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[[caption-width-right:350:The map of the Eloa continent. The two shaded countries are Atreya and Sair, which are important enough to get [[https://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/p/maps.html dedicated maps]].]]
[[caption-width-right:350:The map of the Eloa continent. The two shaded countries are Atreya and Sair, which are important enough to get [[https://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/p/maps.html dedicated maps]].]]
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-->'''Garovel:''' Don't you remember? When you talk to me in your head, I'll hear you no matter where I am. So don't frown like that. You understand? [[YouAreNotAlone You're never alone, Hector]]. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Not anymore.]]
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-->'''Garovel:''' Don't you remember? When you talk to me in your head, I'll hear you no matter where I am. So don't frown like that. You understand? [[YouAreNotAlone You're never alone, Hector]]. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming Not anymore.]]
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* DeadlyForceField:
** Roman kills Hanjir's reaper by surrounding him with an inward-facing spherical shockwave.
** [[spoiler:Ivan]]'s favorite killing technique is to catch the opponent in a cage of his odd weak-force fields, and then collapse the cage and disintegrate them.
** Roman kills Hanjir's reaper by surrounding him with an inward-facing spherical shockwave.
** [[spoiler:Ivan]]'s favorite killing technique is to catch the opponent in a cage of his odd weak-force fields, and then collapse the cage and disintegrate them.
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->''"A dark serial novel about [[TheUndead blood]], [[HeroProtagonist valor]], [[MagicAIsMagicA superpowers]], and... [[ShrinkingViolet crippling social anxiety]]?"''
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->''"A dark serial novel about [[TheUndead blood]], [[HeroProtagonist valor]], [[MagicAIsMagicA superpowers]], blood, valor, superpowers, and... [[ShrinkingViolet crippling social anxiety]]?"''
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* DyingDealUpgrade: ''Every'' servant started this way; they died, and then a Grim Reaper offered them [[TheAgeless eternal]] [[FromASingleCell life]] and [[MagicAndPowers superpowers]] in exchange for becoming the reaper's servant. Most of them are non-villainous examples, unless the reaper is a member of [[ReligionOfEvil Abolish]].
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-->'''Colt:''' AndSomeOtherStuff.
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-->'''Colt:''' AndSomeOtherStuff.And some other stuff.
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* TheGodsMustBeLazy: [[spoiler: Malast takes this trope UpTo11. He's referred to as The Idle God (though he prefers to be called the God of Boredom).]]
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* ScarfOfAsskicking: Hector aquires one in Chapter 164. [[spoiler: It allows him to sense the air around himself, granting him HyperAwareness.]]
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* TheGoodKingdom: Atreya is a monarchy, currently ruled by Queen Helen. It's a rather small country and hasn't been all that important up to this point. It stays out of the waging wars and doesn't allow practices like slavery that are still common in other parts of the world. However, Abolish try to draw Atreya into the war by forcing (or replacing) the King and Queen. At the end of the second Oath, Helen is on the run and Abolish try to torture her husband into obedience. [[spoiler: With the seventh Oath, Abolish has been driven out of Atreya for the time being, Helen has returned into power and the war with the neighboring country has been averted.]]
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* TheKingdom: Atreya is a monarchy, currently ruled by Queen Helen. It's a rather small country and hasn't been all that important up to this point. It stays out of the waging wars and doesn't allow practices like slavery that are still common in other parts of the world. However, Abolish try to draw Atreya into the war by forcing (or replacing) the King and Queen. At the end of the second Oath, Helen is on the run and Abolish try to torture her husband into obedience. [[spoiler: With the seventh Oath, Abolish has been driven out of Atreya for the time being, Helen has returned into power and the war with the neighboring country has been averted.]]
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''[[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/ The Zombie Knight Saga]]'' is a {{Dark Fantasy}} {{Web Serial Novel}} written by George M. Frost.
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** The end of the third Oath deserves special mention: Hector's wanted for murder, his father is dead, his mother never wants to see him again, most of his friends were killed and the rest are terrified of him, and he has to leave his hometown for good. The fact that the story's major Big Bad so far is dead is relatively minor in comparison.
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** The end of the third Oath deserves special mention: Hector's [[spoiler:Hector's wanted for murder, his father is dead, his mother never wants to see him again, most of his friends were killed and the rest are terrified of him, and he has to leave his hometown for good. The fact that the story's major Big Bad so far is dead is relatively minor in comparison.]]
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** [[spoiler: Gohvis full name? Gohvis Elroy.]]
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''[[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/ The Zombie Knight]]'' Knight Saga]]'' is a {{Dark Fantasy}} {{Web Serial Novel}} written by George M. Frost.
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-->'''Voreese:''' It's Abolish. Odds are about fifty-fifty that any given member is one of the stupidest motherfuckers on the planet.
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-->'''Voreese:''' It's Abolish. Odds are about fifty-fifty that any given member is one of the stupidest motherfuckers on the planet.
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The story is an ongoing serial and is being updated at least once a day by about 400 words. To get a feel for its current length, see the Table of Contents [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/p/blog-page_19.html here]].
'''SPOILER WARNING''': Many examples on this page contain major, ''ummarked'' spoilers, particularly for events that happen earlier in the story. Read on at your own risk.
'''SPOILER WARNING''': Many examples on this page contain major, ''ummarked'' spoilers, particularly for events that happen earlier in the story. Read on at your own risk.
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The story is an ongoing serial and is being updated by ~500 words every night at least once a day by about 400 words.midnight EST. To get a feel for its current length, see the Table of Contents [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/p/blog-page_19.html here]].
'''SPOILER WARNING''': Many examples on this page contain major, ''ummarked'' spoilers, particularly for events that happen earlier in the story. Read on at your own risk.'''Obligatory spoiler warning.'''
** Averted, however, with [[spoiler:Axiolis]] and a few others.
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* BreakThemByTalking: Happens during the showdown between Hector and Geoffrey, starting [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2013/10/page-268.html here.]] Highlights:
--> '''Geoffrey:''' You have always been a difficult person to read, haven't you? Even your father--well, your ''previous'' father--even he never really felt like he understood you. But then, he did not take a very active role in your life, did he? I am honestly curious as to what you thought of him. The whole reason I took his body was because I thought the two of you were close, but according to his memories, that does not seem to be the case. [...]
--> '''Geoffrey:''' You have always been a difficult person to read, haven't you? Even your father--well, your ''previous'' father--even he never really felt like he understood you. But then, he did not take a very active role in your life, did he? I am honestly curious as to what you thought of him. The whole reason I took his body was because I thought the two of you were close, but according to his memories, that does not seem to be the case. [...]
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* BreakThemByTalking: Happens during the showdown between Hector [[spoiler:Hector and Geoffrey, Geoffrey]], starting [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2013/10/page-268.html here.]] Highlights:
-->'''Geoffrey:''' [[spoiler:'''Geoffrey]]:''' You have always been a difficult person to read, haven't you? Even your father--well, your ''previous'' father--even he never really felt like he understood you. But then, he did not take a very active role in your life, did he? I am honestly curious as to what you thought of him. The whole reason I took his body was because I thought the two of you were close, but according to his memories, that does not seem to be the case. [...]
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** PlayedWith: This comes and goes, depending on the arc. According to WordOfGod, the story is that way by design, wanting to be both extremely light AND dark.
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** This level up is called Emergence and can happen to both the heroes ''and'' the villains, as demonstrated by Karkash.
** Zeff Elroy does a ''triple'' level up against Parson Miles. By the end of it, he still cannot defeat Miles, but he can propel himself with a geyser with enough force to ''break the sound barrier''.
** Zeff Elroy does a ''triple'' level up against Parson Miles. By the end of it, he still cannot defeat Miles, but he can propel himself with a geyser with enough force to ''break the sound barrier''.
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* MagicLibrarian: The Library of Erudition maintains a mystically bound Keeper of the Library who controls access to it. The current Keeper is [[spoiler Gohvis]], who got the position after he resisted the Library's attempts to absorb him and killed the previous Keeper for trying to restrict his reading. ScaryLibrarian indeed.
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* MagicLibrarian: The Library of Erudition maintains a mystically bound Keeper of the Library who controls access to it. The current Keeper is [[spoiler [[spoiler: Gohvis]], who got the position after he resisted the Library's attempts to absorb him and killed the previous Keeper for trying to restrict his reading. ScaryLibrarian indeed.
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*DeathWorld: The dead continent of Exoltha. Covered in a PerpetualStorm, prowled by raging [[EldritchAbomination feldeaths]], and with some imaginary property that makes its natural hazards affect reapers, it's not a healthy place to visit. And [[TheDragon Gohvis]] ''lives'' there.
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*EldritchAbomination: Feldeaths. They're what happens when a huge number of dead souls left unferried for many years gradually merge into one vast, immensely powerful being filled with rage and pain. They attack anyone who enters their teritory, and hunt anyone who retaliates (as opposed to just fleeing) to the ends of the earth.
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*BadassBookworm: Gohvis is one of the most feared servants in the world, yet he spends almost all his non-combat time doing scholarly research.
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*MagicalLibrary: The Library of Erudition, a vast and [[GeniusLoci semi-living]] compendium of knowledge, still standing despite being in the [[DeathWorld death continent]] of Exoltha. It has books on every subject, but has been known to [[YourSoulIsMine devour the souls and knowledge]] of those who take any of them without the [[MagicLibrarian magically bound Keeper's]] permission.
*MagicLibrarian: The Library of Erudition maintains a mystically bound Keeper of the Library who controls access to it. The current Keeper is [[spoiler Gohvis]], who got the position after he resisted the Library's attempts to absorb him and killed the previous Keeper for trying to restrict his reading. ScaryLibrarian indeed.
*MagicLibrarian: The Library of Erudition maintains a mystically bound Keeper of the Library who controls access to it. The current Keeper is [[spoiler Gohvis]], who got the position after he resisted the Library's attempts to absorb him and killed the previous Keeper for trying to restrict his reading. ScaryLibrarian indeed.
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Germal: Gentleman of Palei[[note]]"Liar of Lyste" to the Vanguard[[/note]]\\
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* DemocracyIsBad: Helen believes so apparently. See {{Hobbes Was right}}.
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* HobbesWasRight: Helen believes this and believes democracy to be an illusion. Ironically her [[spoiler:evil brother Luther]] does not believe this.
-->'''Helen:''' Do you honestly believe such governments can last in earnest? They can be founded on such idealism, perhaps, but it is inevitable that they will give rise to new royalty and be ruled by it. The only difference is that the kings of democracy can hide themselves behind a veil of elected figureheads.
-->'''[[spoiler:Luther:]]''' Did you know she was this cynical?
-->'''David:''' Yes, I did. You would have known as well, if you had ever bothered to get to know her the way a [[spoiler:brother should.]]
-->'''Helen:''' Do you honestly believe such governments can last in earnest? They can be founded on such idealism, perhaps, but it is inevitable that they will give rise to new royalty and be ruled by it. The only difference is that the kings of democracy can hide themselves behind a veil of elected figureheads.
-->'''[[spoiler:Luther:]]''' Did you know she was this cynical?
-->'''David:''' Yes, I did. You would have known as well, if you had ever bothered to get to know her the way a [[spoiler:brother should.]]
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* NotUsingTheZWord: Despite the name of the story the word zombie has never been used whether it was relating to Servants or not.
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->''A dark serial novel about [[TheUndead blood]], [[HeroProtagonist valor]], [[MagicAIsMagicA superpowers]], and... [[ShrinkingViolet crippling social anxiety]]?''
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* PovertyFood: Colt's cooking is like this, although it actually tastes okay.
-->'''Hector:''' What's in this?
-->'''Colt:''' Gravy.
-->'''Hector:''' And?
-->'''Colt:''' AndSomeOtherStuff.
-->'''Hector:''' What other stuff?
-->'''Colt:''' Just be glad I'm good at making gravy.
-->'''Hector:''' What's in this?
-->'''Colt:''' Gravy.
-->'''Hector:''' And?
-->'''Colt:''' AndSomeOtherStuff.
-->'''Hector:''' What other stuff?
-->'''Colt:''' Just be glad I'm good at making gravy.
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* OutOfFocus:OutOfFocus: With the ever-growing scope of the story, it's only natural that some characters disappear for a while.
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** Colt has been gone for quite a while, presumably spending most of his time with his children and not being bothered by Abolish.
** Damian Rofal was last seen disappearing with Geoffrey's corpse.
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** Colt has been gone for quite a while, while (chapter 48, posted in December of 2013), presumably spending most of his time with his children and not being bothered by Abolish.
** Damian Rofal was last seen disappearing with Geoffrey'scorpse.corpse (chapter 34). Damian pops up again in chapter ''113'', nearly one and a half years later in real time. And he disappears again almost immediately along with Dunstan Rofal. Geoffrey's corpse still hasn't been seen again.
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* MagicPants: Very much averted. Servants can regenerate their flesh, but the clothes remain in tatters and often enough, involuntary striptease ensues. Funnily enough, it only seems to happen to guys. [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2015/11/page-1112.html Hector ends up pantsless quite often.]]
-->Hector’s own pants had been shredded, of course, along with his shirt. The left leg was completely gone, and Hector didn’t need to look down in order to tell that half his junk was hanging out.
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** [[spoiler: Stoker. His reaper Nize was killed and he became an insane soulless husk, forcing Hector and Colt to kill him.
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* AerithAndBob: Justified to some extent. [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2013/12/page-393.html See here.]]
-->In order of age, they were Gabriel IV, Nathaniel II, Charles III, David III, Martin V, Luther, and Meriwether.
-->David remembered asking his mother why the two youngest had such different names.
-->"Because mercifully, your grandmother was dead by then, and I no longer had to listen to her."
-->In order of age, they were Gabriel IV, Nathaniel II, Charles III, David III, Martin V, Luther, and Meriwether.
-->David remembered asking his mother why the two youngest had such different names.
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* AerithAndBob: Justified AerithAndBob:
** Generally speaking, the human characters have names that you might encounter somewhere in the real world. The reapers' names sound entirely made-up though.
** The human characters' names vary wildly. It's justified though because the story covers an entire ConstructedWorld with several different cultures.
*** Atreya seems tosome extent.be based on Britain or the USA and the characters from Atreya have names to reflect this. [[note]]Hector Goffe, Roman Fullister, Jeremiah Colt[[/note]]
*** The Rainlords of Sair tend to have names that might be Italian or Spanish in our world. [[note]]The Elroy children Francisco, Emiliana, Marcos and Ramira; the Rainlord families Cortes, Delaguna and Garza[[/note]]
*** The Sandlords of Sair seem to be based on middle-eastern culture with corresponding names. [[note]]Asad, Haqq and Imas Najir; Abbas and Fuad Saqqaf; among others[[/note]]
*** The Morgunov branch of Abolish includes many members with Slavic-sounding names. [[note]]Morgunov himself, Ivan, Karkash, Vladimir[[/note]]
** The two youngest Atreyan princes are named rather differently than their siblings. [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2013/12/page-393.html See here.]]
-->In --->In order of age, they were Gabriel IV, Nathaniel II, Charles III, David III, Martin V, Luther, and Meriwether.
-->DavidMeriwether.\\
David remembered asking his mother why the two youngest had such differentnames.
-->"Becausenames.\\
"Because mercifully, your grandmother was dead by then, and I no longer had to listen to her."
** Generally speaking, the human characters have names that you might encounter somewhere in the real world. The reapers' names sound entirely made-up though.
** The human characters' names vary wildly. It's justified though because the story covers an entire ConstructedWorld with several different cultures.
*** Atreya seems to
*** The Rainlords of Sair tend to have names that might be Italian or Spanish in our world. [[note]]The Elroy children Francisco, Emiliana, Marcos and Ramira; the Rainlord families Cortes, Delaguna and Garza[[/note]]
*** The Sandlords of Sair seem to be based on middle-eastern culture with corresponding names. [[note]]Asad, Haqq and Imas Najir; Abbas and Fuad Saqqaf; among others[[/note]]
*** The Morgunov branch of Abolish includes many members with Slavic-sounding names. [[note]]Morgunov himself, Ivan, Karkash, Vladimir[[/note]]
** The two youngest Atreyan princes are named rather differently than their siblings. [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2013/12/page-393.html See here.]]
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** Samuel Goffe, Hector's father.
** Most of Hector's friends from school.
** Geoffrey. Being trapped in an iron box and impaled with dozens of soul-empowered iron pillars should kill anything. Probably.
** Stoker. His reaper Nize was killed and he became an insane soulless husk, forcing Hector and Colt to kill him.
** [[spoiler: Nola, Andres and Tessa]]
** [[spoiler: Mariana Elroy]]
** Most of Hector's friends from school.
** Geoffrey. Being trapped in an iron box and impaled with dozens of soul-empowered iron pillars should kill anything. Probably.
** Stoker. His reaper Nize was killed and he became an insane soulless husk, forcing Hector and Colt to kill him.
** [[spoiler: Nola, Andres and Tessa]]
** [[spoiler: Mariana Elroy]]
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** [[spoiler: Melissa Mallory. The first death in the story. Killed by Colt on Rofal's orders, despite Hector's best efforts to protect her.]]
** [[spoiler: Samuel Goffe, Hector'sfather.
father. Killed by Geoffrey at some point in the process of switching bodies.]]
** [[spoiler: Most of Hector's friends fromschool.
**school. Killed by Geoffrey.]]
** [[spoiler: Geoffrey Rofal. Being trapped in an iron box and impaled with dozens of soul-empowered iron pillars should kill anything.Probably.
Probably. Killed by Hector, obviously.]]
** [[spoiler: Stoker. His reaper Nize was killed and he became an insane soulless husk, forcing Hector and Colt to kill him.
** [[spoiler: Nola, Andres andTessa]]
Tessa. Killed in the Battle of Rathmore.]]
** [[spoiler: MarianaElroy]]Elroy. She allowed her reaper to release her soul so her deceased son Marcos could be revived as a servant.]]
** [[spoiler: Socorro Garza and her reaper. Killed by Parson when confronting the Rainlords.]]
** [[spoiler: Ismael Blackburn and his reaper Rholtam. Killed by Ivan.]]
** [[spoiler: Samuel Goffe, Hector's
** [[spoiler: Most of Hector's friends from
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** [[spoiler: Geoffrey Rofal. Being trapped in an iron box and impaled with dozens of soul-empowered iron pillars should kill anything.
** [[spoiler: Stoker. His reaper Nize was killed and he became an insane soulless husk, forcing Hector and Colt to kill him.
** [[spoiler: Nola, Andres and
** [[spoiler: Mariana
** [[spoiler: Socorro Garza and her reaper. Killed by Parson when confronting the Rainlords.]]
** [[spoiler: Ismael Blackburn and his reaper Rholtam. Killed by Ivan.]]
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* PunnyName: Eleg, the name of the story's ConstructedWorld, is a play on "elegy". WordOfGod [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2014/12/page-930.html#comment-1768090384 says]]:
-->'''George M. Frost:''' [[BlatantLies Aha, that's silly! Surely, that's just a coincidence!]] What kind of shoddy author would name something as important as the entire planet by just removing the letter "y" from a death-related word?! [[SelfDeprecation What a hack that guy would be!]] [{{Beat}}] Yeah. That was really my whole thought process. Haha, I've actually been wondering if someone would ever notice. Well, it was that, and [[RuleOfCool I just thought "Eleg" sounded good]]--which is the only thing that matters, I suppose. I like it 'cuz it's short and simple. Not overly fantastic.
-->'''George M. Frost:''' [[BlatantLies Aha, that's silly! Surely, that's just a coincidence!]] What kind of shoddy author would name something as important as the entire planet by just removing the letter "y" from a death-related word?! [[SelfDeprecation What a hack that guy would be!]] [{{Beat}}] Yeah. That was really my whole thought process. Haha, I've actually been wondering if someone would ever notice. Well, it was that, and [[RuleOfCool I just thought "Eleg" sounded good]]--which is the only thing that matters, I suppose. I like it 'cuz it's short and simple. Not overly fantastic.
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** Probably the driving force behind Colt's every action. He would do ''anything'' to protect hischildren.children.
** Zeff Elroy. He even fought a bunch of Abolishers who threatened his children -- while he was still unconscious.
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* BadassCreed: The Rainlord motto, mentioned [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2014/04/page-654.html here]]:
-->'''Zeff:''' But you are an Elroy. A Rainlord. And what do the Rainlords say? What have we always said?
-->'''Marcos:''' ''‘The rain fears not the torch.’''
-->'''Zeff:''' Yes. And what does that mean?
-->'''Marcos:''' It means we don’t run from danger. We destroy it.
-->'''Zeff:''' But you are an Elroy. A Rainlord. And what do the Rainlords say? What have we always said?
-->'''Marcos:''' ''‘The rain fears not the torch.’''
-->'''Zeff:''' Yes. And what does that mean?
-->'''Marcos:''' It means we don’t run from danger. We destroy it.
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* BadassCreed: BadassCreed:
** The Rainlord motto, mentioned [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2014/04/page-654.html here]]:
-->'''Zeff:''' --->'''Zeff:''' But you are an Elroy. A Rainlord. And what do the Rainlords say? What have we always said?
-->'''Marcos:'''said?\\
'''Marcos:''' ''‘The rain fears not the torch.’''
-->'''Zeff:'''’''\\
'''Zeff:''' Yes. And what does thatmean?
-->'''Marcos:'''mean?\\
'''Marcos:''' It means we don’t run from danger. We destroyit.it.
** The Sandlord motto as well: ''The sand endures.''
** The Rainlord motto, mentioned [[http://thezombieknight.blogspot.com/2014/04/page-654.html here]]:
-->'''Marcos:'''
'''Marcos:''' ''‘The rain fears not the torch.
-->'''Zeff:'''
'''Zeff:''' Yes. And what does that
-->'''Marcos:'''
'''Marcos:''' It means we don’t run from danger. We destroy
** The Sandlord motto as well: ''The sand endures.''