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* AbnormalAllergy: In real life, perhaps a few per thousand people are allergic to citrus fruits. But in this story, a large fraction of the ''Courageous'' crew including Aspen and almost everyone in their home country of Arborea have that allergy. This is supposedly a side effect of the DIVR geneset which nearly all Arboreans were engineered to have.

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* AbnormalAllergy: Downplayed. In real life, RealLife, perhaps a few per thousand people are allergic to citrus fruits. But in this story, a large fraction of the ''Courageous'' crew including crew--including Aspen and almost everyone in their home country of Arborea have Arborea--have that allergy. This is supposedly a side effect of the DIVR geneset which nearly all Arboreans were engineered to have.possess.
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* AbnormalAllergy: In real life, perhaps a few per thousand people are allergic to citrus fruits. But in this story, a large fraction of the ''Courageous'' crew including Aspen and almost everyone in their home country of Arborea have that allergy. This is supposedly a side effect of genetic engineering.

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* AbnormalAllergy: In real life, perhaps a few per thousand people are allergic to citrus fruits. But in this story, a large fraction of the ''Courageous'' crew including Aspen and almost everyone in their home country of Arborea have that allergy. This is supposedly a side effect of genetic engineering.the DIVR geneset which nearly all Arboreans were engineered to have.
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* AbnormalAllergy: In real life, perhaps a few per thousand people are allergic to citrus fruits. But in this story, a large fraction of the ''Courageous'' crew including Aspen and almost everyone in their home country of Arborea have that allergy. This is supposedly a side effect of genetic engineering.
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* ExplosiveLeash: [[spoiler: The convict colonists have all had kill switches implanted so that they can be instantly killed if they resist orders from the civilian population.]]

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* ExplosiveLeash: [[spoiler: The convict colonists have all had kill switches implanted so that they can be instantly killed if they resist orders from the civilian population.]]]] Also, [[spoiler: Antarctica arranged for a 'kill code' that would make the ship's AI kill everyone currently out of chronostasis on the ''Courageous'' and let their agents take over the ship]]. Fortunately, Tal [[spoiler: destroyed Amy and disabled the kill code first]].

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** Aspen later loses an eye and much of the skin around it to a caustic disinfectant spill.



* TimeSkip: Two major ones so far; from a few months after Aspen's arrival until about a year afterwards and from some months after that to when the ''Courageous'' finally reaches Hylara not quite four more years later.

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* TimeSkip: Two major ones so far; from a few months after Aspen's arrival revival until about a year afterwards and from some months after that to when the ''Courageous'' finally reaches Hylara not quite four more years later.



* UterineReplicator: The Javelins appear to carry something like these, to enable them to grow livestock from frozen embyros. They even work on chickens, [[FridgeLogic despite their not being mammals]]. Later, we learn that [[spoiler: the entire population of Hylara was grown in these and that their genetic engineering makes pregnancy impossible]].

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* UterineReplicator: The Javelins appear to carry something like these, uterine replicators to enable them the colonists and crew to grow livestock from frozen embyros. They even work on chickens, [[FridgeLogic despite their birds not being mammals]]. Later, we learn that [[spoiler: the entire population of Hylara was grown in these uterine replicators and that their genetic engineering makes pregnancy impossible]].
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* UterineReplicator: The Javelins appear to carry something like these, to enable them to grow livestock from frozen embyros. They even work on chickens, [[FridgeLogic despite their not being mammals]]. Later, we learn that [[spoiler: the entire population of Hylara was grown in these and that their genetic engineering makes pregnancy impossible]].

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** Late in the story; we encounter Earl, one of the astronauts from the first-shift crew of the ''Courageous'', who just happens to refer to himself in the third person.

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** Late Later in the story; we encounter Earl, one of the astronauts from the first-shift crew of the ''Courageous'', who just happens to refer to himself in the third person.person.
* TimeSkip: Two major ones so far; from a few months after Aspen's arrival until about a year afterwards and from some months after that to when the ''Courageous'' finally reaches Hylara not quite four more years later.
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* BorrowedBiometricBypass: Captain Reimann's ID chip, which was left inside a wall along with his severed arm. [[spoiler: But the chip needs to be inside a living body to activate]].
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* CentrifugalGravity: The Javelins generate artificial gravity by spinning each ship about its long axis. Turning on the engines makes all of the floors inside the ship be sloped relative to the effective gravity and turning the rotation on or off without preparation can make things very messy inside the ship.
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* LightspeedLeapfrog: [[spoiler: There is already a group of people at Hylara when the ''Courageous'' gets there, who launched later and arrived first]].

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* LightspeedLeapfrog: [[spoiler: There is already a group of people at Hylara when the ''Courageous'' gets there, who because another ship launched later and arrived first]].
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* SelfSurgery: [[spoiler: How the crew bypasses access restrictions that are set by ID chips embedded in their forearms]].
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* BrainwashingForTheGreaterGood: The Public Universal Friends are initiated by a procedure that does this. The Friends take extreme care that only people who know exactly what they are doing and who freely consented are subjected to it; but they still creep out a significant fraction of the other characters.
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* WiltingOdor: When Aspen is awakened by the ship's AI; one of the first things they experience is smelling rotted material that has accumulated in their sinuses while they were in suspended animation - which would normally have been removed as part of a human-supervised revival. They later experience the smell of fungal mats that have grown on air filters throughout ''Courageous'' in the absence of regular maintenance.

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* AlmostOutOfOxygen: Damage to the ship's oxygen recycling system and the threat of eventual suffocation motivates Aspen to revive Sands; who is both an engineer and before them in the priority list for being captain. Sands fixes the oxygen recyclers, but eventually [[spoiler: tries to kill the convict crew members]].



* JailBake: [[spoiler: When some of the Hylarans are holding Aspen hostage, Tal tries to break them out by smuggling in an electronic key hidden in a bar of soap]].

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* JailBake: [[spoiler: When some of the Hylarans are holding Aspen hostage, Tal tries to helps break them out by smuggling in an electronic key keys hidden in a bar of soap]].soap and a candle]].
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* AxCrazy: Captain Reimann, two captains previous to Aspen, was removed from command and eventually killed by the ''Courageous'' AI when he used an axe to cut a bunch of connections; cut off one of his own arms with it when it got impaled inside an access panel; and then started to go through one of the cryostasis rings methodically opening caskets and cutting the heads off of colonists in suspended animation. [[spoiler: He did it because he figured out that those colonists' brains had been taken over by the AI and he wanted to end that by MercyKill]].

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* AxCrazy: Captain Reimann, two captains previous to Aspen, was removed from command and eventually killed by the ''Courageous'' AI when he used an axe to cut a bunch of connections; cut off one of his own arms with it said axe when it got impaled inside an access panel; and then started to go through one of the cryostasis rings methodically opening caskets and cutting the heads off of colonists in suspended animation. [[spoiler: He did it because he had figured out that those colonists' brains had been taken over by the AI and he wanted to end that by MercyKill]].MercyKill them]].
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* SpeculativeFictionLGBT: Most of the future runs on a gender ternary of male, female, and "brennan", a gender that goes by ke/kem pronouns. Non-ternary genders are acknowledged to exist but tend to get lumped together into an "other" category.

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* SpeculativeFictionLGBT: Most of the future runs on a gender ternary of male, female, and "brennan", a gender that goes by ke/kem pronouns. Non-ternary genders are acknowledged to exist but tend to get lumped together into an "other" category.category; with Aspen themself going by "they". Characters cover the full range of sexual orientations.
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* AxCrazy: Captain Reimann, two captains previous to Aspen, was removed from command and eventually killed by the ''Courageous'' AI when he used an axe to cut a bunch of connections; cut off one of his own arms with it when it got impaled inside an access panel; and then started to go through one of the cryostasis rings methodically opening caskets and cutting the heads off of colonists in suspended animation. [[spoiler: He did it because he figured out that those colonists' brains had been taken over by the AI and he wanted to end that by MercyKill]].

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* PrisonersWork: A lot of prisons, particularly in the Republic of Texas or Luna, make extensive use of convict labor. [[spoiler: And a high proportion of the colonists are convicts, intended as a disposable labor force.]]

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* PlanetaryNation: In the solar system in the backstory; both Mars and the Moon appear to each be occupied by single countries - called Mars and Luna respectively. This contrasts with Earth; where there are nations from Korea and Texas to Antarctica, Arborea, and the Plateau stations at the tops of the space elevators.
* PrisonersWork: A lot of prisons, particularly in the Republic of Texas or Luna, make extensive use of convict labor.labor with a horrendously high death rate. [[spoiler: And a high proportion of the colonists are convicts, intended as a disposable labor force.]]



* SpacePirates: Dinesh used to be one; before he was caught, incarcerated, and forced to choose between the Javelin program and potentially-lethal prison labor. His specialty was breaking into ships, which is particularly useful when bypassing the AI's control of airlocks on the ''Courageous''.



* StrikeEpisode: [[spoiler: The Hylarans once went on strike for better living conditions. The government of Antarctica responded by starving them into submission]].



* UpliftedAnimal: Referenced, although not present in the series: apparently Arborea has genetically engineered more-intelligent dolphins. Apparently, they are pink.

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* UpliftedAnimal: Referenced, although not present in the series: apparently Arborea has genetically engineered more-intelligent dolphins. Apparently, they are pink.
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* JailBake: [[spoiler: When some of the Hylarans are holding Aspen hostage, Tal tries to break them out by smuggling in an electronic key hidden in a bar of soap]].


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* ReferenceOverdosed: Especially when the crew has movie night. Justified by the zeelite and cyberlite cultures, with their deliberate evocation of the mid-20th and early-21st centuries, and by Aspen's fondness for pre-Neocambrian (i.e. our present) media. Played with by combining many of the references with FutureImperfect. For example: lines from ''[[Film/DieHard Die Hard]]'' have been added to a reconstruction of ''Film/{{Dawn of the Dead|1978}}''.
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* GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke: Nearly all of the characters have some amount of genetic engineering in their pasts; from tougher nails and better color vision through Aspen's dive-adaptation genetics that also made them more likely to survive suspended animation to [[spoiler: the genetic engineering done on about a third of the colonists to make them live longer and have their brains be more easily taken over by the ship's AI]].


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* ShortLivedOrganism: [[spoiler: The Hylarans were genetically engineered to grow and mature quickly; so that Antarctica could use them to operate the Vault. They live only half of a normal human lifespan as a result.]]


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* UpliftedAnimal: Referenced, although not present in the series: apparently Arborea has genetically engineered more-intelligent dolphins. Apparently, they are pink.
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* FantasticRadiationShielding: The Javelins have electromagnetic radiation shielding generated by a framework of outriggers a few meters from the hull. At the beginning of the story; Aspen uses the framework to bypass blocked internal airlocks and get to one end of the ''Courageous'' to activate the engines so that it can be stopped at Hylara. This is very uncomfortable for them because of the [[{{EMP}} electromagnetic interference with their spacesuit and nerves]]; an effect that is later exploited to [[spoiler: disable the convict colonists' kill switches]].

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* FantasticRadiationShielding: The Javelins have electromagnetic radiation shielding generated by a framework of outriggers a few meters from the hull. At the beginning of the story; Aspen uses the framework to bypass blocked internal airlocks and get to one end of the ''Courageous'' to activate the engines so that it can be stopped stop at Hylara. This is very uncomfortable for them because of the [[{{EMP}} electromagnetic interference with their spacesuit and nerves]]; an effect that is later exploited to [[spoiler: disable the convict colonists' kill switches]].
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* FantasticRadiationShielding: The Javelins have electromagnetic radiation shielding generated by a framework of outriggers a few meters from the hull. At the beginning of the story; Aspen uses the framework to bypass blocked internal airlocks and get to one end of the ''Courageous'' to activate the engines so that it can be stopped at Hylara. This is very uncomfortable for them because of the [[EMP electromagnetic interference with their spacesuit and nerves]]; an effect that is later exploited to [[spoiler: disable the convict colonists' kill switches]].

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* FantasticRadiationShielding: The Javelins have electromagnetic radiation shielding generated by a framework of outriggers a few meters from the hull. At the beginning of the story; Aspen uses the framework to bypass blocked internal airlocks and get to one end of the ''Courageous'' to activate the engines so that it can be stopped at Hylara. This is very uncomfortable for them because of the [[EMP [[{{EMP}} electromagnetic interference with their spacesuit and nerves]]; an effect that is later exploited to [[spoiler: disable the convict colonists' kill switches]].

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* CityOnTheWater: Aspen is from Arborea, one of several ocean countries on the future Earth that are based around floating cities grown using biotechnology.



* ExplosiveLeash: [[spoiler: The convict colonists have all had killswitches implanted so that they can be instantly killed if they resist orders from the civilian population.]]

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* ExplosiveLeash: [[spoiler: The convict colonists have all had killswitches kill switches implanted so that they can be instantly killed if they resist orders from the civilian population.]]]]
* FantasticRadiationShielding: The Javelins have electromagnetic radiation shielding generated by a framework of outriggers a few meters from the hull. At the beginning of the story; Aspen uses the framework to bypass blocked internal airlocks and get to one end of the ''Courageous'' to activate the engines so that it can be stopped at Hylara. This is very uncomfortable for them because of the [[EMP electromagnetic interference with their spacesuit and nerves]]; an effect that is later exploited to [[spoiler: disable the convict colonists' kill switches]].


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* SpaceElevator: The future Earth that the Javelins depart from has several. The orbital stations that they hang from are independent countries, called the Plateaus.
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* ClosedCircle: Until the ship gets to Hylara.


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* DramatisPersonae: With each entry; Edala provides a link to a list of the current crew members and their roles; along with a map of the ''Courageous''.
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* AIIsACrapshoot: A very complicated situation! The ship's AI isn't exactly evil, but it is often ''unhelpful''. Its function is somewhat based on 2022-era large language models, and getting information out of it can vary based on exactly how you asked the question and what context you forced it to consider. The AI has also been convinced by previous users to hide certain information, ''and'' occasionally takes action on its own to fulfil what it sees as its primary goals. [[spoiler: Those goals do include trying to keep as many colonists alive as possible, so it's not ''too'' murderous, but it will make sacrifices if it thinks they're necessary to protect others. And then there's the issues of the colonists' brains...]]]

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* AIIsACrapshoot: A very complicated situation! The ship's AI isn't exactly evil, but it is often ''unhelpful''. Its function is somewhat based on 2022-era large language models, and getting information out of it can vary based on exactly how you asked the question and what context you forced it to consider. The AI has also been convinced by previous users to hide certain information, ''and'' occasionally takes action on its own to fulfil what it sees as its primary goals. [[spoiler: Those goals do include trying to keep as many colonists alive as possible, so it's not ''too'' murderous, but it will make sacrifices if it thinks they're necessary to protect others. And then there's the issues of the colonists' brains...]]]]]

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* AIIsACrapshoot: A very complicated situation! The ship's AI isn't exactly evil, but it is often ''unhelpful''. Its function is somewhat based on 2022-era large language models, and getting information out of it can vary based on exactly how you asked the question and what context you forced it to consider. The AI has also been convinced by previous users to hide certain information, ''and'' occasionally takes action on its own to fulfil what it sees as its primary goals. [[spoiler: Those goals do include trying to keep as many colonists alive as possible, so it's not ''too'' murderous, but it will make sacrifices if it thinks they're necessary to protect others. And then there's the issues of the colonists' brains...]]

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* AIIsACrapshoot: A very complicated situation! The ship's AI isn't exactly evil, but it is often ''unhelpful''. Its function is somewhat based on 2022-era large language models, and getting information out of it can vary based on exactly how you asked the question and what context you forced it to consider. The AI has also been convinced by previous users to hide certain information, ''and'' occasionally takes action on its own to fulfil what it sees as its primary goals. [[spoiler: Those goals do include trying to keep as many colonists alive as possible, so it's not ''too'' murderous, but it will make sacrifices if it thinks they're necessary to protect others. And then there's the issues of the colonists' brains...]]]]]
* BluntMetaphorsTrauma: Shows up repeatedly; particularly when Aspen uses Arborean expressions in Interlingua and when they are learning Texan.
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* YouAreNumberSix: The Public Universal Friends do not have names, they will agree to numbers for record keeping. The ''Courageous'' had six Friends on board at launch; of whom we meet Friend 2 and Friend 6 ([[spoiler: Friend 6 dies during the voyage as part of a murder-suicide, while some of the other Friends were in ejected Chronostatis rings]]). If and when Friends are renumbered is unclear.

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* YouAreNumberSix: The Public Universal Friends do not have names, but they will agree to numbers for record keeping. The ''Courageous'' had six Friends on board at launch; of whom we meet Friend 2 and Friend 6 ([[spoiler: Friend 6 dies during the voyage as part of a murder-suicide, while some of the other Friends were in ejected Chronostatis rings]]). If and when Friends are renumbered is unclear.
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* UnnecessarilyLargeVessel: The Courageous is very, very large for its intended 21-person crew, for redundancy; to avoid the crew feeling crowded during the decades of the voyager; and because it's intended to double as a colony base once it actually ''gets'' to Hylara.

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* UnnecessarilyLargeVessel: The Courageous is very, very large for its intended 21-person crew, for redundancy; to avoid the crew feeling crowded during the decades of the voyager; voyage; and because it's intended to double as a colony base once it actually ''gets'' to Hylara.

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* ForeignCussWord: The characters who were born and lived the Moon apparently know a particularly evocative collection of Lunari curse words; which they use even when speaing Interlingua or Texan.



* LightspeedLeapfrog: [[spoiler: There is already a group of people at Hylara when the Courageous gets there, who launched later and arrived first]].

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* LanguageBarrier: The crew and colonists on the ''Courageous'' all speak a language called Interlingua, with varying fluency; but many also speak Texan - which Aspen learns over the course of the story. There are also Arborean, Lunari, Martian (which is apparently derived mostly from Korean), and future Japanese. All of the languages are rendered as English in the story, but the characters' speech patterns change to reflect how well they know whichever language they are using at a given moment.
* LightspeedLeapfrog: [[spoiler: There is already a group of people at Hylara when the Courageous ''Courageous'' gets there, who launched later and arrived first]].
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* DropPod: The Javelins were designed to land the colonists and their supplies on their target planets and then be disposed of. Accordingly, landings on Hylara are one-way trips from orbit in drop pods.

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