Follow TV Tropes

Following

History Literature / TheSwordOfGood

Go To

OR

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* EntitledBastard: Selena outright states that she expects to be rewarded with titles, riches, and pardons for her past crimes, as well as be made queen by Hirou's side. The fact that he, in a strictly hypothetical scenario, says he would choose to save the world over her life, is something she treats as an unforgivable snub and proof that he doesn't love her. [[spoiler:She also treats her lover's death as [[ThisIsUnforgivable a truly unforgivable act]] but seemingly has never spared a single thought for the dozens of people she's killed herself.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* ConceptsAreCheap: The wielder of the Sword of Good must Choose between Good and Evil. The Lord of Dark commands the Bad Races of Evilland and plans to cast the Spell of Infinite Doom which will destroy the Equilibrium that keeps the forces of nature in order. [[spoiler:Each and every one of those terms are eventually subverted and brutally broken on the ground. The Choice isn't about saying "Good" but deciding ''what'' actually is good. The "Bad Races" and "Evilland" are targets of propaganda to justify an invasion by the humans, and has done little evil beyond defending themselves and fighting back, while the Lord got his name from the humans because he sided against them. And the Equilibrium, fancy as it sounds, is just an excuse to maintain systemic social injustice where the rich and powerful exploit the poor and weak. The spell is just the means to break it down so good people have a chance to make things better.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** During the final showdown against the Lord of Dark, he accuses the heroes of five counts of murder - [[spoiler:specifically, the five "Bad Race" mooks fought in the opening]]. As he clarifies, [[spoiler:they were unaware of the "heroes" and could have been circumvented easily, but the "heroes" still chose to attack - legally making it premeditated murder - because they literally didn't consider that a "villain" should get to live]].

to:

** During the final showdown against the Lord of Dark, he accuses the heroes of five eight counts of murder - [[spoiler:specifically, the five eight "Bad Race" mooks fought in the opening]]. As he clarifies, [[spoiler:they were unaware of the "heroes" and could have been circumvented easily, but the "heroes" still chose to attack - legally making it premeditated murder - because they literally didn't consider that a "villain" should get to live]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Or possibly [[FaceHeelTurn the other way around.]] Alek the thief is mentioned by the intercepted courier to be searching for a vital artifact on behalf of the antagonists. A TimeSkip later, he's with the protagonists and Selena's lover, implying they convinced him to switch sides.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Alek was mentioned by the courier as the man he was supposed to meet. While his meeting with the protagonists is off-screen, it's implied they convinced him to join them.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


** An InUniverse example: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for.

to:

** An InUniverse example: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for. She also murders the courier's two bodyguards in their sleep, as well as the courier himself after he's told them what they want to know; nobody so much as bats an eye at the act.

Added: 714

Changed: 272

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: An InUniverse example: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for.

to:

* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: ProtagonistCenteredMorality:
**
An InUniverse example: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for.for.
** During the final showdown against the Lord of Dark, he accuses the heroes of five counts of murder - [[spoiler:specifically, the five "Bad Race" mooks fought in the opening]]. As he clarifies, [[spoiler:they were unaware of the "heroes" and could have been circumvented easily, but the "heroes" still chose to attack - legally making it premeditated murder - because they literally didn't consider that a "villain" should get to live]].

Added: 263

Changed: 7

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Add quote


* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed early, and averted. Selena takes offense at the fact that Hirou evidently doesn't love her enough to choose her over the world. He doesn't understand why she can't be rational about it.

to:

* AlwaysSaveTheGirl: Discussed early, and averted.defied. Selena takes offense at the fact that Hirou evidently doesn't love her enough to choose her over the world. He doesn't understand why she can't be rational about it.it.
--> Selena opened her mouth, then closed it again. Sudden hurt showed in her eyes.\\
"''Oh come on!''" Hirou exclaimed. He was too shocked, in that brief critical moment, even to think of smoothing it over. "Have some common sense, Selena! The ''whole world?''"
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


The Sword of Good is a short story by rationalist writer Creator/EliezerYudkowsky. The protagonist is a man named Hirou, an avid fantasy reader and thrown into the beginning of a fundamentally generic quest to save a fantasy realm he has been thrust into. With his partners, Selena and Dolf, he must defeat the [[BigBad Lord of Dark]] and his Evil Races. And so Hirou, using everything he has learned from his hobby, must save the realm while toying with fantasy tropes along the way.

to:

The "The Sword of Good Good" is a short story by rationalist writer Creator/EliezerYudkowsky. The protagonist is a man named Hirou, an avid fantasy reader and thrown into the beginning of a fundamentally generic quest to save a fantasy realm he has been thrust into. With his partners, Selena and Dolf, he must defeat the [[BigBad Lord of Dark]] and his Evil Races. And so Hirou, using everything he has learned from his hobby, must save the realm while toying with fantasy tropes along the way.



* ArtifactDomination: The Sword of Good compels its (true) wielder to act for The Greater Good as soon as possible. [[spoiler:Bad news is, 'Good' does ''not'' mean 'honorable', 'loving', or 'wise', and so the sword {{MindRape}}s Hiro into betraying his party - because they're actually assholes.]]

to:

* ArtifactDomination: The Sword of Good compels its (true) wielder to act for The Greater Good as soon as possible. [[spoiler:Bad news is, 'Good' does ''not'' mean 'honorable', 'loving', or 'wise', and so the sword {{MindRape}}s {{Mind Rape}}s Hiro into betraying his party - because they're actually assholes.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for.

to:

* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: An InUniverse example: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Selena expects to be greatly rewarded and honored (and fashions herself as the LoveInterest and future queen) for her part in the heroic quest, despite her past criminal acts as a pirate - acts she neither feels remorse over or intends to atone for.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* InMediasRes: The story starts after Hiro has been and his quest has started.


Added DiffLines:

* RememberTheNewGuy: Alek suddenly appears after TimeSkip with no explanation who he is [[spoiler: and why Selena is in love him with.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Killing [[spoiler:Selena]] was an unnecessary move.

Added: 773

Changed: 634

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ArtifactDomination: The Sword of Good compels its (true) wielder to act for The Greater Good as soon as possible. [[spoiler:Bad news is, 'Good' does ''not'' mean 'honorable', 'loving', or 'wise', and so the sword {{MindRape}}s Hiro into betraying his party - because they're actually assholes.]]
* AlasPoorVillain: [[spoiler:Pirate she may be, Selena's last words are exasperated despair at Hiro's apparently spontaneous total betrayal of the forces of Good.]]



* ProphecyTwist: The Lord of Dark argues this -- the relevant prophecy has the Hero make a pivotal Choice between Good and Bad. Hirou understandably wonders why anyone would choose Bad, but the Lord of Dark argues the Choice is between [[spoiler: deciding which alternative ''is'' the Good and which is the Bad.]]

to:

* OmniscientMoralityLicense: [[spoiler:The Sword of Good itself, and its dedication to the Greater Good. To be fair, it has evidence to back up its philosophy - ''mountains'' upon ''mountains'' of historical data of hideous atrocities stored in its memory. Which it then forcefully jams into its wielder to make its point of "kill your friends because they're evil and you're in denial and this proves it".]]
* ProphecyTwist: The Lord of Dark argues this -- the relevant prophecy has the Hero make a pivotal Choice between Good and Bad. Hirou understandably wonders why anyone would choose Bad, but the Lord of Dark argues the Choice is between [[spoiler: deciding which [[spoiler:deciding ''which'' alternative ''is'' is the Good and which is the Bad.]]



* SituationalSword: The titular sword can give The Chosen One a significant power boost as well as the ability to one-cut through all who stand in the way of good...[[spoiler:but it also forcefully jams entire video libraries' worth of documentaries about human suffering perpetuated by humanity into the wielder's head, and then directs the wielder to cut down the nearest threat to the greater good (i.e. a high ratio between suffering inflicted by the potential target and proximity to stabbing range), regardless of their allegiance or alignment. In short, it can only be used against a perpetrator of human suffering and never against someone who seeks to alleviate human suffering.]]

to:

* SituationalSword: The titular sword can give The Chosen One a significant power boost as well as the ability to one-cut cut through all physical and magical defenses of those who stand in the way of good...[[spoiler:but it also forcefully jams entire video libraries' worth of documentaries about human suffering perpetuated by humanity into the wielder's head, and then directs the wielder to cut down the nearest threat to the greater good (i.e. a high ratio between suffering inflicted by the potential target and proximity to stabbing range), regardless of their allegiance or alignment. In short, it can only be used against a perpetrator of human suffering and never against someone who seeks to alleviate human suffering.]]



Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Sure, killing [[spoiler:Selena]] is a dick move, but [[spoiler:she]] killed a great many more people both on the quest and before and still considers [[spoiler:herself]] a hero.

to:

* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Sure, killing ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Killing [[spoiler:Selena]] is a dick move, but [[spoiler:she]] killed a great many more people both on the quest and before and still considers [[spoiler:herself]] a hero.was an unnecessary move.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BigBad: The Lord of Dark, leader of the [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Evil Races]] who oppose the heroes and seeks {{immortality|Immorality}} [[spoiler:seems to be this, but [[DarkIsNotEvil is trying to overthrow]] TheEmpire. The real villain is Dolf, the wizard within the party who is the Archmage of the Empire]].

to:

* BigBad: [[spoiler:Vhazhar,]] The Lord of Dark, leader of the [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Evil Races]] who oppose the heroes and seeks {{immortality|Immorality}} [[spoiler:seems to be this, but [[DarkIsNotEvil is trying to overthrow]] TheEmpire. The real villain is Dolf, the wizard within the party who is the Archmage of the Empire]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* SituationalSword: The titular sword can give The Chosen One a significant power boost as well as the ability to one-cut through all who stand in the way of good... but it also forcefully jams entire video libraries' worth of documentaries about human suffering perpetuated by humanity into the wielder's head, and then directs the wielder to cut down the nearest threat to the greater good (i.e. a high ratio between suffering inflicted by the potential target and proximity to stabbing range), regardless of their allegiance or alignment. In short, it can only be used against a perpetrator of human suffering and never against someone who seeks to alleviate human suffering. The hero, brainwashed by the sword, cuts down his anti-heroic party of cowards and thieves and gives the sword to a corrupt but compassionate and well-intentioned overlord. The end.

to:

* SituationalSword: The titular sword can give The Chosen One a significant power boost as well as the ability to one-cut through all who stand in the way of good... but [[spoiler:but it also forcefully jams entire video libraries' worth of documentaries about human suffering perpetuated by humanity into the wielder's head, and then directs the wielder to cut down the nearest threat to the greater good (i.e. a high ratio between suffering inflicted by the potential target and proximity to stabbing range), regardless of their allegiance or alignment. In short, it can only be used against a perpetrator of human suffering and never against someone who seeks to alleviate human suffering. The hero, brainwashed by the sword, cuts down his anti-heroic party of cowards and thieves and gives the sword to a corrupt but compassionate and well-intentioned overlord. The end.]]

Added: 295

Changed: 292

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* DesignatedEvil: InUniverse, [[spoiler:the Lord of Dark's use of a Wormarium, which artificially extends his life by draining the LiquidAssets of a pit of worms, is seen as a sign of great evil. But as he points out when confronted with this, it's objectively no worse than slaughtering cattle to make food]].

to:

* DesignatedEvil: DesignatedEvil:
**
InUniverse, [[spoiler:the Lord of Dark's use of a Wormarium, which artificially extends his life by draining the LiquidAssets of a pit of worms, is seen as a sign of great evil. But as he points out when confronted with this, it's objectively no worse than slaughtering cattle to make food]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Cross Wicked.

Added DiffLines:

* SituationalSword: The titular sword can give The Chosen One a significant power boost as well as the ability to one-cut through all who stand in the way of good... but it also forcefully jams entire video libraries' worth of documentaries about human suffering perpetuated by humanity into the wielder's head, and then directs the wielder to cut down the nearest threat to the greater good (i.e. a high ratio between suffering inflicted by the potential target and proximity to stabbing range), regardless of their allegiance or alignment. In short, it can only be used against a perpetrator of human suffering and never against someone who seeks to alleviate human suffering. The hero, brainwashed by the sword, cuts down his anti-heroic party of cowards and thieves and gives the sword to a corrupt but compassionate and well-intentioned overlord. The end.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Famous Last Words is being dewicked per TRS


* FamousLastWords:
--> [[spoiler:'''Dolf''']]: "You've done it! You have awakened the Sword at last! Now, my prince, with but a single strike [[KilledMidSentence you may]]-"
--> [[spoiler:'''Selena''': Hirou!]] Why? You said [[spoiler:you would be good!]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Hirou''']]: I don't trust you either, but I don't expect there's anyone better.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* RightfulKingReturns: Hirou is the long-lost prince of the realm, which is why he's the hero of the story. [[spoiler:Part of his HeelRealization is remembering that he believed in democracy right up until someone suggested that ''he'' was the one who deserved unchecked power just by virtue of who his parents were]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


The Sword of Good is a short story by rationalist writer Creator/EliezerYudkowsky. The protagonist is a man named Hirou, and it begins with him thrust into the beginning of a fundamentally generic quest to save a fantasy realm he has been thrust into.

to:

The Sword of Good is a short story by rationalist writer Creator/EliezerYudkowsky. The protagonist is a man named Hirou, an avid fantasy reader and it begins with him thrust thrown into the beginning of a fundamentally generic quest to save a fantasy realm he has been thrust into.
into. With his partners, Selena and Dolf, he must defeat the [[BigBad Lord of Dark]] and his Evil Races. And so Hirou, using everything he has learned from his hobby, must save the realm while toying with fantasy tropes along the way.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

** Literally, in the case of [[spoiler:the "Lord of Dark" and the "Bad Races"]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Hirou feels that way after [[spoiler:Lord of Dark forces him to confront the reality of his mission and the crimes he and his allies committed. His first thought afterwards is wishing the Sword had killed him.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Sadistic choice is about being forced to chose between two bad options. This one doesn't count as letting the Lord of Dark win is NOT a bad choice.


* SadisticChoice: Made even more sadistic because [[spoiler:the Dark Lord isn't even trying to force Selena into anything. He simply says he'll revive her lover once the ritual is complete, and doesn't want her to do anything in return or even care what she thinks about it. If she does anything to try to stop the ritual, it may result in her true love being lost forever, and it'll be her fault and she won't even have the satisfaction of at least having thwarted his scheme.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Non-notable aversion. This is mainly a video game trope and even then it's not omnipresent.


* FriendlyFireproof: [[spoiler:Averted when Hirou kills Dolf.]]

Added: 159

Removed: 138

Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
One Of Us has been cut as a trope.


* GenreSavvy: Hirou was an avid fantasy reader before he was TrappedInAnotherWorld, which he puts to good use to {{def|iedTrope}}y several AntiHero tropes.



* OneOfUs: Hirou was a troper in the previous world, as demonstrated by his knowledge of and willingness to avert several AntiHero tropes.



* WrongSideAllAlong: [[spoiler:The "Dark Lord" was the ''real'' BigGood all along.]]

to:

* WrongSideAllAlong: [[spoiler:The "Dark Lord" was the ''real'' BigGood all along.]]]]

----
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None

Added DiffLines:

* HolyBurnsEvil: The Sword of Good immediately kills anyone who wields it who isn't good. [[spoiler:That the Lord of Dark can do so is pretty good indication that he's the good guy]], as is the fact that he ''wanted'' to do it to ensure he wasn't a WellIntentionedExtremist.


Added DiffLines:

* OneOfUs: Hirou was a troper in the previous world, as demonstrated by his knowledge of and willingness to avert several AntiHero tropes.


Added DiffLines:

* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Sure, killing [[spoiler:Selena]] is a dick move, but [[spoiler:she]] killed a great many more people both on the quest and before and still considers [[spoiler:herself]] a hero.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


* BigBad: The Lord of Dark [[spoiler:seems to be this, but [[DarkIsNotEvil not exactly]]; Dolf is the real example]].

to:

* BigBad: The Lord of Dark Dark, leader of the [[AlwaysChaoticEvil Evil Races]] who oppose the heroes and seeks {{immortality|Immorality}} [[spoiler:seems to be this, but [[DarkIsNotEvil not exactly]]; Dolf is trying to overthrow]] TheEmpire. The real villain is Dolf, the wizard within the party who is the real example]].Archmage of the Empire]].
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None


--> [[spoiler:Hirou]]: I don't trust you either, but I don't expect there's anyone better.

to:

--> [[spoiler:Hirou]]: [[spoiler:'''Hirou''']]: I don't trust you either, but I don't expect there's anyone better.

Top