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* TheCityVsTheCountry: Raquel used to live in a farm, but moved away for unexplained reasons. She outright states that her life used to be perfect there and sometimes desires that she could return, even keeping a picture of the yard in one of the bag's pockets.
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* TheCityVsTheCountry: Raquel Raquel's family used to live in a farm, but moved away for unexplained reasons. She outright states that her life used to be perfect there and sometimes desires wishes that she could return, even keeping a picture of the yard in one of the bag's pockets.
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** The bag, where she stores her wishes, is described as being very heavy thanks to all the things she has to carry in it. It's literally causing a weight on her life.
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** The bag, where she Raquel stores her wishes, is described as being very heavy thanks to all the things she has to carry in it. It's literally causing a weight on her life.