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** Gardner wakes up after a bender early in the novel...on the beach by the Alhambra from ''Literature/TheTalisman'' and talks for a few moments with Jack Sawyer.
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** Gardner wakes up after a bender early in the novel...novel on the beach by the Alhambra Hotel from ''Literature/TheTalisman'' and talks for a few moments with Jack Sawyer.''Literature/TheTalisman''.
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** Gardner wakes up after a bender early in the novel...on the beach by the Alhambra from ''Literature/TheTalisman'' and talks for a few moments with Jack Sawyer.
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* StageMagician: Hilly Brown, a ChildProdigy, wants to be one; when he gains technical abilities, he builds a machine that sends things to a faraway planet ([[ShoutOut referred to as]] [[ForbiddenPlanet Altair IV]]), then brings them back, and uses it for magic tricks. However, when he sends away his little brother, David, he can't bring him back; rescuing him later becomes a major plot thread.
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* StageMagician: Hilly Brown, a ChildProdigy, wants to be one; when he gains technical abilities, he builds a machine that sends things to a faraway planet ([[ShoutOut referred to as]] [[ForbiddenPlanet [[Film/ForbiddenPlanet Altair IV]]), then brings them back, and uses it for magic tricks. However, when he sends away his little brother, David, he can't bring him back; rescuing him later becomes a major plot thread.
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* TheHardHat: Gardener and Ev Hillman are immune to the effects of the spaceship, because they have metal plates in their heads (Gardener because of a skiing accident, Ev because of a war wound). Anne Anderson is somewhat protected by extensive metal dental work.
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* TheHardHat: Gardener and Ev Hillman are immune to the effects of the spaceship, because they have metal plates in their heads (Gardener because of a skiing accident, Ev because of a war wound). Anne Anderson is somewhat protected by extensive metal dental work. In case of Gard however, several weeks of working day in, day out to dig up the ship eventually results in so much exposure to the ship that despite his metal plate, he too slowly starts to "become", making it harder for him to keep his mind from getting read.
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* DrivenToSuicide: After being caught in the woods at the site of the ship, Anthony Dugan is taken to Bobbi's shed and brainwashed into going back to Derry, write a farewell note how he can't live without Ruth, and shoot himself.
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* PragmaticVillain: When they set out to stop Ev Hillman and police officer Anthony Dugan from discovering the ship, Bobbi orders the Havenites not to kill Dugan, no matter what, since two cops already went missing near Haven and town constable Ruth has died recently, so she fears that another police officer dying or going missing will attract too much unwanted attention.
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* PragmaticVillain: When they set out to stop Ev Hillman and police officer Anthony Dugan from discovering the ship, Bobbi orders the Havenites not to kill Dugan, no matter what, since two cops already went missing near Haven and town constable Ruth has died recently, so she fears that another police officer dying or going missing will attract too much unwanted attention. Instead she opts to make him commit suicide in his hometown Derry.
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* PragmaticVillain: When they set out to stop Ev Hillman and police officer Anthony Dugan from discovering the ship, Bobbi orders the Havenites not to kill Dugan, no matter what, since two cops already went missing near Haven and town constable Ruth has died recently, so she fears that another police officer dying or going missing will attract too much unwanted attention.
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* CatapultNightmare: Happens to Gardener during one of his first nights in Bobbi's house, after a nightmare about the Tommyknockers and the shed in her backyard.
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* TheKlutz: Hilly is very accident-prone, mostly due to his curious nature. According to his father Bryant "Hilly without screw-ups is like mcDonald's without hamburgers".
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* ShurFineGuns: When Gardener drops a gun, it goes off, and the bullet breaks his ankle. It might be justified, since it's an old .45 from WorldWarII. It's especially ironic, because [[spoiler: earlier, when he tried to shoot Bobbi with it, it misfired]].
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* ShurFineGuns: When Gardener drops a gun, it goes off, and the bullet breaks his ankle. It might be justified, since it's an old .45 from WorldWarII.UsefulNotes/WorldWarII. It's especially ironic, because [[spoiler: earlier, when he tried to shoot Bobbi with it, it misfired]].
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharactersLoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: The number of named characters in the book? About 75. The number important to the plot? About 10.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Actually, many parts could be cut, as they [[{{Filler}} don't really advance the plot]].
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* {{Doorstopper}}: Actually, many parts could be cut, as they [[{{Filler}} don't really advance the plot]]. King himself has said that the book would be better if it was half as long as it is.
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* CelebrityParadox: Stephen King himself is referenced in the book; the townspeople think that Bobbi writes good stories, "[[SelfDeprecation not all full of make-believe monsters and a bunch of dirty words, like the books that fellow who lived up Bangor way wrote]]". Also, when Gardener wants to get into the shed, he considers grabbing an ax "and make like JackNicholson in ''Film/TheShining''". However, events in ''Literature/TheDeadZone'', ''Literature/{{It}}'' and ''Literature/{{Firestarter}}'' are [[CanonWelding mentioned as fact or at least hearsay]], not as fiction.
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* CelebrityParadox: Stephen King himself is referenced in the book; the townspeople think that Bobbi writes good stories, "[[SelfDeprecation not all full of make-believe monsters and a bunch of dirty words, like the books that fellow who lived up Bangor way wrote]]". Also, when Gardener wants to get into the shed, he considers grabbing an ax "and make like JackNicholson Creator/JackNicholson in ''Film/TheShining''". However, events in ''Literature/TheDeadZone'', ''Literature/{{It}}'' and ''Literature/{{Firestarter}}'' are [[CanonWelding mentioned as fact or at least hearsay]], not as fiction.
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Ruth didn't know Gardener, she tried to send a message to the outside world
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** [[spoiler:Ruth [=McCausland=] dies ''blowing up'' the town church, with the purpose of putting Gardener on the trail to rebellion.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ruth [=McCausland=] dies ''blowing up'' the town church, with the purpose of putting Gardener on directing the trail to rebellion.attention of the outside world on Haven.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ruth McCausland dies ''blowing up'' the town church, with the purpose of putting Gardener on the trail to rebellion.]]
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** [[spoiler:Ruth McCausland [=McCausland=] dies ''blowing up'' the town church, with the purpose of putting Gardener on the trail to rebellion.]]
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* DyingMomentOfAwesome: ''Several.''
** [[spoiler:Ruth McCausland dies ''blowing up'' the town church, with the purpose of putting Gardener on the trail to rebellion.]]
** [[spoiler:Anne Anderson, of all people, uses all the rest of her life force to power a weapon which incinerates Freeman Moss, thus saving Gardener's life.]]
** [[spoiler:Ev Hillman and Peter the dog do likewise, using their energy to power the machine that saves David Brown and then attacking the townspeople once more.]]
** [[spoiler:Gardener himself dies having expended absolutely of all his brainpower and dying from multiple wounds, but he manages to destroy the Tommyknockers' source of power in the process.]]
** [[spoiler:Ruth McCausland dies ''blowing up'' the town church, with the purpose of putting Gardener on the trail to rebellion.]]
** [[spoiler:Anne Anderson, of all people, uses all the rest of her life force to power a weapon which incinerates Freeman Moss, thus saving Gardener's life.]]
** [[spoiler:Ev Hillman and Peter the dog do likewise, using their energy to power the machine that saves David Brown and then attacking the townspeople once more.]]
** [[spoiler:Gardener himself dies having expended absolutely of all his brainpower and dying from multiple wounds, but he manages to destroy the Tommyknockers' source of power in the process.]]
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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: In the book's final big sequence, [[spoiler:Bobbi's ghost seems to appear to Gardener, and guides his hand to shoot a deadly smoke detector. Gardener isn't sure afterwards if it really happened, but doesn't think he could have shot the thing without help.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Haven. [[spoiler: Eventually the Tommyknockers become so dependent on the radiation from the ship they can't even leave Haven without becoming mortally ill.]]
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the film, pretty much everyone survives, including Bobbi and most of the townsfolk (Gardener still dies, though). The novel has the exact opposite outcome, with pretty much the entire town being wiped out and both main characters dead by MercyKill and HeroicSacrifice respectively]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: [[spoiler: In the film, pretty much everyone survives, including Bobbi and most of the townsfolk (Gardener still dies, though). Even poor Peter the dog makes it. The novel has the exact opposite outcome, with pretty much the entire town being wiped out and both main characters dead by MercyKill and HeroicSacrifice respectively]].
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* TheReveal: When Gardener goes into Bobbi's shed, and finds out what's in there.
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* ReedRichardsIsUseless: The Tommyknockers can create amazing technology, but their lack of common sense prevents them from using their inventions for anything but [[MundaneUtility their immediate personal desires]]. They can create antigravity, but they can't think to patent it and revolutionize space travel (or even use AC/DC converters to prevent it from being so AwesomeButImpractical).
* TheReveal: When Gardener goes into Bobbi's shed, and finds out what's in there. [[spoiler: There's [[PoweredByAForsakenChild people (and a dog) she turned into]] [[LivingBattery living batteries]].]]
* TheReveal: When Gardener goes into Bobbi's shed, and finds out what's in there. [[spoiler: There's [[PoweredByAForsakenChild people (and a dog) she turned into]] [[LivingBattery living batteries]].]]
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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: It is mentions several times that the [[InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien Tommies]] have a track record of accidentally [[EarthShatteringKaboom destroying whole planets]] with their [[WhatDoesThisButtonDo inventions]]. Usually when a couple of hicks get in a fight and use what turn out to be planet busters on each other.
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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds:
** It is mentions several times that the [[InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien Tommies]] have a track record of accidentally [[EarthShatteringKaboom destroying whole planets]] with their [[WhatDoesThisButtonDo inventions]]. Usually when a couple of hicks get in a fight and use what turn out to be planet busters on eachother.other.
** An elderly and senile farmer uses his newfound technical know-how to build a device powerful enough to cause earthquakes that would be devastating on a continental if not global scale. The purpose of the device? To drive away groundhogs and rabbits from his crops.
** It is mentions several times that the [[InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien Tommies]] have a track record of accidentally [[EarthShatteringKaboom destroying whole planets]] with their [[WhatDoesThisButtonDo inventions]]. Usually when a couple of hicks get in a fight and use what turn out to be planet busters on each
** An elderly and senile farmer uses his newfound technical know-how to build a device powerful enough to cause earthquakes that would be devastating on a continental if not global scale. The purpose of the device? To drive away groundhogs and rabbits from his crops.
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* ViolationOfCommonSense: Often committed by the Tommyknockers. They can invent amazing things, but they can't problem-solve their way around an AC-DC converter.
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* ViolationOfCommonSense: Often committed by the Tommyknockers. They can invent amazing things, but they can't problem-solve their way around an AC-DC converter.
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* TagLine: ''You can't run. You can't hide. You can only become... one of them.''
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* TouchedByVorlons: Everyone in Haven (except Gardener).
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* TouchedByVorlons: Everyone in Haven (except Gardener).Gardener and Ed Hillman).
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* AliensAreBastards: Tommyknockers have [[HairTriggerTemper incredibly bad tempers]] and are quick to DisproportionateRetribution.
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* HairTriggerTemper: The entire race of the Tommyknockers have it. The reason why the original Tommyknockers are all dead and their spaceship is crashed is because they kept visiting DisproportionateRetribution on each other for petty slights.
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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The Tommyknockers. They don't even begin to understand the technology they somehow managed to figure out how to [[strike: use]] ''make''.
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* InsufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The Tommyknockers. They don't even begin to understand the technology they somehow managed to figure out how to [[strike: use]] ''make''.''make'', and they don't have the common sense to use it to its greatest advantage.
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* MundaneUtility: Bobbi uses her technical abilities to power up her water heater by creating a small sun in it, making a tractor that can fly, and a typewriter that can read thoughts. Other Havenites create similar things.
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* MundaneUtility: Bobbi uses her technical abilities to power up her water heater by creating a small sun in it, making a tractor that can fly, and a typewriter that can read thoughts. Other Havenites create similar things.things, like Hilly Brown's teleporter, which he uses for magic tricks. In fact, this is pretty much all they do [[spoiler: before they start making weapons and deadly robots to protect Haven]], because it never occurs to them what other uses their inventions have.
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** Also Joe from the TV miniseries who not only cheats on his wife, but he throws her lunch for him and his sons, laughs evilly after making his wife feel bad for herself and abandon a search for a lost kid to have an affair again knowing that his wife would be more concerned about the search than him.
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** Also Joe from the TV miniseries who not only cheats on his wife, but he throws her lunch for him and his sons, laughs evilly after making his wife feel bad for herself and abandon abandons a search for a lost kid to have an affair again again, knowing that his wife would be more concerned about the search than him.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Time is a lot slower on Altair 4; it is said that on that planet, only a year has passed since the Earth was formed. That's why David Brown can be brought back alive about a month later he was sent there, despite the fact that the planet hardly has any air. As far as he knows, he was only there for a few minutes or so.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Time is a lot slower on Altair 4; it is said that on that planet, only a year has passed since the Earth was formed. That's why David Brown can be brought back alive about a month later after he was sent there, despite the fact that the planet hardly has any air. As far as he knows, he was only there for a few minutes or so.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Time is a lot slower on Altair 4; that's why David Brown can be brought back alive about a month later he was sent there, despite the fact that the planet hardly has any air. As far as he knows, he was only there for a few minutes or so.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Time is a lot slower on Altair 4; that's it is said that on that planet, only a year has passed since the Earth was formed. That's why David Brown can be brought back alive about a month later he was sent there, despite the fact that the planet hardly has any air. As far as he knows, he was only there for a few minutes or so.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Time is a lot slower on Altair 4; that's why David Brown can be brought back alive about a month later he was sent there, despite the fact that the planet hardly has any air.
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* YearOutsideHourInside: Time is a lot slower on Altair 4; that's why David Brown can be brought back alive about a month later he was sent there, despite the fact that the planet hardly has any air. As far as he knows, he was only there for a few minutes or so.
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* AssholeVictim: Beach, Anne Anderson as well (see JerkAss)
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* AssholeVictim: Beach, Anne Anderson as well (see JerkAss)JerkAss). She's such a horrible person that Gardener doesn't particularly mind when he finds out that [[spoiler:Bobbi turned her into a LivingBattery; he's far more disturbed by Bobbi doing the same to her dog.]]
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!!''TheTommyknockers'' provides examples of:
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* CelebrityParadox: Stephen King himself is referenced in the book; the townspeople think that Bobbi writes good stories, "[[SelfDeprecation not all full of make-believe monsters and a bunch of dirty words, like the books that fellow who lived up Bangor way wrote]]". Also, when Gardener wants to get into the shed, he considers grabbing an ax "and make like JackNicholson in ''Film/TheShining''". However, events in ''Literature/TheDeadZone'', ''{{It}}'' and ''Literature/{{Firestarter}}'' are [[CanonWelding mentioned as fact or at least hearsay]], not as fiction.
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* CelebrityParadox: Stephen King himself is referenced in the book; the townspeople think that Bobbi writes good stories, "[[SelfDeprecation not all full of make-believe monsters and a bunch of dirty words, like the books that fellow who lived up Bangor way wrote]]". Also, when Gardener wants to get into the shed, he considers grabbing an ax "and make like JackNicholson in ''Film/TheShining''". However, events in ''Literature/TheDeadZone'', ''{{It}}'' ''Literature/{{It}}'' and ''Literature/{{Firestarter}}'' are [[CanonWelding mentioned as fact or at least hearsay]], not as fiction.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Haven becomes this.
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* TownWithADarkSecret: Haven becomes this.this (and technically already was, once its history is revealed).