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Armor Piercing Slap is no longer a trope
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Dwaun tries to give one to Neshi when he questions who the Nedians' god really is, but it ends up coming off as Neshi being slapped by a feather, and it ends up hurting Dwaun more than it does Neshi.
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* CrusadingWidower: Neshi, after the death of his wife Etarina, made all the more heartbreaking when he found out that she was pregnant.
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* CrusadingWidower: CrusadingWidow: Neshi, after the death of his wife Etarina, made all the more heartbreaking when he found out that she was pregnant.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish[=/=]TranslatorMicrobes: Despite visiting people of two different worlds, Neshi is able to communicate with them without a problem and could even read their literature.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish[=/=]TranslatorMicrobes: AliensSpeakingEnglish: Despite visiting people of two different worlds, Neshi is able to communicate with them without a problem and could even read their literature.
