empire using the ways of old--namely, old -- namely, [[RightWingMilitiaFanatic violent military raids]] into "lesser" lands and any people indigenous to the area either slaughtered or enslaved, and never mind the violence of it.



* KillItWithFire: Raw dragon's breath renders anything it connects with into ash and wind; while not technically fire, it serves as such and is called "dragonfire" colloquially. Kasaqua's first time doing this is involuntarily out of fright when she's pinched by a crab on the beach; she accidentally burns Anequs' younger sister Sakewa and leaves a wide swath of blacked sand and a melted boulder behind. [[spoiler:The second time she does it--with Anequs and her mentally bonding during the moment--it dispatches the would-be assassin of Jarl Joervarsson, Birning Svenisson, [[NotEnoughToBury turning him into nothing but ash]] and leaving a scorchmark on the grass.]]

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* KillItWithFire: Raw dragon's breath renders anything it connects with into ash and wind; while not technically fire, it serves as such and is called "dragonfire" colloquially. Kasaqua's first time doing this is involuntarily out of fright when she's pinched by a crab on the beach; she accidentally burns Anequs' younger sister Sakewa and leaves a wide swath of blacked sand and a melted boulder behind. [[spoiler:The second time she does it--with it -- with Anequs and her mentally bonding during the moment--it moment -- it dispatches the would-be assassin of Jarl Joervarsson, Birning Svenisson, [[NotEnoughToBury turning him into nothing but ash]] and leaving a scorchmark on the grass.]]



** Anequs invites her younger siblings, Theod's younger cousins--escorted by her brother--and [[PenPals the young girl she's been corresponding with]], Ingrid Hakansdottir, to the Fyrafax celebrations at Kuiper's in early May since it's a festival for children and many students invite younger relatives. Niquiat brings them all along with Zhina and Ingrid's brother, Aksel. Ingrid is excited at meeting Anequs and seeing Kasaqua for the first time, and all the invited children have a fine time with the Anglish children, trading how to do various crafts among each other. News is printed in the ''Vastergot Gazette'', including pictures of Anequs and Theod with Marta and Niklas Sørensen respectively. [[spoiler:This is followed by a scathing anonymous editorial by a "true son of Vastergot" in the ''Vastergot Weekly Review'', accusing the academy of having a whole crowd of filthy nackies at the grounds and letting Anglish children "mingle" with them freely. It suggests that people who are true sons as well withdraw their sons from Kuiper's Academy, and write to the thane and the jarl about the travesty. The next day after the editorial is published, six people are are killed in a fight in a mill district mead hall--five nackies and one Anglish man. The Anglish man is Ingrid's father, the fight starting when someone insulted his wife and children in his presence.]]
** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government, during the council he calls. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test--mostly because SadistTeacher Professor Ezel insists on it and Professor Mesman needs to see Theod's flight skills, while the other teachers have given them final grades based on the term.
* NobleBigot: The Anglish in general towards nackies and others. The book ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'', which was written by the Anglish Emanuel Nordlund, has solidified the perception of nackies as primitive, unambitious, backwards, and nowhere near as "civilized" as the Anglish. Frau Jansen is a direct example; [[EstablishingCharacterMoment her first meeting with Anequs]] has her call Anequs a dear creature and treating her like a dog having done a trick when she identifies Sander's dragon as a velikolepni. Then when Anequs says (after Frau Jansen thinks she lived in a little bark house her whole life) that they have a telegraph office on Masquapaug, Frau Jansen laughs at the idea of savages "dabbling" about with such a thing--but that it's clearly the natural outcome of exposure to the Anglish "improving" the nackies that has them have such a thing.

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** Anequs invites her younger siblings, Theod's younger cousins--escorted cousins -- escorted by her brother--and brother -- and [[PenPals the young girl she's been corresponding with]], Ingrid Hakansdottir, to the Fyrafax celebrations at Kuiper's in early May since it's a festival for children and many students invite younger relatives. Niquiat brings them all along with Zhina and Ingrid's brother, Aksel. Ingrid is excited at meeting Anequs and seeing Kasaqua for the first time, and all the invited children have a fine time with the Anglish children, trading how to do various crafts among each other. News is printed in the ''Vastergot Gazette'', including pictures of Anequs and Theod with Marta and Niklas Sørensen respectively. [[spoiler:This is followed by a scathing anonymous editorial by a "true son of Vastergot" in the ''Vastergot Weekly Review'', accusing the academy of having a whole crowd of filthy nackies at the grounds and letting Anglish children "mingle" with them freely. It suggests that people who are true sons as well withdraw their sons from Kuiper's Academy, and write to the thane and the jarl about the travesty. The next day after the editorial is published, six people are are killed in a fight in a mill district mead hall--five hall -- five nackies and one Anglish man. The Anglish man is Ingrid's father, the fight starting when someone insulted his wife and children in his presence.]]
** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government, during the council he calls. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test--mostly test -- mostly because SadistTeacher Professor Ezel insists on it and Professor Mesman needs to see Theod's flight skills, skills to allow him to leave the grounds with Copper, while the other teachers have given them final grades based on the term.
* NobleBigot: The Anglish in general towards nackies and others. The book ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'', which was written by the Anglish Emanuel Nordlund, has solidified the perception of nackies as primitive, unambitious, backwards, and nowhere near as "civilized" as the Anglish. Frau Jansen is a direct example; [[EstablishingCharacterMoment her first meeting with Anequs]] has her call Anequs a dear creature and treating her like a dog having done a trick when she identifies Sander's dragon as a velikolepni. Then when Anequs says (after Frau Jansen thinks she lived in a little bark house her whole life) that they have a telegraph office on Masquapaug, Frau Jansen laughs at the idea of savages "dabbling" about with such a thing--but thing -- but that it's clearly the natural outcome of exposure to the Anglish "improving" the nackies that has them have such a thing.



* OfCorsetHurts: {{ZigZagged|Trope}}. Anequs' school uniform includes a steel-boned corset in the Anglish style, complete with waist narrowing. She's worn canvas short stays before--generally when going to Catchnet--but most of the time doesn't bother wearing any foundation garments back home on Masquapaug. She is not so much in pain after putting her school corset on the first time as discomforted by the way it squeezes against her body to fit the Anglish narrow-waisted fashion expected of women and frustrated at how impossible it is to bend at the waist with it on, due to its stiffness and boning. She finds the lighter canvas corset she purchases in the Vastergot shop with Liberty's advice much more comfortable to wear, and the corset she borrows from Marta for her ball dresses less stiff than her school corset but more structured and shaping. However, she's never in pain when wearing any of her corsets, just uncomfortable. [[spoiler:When she's shot at in the attempt on the jarl's life, her school corset keeps her from being severely injured; the bullet glances off the steel and thicker canvas layers, resulting in severely bruised ribs and sharp pain from the initial heat of the bullet hitting the steel boning.]]
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Dragons are beasts more than anything (especially as seen by the Anglish), with no human-like intelligence or distinct language, who immediately bond for life with someone near them at hatching. They have multiple variations by their location of origin and breed, with different strengths and weaknesses. Native North Markesland Nampeshiwe dragons like Kasaqua are born bald like birds, [[FeatheredDragons with small pinfeathers]] that come in as they grow and eventually become full feathers. They're different from other breeds from Anglish locations, such as Frau Karina Kuiper's Gerhard, a kessseldrach. Anequs compares Kasaqua and her mother's otter-like litheness to the bear-like bulk and build of Gerhard the first time they interact. Theod's Copper is an akhari, which is a Kindah breed made for flight and speed, and Marta's Magnus is a bjalladreki skilled in flight and racing. Many Anglish find the lineage of their dragons and breeding to be something to note at introduction, the way one would talk of a horse or dog's breeding. Most notably, dragons don't merely breath fire (or any other [[BreathWeapon element]]) alone and instead breathe a kind of unique magic that destabilizes athers and can shape and reshape them with the skilta their dragoneers draw. Ms. Blackgoose states the trope by name [[https://www.bookweb.org/news/indies-introduce-qa-moniquill-blackgoose-1629444 in an interview]] with the American Booksellers Association.
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Anequs corrects Frau Kuiper about how her name is pronounced when they meet--''ahn-eh-KOOS'', not ''ANNA-kiss.'' The front of the book also says how to pronounce many of the names and terms used.

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* OfCorsetHurts: {{ZigZagged|Trope}}. Anequs' school uniform includes a steel-boned corset in the Anglish style, complete with waist narrowing. She's worn canvas short stays before--generally before -- generally when going to Catchnet--but Catchnet -- but most of the time doesn't bother wearing any foundation garments back home on Masquapaug. She is not so much in pain after putting her school corset on the first time as discomforted by the way it squeezes against her body to fit the Anglish narrow-waisted fashion expected of women and frustrated at how impossible it is to bend at the waist with it on, due to its stiffness and boning. She finds the lighter canvas corset she purchases in the Vastergot shop with Liberty's advice much more comfortable to wear, and the corset she borrows from Marta for her ball dresses less stiff than her school corset but more structured and shaping. However, she's never in pain when wearing any of her corsets, just uncomfortable. [[spoiler:When she's shot at in the attempt on the jarl's life, her school corset keeps her from being severely injured; the bullet glances off the steel and thicker canvas layers, resulting in severely bruised ribs and sharp pain from the initial heat of the bullet hitting the steel boning.]]
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Dragons are beasts more than anything (especially as seen by the Anglish), with no human-like intelligence or distinct language, who immediately bond for life with someone near them at hatching. They have multiple variations by their location of origin and breed, with different strengths and weaknesses. Native North Markesland Nampeshiwe dragons like Kasaqua are born bald like birds, [[FeatheredDragons with small pinfeathers]] that come in as they grow and eventually become full feathers. They're different from other breeds from Anglish locations, such as Frau Karina Kuiper's Gerhard, a kessseldrach. Anequs compares Kasaqua and her mother's otter-like litheness to the bear-like bulk and build of Gerhard the first time they interact. Theod's Copper is an akhari, which is a Kindah breed made for flight and speed, and Marta's Magnus is a bjalladreki skilled in flight and racing.racing which is a very widespread breed. Many Anglish find the lineage of their dragons and breeding to be something to note at introduction, the way one would talk of a horse or dog's breeding. Most notably, dragons don't merely breath fire (or any other [[BreathWeapon element]]) alone and instead breathe a kind of unique magic that destabilizes athers and can shape and reshape them with the skilta their dragoneers draw. Ms. Blackgoose states the trope by name [[https://www.bookweb.org/news/indies-introduce-qa-moniquill-blackgoose-1629444 in an interview]] with the American Booksellers Association.Association and has compared them more to dog breeds.
* PronouncingMyNameForYou: Anequs corrects Frau Kuiper about how her name is pronounced when they meet--''ahn-eh-KOOS'', meet -- ''ahn-eh-KOOS'', not ''ANNA-kiss.'' The front of the book also says how to pronounce many of the names and terms used.



* StayInTheKitchen: Very few dragoneers are female. Anequs and Marta are the only two female students in the year out of over a hundred, and before Anequs arrived there had been two others that had just left; one married and the other graduated and returned home, and Marta had worried she'd be the only female student for the entire year. Forty-five years ago, dragoneers in New Anglesland were limited to men in the dragonthede (akin to the military) and the jarl's guard only--unless they were the daughters of jarls, and then they were only allowed racing breeds like bjalladreki rather than any combat breeds. The first to break this rule was Karina Kuiper, the founder of the academy; she [[SweetPollyOliver disguised herself as a man]] to try and join the dragonthede and stand before an egg to claim her. When she was found out, it went to the High Moot where they decided to allow her to prove herself skilled in battle like war maidens of folklore, which she did. But in Old Anglesland it's still illegal for anyone of less rank than a jarl's daughter to be deliberately set before a dragon's egg at all and a girl can be hanged for it.

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* StayInTheKitchen: Very few dragoneers are female. Anequs and Marta are the only two female students in the year out of over a hundred, and before Anequs arrived there had been two others that had just left; one married and the other graduated and returned home, and Marta had worried she'd be the only female student for the entire year. Forty-five years ago, dragoneers in New Anglesland were limited to men in the dragonthede (akin to the military) and the jarl's guard only--unless only unless they were the daughters of jarls, and then they were only allowed racing breeds like bjalladreki rather than any combat breeds. The first to break this rule was Karina Kuiper, the founder of the academy; she [[SweetPollyOliver disguised herself as a man]] to try and join the dragonthede and stand before an egg to claim her. When she was found out, it went to the High Moot where they decided to allow her to prove herself skilled in battle like war maidens of folklore, which she did. But in Old Anglesland it's still illegal for anyone a girl of less lesser rank than a jarl's daughter to be deliberately set before a dragon's egg at all and a girl can be hanged for it.



* WhiteMansBurden: Anequs and Theod have both been given scholarships to Kuiper's under the idea by Frau Kuiper (and others) that they will accept their new "elevation" in life as dragoneers and never return to the primitive ways of the nackies, proving that the indigenous people can be "civilized." Frau Kuiper even tells Anequs that she expected her to be happy to leave behind her former life and not go home, and associate with the kind of social circles Marta frequents, becoming a [[YouAreACreditToYourRace example to her race]]. Anequs finds this idea insulting; her people ''are'' civilized in their own way even if it's not Anglish. She is only there to learn what she needs to be licensed and return back home with Kasaqua--with the second goal of bringing Theod back home with her too, once they've gotten to know each other.
* WizardingSchool: Kuiper's Academy of Natural Philosophy and Skiltakraft (which is also a BoardingSchool). However, it's not a high or middle school; nearly every student who attends have already attended primary school, with girls and boys [[OneGenderSchool going to separate schools]]. Kuiper's is more accurately a college specializing in training dragoneers, with students ranging from ages 14 to 20 and taking about four to six years of education. Currently the only two students who didn't attend any primary school at all are Anequs and Theod, both there on scholarships.
* WrittenByTheWinners: The Anglish about anything historical they have control over and especially regarding New Markesland. History in New Markesland is disregarded as fictional or unimportant before the arrival of the Norsman Stafn Whitebeard, and any history of the indigenous people is disregarded simply because they had no written word. Many Anglish people's only knowledge of anything indigenous are from books like ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'' or ''The Species of Mankind'', which range from unflattering and patronizing to racist. In recent memory is the Naquisit massacre. It's called the Nack Island uprising among the Anglish and portrayed as the Naquisit rebelling against the Anglish and [[TheSavageIndian brutally slaughtering them]], even women and children in their beds. The true story is that when the Anglish discovered coal present on the island, they immediately broke their treaty with the Naquisit to get access to it, staking claims to lands they didn't own (including when men in families died, disregarding that property was passed from mother to daughter). They tried to drive the Naquisit off completely--going so far as to burn farms, poison food and water sources, and turn dragonfire on whole villages. A group of Naquisit who led a war party to try to drive the Anglish off failed and were executed as traitors to their country if they weren't killed in the fight, including Theod's parents, and Aponakwe's father and brother Motuckquas. As Anequs puts it, it was a war the Naquisit lost--but losing the war doesn't mean they were wrong to fight it at all, and they're no more vicious murders than the Anglish were. The Anglish merely came out victorious.

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* WhiteMansBurden: Anequs and Theod have both been given scholarships to Kuiper's under the idea by Frau Kuiper (and others) that they will accept their new "elevation" in life as dragoneers and never return to the primitive ways of the nackies, proving that the indigenous people can be "civilized." Frau Kuiper even tells Anequs that she expected her to be happy to leave behind her former life and not go home, and associate with the kind of social circles Marta frequents, becoming a [[YouAreACreditToYourRace example to her race]]. Anequs finds this idea insulting; her people ''are'' civilized in their own way even if it's not Anglish. She is only there to learn what she needs to be licensed and return back home with Kasaqua--with Kasaqua -- with the second goal of bringing Theod back home with her too, once they've gotten to know each other.
* WizardingSchool: Kuiper's Academy of Natural Philosophy and Skiltakraft (which is also a BoardingSchool). However, it's not a high or middle school; nearly every student who attends have already attended primary school, with girls and boys [[OneGenderSchool going to separate schools]]. Kuiper's is more accurately a college specializing in training dragoneers, with students ranging from ages 14 to 20 and taking about four to six years of education. Currently the only two students who didn't attend any primary school at all are Anequs and Theod, both there on scholarships.
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* WrittenByTheWinners: The Anglish about anything historical they have control over and especially regarding New Markesland. History in New Markesland is disregarded as fictional or unimportant before the arrival of the Norsman Stafn Whitebeard, and any history of the indigenous people is disregarded simply because they had no written word. Many Anglish people's only knowledge of anything indigenous are from books like ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'' or ''The Species of Mankind'', which range from unflattering and patronizing to racist. In recent memory is the Naquisit massacre. It's called the Nack Island uprising among the Anglish and portrayed as the Naquisit rebelling against the Anglish and [[TheSavageIndian brutally slaughtering them]], even women and children in their beds. The true story is that when the Anglish discovered coal present on the island, they immediately broke their treaty with the Naquisit to get access to it, staking claims to lands they didn't own (including when men in families died, disregarding that property was passed from mother to daughter). They tried to drive the Naquisit off completely--going completely -- going so far as to burn farms, poison food and water sources, and turn dragonfire on whole villages. A group of Naquisit who led a war party to try to drive the Anglish off failed and were executed as traitors to their country if they weren't killed in the fight, including Theod's parents, and Aponakwe's father and brother Motuckquas. As Anequs puts it, it was a war the Naquisit lost--but lost -- but losing the war doesn't mean they were wrong to fight it at all, and they're no more vicious murders than the Anglish were. The Anglish merely came out victorious.
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** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government, during the council he calls. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test.

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** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government, during the council he calls. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test.test--mostly because SadistTeacher Professor Ezel insists on it and Professor Mesman needs to see Theod's flight skills, while the other teachers have given them final grades based on the term.

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* KillItWithFire: Raw dragon's breath renders anything it connects with into ash and wind; while not technically fire, it serves as such and is called "dragonfire" colloquially. Kasaqua's first time doing this is involuntarily out of fright when she's pinched by a crab on the beach; she accidentally burns Anequs' younger sister Sakewa and leaves a wide swath of blacked sand and a melted boulder behind. [[spoiler:The second time she does it--with Anequs and her mentally bonding during the moment--it dispatches the would-be assassin of Jarl Joervarsson, Birning Svenisson, turning him into nothing but ash and leaving a scorchmark on the grass.]]

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* KillItWithFire: Raw dragon's breath renders anything it connects with into ash and wind; while not technically fire, it serves as such and is called "dragonfire" colloquially. Kasaqua's first time doing this is involuntarily out of fright when she's pinched by a crab on the beach; she accidentally burns Anequs' younger sister Sakewa and leaves a wide swath of blacked sand and a melted boulder behind. [[spoiler:The second time she does it--with Anequs and her mentally bonding during the moment--it dispatches the would-be assassin of Jarl Joervarsson, Birning Svenisson, [[NotEnoughToBury turning him into nothing but ash ash]] and leaving a scorchmark on the grass.]]



* OfCorsetHurts: [[ZigZaggedTrope Zigzagged]]. Anequs' school uniform includes a steel-boned corset in the Anglish style, complete with waist narrowing. She's worn canvas short stays before--generally when going to Catchnet--but most of the time doesn't bother wearing any foundation garments back home on Masquapaug. She is not so much in pain after putting her school corset on the first time as discomforted by the way it squeezes against her body to fit the Anglish narrow-waisted fashion expected of women and frustrated at how impossible it is to bend at the waist with it on, due to its stiffness and boning. She finds the lighter canvas corset she purchases in the Vastergot shop with Liberty's advice much more comfortable to wear, and the corset she borrows from Marta for her ball dresses less stiff than her school corset but more structured and shaping. However, she's never in pain when wearing any of her corsets, just uncomfortable. [[spoiler:When she's shot at in the attempt on the jarl's life, her school corset keeps her from being severely injured; the bullet glances off the steel and thicker canvas layers, resulting in severely bruised ribs and sharp pain from the initial heat of the bullet hitting the steel boning.]]

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* NotEnoughToBury: [[spoiler:Birning Svenisson, the would-be assassin of Jarl Joervarsson, is reduced to ash and a scorch mark on the grass from Kasaqua's destroying breath.]]
* OfCorsetHurts: [[ZigZaggedTrope Zigzagged]].{{ZigZagged|Trope}}. Anequs' school uniform includes a steel-boned corset in the Anglish style, complete with waist narrowing. She's worn canvas short stays before--generally when going to Catchnet--but most of the time doesn't bother wearing any foundation garments back home on Masquapaug. She is not so much in pain after putting her school corset on the first time as discomforted by the way it squeezes against her body to fit the Anglish narrow-waisted fashion expected of women and frustrated at how impossible it is to bend at the waist with it on, due to its stiffness and boning. She finds the lighter canvas corset she purchases in the Vastergot shop with Liberty's advice much more comfortable to wear, and the corset she borrows from Marta for her ball dresses less stiff than her school corset but more structured and shaping. However, she's never in pain when wearing any of her corsets, just uncomfortable. [[spoiler:When she's shot at in the attempt on the jarl's life, her school corset keeps her from being severely injured; the bullet glances off the steel and thicker canvas layers, resulting in severely bruised ribs and sharp pain from the initial heat of the bullet hitting the steel boning.]]

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* FeatheredDragons: Kasaqua is a feathered dragon of the kind native to North Markesland, in contrast to the dragons of Anglish lands. She's described as having pinfeathers that come in to full feathers.



* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Dragons are beasts more than anything (especially as seen by the Anglish), with no human-like intelligence or distinct language, who immediately bond for life with someone near them at hatching. They have multiple variations by their location of origin and breed, with different strengths and weaknesses. Native North Markesland Nampeshiwe dragons like Kasaqua are [[FeatheredDragons born with small pinfeathers]] that come in as they grow, and different from other breeds from Anglish locations, such as Frau Karina Kuiper's Gerhard, a kessseldrach. Anequs compares Kasaqua and her mother's otter-like litheness to the bear-like bulk and build of Gerhard the first time they interact. Theod's Copper is an akhari, which is a Kindah breed made for flight and speed, and Marta's Magnus is a bjalladreki skilled in flight and racing. Many Anglish find the lineage of their dragons and breeding to be something to note at introduction, the way one would talk of a horse or dog's breeding. Most notably, dragons don't merely breath fire (or any other [[BreathWeapon element]]) alone and instead breathe a kind of unique magic that destabilizes athers and can shape and reshape them with the skilta their dragoneers draw. Ms. Blackgoose even states the trope by name [[https://www.bookweb.org/news/indies-introduce-qa-moniquill-blackgoose-1629444 in an interview]] with the American Booksellers Association.

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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: Dragons are beasts more than anything (especially as seen by the Anglish), with no human-like intelligence or distinct language, who immediately bond for life with someone near them at hatching. They have multiple variations by their location of origin and breed, with different strengths and weaknesses. Native North Markesland Nampeshiwe dragons like Kasaqua are born bald like birds, [[FeatheredDragons born with small pinfeathers]] that come in as they grow, grow and eventually become full feathers. They're different from other breeds from Anglish locations, such as Frau Karina Kuiper's Gerhard, a kessseldrach. Anequs compares Kasaqua and her mother's otter-like litheness to the bear-like bulk and build of Gerhard the first time they interact. Theod's Copper is an akhari, which is a Kindah breed made for flight and speed, and Marta's Magnus is a bjalladreki skilled in flight and racing. Many Anglish find the lineage of their dragons and breeding to be something to note at introduction, the way one would talk of a horse or dog's breeding. Most notably, dragons don't merely breath fire (or any other [[BreathWeapon element]]) alone and instead breathe a kind of unique magic that destabilizes athers and can shape and reshape them with the skilta their dragoneers draw. Ms. Blackgoose even states the trope by name [[https://www.bookweb.org/news/indies-introduce-qa-moniquill-blackgoose-1629444 in an interview]] with the American Booksellers Association.
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* {{Steampunk}}: There's various steampunk elements along with the automated animals stated above. Professor Ulfar, Anequs's natural philosophy and minglinglore professor, was disabled falling off his dragon in a battle and uses a multi-legged automated chair resembling an crab or ant to move around. Marta's father owns and drives an automotor.

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* {{Steampunk}}: There's various steampunk elements along with the automated animals stated above.animals. Professor Ulfar, Anequs's natural philosophy and minglinglore professor, was disabled falling off his dragon in a battle and uses a multi-legged automated chair resembling an crab or ant to move around. Marta's father owns and drives an automotor.
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* {{Transmutation}}: A dragon's breath does not merely breathe fire--it transforms athers (elements) from one to another, and their trainers use skilta to shape it. "Fire" is the unskilled dragon's breath reducing living things to the base elements of kolfni and vetna (carbon and hydrogen), or ash and wind.

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* {{Transmutation}}: A dragon's breath does not merely breathe fire--it fire -- it transforms athers (elements) from one to another, and their trainers use skilta to shape it. "Fire" is the unskilled dragon's breath reducing living things to the base elements of kolfni and vetna (carbon and hydrogen), or ash and wind.
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* {{Transmutation}}: A dragon's breath does not merely breathe fire -- it transforms athers (elements) from one to another, and their trainers use skilta to shape it. "Fire" is the unskilled dragon's breath reducing living things to the base elements of kolfni and vetna (carbon and hydrogen), or ash and wind.
* VikingsInAmerica: The colonizers of "North America" (North Markesland) were of Norse descent. The Norse also conquered much of "Europe" including the British Isles, meaning that England is not a country of its own; the term "Anglish" is used for both them and Norsemen, with Norsemen dominating.

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* VikingsInAmerica: The colonizers of "North America" (North North Markesland) ("North America") were of Norse descent. The Norse Norsemen also conquered much of "Europe" including the British Isles, meaning that England is not a country of its own; the term "Anglish" is used for both them and Norsemen, with Norsemen dominating.

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* {{Transmutation}}: A dragon's breath does not merely breathe fire--it transforms athers (elements) from one to another, and their trainers use skilta to shape it. "Fire" is the unskilled dragon's breath reducing living things to the base elements of kolfni and vetna (carbon and hydrogen), or ash and wind.

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* {{Transmutation}}: A dragon's breath does not merely breathe fire--it fire -- it transforms athers (elements) from one to another, and their trainers use skilta to shape it. "Fire" is the unskilled dragon's breath reducing living things to the base elements of kolfni and vetna (carbon and hydrogen), or ash and wind.
* VikingsInAmerica: The colonizers of "North America" (North Markesland) were of Norse descent. The Norse also conquered much of "Europe" including the British Isles, meaning that England is not a country of its own; the term "Anglish" is used for both them and Norsemen, with Norsemen dominating.
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** Class 0 for several native peoples of North Markesland, once the Anglish came. First there was the great dying, where nearly eight in ten indigenous people died of illness and and the native dragons of the local area were wiped out, rendering the people without the connections to dragons they'd had for generations; dragons still exist in the west outside of Lindermarden. There are still ruins of the past on nearby Slipstone Island near Masquapaug, as well as Beachy Hill and Great Stone Pond. (Any cities that might have had ruins on the mainland have since been dismantled or paved over by Anglish settlements.) Anequs' grandmother speaks of the destruction of the Indigenous people of Naquipaug, the Naregannisit, and the Akashneisit; the latter two, along with the Maswachuisit and Lenni-Lenni, were forced to give up all their lands after losing the wars of 1757 and, while they still live in the now-colonized areas, they no longer own the lands or have much power among the Anglish. The Lenni-Lenni also gave up Narrow Island and Mana-hatta in their treaties.

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** Class 0 for several native peoples of North Markesland, once the Anglish came. First there was the great dying, where nearly eight in ten indigenous people died of illness and and the native dragons of the local area were wiped out, rendering the people without the connections to dragons they'd had for generations; dragons still exist in the west outside of Lindermarden. There are still ruins of the past on nearby Slipstone Island near Masquapaug, as well as Beachy Hill and Great Stone Pond. (Any cities that might have had ruins on the mainland have since been dismantled or paved over by Anglish settlements.) Anequs' grandmother speaks of the destruction of the Indigenous people of Naquipaug, the Naregannisit, and the Akashneisit; the latter two, along with the Maswachuisit and Lenni-Lenni, were forced to give up all their lands after losing the wars of 1757 and, while they still live in the now-colonized areas, they no longer own the lands or have much power among the Anglish. The Lenni-Lenni also gave up Narrow Island and Mana-hatta in their treaties.

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* ApocalypseHow: Class 0 for several native peoples of North Markesland, once the Anglish came. First there was the great dying, where nearly eight in ten indigenous people died of illness and and the native dragons of the local area were wiped out, rendering the people without the connections to dragons they'd had for generations; dragons still exist in the west outside of Lindermarden. There are still ruins of the past on nearby Slipstone Island near Masquapaug, as well as Beachy Hill and Great Stone Pond. (Any cities that might have had ruins on the mainland have since been dismantled or paved over by Anglish settlements.) Anequs' grandmother speaks of the destruction of the Indigenous people of Naquipaug, the Naregannisit, and the Akashneisit; the latter two, along with the Maswachuisit and Lenni-Lenni, were forced to give up all their lands after losing the wars of 1757 and, while they still live in the now-colonized areas, they no longer own the lands or have much power among the Anglish. The Lenni-Lenni also gave up Narrow Island and Mana-hatta in their treaties.
** The Naquipaug Island massacre--what the Anglish call [[WrittenByTheWinners the Nack Island Uprising]]--is the most brutal example in recent history, having occurred only seventeen years ago in 1825. Coal was discovered on the island, leading to the Anglish breaking their treaty with the Naquisit to get to it. They tried to grab land they had no rights to, ignoring how land was passed from mother to daughter. Anglish went so far as to burn farms, poison wells and corn stocks, and use dragons against villages and people to kill them. The Naquisit people first attempted to send a council to talk things out and everyone who went was killed. When the Naquisit then attempted to fight back, they were close to wiped out. Half of the population was killed or executed with several survivors of South Village having hid inside an empty corn silo storage to not be found, mostly children and elders. Those who were spared or survived were scattered--either having moved to the nearby Masquapaug, living isolated across various cities and towns of the mainland, or still living on Naquipaug but now only where they are allowed to be while the Anglish own much more of the island and control the port. Any family that leaves their land loses all rights to it under the new 1825 treaty, which is why Anequs' Aunt Shanuckee still lives there. The Naquipaug massacre is in active memory of many people. Anequs' father could have been among the massacred at the time but he had just left for sea, and his brother Motuckquas and father were both among the murdered. Women, even pregnant, were not spared either--Theod's mother Nepinnae was hanged [[OrphansOrdeal the day after his birth]], and his father Menukkis was executed. In what used to be South Village, no one between the ages of fourteen and fifty at the time survived.

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Class 0 for several native peoples of North Markesland, once the Anglish came. First there was the great dying, where nearly eight in ten indigenous people died of illness and and the native dragons of the local area were wiped out, rendering the people without the connections to dragons they'd had for generations; dragons still exist in the west outside of Lindermarden. There are still ruins of the past on nearby Slipstone Island near Masquapaug, as well as Beachy Hill and Great Stone Pond. (Any cities that might have had ruins on the mainland have since been dismantled or paved over by Anglish settlements.) Anequs' grandmother speaks of the destruction of the Indigenous people of Naquipaug, the Naregannisit, and the Akashneisit; the latter two, along with the Maswachuisit and Lenni-Lenni, were forced to give up all their lands after losing the wars of 1757 and, while they still live in the now-colonized areas, they no longer own the lands or have much power among the Anglish. The Lenni-Lenni also gave up Narrow Island and Mana-hatta in their treaties.
** The Naquipaug Island massacre--what the Anglish call [[WrittenByTheWinners the Nack Island Uprising]]--is the most brutal example of Native massacres in recent history, having occurred only seventeen years ago in 1825. Coal was discovered on the island, leading to the Anglish breaking their treaty with the Naquisit to get to it. They tried to grab land they had no rights to, ignoring how land was passed from mother to daughter. Anglish went so far as to burn farms, poison wells and corn stocks, and use dragons against villages and people to kill them. The Naquisit people first attempted to send a council to talk things out and everyone who went was killed. When the Naquisit then attempted to fight back, they were close to wiped out. Half of the population was killed or executed with several survivors of South Village having hid inside an empty corn silo storage to not be found, mostly children and elders. Those who were spared or survived were scattered--either having moved to the nearby Masquapaug, living isolated across various cities and towns of the mainland, or still living on Naquipaug but now only where they are allowed to be while the Anglish own much more of the island and control the port. Any family that leaves their land loses all rights to it under the new 1825 treaty, which is why Anequs' Aunt Shanuckee still lives there. The Naquipaug massacre is in active memory of many people. Anequs' father could have been among the massacred at the time but he had just left for sea, and his brother Motuckquas and father were both among the murdered. Women, even pregnant, were not spared either--Theod's mother Nepinnae was hanged [[OrphansOrdeal the day after his birth]], and his father Menukkis was executed. In what used to be South Village, no one between the ages of fourteen and fifty at the time survived.
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Otrygg Otryggsson, a former jarl's guard who in the aftermath of the attempt on the jarl's life confesses to sending the threatening letter Anequs and Theod received during the winter break. He is brought before a moot and declared unfit to be a dragoneer with the consequence being that his dragon is sentenced to be put down. He [[HangingAround hangs himself]] in prison the day before her execution, leaving behind a plea to spare her and claiming she won't harm anyone without him around. His dragon is still put to death.]]

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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Otrygg Otryggsson, a former jarl's guard who in the aftermath of the attempt on the jarl's life confesses to sending the threatening letter Anequs and Theod received during the winter break. He is brought before a moot and declared unfit to be a dragoneer with the consequence being that his dragon is sentenced to be put down. He [[HangingAround hangs himself]] in prison the day before her execution, leaving behind a plea to spare her and claiming she won't harm anyone without him around. [[AllForNothing His dragon is still put to death.]]]]]]
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* AlternateHistory: The book is set in an alternate 1840s where, rather than the "English" having been the ones to colonize "North America" (North Markesland) it was the Norse--Anglish. The Norse also conquered much of "Europe" incluiding the British Isles. The Roman empire never existed, nor Greece, so the ancient seat of art and philosophy was Tyskland ("Germany"). This reflects across the culture in the names used everywhere and for everything; from cities and places (North and South Markesland, New Linvik) to terms used for language in studies ("erelore" for history), and elements on the periodic table (athers) and the written diagrams to shape them (skilta). This also makes the dominant faith of the Anglish based on Myth/NorseMythology, with festivals such as Jule and Valkyrjafax.

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* AlternateHistory: The book is set in an alternate 1840s where, rather than the "English" having been the ones to colonize "North America" (North Markesland) it was the Norse--Anglish. Norse--they and the people from Anglesland are both collectively referred to as the Anglish. The Norse also conquered much of "Europe" incluiding including the British Isles.Isles, France, and Germany. The Roman empire never existed, nor Greece, so the ancient seat of art and philosophy was Tyskland ("Germany"). This reflects across the culture in the names used everywhere and for everything; from cities and places (North and South Markesland, New Linvik) to terms used for language in studies ("erelore" for history), and elements on the periodic table (athers) and the written diagrams to shape them (skilta). This also makes the dominant faith of the Anglish based on Myth/NorseMythology, with festivals such as Jule and Valkyrjafax.



* FantasyCounterpartMap: The front of the book has a map where--while based on the earth's continents in shape--the lands have different borders and names as befitting the history. For example, "Japan" is Zhippon, "France" is Frankland (a lot of countries that were colonized in Europe are simply called -land at the end), and "North and South America" are instead North and South Markesland. Several countries, such as Greece or Portugal, do not exist, and most of Aprika south of the Sahara is undivided. Furthermore a good portion of North Markesland west of where the Rockies are is obscured in fog, indicating it has not been explored and mapped (or controlled) by the Anglish; it is known as the western frontier.

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* FantasyCounterpartMap: The front of the book has a map where--while based on the earth's continents in shape--the lands have different borders and names as befitting the history. For example, "Japan" is Zhippon, "France" is Frankland (a lot of countries that were colonized by the Norse in Europe are simply called -land at the end), and "North and South America" are instead North and South Markesland. Several countries, such as Greece or Portugal, do not exist, and most of Aprika south of the Sahara is undivided. Furthermore a good portion of North Markesland west of where the Rockies are Appalachians is obscured in fog, indicating it has not been explored and mapped (or controlled) by the Anglish; it is known as the western frontier.
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* ApocalypseHow: Class 0 for several native peoples of North Markesland, once the Anglish came. First there was the great dying, where nearly eight in ten indigenous people died of illness and and the native dragons of the local area were wiped out, rendering the people without the connections to dragons they'd had for generations; dragons still exist in the west outside of Lindermarden. Anequs' grandmother speaks of the destruction of the Indigenous people of Naquipaug, the Naregannisit, and the Akashneisit; the latter two, along with the Maswachuisit, were forced to give up all their lands after losing the wars of 1757 and, while they still live in the now-colonized areas, they no longer own the lands or have much power. The Lenni-Lenni also gave up Narrow Island and Mana-hatta in their treaties.

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* ApocalypseHow: Class 0 for several native peoples of North Markesland, once the Anglish came. First there was the great dying, where nearly eight in ten indigenous people died of illness and and the native dragons of the local area were wiped out, rendering the people without the connections to dragons they'd had for generations; dragons still exist in the west outside of Lindermarden. There are still ruins of the past on nearby Slipstone Island near Masquapaug, as well as Beachy Hill and Great Stone Pond. (Any cities that might have had ruins on the mainland have since been dismantled or paved over by Anglish settlements.) Anequs' grandmother speaks of the destruction of the Indigenous people of Naquipaug, the Naregannisit, and the Akashneisit; the latter two, along with the Maswachuisit, Maswachuisit and Lenni-Lenni, were forced to give up all their lands after losing the wars of 1757 and, while they still live in the now-colonized areas, they no longer own the lands or have much power.power among the Anglish. The Lenni-Lenni also gave up Narrow Island and Mana-hatta in their treaties.



* NobleBigot: The Anglish in general towards nackies and others. The book ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'', which was written by a Nordic man, has solidified the perception of nackies as primitive, unambitious, backwards, and nowhere near as "civilized" as the Anglish. Frau Jansen is a direct example; [[EstablishingCharacterMoment her first meeting with Anequs]] has her call Anequs a dear creature and treating her like a dog having done a trick when she identifies Sander's dragon as a velikolepni. Then when Anequs says (after Frau Jansen thinks she lived in a little bark house her whole life) that they have a telegraph office on Masquapaug, Frau Jansen laughs at the idea of savages "dabbling" about with such a thing--but that it's clearly the natural outcome of exposure to the Anglish "improving" the nackies that has them have such a thing.

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* NobleBigot: The Anglish in general towards nackies and others. The book ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'', which was written by a Nordic man, the Anglish Emanuel Nordlund, has solidified the perception of nackies as primitive, unambitious, backwards, and nowhere near as "civilized" as the Anglish. Frau Jansen is a direct example; [[EstablishingCharacterMoment her first meeting with Anequs]] has her call Anequs a dear creature and treating her like a dog having done a trick when she identifies Sander's dragon as a velikolepni. Then when Anequs says (after Frau Jansen thinks she lived in a little bark house her whole life) that they have a telegraph office on Masquapaug, Frau Jansen laughs at the idea of savages "dabbling" about with such a thing--but that it's clearly the natural outcome of exposure to the Anglish "improving" the nackies that has them have such a thing.
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* WhiteMansBurden: Anequs and Theod have both been given scholarships to Kuiper's under the idea by Frau Kuiper (and others) that they will accept their new "elevation" in life as dragoneers and never return to the primitive ways of the nackies, proving that the indigenous people can be "civilized." Frau Kuiper even tells Anequs that she expected her to be happy to leave behind her former life and not go home, and associate with the kind of social circles Marta frequents, becoming a [[YouAreACreditToYourRace example to her race]]. Anequs finds this idea insulting; her people ''are'' civilized in their own way even if it's not Anglish. She is only there to learn what she needs to be licensed and return back home with Kasaqua--with the second goal of bringing Theod back home with her too, once they've gotten to know each other.
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** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test.

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** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government.government, during the council he calls. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test.

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** Anequs and Theod come to Masquapaug to celebrate Nikkomo together; the first time Theod's ever been anywhere near his native homelands [[spoiler:and the first time his extended family and him connect]]. They not only attend the celebration there, but are invited via telegram to a midwinter celebration with mainland nackies as guests of honor and attend. The two receive another letter at the post office the next day. [[spoiler:It's an anonymous threatening letter against the two of them and all their people for the "crime" of being nackie dragoneers and stating that once a proper jarl is in rule again, they'll be killed as they should be; it also demands they both give up their dragons and return to the islands. It's frightening enough Anequs [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness wants to immediately return to the academy]] for protection rather than stay with her family for the rest of the break.]]

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** Anequs and Theod come to Masquapaug to celebrate Nikkomo together; it's the first time Theod's ever been anywhere near his native homelands [[spoiler:and the first time his extended family and him connect]]. They not only attend the celebration there, but are invited via telegram to a midwinter celebration with mainland nackies as guests of honor and attend. The two receive another letter at the post office the next day. [[spoiler:It's an anonymous threatening letter against the two of them and all their people for the "crime" of being nackie dragoneers and stating that once a proper jarl is in rule again, they'll be killed as they should be; it also demands they both give up their dragons and return to the islands. It's frightening enough Anequs [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness wants to immediately return to the academy]] for protection rather than stay with her family for the rest of the break.]]


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** Anequs manages, even while speaking out of turn, to impress Jarl Joervarsson, the head of the local government. He states multiple changes that will occur regarding how nackie and smallfolk citizens have been treated, calling his thanes out on their overrule and neglect around their areas. He then invites Frau Kuiper, Captain Einarsson, Theod, and Anequs to have lunch in his gardens; he has a one-on-one conversation with Anequs about her dragon and her opinion on her people intelligently (though she deflects carefully) before seeing a torgar, Birning Svenisson, and saying he should go speak to him. [[spoiler:Birning is there to assassinate him, and shoots the jarl, Anequs and Kasaqua before Kasaqua destroys him with dragonfire.]] Anequs and Theod are away from school for the entire rest of the term and then have to come back and do an end of term test.
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Anequs ([[PronouncingMyNameForYou pronounced]] ''ahn-eh-KOOS'', not ''anna-kiss'') has lived her fifteen years on Masquapaug Island, a place off the Eastern coast of the continental mainland of North Markesland, and among her people and traditions. She--and the rest of the Indigenous people of the land--have has not seen Indigenous dragons since the Anglish colonized the lands they call North Markesland, causing the great dying two hundred years ago. Her people remember and still tell tales of dragons from before and of those who bonded with them. When Anequs encounters a [[LastOfHisKind Native dragon]] that flies away, and then finds its dragon's egg close to her home island, she [[BondCreatures bonds with it at hatching]] and the people of Masquapaug revere her as a ''Nampeshiweisit''-- a person bonded to a dragon--and the first in several generations.

The colonizing Anglish, however, have different and very strict opinions about how dragons should be trained, where--and often [[DragonTamer who those dragoneers]] ''should'' be, and Anequs is none of it. Despite it, Anequs is offered the opportunity--or more accurately, required--to leave her native home, go among the Anglish, and train Kasaqua through a "proper" [[BoardingSchool Anglish academy]] for dragon training to learn the ways they expect of dragons--or risk Kasaqua being put down if she does not do so. Anequs, however, is smart, determined, and resolved to do exactly as the Anglish demand to learn how to train Kasaqua--but will not become the kind of meek, cultured [[ProperLady Anglish miss]] expected of her in the process.

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Anequs ([[PronouncingMyNameForYou pronounced]] ''ahn-eh-KOOS'', not ''anna-kiss'') has lived her fifteen years on Masquapaug Island, a Island (a place off the Eastern coast of the continental mainland of Lindemarden, part of North Markesland, Markesland) and among her people and traditions. She--and the rest of the Indigenous people of the land--have has not seen Indigenous dragons in their area since the Anglish colonized the lands they call North Markesland, causing and caused the great dying two hundred years ago. Her people remember and still tell tales of dragons from before and of those who bonded with them. When Anequs encounters a [[LastOfHisKind Native dragon]] that flies away, away and then finds its dragon's egg close to her home island, she [[BondCreatures bonds with it at hatching]] and the people of Masquapaug revere her as a ''Nampeshiweisit''-- a person bonded to a dragon--and the first in several generations.

The colonizing Anglish, however, have different and very strict opinions about how dragons should be trained, where--and often [[DragonTamer who those dragoneers]] ''should'' be, and Anequs is none of it. Despite it, her differences, Anequs is offered the opportunity--or more accurately, required--to leave her native home, go among the Anglish, and train Kasaqua through a "proper" [[BoardingSchool Anglish academy]] for dragon training to learn the ways they expect of dragons--or risk Kasaqua being put down if she does not do so. Anequs, however, is smart, determined, and resolved to do exactly as the Anglish demand to learn how to train Kasaqua--but will not become the kind of meek, cultured [[ProperLady Anglish miss]] expected of her in the process.
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* NobleBigot: The Anglish in general towards nackies and others. The book ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'', which was written by a Nordic man, has solidified the perception of nackies as primitive, unambitious, backwards, and nowhere near as "civilized" as the Anglish. Frau Jansen is a direct example; her first meeting with Anequs has her call Anequs a [[EstablishingCharacterMoment dear creature]] and treating her like she did a trick when she identifies Sander's dragon as a velikolepni. Then when Anequs says (after Frau Jansen thinks she lived in a little bark house her whole life) that they have a telegraph office on Masquapaug, she laughs at the idea of savages "dabbling" about with such a thing but that it's the natural outcome of exposure to the Anglish that is "improving" the nackies.

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* NobleBigot: The Anglish in general towards nackies and others. The book ''The Savage Peoples of New Linvik'', which was written by a Nordic man, has solidified the perception of nackies as primitive, unambitious, backwards, and nowhere near as "civilized" as the Anglish. Frau Jansen is a direct example; her first meeting with Anequs has her call Anequs a [[EstablishingCharacterMoment her first meeting with Anequs]] has her call Anequs a dear creature]] creature and treating her like she did a dog having done a trick when she identifies Sander's dragon as a velikolepni. Then when Anequs says (after Frau Jansen thinks she lived in a little bark house her whole life) that they have a telegraph office on Masquapaug, she Frau Jansen laughs at the idea of savages "dabbling" about with such a thing but thing--but that it's clearly the natural outcome of exposure to the Anglish that is "improving" the nackies.nackies that has them have such a thing.

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