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* PeerAsTeacher: All the teachers that the protagonist Emily interacts with at Myth/TheScholomance are students a couple years older than she is, with no actual adults anywhere in sight. [[spoiler:This winds up PlayedForHorror when Emily's mentor reveals that there ''are'' no adults; they were all purged in the school's vicious internecine warfare, leaving older students to take their places. That means all the school's monstrous practices are continuing through inertia and there is nobody at all with the authority and power to shut them down.]]
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** The elite students mention rumors that another good witch from Knightcharm infiltrated the Scholomance years ago, though they concede there's no evidence of this and that, even if the rumor is true, the infiltrator was probably killed long ago.
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** The elite students mention rumors that another good witch from Knightcharm infiltrated the Scholomance years ago, though they concede there's no evidence of this and that, even if the rumor is true, the infiltrator was probably killed long ago. [[spoiler:The mole turns out to be Lorelei, but she's been so corrupted by the school that Emily realizes she'll never do anything to undermine it.]]
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* TheMasquerade: Normal people don't seem to know that wizards and witches walk among them.
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* TheMasquerade: Normal people don't seem to know that wizards and witches walk among them.
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** The final shirt she's shown wearing in the book reads, [[Myth/ArthurianLegend All Hail Le Fay]].
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** The final shirt she's shown wearing in the book reads, [[Myth/ArthurianLegend "[[Myth/ArthurianLegend All Hail Le Fay]]."
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** The final shirt she's shown wearing in the book reads, ''[[Myth/ArthurianLegend All Hail Le Fay]]''.
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** The final shirt she's shown wearing in the book reads, ''[[Myth/ArthurianLegend [[Myth/ArthurianLegend All Hail Le Fay]]''.Fay]].
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** The final shirt she's shown wearing in the book reads, ''[[Myth/ArthurianLegend All Hail Le Fay]]''.
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''[[https://www.campfirewriting.com/explore/TheWitchOfKnightcharm The Witch Of Knightcharm]]'' is available on Campfire, a web platform which allows writers to include pieces of bonus content (such as character profiles and magic system primers) which unlock as a reader progresses through a book. As of October 2023, the entire book and 63 pieces of bonus content are available.
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''[[https://www.campfirewriting.com/explore/TheWitchOfKnightcharm The Witch Of Knightcharm]]'' was originally a serial novel on the Kindle Vella platform. It is now available on Campfire, a web platform which allows writers to include pieces of bonus content (such as character profiles and magic system primers) which unlock as a reader progresses through a book. As of October 2023, the entire book and 63 pieces of bonus content are available.
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''[[https://www.campfirewriting.com/explore/TheWitchOfKnightcharm The Witch Of Knightcharm]]'' is available on Campfire, a web platform which allows writers to include pieces of bonus content (such as character profiles and magic system primers) which unlock as a reader progresses through a book. As of October 30, 2023, the entire book and 63 pieces of bonus content are available.
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* AmbiguousSituation: After orientation, Rebecca says they have to get stronger because of 'what's coming' and Lauren warns Rebecca not to tell Emily some secret which Emily failed to notice during the last orientation run. It has not yet been explained what either of them are talking about.
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* AmbiguousSituation: After orientation, Rebecca says they have to get stronger because of 'what's coming' and Lauren warns Rebecca not to tell Emily some secret which Emily failed to notice during the last orientation run. It has not yet been explained was eventually implied that Lauren didn't want Emily to learn [[spoiler:she had killed Lily in the orientation course instead of just knocking her out]], but what either of them are talking about.Rebecca meant is still ambiguous.
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''[[https://www.campfirewriting.com/explore/TheWitchOfKnightcharm The Witch Of Knightcharm]]'' is available on Campfire, a web platform which allows writers to include pieces of bonus content (such as character profiles and magic system primers) which unlock as a reader progresses through a book. Currently, As of October 30, the first eight chapters entire book and eleven 63 pieces of bonus content are available. The rest of the book is slated to be released on October 30.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by how [[Main/{{Determinator}} Emily refused to give up]] and [[Main/DeterimentalDetermination kept fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by how [[Main/{{Determinator}} Emily refused to give up]] and [[Main/DeterimentalDetermination [[Main/DetrimentalDetermination kept fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by how [[Main/{{Determinator}} Emily refused to give up]] and [[Main/DestructiveDetermination kept fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by how [[Main/{{Determinator}} Emily refused to give up]] and [[Main/DestructiveDetermination [[Main/DeterimentalDetermination kept fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by how [[Main/{{Determinator}} Emily refused to give up and kept fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by how [[Main/{{Determinator}} Emily refused to give up up]] and [[Main/DestructiveDetermination kept fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by the [[Main/{{Determinator}} grit Emily showed when she kept trying to fight even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed by the how [[Main/{{Determinator}} grit Emily showed when she refused to give up and kept trying to fight fighting even though it was clear she had no chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed that Emily [[Main/{{Determinator}} kept trying to fight even when it was clear she had no chance]] and says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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Emily Holland is a teenage witch at [[Main/WizardingSchool Knightcharm Academy]], a secret magical high school where students learn how to cultivate their powers so they can protect innocent people from evil magicians. Emily is eager to get into the field and oppose wicked sorcerers who would oppress the populace, but on her very first field mission, she's dealt a humiliating defeat by a mysterious group of warlogas — evil witches — and only survives because the enemies don't seem to think she's worth the bother of killing. One of those warlogas, however, claims to be impressed that Emily by the [[Main/{{Determinator}} grit Emily showed when she kept trying to fight even when though it was clear she had no chance]] and chance]]. The warloga also says that if Emily wants to stop being useless and learn to wield 'real' power, she might be able to help.
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->'''Emily:''' “My teachers said [the Scholomance] taught lots of warlocks and warlogas how to cast horrific spells. But then Knightcharm tracked it down and destroyed it about thirty years ago.” \\
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->'''Emily:''' “My teachers said [the Scholomance] the Scholomance was one of the worst dark magic schools that ever existed and that it taught lots of warlocks and warlogas how to cast horrific spells. But then Knightcharm tracked it down and destroyed it about thirty years ago.” \\
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''[[https://www.campfirewriting.com/explore/TheWitchOfKnightcharm The Witch Of Knightcharm]]'' is available on Campfire, a web platform which allows writers to include pieces of bonus content (such as character profiles and magic system primers) which unlock as a reader progresses through a book. Currently, the first eight chapters and eleven pieces of bonus content are available. The rest of the book is slated to be released on October 30.
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I deleted Extranormal Institute because it belongs in the Wizarding School. Every Wizarding School is an Extranormal Institute.
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* ExtranormalInstitute: Both Knightcharm and the Scholomance are schools dedicated to teaching magic.
