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On a lonely hillside hillside, a stranger appears... In the town of Gorbav a priestess gains renown... The two shall meet, and again, without conclusion... And in the end... [[http://www.amazon.com/Will-be-Done-E-Castle-ebook/dp/B00SNNZR2W/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_29?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1422491890&sr=1-29 The Will be Done]].
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* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.]] The end of the ''main'' story, not the hundred year later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
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* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.perspective.]] The end of the ''main'' story, not the hundred year years later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
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* CleanUpTheTown: Sivord has all of its criminals (Well, most of the ''major'' ones.) dealt with [[spoiler: by Praen]] in a single night, that the locals end up calling the ‘Night of Elimination’.
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* CleanUpTheTown: Sivord has all of its criminals (Well, most of the ''major'' ones.) dealt with [[spoiler: by Praen]] in a single night, that which the locals end up calling the ‘Night of Elimination’.
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* ReligionIsMagic: ‘Will’, as how it is usually referred to, is how priests and affiliated do magic. However, it seems it is not ''technically'' a religious magic... just mostly.
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* ReligionIsMagic: ‘Will’, as how it is usually referred to, is how priests and affiliated do magic. However, it seems it is not ''technically'' a religious magic... just mostly.
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* WeirdWest: It’s a bit subtle, but it’s obvious that the culture is western influenced, with carrying guns seen to be common, riding horses, and lack of machine transportation (Although there is a suggestion or two about trains being developed.). It’s less of a supernatural western than a fantasy one though.
* WizardDuel: Mys duels with five sorcerers (In a row!) during the conflict at Rignok, [[spoiler:Praen]] duels with a sorcerer in Sivord, Myssia and Rheaesi go head-to-head at one point, and at the end, [[spoiler:Mys and Praen duke it out.]]
* WizardDuel: Mys duels with five sorcerers (In a row!) during the conflict at Rignok, [[spoiler:Praen]] duels with a sorcerer in Sivord, Myssia and Rheaesi go head-to-head at one point, and at the end, [[spoiler:Mys and Praen duke it out.]]
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* WeirdWest: It’s a bit subtle, but it’s obvious that the culture is western Western influenced, with carrying guns seen to be common, riding horses, and lack of machine transportation (Although there is a suggestion or two about trains being developed.). It’s less of a supernatural western Western than a fantasy one though.
* WizardDuel: Mys duels with five sorcerers (In a row!) during the conflict at Rignok, [[spoiler:Praen]] duels with a sorcerer in Sivord,Myssia Myssia, and Rheaesi go head-to-head at one point, and at the end, [[spoiler:Mys and Praen duke it out.]]]]
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* WizardDuel: Mys duels with five sorcerers (In a row!) during the conflict at Rignok, [[spoiler:Praen]] duels with a sorcerer in Sivord,
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The two shall meet, and again, without conclusion...
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renown... The two shall meet, and again, without conclusion...
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end... [[http://www.amazon.com/Will-be-Done-E-Castle-ebook/dp/B00SNNZR2W/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_29?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1422491890&sr=1-29 The Will be Done]].
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Praen brings himself back not only from the dead, but from being ''completely obliterated''. Also, what happens at the very beginning and end, when he travels back and forth from heaven.]]
* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.]] The end of the main story, not the hundred year later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.]] The end of the main story, not the hundred year later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Praen brings himself ''himself'' back not only from the dead, but from being ''completely obliterated''. Also, what happens at the very beginning and end, when he travels back and forth from heaven.]]
* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.]] The end of themain ''main'' story, not the hundred year later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
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* CleanUpTheTown: Sivord has all of its criminals (Well, most of the major ones.) dealt with [[spoiler: by Praen]] in a single night, that the locals end up calling the ‘Night of Elimination’.
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* CleanUpTheTown: Sivord has all of its criminals (Well, most of the major ''major'' ones.) dealt with [[spoiler: by Praen]] in a single night, that the locals end up calling the ‘Night of Elimination’.
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* TheHeretic: [[spoiler: High Priest Rheaesi]] is, interestingly enough, ''not'' a heretic... technically. He and his dogma are strongly disapproved of by the Church, however, and Mys herself feels he is an outright heretic. It does not end well.
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* TheHeretic: [[spoiler: High Priest Rheaesi]] is, interestingly enough, ''not'' a heretic... technically. He and his dogma are strongly disapproved of by the Church, however, and Mys herself feels he is an outright heretic. It does not ''not'' end well.
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:Myssia]] is actually a prospective messiah (The name’s a hint.). [[spoiler: It does not work out, however.]]
* MysteriousWatcher: For most of the story, Praen simply pops up, talks a bit with Myssia (Keeping an eye on her in the background as well.), then disappears (To be fair, he actually does do a few other things, but that’s neither here nor there.). This lasts until the end, where [[spoiler:he reveals he’s a herald of God, Myssia is -or could have been- the Messiah, and now he has to kill her. Bummer.]]
* MysteriousWatcher: For most of the story, Praen simply pops up, talks a bit with Myssia (Keeping an eye on her in the background as well.), then disappears (To be fair, he actually does do a few other things, but that’s neither here nor there.). This lasts until the end, where [[spoiler:he reveals he’s a herald of God, Myssia is -or could have been- the Messiah, and now he has to kill her. Bummer.]]
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* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:Myssia]] is actually a prospective ''prospective'' messiah (The name’s a hint.). [[spoiler: It does not ''not'' work out, however.]]
* MysteriousWatcher: For most of the story, Praen simply pops up, talks a bit with Myssia (Keeping an eye on her in the background as well.), then disappears (To be fair, he actuallydoes ''does'' do a few other things, but that’s neither here nor there.). This lasts until the end, where [[spoiler:he reveals he’s a herald of God, Myssia is -or -''or could have been- been''- the Messiah, and now he has to kill her. Bummer.]]
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* ReligionIsMagic: ‘Will’, as how it is usually referred to, is how priests and affiliated do magic. However, it seems it is not technically ''technically'' a religious magic... just mostly.
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On a lonely hillside a stranger appears...
In the town of Gorbav a priestess gains renown...
The two shall meet, and again, without conclusion...
And in the end...
[[http://www.amazon.com/Will-be-Done-E-Castle-ebook/dp/B00SNNZR2W/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_29?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1422491890&sr=1-29 The Will be Done]].
By [[Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle]].
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!! The Will be Done contains examples of:
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Praen brings himself back not only from the dead, but from being ''completely obliterated''. Also, what happens at the very beginning and end, when he travels back and forth from heaven.]]
* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.]] The end of the main story, not the hundred year later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
* BulletDodgesYou: In Sivord, while taking care of a criminal, [[spoiler:Praen]] stops two bullets in mid-air, letting one drop and sending the other right back to its owner. Er, ''into'' its owner, to be more precise.
* CleanUpTheTown: Sivord has all of its criminals (Well, most of the major ones.) dealt with [[spoiler: by Praen]] in a single night, that the locals end up calling the ‘Night of Elimination’.
* ColorCodedWizardry: Users of Will each have their own particular aura-color for when they do magic. Sorcerers, for whatever reason, are always red (This probably also explains why a red robe is considered a sign of a sorcerer.).
* CoolGate: One appears at the beginning and another two at the end. They’re used by [[spoiler:Praen to travel between heaven and earth]].
* ForcedSleep: Praen puts a thug to sleep at one point.
* TheHeretic: [[spoiler: High Priest Rheaesi]] is, interestingly enough, ''not'' a heretic... technically. He and his dogma are strongly disapproved of by the Church, however, and Mys herself feels he is an outright heretic. It does not end well.
* IAmXSonOfY: [[spoiler:“I am Praen the Herald, Son of Durex the Prophet.”]] A bit more impressive than it sounds; it’s that world’s equivalent of declaring yourself the son of [[spoiler:Abraham, Moses, Jesus or Mohammed]].
* INeverToldYouMyName: When they first meet, Praen calls Myssia by her full name, which he had no apparent way of knowing.
* InTheHood: [[spoiler:Praen]] does this to hide his identity when he [[CleanUpTheTown takes care of the criminals]] in Sivord. A group of sorcerers also do this in Rignok, in order to kill without being recognized.
* MagicalSociety: A guild of sorcerers run the town of Rignok; in some sort of college-town arrangement. Oddly enough, they’ve apparently done a good job of it.
* MeaningfulName: Myssia [[spoiler:messiah.]] Inicis [[spoiler:Latin for enemy]] Sacer [[spoiler:Latin for priestess]].
* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:Myssia]] is actually a prospective messiah (The name’s a hint.). [[spoiler: It does not work out, however.]]
* MysteriousWatcher: For most of the story, Praen simply pops up, talks a bit with Myssia (Keeping an eye on her in the background as well.), then disappears (To be fair, he actually does do a few other things, but that’s neither here nor there.). This lasts until the end, where [[spoiler:he reveals he’s a herald of God, Myssia is -or could have been- the Messiah, and now he has to kill her. Bummer.]]
* PublicExecution: [[spoiler:Myssia performs one on Rheaesi]].
* Really700YearsOld: [[spoiler:Praen is somewhere around a millennium and a half old, although he’s been dead or something for the vast majority of that. He occasionally mentions he’s older than he looks, lampshading the whole deal.]]
* ReligionIsMagic: ‘Will’, as how it is usually referred to, is how priests and affiliated do magic. However, it seems it is not technically a religious magic... just mostly.
* SphereOfDestruction: The Sphere of Destruction is, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a sphere that obliterates everything inside it]]. While the color varies, the basic form is a large sphere (Duh.) that has concentric circles constantly rotating around it, while producing an annoying hum.
* WeirdWest: It’s a bit subtle, but it’s obvious that the culture is western influenced, with carrying guns seen to be common, riding horses, and lack of machine transportation (Although there is a suggestion or two about trains being developed.). It’s less of a supernatural western than a fantasy one though.
* WizardDuel: Mys duels with five sorcerers (In a row!) during the conflict at Rignok, [[spoiler:Praen]] duels with a sorcerer in Sivord, Myssia and Rheaesi go head-to-head at one point, and at the end, [[spoiler:Mys and Praen duke it out.]]
In the town of Gorbav a priestess gains renown...
The two shall meet, and again, without conclusion...
And in the end...
[[http://www.amazon.com/Will-be-Done-E-Castle-ebook/dp/B00SNNZR2W/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_29?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1422491890&sr=1-29 The Will be Done]].
By [[Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle]].
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!! The Will be Done contains examples of:
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Praen brings himself back not only from the dead, but from being ''completely obliterated''. Also, what happens at the very beginning and end, when he travels back and forth from heaven.]]
* BookEnds: The story begins and ends with [[spoiler:Praen coming through the portal, at a specific location, to evaluate the new prospective.]] The end of the main story, not the hundred year later epilogue, ''also'' has [[spoiler:Praen returning through the portal]], actually giving the story two book ends at the ending.
* BulletDodgesYou: In Sivord, while taking care of a criminal, [[spoiler:Praen]] stops two bullets in mid-air, letting one drop and sending the other right back to its owner. Er, ''into'' its owner, to be more precise.
* CleanUpTheTown: Sivord has all of its criminals (Well, most of the major ones.) dealt with [[spoiler: by Praen]] in a single night, that the locals end up calling the ‘Night of Elimination’.
* ColorCodedWizardry: Users of Will each have their own particular aura-color for when they do magic. Sorcerers, for whatever reason, are always red (This probably also explains why a red robe is considered a sign of a sorcerer.).
* CoolGate: One appears at the beginning and another two at the end. They’re used by [[spoiler:Praen to travel between heaven and earth]].
* ForcedSleep: Praen puts a thug to sleep at one point.
* TheHeretic: [[spoiler: High Priest Rheaesi]] is, interestingly enough, ''not'' a heretic... technically. He and his dogma are strongly disapproved of by the Church, however, and Mys herself feels he is an outright heretic. It does not end well.
* IAmXSonOfY: [[spoiler:“I am Praen the Herald, Son of Durex the Prophet.”]] A bit more impressive than it sounds; it’s that world’s equivalent of declaring yourself the son of [[spoiler:Abraham, Moses, Jesus or Mohammed]].
* INeverToldYouMyName: When they first meet, Praen calls Myssia by her full name, which he had no apparent way of knowing.
* InTheHood: [[spoiler:Praen]] does this to hide his identity when he [[CleanUpTheTown takes care of the criminals]] in Sivord. A group of sorcerers also do this in Rignok, in order to kill without being recognized.
* MagicalSociety: A guild of sorcerers run the town of Rignok; in some sort of college-town arrangement. Oddly enough, they’ve apparently done a good job of it.
* MeaningfulName: Myssia [[spoiler:messiah.]] Inicis [[spoiler:Latin for enemy]] Sacer [[spoiler:Latin for priestess]].
* MessianicArchetype: [[spoiler:Myssia]] is actually a prospective messiah (The name’s a hint.). [[spoiler: It does not work out, however.]]
* MysteriousWatcher: For most of the story, Praen simply pops up, talks a bit with Myssia (Keeping an eye on her in the background as well.), then disappears (To be fair, he actually does do a few other things, but that’s neither here nor there.). This lasts until the end, where [[spoiler:he reveals he’s a herald of God, Myssia is -or could have been- the Messiah, and now he has to kill her. Bummer.]]
* PublicExecution: [[spoiler:Myssia performs one on Rheaesi]].
* Really700YearsOld: [[spoiler:Praen is somewhere around a millennium and a half old, although he’s been dead or something for the vast majority of that. He occasionally mentions he’s older than he looks, lampshading the whole deal.]]
* ReligionIsMagic: ‘Will’, as how it is usually referred to, is how priests and affiliated do magic. However, it seems it is not technically a religious magic... just mostly.
* SphereOfDestruction: The Sphere of Destruction is, well, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin a sphere that obliterates everything inside it]]. While the color varies, the basic form is a large sphere (Duh.) that has concentric circles constantly rotating around it, while producing an annoying hum.
* WeirdWest: It’s a bit subtle, but it’s obvious that the culture is western influenced, with carrying guns seen to be common, riding horses, and lack of machine transportation (Although there is a suggestion or two about trains being developed.). It’s less of a supernatural western than a fantasy one though.
* WizardDuel: Mys duels with five sorcerers (In a row!) during the conflict at Rignok, [[spoiler:Praen]] duels with a sorcerer in Sivord, Myssia and Rheaesi go head-to-head at one point, and at the end, [[spoiler:Mys and Praen duke it out.]]
